WhistleBlower
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I wrote this after i watched the movie, "In time" in 2011. Don't be surprised if you find it on another website, because i've posted it there also but the characters have different names....this was before knowing of NB's existence lol. Anyways it's in 2 parts, so enjoy :)He was gone.
Left her nothing in the world except their fifteen year old daughter and the child inside of her. But she'd made a promise to him, and she would stand by it. Nothing would waver her loyalty to him, even in death.
She'd wanted to go with him but he'd refused, he'd wanted to keep her safe she knew that, protect her from her own family but she couldn't be protected anymore. Her father would take care of his grand-daughter, she'd have enough time to keep her almost immortal, and if she ever needed anymore she knew that she could always ask him for more.
Hinata gently shut the door to their large mansion in Newkama land, she didn't care that the Time Keeper on the other side was still talking; she just knew that she had to do this. In a voice that she hardly recognized as her own she called her daughter and wandered, in a daze, up to the large bedroom that had once belonged to her and her husband.
Their daughter met her there, and once she saw the look on her mother's face she knew what was happening.
Hinata picked up the small metal block that would store all five hundred of her years for another ten years until her daughter could take it. Her daughter stayed in the doorway, afraid of what would come next. Placing the block on her wrist, Hinata closed her eyes for a moment to allow a single tear to fall down her cheek. Once all her time was gone except for three minutes she walked back to her daughter and handed it to her. Uttering a single sentence.
"Keep it safe, let no one have it but you." She whispered before leaning down to kiss her forehead as she took it.
Hinata then moved back and shut the door gently, not wanting her daughter to see what came next. Picking up a photo of her and her husband, Naruto on their wedding day she wandered over to the bed, lying down and hugging it to her chest she used her final few moments to remember every moment she'd ever spent with him.
As the clock struck zero, her head filled with dreams of Uzumaki Naruto.
Left her nothing in the world except their fifteen year old daughter and the child inside of her. But she'd made a promise to him, and she would stand by it. Nothing would waver her loyalty to him, even in death.
She'd wanted to go with him but he'd refused, he'd wanted to keep her safe she knew that, protect her from her own family but she couldn't be protected anymore. Her father would take care of his grand-daughter, she'd have enough time to keep her almost immortal, and if she ever needed anymore she knew that she could always ask him for more.
Hinata gently shut the door to their large mansion in Newkama land, she didn't care that the Time Keeper on the other side was still talking; she just knew that she had to do this. In a voice that she hardly recognized as her own she called her daughter and wandered, in a daze, up to the large bedroom that had once belonged to her and her husband.
Their daughter met her there, and once she saw the look on her mother's face she knew what was happening.
Hinata picked up the small metal block that would store all five hundred of her years for another ten years until her daughter could take it. Her daughter stayed in the doorway, afraid of what would come next. Placing the block on her wrist, Hinata closed her eyes for a moment to allow a single tear to fall down her cheek. Once all her time was gone except for three minutes she walked back to her daughter and handed it to her. Uttering a single sentence.
"Keep it safe, let no one have it but you." She whispered before leaning down to kiss her forehead as she took it.
Hinata then moved back and shut the door gently, not wanting her daughter to see what came next. Picking up a photo of her and her husband, Naruto on their wedding day she wandered over to the bed, lying down and hugging it to her chest she used her final few moments to remember every moment she'd ever spent with him.
As the clock struck zero, her head filled with dreams of Uzumaki Naruto.
So..how was it? :shrug:
