Iseris Trains Auron in Hyuuga Style Taijutsu.

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goodness

now strike the clone 100 times after u focus on his tenketsu

producing

(Hyaku Retsushou) - 100 power palms

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A weaker version of 64 plams where the user strikes 100 times with gentle fist.This justu cuts chakra flow of opponent by half for one turn.
 

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I'm sorry children, but what are you doing?

The gentle fist is about inner damage. Not about lightning.

Repeat all the justsu you did where you released lightning. Use pure chakra.
Iseris, who taught you Gentle Fist? If you say me you better apoligize for not listening.
 

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I'm sorry children, but what are you doing?

The gentle fist is about inner damage. Not about lightning.

Repeat all the justsu you did where you released lightning. Use pure chakra.
Iseris, who taught you Gentle Fist? If you say me you better apoligize for not listening.
adding lightning to gentle fist is apart of his bio's ability.

i understand fully how gentle fist works. my training looks incomplete and spotty at the moment because its not finished yet.

allow me to go through the entire list and then make your statements.
 

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adding lightning to gentle fist is apart of his bio's ability.

i understand fully how gentle fist works. my training looks incomplete and spotty at the moment because its not finished yet.

allow me to go through the entire list and then make your statements.
If you don't understand gentle Fist fully, then you can't teach it yet. Even if he has the ability to add lightning, first you need to teach him normal, and then help him making it his own.

*Smiles gently to both*

Don't worry, you'll get it right.
 

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If you don't understand gentle Fist fully, then you can't teach it yet. Even if he has the ability to add lightning, first you need to teach him normal, and then help him making it his own.

*Smiles gently to both*

Don't worry, you'll get it right.
learn them the regular way first, that is the best way to do it.
that can be done

these will all be redone with only the use of pure chakra

(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation

Rank: D
Type:Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.
_____
(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to there heart.
_____
(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:a mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

C-Rank

(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation

Rank: C
Type:Defence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.
_____
(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky

Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.
_____
 

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learn them the regular way first, that is the best way to do it.
that can be done

these will all be redone with only the use of pure chakra

(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation

Rank: D
Type:Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.
_____
(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to there heart.
_____
(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:a mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

C-Rank

(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation

Rank: C
Type:Defence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.
_____
(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky

Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.
_____
Creates clones of his own.

thisll be easier if I have a clone do each of the techs and I gain the knowledge they gain after I dispel them.
 

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agreed *creates a clone for each jutsu*

have one clone release pure chakra from all his tenketsu while spinning at high speeds to produce
(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation

Rank: D
Type:Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.
_____

have another focus his byakugan to the clones tenketsu and strike th main tenketsu at the heart. this should greatly hinder the chakra flow and damage the heart at the same time.

producing
(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to there heart.
_____

the next clone needs to strike 16 key tenketsu on one of my clones. each strike will damage the muscles and organs at the respective location. cripling the body and making movement difficult

producing

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:a mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

the next clone will gather chakra at each of his tenketsu and once he has a large amount forcefully dispel it, while spinning at high speeed producing

(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation

Rank: C
Type:Defence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.

your real body will do this one. extend chakra from your palms and cross hatch a chakra sheild. because the pure chakra can not maintain this form for long you must go over the same areas several times or until the attack has been fully guarded against. this attack can fully surround you like rotation
or it can cover you from a specific direction.

_____
(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky

Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defense
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.

*throws an explosive tag at all clones making a rotation*

and throws a cloud of ninja stars to the real you.

*all other clones stand prepared for the incoming gentle fist*
 
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agreed *creates a clone for each jutsu*

have one clone release pure chakra from all his tenketsu while spinning at high speeds to produce
(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation

Rank: D
Type:Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.
_____

have another focus his byakugan to the clones tenketsu and strike th main tenketsu at the heart. this should greatly hinder the chakra flow and damage the heart at the same time.

producing
(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to there heart.
_____

the next clone needs to strike 16 key tenketsu on one of my clones. each strike will damage the muscles and organs at the respective location. cripling the body and making movement difficult

producing

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:a mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

the next clone will gather chakra at each of his tenketsu and once he has a large amount forcefully dispel it, while spinning at high speeed producing

(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation

Rank: C
Type:Defence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.

your real body will do this one. extend chakra from your palms and cross hatch a chakra sheild. because the pure chakra can not maintain this form for long you must go over the same areas several times or until the attack has been fully guarded against. this attack can fully surround you like rotation
or it can cover you from a specific direction.

_____
(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky

Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defense
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.

*throws an explosive tag at all clones making a rotation*

and throws a cloud of ninja stars to the real you.

*all other clones stand prepared for the incoming gentle fist*
Clone 1 Releses the chakra and begin spinning

(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation

Rank: D
Type:Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A(+20 if used to block an attack)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin createing a dome shield that can fend off most attacks.

Clone 2. Focuses chakra into his palm and hits his target in the chest.

(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to there heart.


Clone 3 focuses in on its target and focusing chakra into his hands.

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description:a mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.

Clone 4 Does a larger scale of the what clone 1 did and spins doing.

Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation

Rank: C
Type:Defence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater

lastly I focus the chakra into my hand releasing it in a net type fashion in front of me.

(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky

Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defense
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.

all at the same time so a huge cloud of smoke appears...

there. I then dispel my clones. and gain the knowledge they have just gained.
 

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well done your training has been refurbished lol

gather chakra in the palm of hour hand condnse it and expel it forcefully producing

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.
 

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well done your training has been refurbished lol

gather chakra in the palm of hour hand condnse it and expel it forcefully producing

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.

Right. Focuses Chakra into Palm.

and forces it outwards.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description:The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent

pushing a rock backwards.
 

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good work

*creates a clones, which begins running at u in an offensive manner*

take a defensive stance and close 64 of his outermost tenketsu damaging the muscles in his arms and legs and preventing the release of any chakra for seals.

producing

(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes

Rank: C
Type:Attack/defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A defence tha can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra flow for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.
 

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good work

*creates a clones, which begins running at u in an offensive manner*

take a defensive stance and close 64 of his outermost tenketsu damaging the muscles in his arms and legs and preventing the release of any chakra for seals.

producing

(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes

Rank: C
Type:Attack/defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A defence tha can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra flow for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.
jumps back getting ready for the clone then once he in range.

(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes

Rank: C
Type:Attack/defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A defence tha can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra flow for one turn after the opponent is hit by it
 

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o_O i didnt see your stance change try it again
Right.

backs away. and changes stance to get ready to defend. putting one arm in the air and bending low. as the clone nears me.

(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes

Rank: C
Type:Attack/defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A defence tha can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra flow for one turn after the opponent is hit by it
 

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correct U__U

now we shall do the offensive version of the previous jutsu, revers your arms and feet to change to an offensive stance then strike the innermost tenketsu, damaging major organs which will cause internal bleeding and limit the chakra flow, moreso than than striking outer tenketsu

producing

(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:Attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.

*clone with stands impact so that it can be hit again*
 

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correct U__U

now we shall do the offensive version of the previous jutsu, revers your arms and feet to change to an offensive stance then strike the innermost tenketsu, damaging major organs which will cause internal bleeding and limit the chakra flow, moreso than than striking outer tenketsu

producing

(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:Attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.

*clone with stands impact so that it can be hit again*
switches stance and moves foward striking the clone innermost organs poofing him.

(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:Attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.
 

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this next move is one of my personal favorites.
build an enourmous amount of chakra in your arms. and think of your arms as syringes as you will be forcefully injecting the opponent with mass amounts of chakra. condense the chakra so that its heavier and more visible. now once the opponent is in your divination feild strike them more powerfully then before and be sure to circle them as you do that way they suffer damage at multiple angles and a wide range uf inner muscular and organal (if thats a word) damage producing

(Hakurou Tenbu) - Heaven`s Dance of Hazy White

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:A higher variation of the 100 power palms.The user makes ther chakra more stronger and visable.The user strikes with more force then regular and stops chakra flow by half and for one turn to the enemy.

*creates a clone*
 

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this next move is one of my personal favorites.
build an enourmous amount of chakra in your arms. and think of your arms as syringes as you will be forcefully injecting the opponent with mass amounts of chakra. condense the chakra so that its heavier and more visible. now once the opponent is in your divination feild strike them more powerfully then before and be sure to circle them as you do that way they suffer damage at multiple angles and a wide range uf inner muscular and organal (if thats a word) damage producing

(Hakurou Tenbu) - Heaven`s Dance of Hazy White

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:A higher variation of the 100 power palms.The user makes ther chakra more stronger and visable.The user strikes with more force then regular and stops chakra flow by half and for one turn to the enemy.

*creates a clone*

*wipes sweat from forehead. *
Charges Chakra into my arms. and takes aim at the clone.
blasting the clone full of chakra as i swivel around to the back of the clone destroying his pancreas. and kidneys. poofing him.

(Hakurou Tenbu) - Heaven`s Dance of Hazy White

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:A higher variation of the 100 power palms.The user makes ther chakra more stronger and visable.The user strikes with more force then regular and stops chakra flow by half and for one turn to the enemy.
 

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*wipes sweat from forehead. *
Charges Chakra into my arms. and takes aim at the clone.
blasting the clone full of chakra as i swivel around to the back of the clone destroying his pancreas. and kidneys. poofing him.

(Hakurou Tenbu) - Heaven`s Dance of Hazy White

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:A higher variation of the 100 power palms.The user makes ther chakra more stronger and visable.The user strikes with more force then regular and stops chakra flow by half and for one turn to the enemy.
nice i like how u aimed at specific organs damaging organs that will cause acidic secretions to seep back into the body, u have much potential U__U

this next one require fire chakra so recompose your chakra and the buld a large amount in your palm then forecfully expell it

producing


(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4 Heavenly empty palm

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Close-MId
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40(+8 if opponent hits an object)
Description:A burst fire of empty palms that do mor damage.
 
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nice i like how u aimed at specific organs damagin organs that will cuses acidic secretions to seep back into the body, u have much potential U__U

this next one require fire chakra so recompose your chakra and the buld a large amount in your palm then forecfully expell it

producing


(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4 Heavenly empty palm

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Close-MId
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40(+8 if opponent hits an object)
Description:A burst fire of empty palms that do mor damage.
charges fire chakra into palms and releases it burning the clone on contact.
 
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