[Romance] If i had to let you go.......

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Kishi Uzumaki

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From the first day , i saw you ,
my heart started to fall for you ,
I'm dreaming about you every night ,
these feelings that overwhelms me ,
that i can't fight ,
this have never happened to me before ,
now i feels want to make you mine forever......

i wonder , how an angel like you be on earth ,
long eyes that can make anyone go crazy ,
rose cheeks that can be compared to roses ,
that flowing hair that blowing in the winds ,
walk that can make even gods look back ,
I'm amazed by the flawless beauty of you .

girl , believe me ,
i never seen a beauty like you ,
I'm feeling like my heart gonna explode ,
stares you gives will never change my heart ,
now tell me , where this love gonna go ,
but i don't know , if my heart can take the hurt ,
if i had to let you go.......

this heart of mine ,
got broken many many times ,
these wounds only can be healed by your grace ,
i want to know , if you want me ,
so i can give my heart to you ,
now tell me , where this love gonna go ,
but i don't know , if my heart can take the hurt ,
if i had to let you go.......

 

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<div class="bbWrapper">I'm a sucker for romance. It's beautiful!</div>
 

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Is that your girlfriend in your avatar or you're a girl but showing you're a boy anyway that poem was awesome made me fell like crying :NO:
I'm a guy , Thanks man .

I'm a sucker for romance. It's beautiful!
Thank you .

Beautiful......
beautiful <3 i love this poem
Thanks guys
Amazing. Dattebayo!:T_T:
Thanks sis .
 
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