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All out except Stealing of course, the field will be a grassy one with nothing nearby, post your biography and make your move along with it, I'll be participating as Tenzo.
 

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I'm honored, Pervy. U_U

As you approach the battle field, i'll begin to Yawn and look at you, as i do so i begin by concentrating Fire trough my whole body, and release a huge Fire blast your way. Your vision will be blocked but even though you would see trough it with your Byakugan, and as you are distracted and try to get out i begin to focus and stay calm.

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.

As you see the Fire coming your way i quickly continue with aiming 2 Powerful lightning blasts, not normal lightning blasts but very fast and strong lightning blasts which will go straight trough the Fire which will become a Fire/Lightning combination.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

And as you try to get a way out I quickly make 4 shadow clones standing in front of me, while C1 throws a Shuriken your way and at the exactly same time C2 Concentrates wind chakra trough the Sky.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Lets get ready to rumble!

C1--C2--C3--C4
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I'm honored, Pervy. U_U

As you approach the battle field, i'll begin to Yawn and look at you, as i do so i begin by concentrating Fire trough my whole body, and release a huge Fire blast your way. Your vision will be blocked but even though you would see trough it with your Byakugan, and as you are distracted and try to get out i begin to focus and stay calm.

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.

As you see the Fire coming your way i quickly continue with aiming 2 Powerful lightning blasts, not normal lightning blasts but very fast and strong lightning blasts which will go straight trough the Fire which will become a Fire/Lightning combination.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

And as you try to get a way out I quickly make 4 shadow clones standing in front of me, while C1 throws a Shuriken your way and at the exactly same time C2 Concentrates wind chakra trough the Sky.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Lets get ready to rumble!

C1--C2--C3--C4
Me.
Very nice, but i can just go to long range and attack or make clones in mid air, but using lightning after fire was a good idea.

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I start by activating my MS watching you. As i see you performing the 2 handseals and gathering your chakra i can tell what jutsu you are using, knowing it's intense pain. So as you are using it, i bring my 2 hands together using:

(Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:The user will create a ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ in one hand, and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ in the other. By combining them, he will create a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. This jutsu can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos
Note: No water source required.

Combining my left and right hand to make the giant water vortex, that would overpower your fire and continue towards you, hitting you before you use your lightning, if you tried to continue with it. As soon as i've release this i perform one handseal using:

(Doton: Iwa Keiro) – Earth Style: Rock Trail
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.

Firing spikes up from all around you, under you, and diagonally up from behind, to stab you as soon as i've released my water.

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I kept it nice and simple. Mind if i use MS for this? xd
 

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This is Unofficial and Sorry for the later Reply :p.
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As soon as I see the Vortex coming towards me I quickly make a Snake handseal and let a Dropping lid appear from above you, getting ready to muffle you, and as I perform the Snake handseal and let the Dropping lid Fall upon you I at the exactly same time as I make the Snake handseal a earth pillar appear beneath my feet that'll shoot me into Long range, making your Vortex and Rock trail Useless.

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

And as soon as I Land on the ground, the first thing i'll do is Bend over and stomp both my hands on the ground to send a Lightning drill from beneath, while your getting crushed underneath the Lid.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
 

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This is Unofficial and Sorry for the later Reply :p.
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As soon as I see the Vortex coming towards me I quickly make a Snake handseal and let a Dropping lid appear from above you, getting ready to muffle you, and as I perform the Snake handseal and let the Dropping lid Fall upon you I at the exactly same time as I make the Snake handseal a earth pillar appear beneath my feet that'll shoot me into Long range, making your Vortex and Rock trail Useless.

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

And as soon as I Land on the ground, the first thing i'll do is Bend over and stomp both my hands on the ground to send a Lightning drill from beneath, while your getting crushed underneath the Lid.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
Ok, due to me being bored... i'm going to mess around...

As the earth is dropping on me, i grab my sword off my back focussing my lightning chakra into it, swinging it upwards:

Getsuga tensho!!​

Raiton: Raigeki Kuresshendo (Lightning Style: Lightning Crescendo)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user channels Lightning into his sword and swings it at the opponent and creates a large crescent shaped bolt of lightning from the sword. The crescent expands as it travels through the air from the atmospheric discharges found within the atmosphere. The crescent can slice through all Earth except Forbidden rank.

Sending a blast of lightning upward that blasts through the lid destoying it, making it so i'm safe as i begin running forwards at great speed with chakra infused into my legs, while you are in the air, swinging my sword again releasing a blast of chakra:

(Suraisu Shinku no Nami) - Slicing Crimson Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user does a simple cresent-shaped slash at the opponent, expelling a red chakra wave.

Hitting you as you land before you use your lightning. I would be running forward as you are flying back so you would stay in mid range.

Btw, i didn't get how you could use 2 earth jutsu at the same time... but w.e, i cancelled my spikes btw.
 
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