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It looks like you just took a pic of Gohan and stuck it on your background.
The image doesn't fit in with the background shades, making the image look poorly Photoshopped.
 

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Dude thays the point you baka ..everybody knows ..this why its not finish I'm seeing the comments first before I do the real thing. Stop procrastinating and help a human out.
 

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One thing I'd do is tighten up the image. Closing in on the Blue sphere in the background will help the edges of your pic from being too "empty" feeling.

Also, on Gohan's left hand (visible) maybe try adding a focus to that sphere with maybe a lighting effect similar to the blue background sphere to try and help Gohan blend into the image better!

I'm no real expert, but those would be some things you might consider!
 

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To be honest with you, I'm not sure why you would add more images to this as you haven't done a great job with the one you have now. Having more than one focal can be hard enough to work with, let alone multiple focal points. If I was you, I would seriously follow some tutorials to get a better quality tag made. With this one in particular there is no flow, no lighting no blending, no nothing really its basically a low quality render on a mushed up background. Sorry if I have come across harsh, but you won't get better if I don't be honest. Anyway hope this helps you in some way.
 

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Not trying to come off as rude mate, but I made a that I think would help you a lot if you actually read it. It's long but worth the read if you want to really get good at GFXing, plus, get Photoshop or something.
 
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Try using high quality renders, and make it more lively.. i'd hardly call that a sig, the effort you ought to put in it looks wasted cause the blending wasn't good which leads people to believe that you just stuck a render on a background.
Practice makes perfect, i sucked way more than that when i started GFX'ing last year. :p
 
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