[Approved] Jack Yagi and Betsy

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Name: Jack Yagi
Nickname: Yagi or Goat
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Clan: -

Looks: He has bright eyes, dark hair and three scars on the left side on of face. He wears a dark coat with an upright collar. Even though he's a relatively tall man, he his allways seen riding a small white goat, usually in a sitting position, with his legs crossed. Despite it's size, the goat doesn't seem to bother, and it's able to achieve some speed, and jump quite high, giving the impression to be very strong.

He is usually seen with 4 katanas, though the place where he keeps them isn't constant. He can either have them strapped to his belt, by pairs, or have two crossed on his back and the other strapped on his waist, etc ect. He seems to feel confortable in either way.

Personality: He is a very laid back person, even while fighting. His skill and intelect are great, and if the opponent is interesting enough, he will not hesitate in showing his full potential, not because of his desire to kill, which he has none, but simply because of respect for one's skill.

If the opponent is not interesting, he get's distracted easily, by the most ramdom things, like "How would the snow taste?", or "I wonder how does a Winter river trully feels?". His goat, whom he calls Betsy, even though it should be more of a Betso, given that it's a male goat, is seemingly very coward, and immediatly faints at the sight of (harmless) scary situations, like loud noises, or the sight of an enemy, or a display of a powerfull ability. Every time Betsy faints, he usually shows an extremely surprized and preocupied facial expression.

Betsy is actually very strong and fast, and if real danger comes in, he can dodge it easily, and his head slam packs quite a punch.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Land of Iron
Village of Alliance: Land of Iron

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: Samurai Techniques, Kenjutsu and Taijutsu
Elements: N/A
Your ninjutsu: Samurai Techniques:

(...) Although little is known about the abilities of the samurai, even by shinobi, but they are sword-users, it has been revealed that they are capable of utilizing chakra, apparently by channeling it through their swords. This allows them to extend the reach of their swords as well as attack at a distance by swinging them and releasing crescents of energy at their targets. The samurai have also shown form manipulation, as the chakra blades they form into many types, such as buzz-saws, broad swords, and axes. (...)

Extrated from Naruto Wikia, under the article: "Samurai", section "Abilities"​

Background Info.

History: Jack Yagi was born in the Land of Iron. His mother was a goat farmer, in a small village. His father was an skillfull Samurai, from a very ancient lineage of Samurais. When they met eachother, Jack's father decided to drop everything to live with Jack's mother. The Land of Iron was peacefull for quite alot of years, and Jack's mother gave birth to 2 children. Jack and his brother. Jack's brother was 2 years older that him.

When Jack was 7 years old, the Land of Iron entered an era of war, between feudal lords from two important towns, one of which was very close to the village where they lived. One night, there was a raid to the village. The attackers worked directly to the town closest to their's. Jack's father decided to put his rest aside and protect his family. Being one of the best Samurai of the Land of Iron, Jack's father defeated most of them, while the others ran away.
2 of the attackers decided to hide on a small house. There they found a woman with two small children. They choved the kids to the side and took the defenceless woman, arousing her. They tried everything, but she wouldn't give up, finally they gave up and threw her to the floor, where she slammed her head and went unconscious. At the sigth of that, the oldest kid grabbed a knife and slashed one of the attacker's face, blinding him immediatly. The second one, first shocked but then furious, grabbed his sword and impaled the kid.

It was then that Jack's father returned. Horrified by the scene, anger grew inside him. He violently killed both attackers, barehanded, for their sins weren't fit for the quick death provided by his swords. The cry of the youngest son, Jack, was echoing through the house, holding his older brother's liveless body on his hands.
Jack's father, took his brother from his hands, with deep pain on his eyes, and great sorrow, and gravely whispered: "I'm sorry Jack, I'm so sorry..."

The following months were hard for Jack's family. The pain of loosing the oldest son hit Jack's parents deeply, and Jack aswell, but his parent loved eachother very much, and loved Jack greatly. At the end of the mourning period, Jack's father decided to teach him the art of the sword, and the Samurai teachings.

From the begining, this knowledge was for the protection of himself and his loved ones, never to be used for selfish reasons. But Jack was too young to understand it. When he was 16, he received his first real swords, made of metal, not wood. Curious with the sensation of cutting through flesh, and decided to go to the goat farm. There he found a weak goat and, after a moment of reflexion, he stroke the devilish blade, tainting the dark fur of the helpless goat. He suddenly heard his father shout, and then felt the weight of his fist, which pinned him to the ground. During his practince, he was beaten nonestop by his father, but he never felt a punch like this.

He was shoved away from the farm, while his father stood there with his mother. The remorses and the fear prevented him from leaving the place, and so he stood in the gate of the fence. At the end of 20 minutes, his father came out, holding a weak and small white kid, a newborn goat.
The dark doe he had killed was pregnant, and that white kid was the only survivor. His father repeated the speech he gave in the begining of his trainning, but now the values of it were permanently carved on him, from that point on, Jack would never raise his swords for selfish reasons. The young white kid raised his head and opened his eyes, setting them on Jack's teary eyes. Jack coulnd't do anything but apologizing. When he openned his eyes again, they were filled with forgiveness. The kid was put to Jack's care from that day on, and they became best friends. He was Betsy, or Betso.

At the age of 18, Jack and Betsy decided to travel the world.

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Battles

Won: None
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~Approved~ I don't want to see any funny stuff with the goat.
 
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You do know that even though samurai can use chakra, they haven't been shown using elemental chaka or even basic ninjutsu and thus that you are actually making a bio which can't do all that.
 

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You do know that even though samurai can use chakra, they haven't been shown using elemental chaka or even basic ninjutsu and thus that you are actually making a bio which can't do all that.
Zetsu was never shown using ninjutsu aswell, but he seems to be able to use every element possible and even some customs ones. Naruto doesn't have any elemental affinity other than Wind (So far), but that doesn't seem to have stop some rpers...

But if I'm only able to use Samurai techniques, I don't mind.
I'm gonna do the necessary changes.

If you re-think this, just let me know
 

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Zetsu was never shown using ninjutsu aswell, but he seems to be able to use every element possible and even some customs ones. Naruto doesn't have any elemental affinity other than Wind (So far), but that doesn't seem to have stop some rpers...

But if I'm only able to use Samurai techniques, I don't mind.
I'm gonna do the necessary changes.

If you re-think this, just let me know
Irrelevant. Both Zetsu and Naruto are shinobi's, samurai are completely different. Naruto has shown wind, which means he can use elemental chakra. Saying that he only used wind and no other elements is useless as then barely anyone can use an element in RP. In theory it's possible to master multiple elements in Naruto, however it has rarely been done because it's so difficult. But our RP isn't a perfect mirror of Naruto otherwise there wouldn't be anything to do in RP.

It's completely different for samurai as there isn't a single one who has shown using a jutsu that requires handseals. That they even could use normal chakra was already a surprise, so the chance that they can't is very high.

Lord of Kaos had once for a long time a Rock Lee bio and because Lee can't use ninjutsu in the manga, he couldn't use it either.

If other mods have an opinion about this, feel free to post. Of course if in the future a random samurai uses a jutsu it's enough to proof that they can and then there isn't a problem.
 

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Irrelevant. Both Zetsu and Naruto are shinobi's, samurai are completely different. Naruto has shown wind, which means he can use elemental chakra. Saying that he only used wind and no other elements is useless as then barely anyone can use an element in RP. In theory it's possible to master multiple elements in Naruto, however it has rarely been done because it's so difficult. But our RP isn't a perfect mirror of Naruto otherwise there wouldn't be anything to do in RP.

It's completely different for samurai as there isn't a single one who has shown using a jutsu that requires handseals. That they even could use normal chakra was already a surprise, so the chance that they can't is very high.

Lord of Kaos had once for a long time a Rock Lee bio and because Lee can't use ninjutsu in the manga, he couldn't use it either.

If other mods have an opinion about this, feel free to post. Of course if in the future a random samurai uses a jutsu it's enough to proof that they can and then there isn't a problem.
Like I said, I don't mind. You can approve the bio, I've removed anything about me having jutsus.
 

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Can't he just say he left the land of iron to learn ninjutsu? Its been shown that the samurai can channel chakra thus they must be able to mold chakra, all they need is training, which they don't do in their country, so all you say is that you left. It's not the same as lee, since he couldn't mold chakra,
 
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