[Approved] Jack Raiden

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"I said my sword was a tool of justice. Not used in anger. Not used for vengeance. But now...now I'm not so sure. And besides...This isn't my sword"
Basic Information

|Name:Jack Raiden|
|Nickname:White Devil/Jack the Ripper/Raiden|
|Gender:Male|
|Age:16|
|Clan:N/A|
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Looks:Raiden's look, overall, is feminine. He has an outfit that covers his entire body, which resembles a skeleton. His outfit, which is mainly colored a metallic black, has bright white lines that are supposed to be the bones. He has white/silver hair, that is slicked back and spiked. A sash from a little above his right temple, goes down, covering his blind eye and ends underneath his left ear. He also has a type of mask that covers his bottom lip, to the tip of his ear, back down to the nape of his neck. A normal blade inside of a sheath on his back is carried by Jack.

Personality:Raiden has a dual personality. Raiden, on the surface, is mild-mannered, idealistic, and somewhat naive, who ultimately failed to live up to the standards set by his hero. But underneath that is Jack the Ripper, the bloodthirsty child soldier whose savagery puts a shame to many heartless villains. The most immediately obvious trait shared by Raiden's dual aspects is that both are pretty intense feelers. Jack may be a sadistic killer while Raiden's an idealistic crusader, but both of them let their feelings guide their actions. Ultimately, both are unable to put aside their feelings for a mission.
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Village Info

Village of Birth:Konohagakure
Village of Alliance:N/A
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Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank:Chuunin
Specialty:N/A
Elements:Raiton-needs training
Doton-needs training

Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
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Background Info

History:Raiden was born on a rainy day in Konohagakure. His childhood, unlike others, was grim. His father, who he was too young to remember the name of, abused him on a daily basis. His mother had good intentions, but never stopped her husband from doing appalling actions. During his youth, he was adopted by a strange man after killing his parents. The strange man experimented with Raiden whenever he could, and subsequently raised him as a child shinobi. He and other children were shown action films daily for "image training," and were given food mixed with powder containing toluene to make them more controllable. Raiden, with other children, were pitted against each other in fights that led to death. They were kept in their rooms, which were basically prison cells. Jack became a killing machine, known alternately as the "White Devil" and "Jack the Ripper" due to his incredibly high kill rate compared to other boys his age. His skills with a bladed weapon, as well as his cruelty in dispatching enemies with them, was another reason for his "Ripper" nickname.

Some time after, he was abandoned by the strange man, leaving him in the hands of the enemy village. Raiden was put under a Genjutsu and forced to kill all the friends, and family he made. The enemy shinobi set Raiden free, but he had nothing left. Raiden was, at this point, old enough to handle himself. He looked for jobs and after some time, eventually found one. Jack would grow up to suppress the memories about his terrible childhood, burying the memories of his bloody past, though he still suffered from nightmares of his past nearly every night. Jack visits the graves of his family every day he gets a chance to do so.

Raiden went to a blacksmith to get a fine blade made. He swore upon his very life, to take the lives of those that took his, with the might of this blade. In the village of Konohagakure, he sets out to train until he has the strength capable of overthrowing the monstrosities.
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Battles

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A


Permission from Method:

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First bio I made. Just one thing, how do I put it in my sig? I mean, I know how to link it, but how do you make it so that when you click on "Jack Raiden" it has a link inside, which leads you to this?
 

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First bio I made. Just one thing, how do I put it in my sig? I mean, I know how to link it, but how do you make it so that when you click on "Jack Raiden" it has a link inside, which leads you to this?
Copy link of thread. Edit sig. Press the icon with the globe( next to the smiley face icon ) and paste the url. it looks like this
 

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pretty sure Method owns this bio, i could be wrong but i know someone has it and Method is one of them, you'll need his permission to make this bio.
Rightfully so. His bio is amazing.
Anyway, can he actually own a bio that, well, isn't his? I mean, it isn't part of the NV, so I don't think he can "own" it.
I respect him though, so I will still ask for permission.
 

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Rightfully so. His bio is amazing.
Anyway, can he actually own a bio that, well, isn't his? I mean, it isn't part of the NV, so I don't think he can "own" it.
I respect him though, so I will still ask for permission.
It's actually one of the rules of this RP, that there can only be one custom character at a time unless you acquire permission from the original bio to make the same character.
 

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It's actually one of the rules of this RP, that there can only be one custom character at a time unless you acquire permission from the original bio to make the same character.
Yeah, only read the rules after posting :p
Well, luckily, I got his permission anyway, so thank you Method.
 

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Nice, now I'm pretty sure this will get approved.
Thanks. I actually feel pretty bad because I could've done it better on a computer. Unfortunately, I don't have one right now, and probably won't for a long time. This was the best I could do on my phone. I didn't know how to outline it and stuff, like spacing it out so it's in the middle instead of a normal paragraph, and all that decorating stuff. Getting pictures and uploading them is also a pain since I can't click and drag or copy URL's as easily.
 
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