[Approved] Itsuki "ikki" Minami

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Basic Info
Name: Itsuki Minami
Nickname: ikki,crow,babyface,child of the wind
Gender: male
Age: 15
Looks:
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Personality: Itsuki is a very upbeat, zany person,He delights in eating meat, a privilege he is often deprived of in the Noyamano household. He is rash, impulsive, and determined to do everything his way, whether for good or bad, in stark contrast to his friend Kazu who is calm, timid and more focused and prefers to stay in the background. In battle, Ikki either comes off as his ordinary crazy and unpredictable personality, or his more serious, cold and steely side, which other characters have described as a rare occurrence, and as an intimidating scene.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: none

Rank//Chakra Info
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Elements: Lightning
Your ninjutsu:
Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info
History: Ikki was an orphan before being adopted by the Noyamano family, his parents were killed by the nine tailed fox, whose parents were friends of Ikki's parents. Here, he was loved, but still proved a handful.
He got along well with his adoptive sister Ringo, who has had a crush on him since youth, which Ikki remained oblivious to.

Once, while reflecting with Ringo, he was led to wonder who his real parents were. This led him to go as far as climbing a large tower, at a young age, to see if he could see his real parents from up there. But as a soldier tried to rescue him, Ikki bit his arm, causing the soldier to drop him. Ikki was caught by a giant crow as he fell. Since that incident he earned the title, "child of the wind"

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Battles.
Won: 0
Lost: 0

~Approved~
 
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You put more into your personality then you did your history. Add more history..
Its pretty simple... but I don't really see much wrong with it other then maybe some more history.
 

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Remove both personality and history completely and write something that's plausible in the Narutoverse. This is Naruto, not Air Gear. There is no such thing as Air Treck in Naruto. It makes no sense that you're giving here a personality and history that's full of references to Air Treck, but not a single one to Naruto.

Especially the references to chapter # that appear all the time are just weird.
 

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aww.. don't feel down.. you did ur best hon.. I don't know much about bios..but for me.. yours is cool.and great..:) yay! congrats..:)
hehe thanks hon :kiss:
i dont really think it would be approved..but idc..its only a first try :D ill can look back and see what i did wrong
 
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