In a way or another (A NaruHina fanfic) Chapter 4

[C Namikaze14]

OMG, i looove it. More please

 

[Maina Deah]

Awesome work again! I love your fanfictions When can we read your next one ? Please write it quickly... I'm ready to read more!

Thank you! don't worry it'll be very soon while I have free time. I'll link you when I'm done so you'll know

OMG, i looove it. More please

Yes! more chaps to come. Thanks!

 

[Naruto33]

Omg, your soooo good!!!!!!!!! Pls fill me in on what happen next!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Maina Deah]

Omg, your soooo good!!!!!!!!! Pls fill me in on what happen next!!!!!!!!!!!

Sure I will
Thanks!

 

[Braveknight]

* refresh the page with the hope of adding the new part*

 

[Maina Deah]

* refresh the page with the hope of adding the new part*

I haven't made anything yet :ghehe:
Guess it'll be this weekend.

 

[Kyoto Samurai]

awesome
9.9/10
cent wait to see what happens next

 

[Maina Deah]

awesome
9.9/10
cent wait to see what happens next

Thank you, I'll give a link so you'll know

 

[Xentinel]

Great Series! Good storyline! Good job!

I ve read all the chapters. I must say, reading your series is like watching one of the Naruto Fillers/movie. The NaruHina part is not out yet, but I got the feeling it will be up soon. Im waiting for that part, as it is what i dont see in the naruto series neither the movie. Storyline is perfect, story is perfectly described in very details. Even though, the fight scene is very minimal. The story is still good. Fighting scene is not really a key in the story, so dont worry if you weak in it.

My suggestion: Your FF is exciting! But more exciting, if you put some twist and some suspense too! Hinata and the Princess are look-alike, is that supposed to be a mere coincidence? You know what i mean Surprise me in the next chapter.

+REP

 

[Maina Deah]

Great Series! Good storyline! Good job!

I ve read all the chapters. I must say, reading your series is like watching one of the Naruto Fillers/movie. The NaruHina part is not out yet, but I got the feeling it will be up soon. Im waiting for that part, as it is what i dont see in the naruto series neither the movie. Storyline is perfect, story is perfectly described in very details. Even though, the fight scene is very minimal. The story is still good. Fighting scene is not really a key in the story, so dont worry if you weak in it.

My suggestion: Your FF is exciting! But more exciting, if you put some twist and some suspense too! Hinata and the Princess are look-alike, is that supposed to be a mere coincidence? You know what i mean Surprise me in the next chapter.

+REP

Wow, thanks for your very nice comments there^^
Basically, Its like I wanted to make my own Naruto filler/movie. I did everything that I've never seen in the series like Naruto become a captain of his own squad composing of his batch mates that most likely, they're better than him. I mean Shika and Neji become a captain and they're team member is Naruto, I just reversed what I've seen in the series.
I wanted to see how I can put up that some woman should look like Hinata so I intentionally make Naruto and company to rescue a princess. I'll use that for NaruHina thingy.
The battle is lame yeah lolxd since I'm used to make ff with romance genre. Honestly this ff is harder than my first one since basically my 1st one is all blah blah
I'll start the NaruHina scene in my next chap and it'll all focused there since this is what this ff is all about.
Thanks again^^

 

[Naruto33]

Moreeeeeeee

 

[Braveknight]

* wait for the chaptr with hope of adding new part*

 

[Maina Deah]

Moreeeeeeee

* wait for the chaptr with hope of adding new part*

Yes, I will. I'm working on it right now. It'll be within this week.

 

[Braveknight]

Waited more than 2 weeks -.-

 

[Maina Deah]

sorry :ghehe: I just posted the new chap