In a way or another (A NaruHina fanfic) Chapter 4
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Thank you! don't worry it'll be very soon while I have free time. I'll link you when I'm done so you'll knowAwesome work again! I love your fanfictionsWhen can we read your next one ?
Yes! more chaps to come. Thanks!OMG, i looove it. More please
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Great Series! Good storyline! Good job!
I ve read all the chapters. I must say, reading your series is like watching one of the Naruto Fillers/movie. The NaruHina part is not out yet, but I got the feeling it will be up soon. Im waiting for that part, as it is what i dont see in the naruto series neither the movie. Storyline is perfect, story is perfectly described in very details. Even though, the fight scene is very minimal. The story is still good. Fighting scene is not really a key in the story, so dont worry if you weak in it.
My suggestion: Your FF is exciting! But more exciting, if you put some twist and some suspense too! Hinata and the Princess are look-alike, is that supposed to be a mere coincidence? You know what i mean Surprise me in the next chapter.
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I ve read all the chapters. I must say, reading your series is like watching one of the Naruto Fillers/movie. The NaruHina part is not out yet, but I got the feeling it will be up soon. Im waiting for that part, as it is what i dont see in the naruto series neither the movie. Storyline is perfect, story is perfectly described in very details. Even though, the fight scene is very minimal. The story is still good. Fighting scene is not really a key in the story, so dont worry if you weak in it.
My suggestion: Your FF is exciting! But more exciting, if you put some twist and some suspense too! Hinata and the Princess are look-alike, is that supposed to be a mere coincidence? You know what i mean
Surprise me in the next chapter. +REP
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Wow, thanks for your very nice comments there^^Great Series! Good storyline! Good job!
I ve read all the chapters. I must say, reading your series is like watching one of the Naruto Fillers/movie. The NaruHina part is not out yet, but I got the feeling it will be up soon. Im waiting for that part, as it is what i dont see in the naruto series neither the movie. Storyline is perfect, story is perfectly described in very details. Even though, the fight scene is very minimal. The story is still good. Fighting scene is not really a key in the story, so dont worry if you weak in it.
My suggestion: Your FF is exciting! But more exciting, if you put some twist and some suspense too! Hinata and the Princess are look-alike, is that supposed to be a mere coincidence? You know what i mean
+REP
Basically, Its like I wanted to make my own Naruto filler/movie. I did everything that I've never seen in the series like Naruto become a captain of his own squad composing of his batch mates that most likely, they're better than him. I mean Shika and Neji become a captain and they're team member is Naruto, I just reversed what I've seen in the series.
I wanted to see how I can put up that some woman should look like Hinata so I intentionally make Naruto and company to rescue a princess. I'll use that for NaruHina thingy.
The battle is lame yeah lolxd since I'm used to make ff with romance genre. Honestly this ff is harder than my first one since basically my 1st one is all blah blah
I'll start the NaruHina scene in my next chap and it'll all focused there since this is what this ff is all about.
Thanks again^^
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Yes, I will. I'm working on it right now. It'll be within this week.
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