I will love the world forever even in death (BEST POEM EVER)

[izinagi54]

welcome to my longest peom ever it is a epic

songs that inspired are

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a forgotten time of darkness

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once the entire world was dark
no light left to left to leave mark
the world in a enternal night

many made plight to end the strive in the world
until the great flood came and made them cold
they now fight in the enternal night
feasting on the blood on sight

now we fight for our lifes
the light has left these eyes
yet i still the strive in the new light​

a new light part 2

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look up at the sky and see the sun
many of us shun it and belittle it
without it we all fall into dullness

we all answer the call of the Gods
you are not so differnt from us
come to the king of them all
the one who controls the sky and light
he brings forth his might

beauty and divinity make it so serenity
i feel so tiny under their feet
let the sleet fall from the skies
to wash my eyes of darkness
fill them with the new light

i fall under the Gods might
help me see in a new sight
to fight the night and give this blight
in my heart a fight
that it will cause it to flight​

humanity is on a brink

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look unto the shore of the sea
you will never be clean again
you reap what you sow
in the black gold
that you all forever sold

look at ourselves most of us hate eachother
let us link together a new age is coming
let this be the becoming of transcendince

we are the angels and demons
that we are brought by your feelings
like Zeus to lightning and Hades to death

look at them come down from the sky the end is nigh
we will and shall hold the golden line from our mind
we must control the demon and angel inside​

a fight to determine who was right

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they call me the rebirther
they call me the destroyer
who are they to determine me

i may control the light and dark
my only goal isto collect only the 7 marks
use them to bring back my love

revive the dove of my love
so i may hold her in my arms and look at the sky above
as grib her with my white gloves​

 

[Rorasa]

nice ones chris, you keep getting better each time

 

[shelma]

Its really good though with some mistakes
Look at the second line of the first poem.I think u typed "left to" twice
There r a few spelling mistakes too....but u keep getting better
Waiting for ur next poem!

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

a forgotten time of darkness: This poem to me says that even though the worst is as hand there a glimmer of hope always exist.

a new light part 2: This one seems somewhat similar to “a forgotten time of darkness” but with a message of courage.

humanity is on a brink: Something maybe to the effect of good and evil coexisting and we must not let the evil fully take over but rather keep it balanced.

a fight to determine who was right: I think the message here is to fight for what you think is right no matter who opposes you.

Again great job my friend