"Itachi Chronicles" - Sadness.. by Kenshin Himura

[Ben-sama]

"The decision" comes next..I don't know if i do all in this thread or separate threads??

Seperate

 

[John Constantine]

"Itachi Chronicles" - Mangeky? Sharingan .."Never hold your feelings back"




Chapter 0.9 -

( Sasuke arrives home. Only to see his beloved Brother standing still next to his parents dead bodies )

Sasuke - Big Brother! Father and Mother are...!

Sasuke - Why?? What happened?? (Sasuke Screams)

Sasuke - Who would do such thing??

( a sword hit from a long-range just hit Sasuke's shoulder )

Itachi - Foolish little brother... MANGEKY? SHARINGAN

( Itachi just casts a Tsukuyomi on little Sasuke )

( The entire night is revived in Sasuke's mind over and over again.. In an alternative dimension. )

( His parents death at the hands of Itachi is shown over and over again in a dimension which lasted 24 hours but only a second in real life..)

( Sasuke screams in agony )

Sasuke - Stop it, Big Brother!
Why are you showing me all of this?!

( Itachi dispells Tsukuyomi & Sasuke falls in the ground in such suffer that drooling is coming out of his mouth.. )

Sasuke - Why..? Why did you do this??

Itachi - To measure my abilities...

Sasuke - Measure your abilities?? That's all?? Just for that.. you.. Killed everyone??

Itachi - It's of great importance.

( Sasuke manages to get up on his feet )

Sasuke - It's a lie!
This isn't like you,Big Brother...It can't be..

Itachi - I acted like the older brother you desired.. In order to measure your vessel.

Itachi - You will become a rival to measure my vessel against.. You have that hidden potential.

Itachi - you've been jealous of me and resented me. You've harbored hopes of surpassing me. That is why i am allowing you to live. For my sake...

Itachi - Like me,you will awaken the powers of the Mangeky? Sharingan. However, on one condition..

Itachi - You must kill your...Closest friend! As i did..

Sasuke - Then...you.. You killed Shisui??

Itachi - As a result,I possess this "eye". In the main hall of our Clan's Temple.
Beneath the ground is the clan's hidden meeting room.

Itachi - There you will find the record of the Uchiha Clan's Visual Jutsu and it's true purpose.

Itachi - If you awaken the Mangeky? Sharingan, there will be three including myself, who possess it's powers.

Itachi - Then,and only then. There will be meaning in letting you live. There is no value in killing you now... My foolish little brother.

Itachi - If you wish to kill me, resent me, hate me and survive.. in obscurity.
Run... Keep running... and cling to life..

Itachi - Then one day, come before me with the same eye that i possess.

Itachi - My foolish little brother..

Next Chapter.. 1.0 - " One last visit "..

 

[John Constantine]

Seperate

Did the entire first stage of my FanFiction in the same thread.. Sorry..But maybe is better this way..

 

[John Constantine]

"Itachi Chronicles" - One Last Visit .."Always smile.. A smile can change one's life forever.."




Chapter 1.0 -

( Itachi just left is brother behind and met with the Masked Man at a rendezvouz )

Masked Man - It's fulfilled.

Itachi - yes...

Masked Man - Are you joining that certain "Organization" i told you about??

Itachi - Yes..I think so.. But i have to do a certain duty first..

Masked Man - Do as you wish.. Meet me tomorrow at 12 AM at the Hidden Village of the Mist..

Masked Man - I will be there waiting for you with my "right-Hand" Zetsu..
We will arrange for you to be introduced to the other members by Pain..

Masked Man - Till then...

Itachi - ...

( Masked Man just teleported himself to another place )

( The Third Hokage is standing on his meeting room as he knows the most recent news about the Massacre )

( A kunai suddently breaks the windows. A little note attached..
Note said :

"I am from now on a renegade. For the sake of the Uchiha name. Protect my little brother with your own life.. Itachi."​

Hiruzen Sarutobi - I will.. I will Itachi.......Uchiha....

( Danz? is walking on his Hallway of his organization called "ROOT".. )

( A noise on one side.. A shadow appears on the other. Danz? a man who is said that doesn't possess any emotions. Just trambles in fear )

( A sword at his throat )

Itachi - If you lay a hand on Sasuke.. I'll leak everything i know about the village to enemies countries..

Itachi - I will haunt you and will make you live in fear.. I will kill you and everything remaining about you.
I'll erase you out of history.. Just try me..

( Itachi vanishes as fast as he appeared behind Danz? )

An empty hall is left behind.. An empty heart, an empty soul, an empty bodie..
The "real" Itachi died that night. And Sasuke's destiny of obscurity was traced forever..

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I just read the entire fanfiction and I'm impressed that you took the time to do this. It really shows how you respect Itachi ^.^ I can also see how Uchiha Itachi is your favorite character as he is very similar to Himura Kenshin. Arigatou gozimasu for inviting me to your thread, it was very enjoyable! Kenshin-dono​

 

[IronFang]

Man these chapter of itachi were so good

 

[John Constantine]

I just read the entire fanfiction and I'm impressed that you took the time to do this. It really shows how you respect Itachi ^.^ I can also see how Uchiha Itachi is your favorite character as he is very similar to Himura Kenshin. Arigatou gozimasu for inviting me to your thread, it was very enjoyable! Kenshin-dono​

Actually despite my username. Saito Hajime & Aoshi Shinomori are actually my favourite in the Rurouni Kenshin series..
I just think Kenshin Himura sounds better. I much prefer Kenshin character from the OVAS then from the series itself..

Also Itachi and Kenshin do have some similarities. A curiosity, Kishimoto first intended to base the Kakashi character solely on Kenshin Himura, but that didn't work and he abandoned the idea.. Maybe he used it for Itachi on some way or another..

 

[John Constantine]

Man these chapter of itachi were so good

Thanks.. I'm glad you enjoyed.. I might not continue though..

 

[Decipher]

Dude chapters are like totally badass ^^

I especially like when he put the knife to Danzous throught, that caught me totally off guard...nice!!!

 

[John Constantine]

Dude chapters are like totally badass ^^

I especially like when he put the knife to Danzous throught, that caught me totally off guard...nice!!!

Thanks man...

The original idea would be to continue and to be about the return of Itachi to Konoha 4 years later with Kisame & the moments before his fight against Sasuke and the after-math of the battle..

Mostly now his emotions & feelings,states of mind.. A lot self-talk in his mind..
Had planned 10 more chapters splitted between those 7 years to the present but i don't feel like i can add much to the Itachi story..

 

[Decipher]

Dude, you should like write the Akatduki in as well. Like what there lives were like and then some fights betweeen themselves, Itachi fighting other people he doesn't like fighting but then has to kill them.

Oh shit man!!!!! You totally have to put Kakuzu in there ^^ xd

 

[John Constantine]

Dude, you should like write the Akatduki in as well. Like what there lives were like and then some fights betweeen themselves, Itachi fighting other people he doesn't like fighting but then has to kill them.

Oh shit man!!!!! You totally have to put Kakuzu in there ^^ xd

Funny you mention Kakuzu..
Because my next chapter would be Itachi's introducing in the Akatsuki.. & his interaction with Kisame & Orochimaru mainly.. (i gave the hint in the last chapter about the Akatsuki)

But you know Akatsuki are all proud,cocky,bigged-ego criminals.. A 13 year old (Itachi was still 13 when he joined Akatsuki) must prove himself no matter if he killed his entire clan alone or not..

I had a battle in mind against Kakuzu..
Since he goes along nicely with Kisame and seemed to go along nicely with Sasori as well (Deidara recruitment scene)..

And when Itachi was introduced we get to see Sasori,Orochimaru,Kisame,Pein in there.. (If Pain was then Konan was.. If Madara is the real leader then Zetsu was there as well)

I don't know if Kakuzu was there when Itachi joined or if Kakuzu joined later but from all the hints in the series. I believe he was there before Itachi..

That would leave Kakuzu as the odd man's out to take on Itachi in a confrontation...

 

[Decipher]

Kakuzu is a badass man

You should totally fight them ^^.

 

[ReLax -]

wow these are some good chapters keep it up men

 

[John Constantine]

wow these are some good chapters keep it up men

Thanks a lot.. Probably Itachi fans prefer it better..

 

[ReLax -]

Thanks a lot.. Probably Itachi fans prefer it better..

While. u put up a good story there. i mean its not because im an itachi fan that im saying its good. like the pervious guy who mentioned kakuzu it would be good to hear his story also since we know abit bout him but what more would be nice to hear out his failure in killing the 1st and how he turned on the village by taking there forbidden scroll.

but yee this itachi part is awesome we never know if w might see anyhting tht ur saying but it would nice to see it in the manga

 

[John Constantine]

While. u put up a good story there. i mean its not because im an itachi fan that im saying its good. like the pervious guy who mentioned kakuzu it would be good to hear his story also since we know abit bout him but what more would be nice to hear out his failure in killing the 1st and how he turned on the village by taking there forbidden scroll.

but yee this itachi part is awesome we never know if w might see anyhting tht ur saying but it would nice to see it in the manga

Kakuzu would have to be a different fanFiction.. If i do include Kakuzu in this fanFiction will not be much..

 

[ReLax -]

Kakuzu would have to be a different fanFiction.. If i do include Kakuzu in this fanFiction will not be much..

Yee i know i wasnt saying it in that way. this is about itachi. i was jus saying that if u were to make one bout kakuzu it would be something jus like this itachi one. i mean main reason kakuzu became bad because his village claimed him to be a failure. hearing a story behind that would be interesting even tho im not much of fan of his but yee.

well anways cant wait for the next chapter

 

[John Constantine]

well anways cant wait for the next chapter[/b]

There'll be no next time i guess.. But we never know ..
Was a fun experience though, Writting this..

 

[ReLax -]

There'll be no next time i guess.. But we never know ..
Was a fun experience though, Writting this..

U stopped? or did u finish it and i forgot to read the last chap. u wrote