It gets chilly around here...

[Musashibo]

*The snow looks like wolves at first, and they begin running down the mountain, but as they are running, they suddenly deform back into normal snow.*

Ok, I kind of lied there lol. Don't just push your chakra forward, or you risk pushing it out of the snow, literally, like you just did. Push the chakra in the wolves forward only enough so that they speed up. After they've sped up, focus the chakra to be how it normally was so that the wolves will stay intact. It's not like if you were going up a mountain, where you would slow down if you start pushing. If you're pushed down a mountain for only a moment, you'll keep that momentum until you go down. Therefore, not only would pushing the chakra constantly be risky, but it would ultimately be pointless.

I didn't think I pushed that hard >.> I just helped it to go a bit faster so the attack can go through. Hmmm... Let's try this...

~I focus my chakra into the snow to make it a constant stream of chakra to make it rise. I concentrate on the shape of the snow wolves and then help the snow begin to move. I then give it enough force to begin the wolves descent down the mountain and focus on keeping it in the shape of wolves. Finally I let the snow wolf led avalanche take it's course.~

 

[Riku..]

I didn't think I pushed that hard >.> I just helped it to go a bit faster so the attack can go through. Hmmm... Let's try this...

~I focus my chakra into the snow to make it a constant stream of chakra to make it rise. I concentrate on the shape of the snow wolves and then help the snow begin to move. I then give it enough force to begin the wolves descent down the mountain and focus on keeping it in the shape of wolves. Finally I let the snow wolf led avalanche take it's course.~

Coolio. ^_^ Much better.

Spoiler

(Hyouton: Itsukaku) - Ice Style: One Horned Whale
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A giant snow whale that crashes down on its prey.

*points back to the lake of ice* Focus your chakra in the lake, and then rise it up in the form of a giant ice whale with one horn.

 

[Musashibo]

Coolio. ^_^ Much better.

Spoiler

(Hyouton: Itsukaku) - Ice Style: One Horned Whale
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A giant snow whale that crashes down on its prey.

*points back to the lake of ice* Focus your chakra in the lake, and then rise it up in the form of a giant ice whale with one horn.

~I go down to the lake with riku and then when we get there I begin to practice. I begin by focusing my chakra and linking it to the ice. I remember how to form walls, pillars, and spikes from ice and gather that knowledge to help me with this. I concentrate and hold out my arms towards the ice which I then raise at an average speed. While doing so I rise the ice in such a fashion to create a giant whale shape. After refining it's shape, and condensing the ice so it will not fall apart too easily I then use my ice spike knowledge to form the 1 horn on the giant beast made of ice to finish it off.~

 

[Riku..]

~I go down to the lake with riku and then when we get there I begin to practice. I begin by focusing my chakra and linking it to the ice. I remember how to form walls, pillars, and spikes from ice and gather that knowledge to help me with this. I concentrate and hold out my arms towards the ice which I then raise at an average speed. While doing so I rise the ice in such a fashion to create a giant whale shape. After refining it's shape, and condensing the ice so it will not fall apart too easily I then use my ice spike knowledge to form the 1 horn on the giant beast made of ice to finish it off.~

*The whale begins to condense too much to the point where it begins to shatter from the pressure.*

Too dense. For a jutsu like that, you don't really have to worry about it falling apart. It's created for defense, and therefore it's not very likely that it would ever fall apart. Therefore, you can focus more on simply running your chakra through it to maintain its form than the act of actually strengthening it.

 

[Musashibo]

*The whale begins to condense too much to the point where it begins to shatter from the pressure.*

Too dense. For a jutsu like that, you don't really have to worry about it falling apart. It's created for defense, and therefore it's not very likely that it would ever fall apart. Therefore, you can focus more on simply running your chakra through it to maintain its form than the act of actually strengthening it.

~I hold out my hands and focus my chakra to connect with the ice. I then raise the ice with my hands quick enough so the ice can be formed into the whale and then I form it's horn with the spike making training I got beforehand to make the whale complete. I hold it's form with my chakra so it won't change and make it go in front of us.~

 

[Riku..]

~I hold out my hands and focus my chakra to connect with the ice. I then raise the ice with my hands quick enough so the ice can be formed into the whale and then I form it's horn with the spike making training I got beforehand to make the whale complete. I hold it's form with my chakra so it won't change and make it go in front of us.~

*The whale forms in between us*

*Shoots a blast of ice towards the whale. The blast of ice disappears but the whale seems intact, though it is damaged.*

Nice ^^. Next up...

Spoiler

(Hyouton: Hyourou) - Ice Style: Ice Prison
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(+5 to make it chase the opponent)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A prison that can serve as a shielding wall or that can capture and freeze the opponent in a block of ice.

Basically, focus your chakra in the ground, make it rise up from under me, and close the ice jutsu at the top so that I'm frozen in it once I'm inside.

 

[Musashibo]

*The whale forms in between us*

*Shoots a blast of ice towards the whale. The blast of ice disappears but the whale seems intact, though it is damaged.*

Nice ^^. Next up...

Spoiler

(Hyouton: Hyourou) - Ice Style: Ice Prison
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(+5 to make it chase the opponent)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A prison that can serve as a shielding wall or that can capture and freeze the opponent in a block of ice.

Basically, focus your chakra in the ground, make it rise up from under me, and close the ice jutsu at the top so that I'm frozen in it once I'm inside.

~I focus my chakra into the icy ground and then make the ice rise around you from beneath your feet. Then I manipulate it and force to to cover you and seal at the top so you become frozen inside.~

 

[Riku..]

~I focus my chakra into the icy ground and then make the ice rise around you from beneath your feet. Then I manipulate it and force to to cover you and seal at the top so you become frozen inside.~

*I get completely frozen in ice.*

*Effortlessly, I destroy all of the ice around me as it shatters and disintigrates*

Nice job, pretty simple jutsu so we'll move along. Next up is...

Spoiler

(Hyouton: Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu) - Ice Style: Black Dragon Blizzard
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A black spiraling blizzard of snow shaped like a dragon.

After making the needed handseal, focus your chakra into the snow, and then push your arm out, pushing the snow forward in the form of a giant black dragon. Keep the chakra running throughout the dragon as it moves, and continue to push it forward to make the dragon move quickly.

 

[Musashibo]

*I get completely frozen in ice.*

*Effortlessly, I destroy all of the ice around me as it shatters and disintigrates*

Nice job, pretty simple jutsu so we'll move along. Next up is...

Spoiler

(Hyouton: Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu) - Ice Style: Black Dragon Blizzard
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A black spiraling blizzard of snow shaped like a dragon.

After making the needed handseal, focus your chakra into the snow, and then push your arm out, pushing the snow forward in the form of a giant black dragon. Keep the chakra running throughout the dragon as it moves, and continue to push it forward to make the dragon move quickly.

~I begin by making the hand seal, and right after I form it I hold my arm and hand back like I'm going to do a corkscrew punch; but with my palm open. I then focus my chakra within the snow to create a steady and strong flow of chakra. I then thrust my arm, palm open, forward and make the snow move the same direction making the snow twist and gather to form the giant black dragon. Then after making teh dragon I force it to go forward and with my other arm to guide it how I want.~