Improvement Spar II
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Kurisutina
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I first start off by focusing my chakra to the ground below you and as my chakra travels, it forms a pool of water just below you. The water pushes you upwards with a large thrust and as you go into the air, the pool of water causes multiple bullets of water to be released upwards at you. Right after the bullets begin to hit you, I form a single hand seal and then slap my hand son the ground and as I do, water spills above you and causes you to be drenched and crushed under the water's weight. When the water comes down, the water bullets being shot up form together and form a large water dragon, with a few speedy hand seals. The water dragon comes down on you with the force of the Storm Upheaval, gravity, and my own chakra to back it up. When it comes down to the ground, it slams you into the ground, breaking your ribs to pieces. While you come down, I time your descent, quickly calculating your position in the air and while falling, I aim an explosive kunai just above the ground where you would be and just out of the range of the water dragon. The water dragon's trajectory is slightly adjust by my chakra, as it was shown being able to do so, and the dragon slightly moves you away from me and when you hit the ground and slightly move back, the kunai is next or very close to you and is then set off.
(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air, after firing the enemy into the air, the user shoots numerous water bullets at them from the pool of water and then finishes by forming the water bullets into a water dragon which attacks the target, sending them crashing into the ground.
(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.
As I get pushed upwards into the air I turn my whole entire body into water, thus making myself blend in with the water. Soon after landing on the ground, a explosive tag goes off in the area around me. Soon After that happens, using the water around me I form my body back to normal realizing I have minor injuries from the explosive tag, such as a burn and scratches. I then observe you O_O
Note: If my move is valid, I find it funny how a horrible RPer like me was able to counter this, while others with more experience couldn't.
(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.
Note: If my move is valid, I find it funny how a horrible RPer like me was able to counter this, while others with more experience couldn't.
Kurisutina
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As I see you turn your body to water, I realize that physical attacks such as explosions will be near useless and instead of throwing the explosive tagged kunai, I point my hand at your body of water, allowing the pool of water to dissipate, and just before you hit the ground, I extend a long blade of lightning from my hand that emits a shock through your body, whether it be water or not. The strike is highly effective no matter whether or not you are are in your normal form or water form. When using the spear to stab you, I split the end of the spear so that it splits into multiple sections that allow for a wider range but equal energy in terms of electricity. While using the spear, I throw an explosive kunai at you and just after it goes off, you can't see me due to the explosion, I form a horse hand seal (Stopping my lightning spear) and release a powerful flame that either will burn you or evaporate you depending on what form you are in. You can't however react to this as you have been numbed.
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.
You never stated you activated your Byakugan, so how would you be able to see that I turned to water, let alone know the exact location to stab me with Chidori Spear? Thought I point that out.