To be honest with you, I'm not sure why you would add more images to this as you haven't done a great job with the one you have now. Having more than one focal can be hard enough to work with, let alone multiple focal points. If I was you, I would seriously follow some tutorials to get a better quality tag made. With this one in particular there is no flow, no lighting no blending, no nothing really its basically a low quality render on a mushed up background. Sorry if I have come across harsh, but you won't get better if I don't be honest. Anyway hope this helps you in some way.