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Range: Long
Terrain: Kumogakure Mountains
No subs/Kais
CJ: Yes
CE: No, As I don't have any
No Kumogakure Ninjas

Darui Bio (In Sig) Post your bio and I'll Go First
 

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you got Storm Release? I'll go; Sasuke bio (second half of my sig).

p.s. I may be gone for a while; going to a friends (contrary to popular belief, I do, in fact, have a life. xd)
 

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Greed appears on one of the mountains and sees a fellow ninja starting to fight.

"Looks like McA is fighting, well I hope he has gotten stronger. Lets see how this ends."

Greed starts looking closely and ready to enter if something fishy happens.
 

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Yes I do have Storm Release, *Looks at Darui Bio*

As You Approach me, you are already Lagging and are having trouble breathing, because of the such high altitude in the yet so amazing Kumogakure Mountains. As you are grasping for air, Darui quickly takes out 3 lightning charged kunai and throw them directly at you. As you are defending, Clouds quickly gather all around you, making it even more difficult for you to breathe, and yet move. Right after the clouds have surrounded you, it begins to rain upon us, with lightning infused drops of rain, causing you to not be able to advance even more, due to the lightning sending shocks throughout your body and nervous system. Right after it starts to rain, a storm dragon appears directly in front of you, leaving little to no time to react. This dragon engulfs you, continuously shocking you, then it spits you out. You are then paralyzed, numb, and unable to continue battling.

Darui: So it's the Konoha scum Sasuke? Rakaige-sama will be glad when I beat you.

(Ninpou: Kumogakure no Jutsu)- Ninja Art: Hidden Cloud Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Usable by most members of the Hidden Cloud village, this technique creates a very thick group of ground-level clouds that covers the battlefield. The clouds are many times thicker than mist from the Hidden Mist counterpart jutsu and thus makes it harder to see and even more difficult to breathe in the clouds. Cloud ninja have no trouble breathing as they reside at such high altitudes that they have grown used to the atmospheric pressure, but against regular shinobi unfamiliar with life in the Hidden Cloud Village, they could potentially suffocate if the clouds are not dispersed within 5 turns. Like the Hidden Mist counterpart, the clouds are made up of the users chakra, making it impossible for Sharingan users to effectively use their sharingan in the Hidden Clouds.
Note: Can only be used two times a battle

(Ranton: Raikou "Drops")-Storm Release:Lightning Drops
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:10 (-15 for every turn active)
Damage Points:20 (+10 every turn active)
Description:The user will gather raiton and suiton chakra, then release it into the clouds. Then they will manipulate the clouds, causing rain drops to fall. These rain drops are filled with small bolts of concentrated lightning. When hit, the lightning will give the opponent small bolts of electricity, that will stun them.
Note:A powerful fire enough (B-Rank or above) can neutralize the rain drops
Note: If there is no clouds, then this can not be performed
Note: If not stopped in 5 turns, the opponent will be paralyzed
Note: Can only be used 2 times a battle
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

(Ranton: Mugen Doragon Arashi)-Storm Release: Infinite Dragon Storm
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user sends their raiton and suiton chakras into the sky above. Then the user manipulates the sky, causing clouds to form. A water dragon is formed and is infused with lightning. The user sends this water dragon down upon the opponent. I The dragon can split into several heads, allowing for more succession of attack. Upon contact, the dragon engulfs the opponent, drowning them, while continuously shocking them, before spitting them out.
Note: Usable 1 time a battle
Note: No Storm Techniques for the following turn
Note: Dragon is about as big a Kirin, but not nearly as fast
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

Recap: So as soon as you appear, while your out of breathe, trying desperately to breathe due to the high altitude, making you slower than normal, Darui throws 3 lightning infused kunai at you. by the time you defend, you're caught in the clouds. As soon as the clouds appear, making it even harder to breathe and making you very slow, it starts to rain directly onto you, causing you to become extremely slow and also to be stunned. Directly after that, the dragon appears and engulfs you, then spit you out, ending the battle.
 

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It was all fine and dandy until I seen your "Electric Rain" bullshit, which is a damn near exact replica of the Storm Release Jutsu I created before you were born. No means to be an ass, but anyone else's jutsu when replicated are declined.

Anywho, good luck and great start. Keep it up and stop stealing jutsu.
 

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Yes I do have Storm Release, *Looks at Darui Bio*

As You Approach me, you are already Lagging and are having trouble breathing, because of the such high altitude in the yet so amazing Kumogakure Mountains. As you are grasping for air, Darui quickly takes out 3 lightning charged kunai and throw them directly at you. As you are defending, Clouds quickly gather all around you, making it even more difficult for you to breathe, and yet move. Right after the clouds have surrounded you, it begins to rain upon us, with lightning infused drops of rain, causing you to not be able to advance even more, due to the lightning sending shocks throughout your body and nervous system. Right after it starts to rain, a storm dragon appears directly in front of you, leaving little to no time to react. This dragon engulfs you, continuously shocking you, then it spits you out. You are then paralyzed, numb, and unable to continue battling.

Darui: So it's the Konoha scum Sasuke? Rakaige-sama will be glad when I beat you.

(Ninpou: Kumogakure no Jutsu)- Ninja Art: Hidden Cloud Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Usable by most members of the Hidden Cloud village, this technique creates a very thick group of ground-level clouds that covers the battlefield. The clouds are many times thicker than mist from the Hidden Mist counterpart jutsu and thus makes it harder to see and even more difficult to breathe in the clouds. Cloud ninja have no trouble breathing as they reside at such high altitudes that they have grown used to the atmospheric pressure, but against regular shinobi unfamiliar with life in the Hidden Cloud Village, they could potentially suffocate if the clouds are not dispersed within 5 turns. Like the Hidden Mist counterpart, the clouds are made up of the users chakra, making it impossible for Sharingan users to effectively use their sharingan in the Hidden Clouds.
Note: Can only be used two times a battle

(Ranton: Raikou "Drops")-Storm Release:Lightning Drops
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:10 (-15 for every turn active)
Damage Points:20 (+10 every turn active)
Description:The user will gather raiton and suiton chakra, then release it into the clouds. Then they will manipulate the clouds, causing rain drops to fall. These rain drops are filled with small bolts of concentrated lightning. When hit, the lightning will give the opponent small bolts of electricity, that will stun them.
Note:A powerful fire enough (B-Rank or above) can neutralize the rain drops
Note: If there is no clouds, then this can not be performed
Note: If not stopped in 5 turns, the opponent will be paralyzed
Note: Can only be used 2 times a battle
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

(Ranton: Mugen Doragon Arashi)-Storm Release: Infinite Dragon Storm
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user sends their raiton and suiton chakras into the sky above. Then the user manipulates the sky, causing clouds to form. A water dragon is formed and is infused with lightning. The user sends this water dragon down upon the opponent. I The dragon can split into several heads, allowing for more succession of attack. Upon contact, the dragon engulfs the opponent, drowning them, while continuously shocking them, before spitting them out.
Note: Usable 1 time a battle
Note: No Storm Techniques for the following turn
Note: Dragon is about as big a Kirin, but not nearly as fast
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

Recap: So as soon as you appear, while your out of breathe, trying desperately to breathe due to the high altitude, making you slower than normal, Darui throws 3 lightning infused kunai at you. by the time you defend, you're caught in the clouds. As soon as the clouds appear, making it even harder to breathe and making you very slow, it starts to rain directly onto you, causing you to become extremely slow and also to be stunned. Directly after that, the dragon appears and engulfs you, then spit you out, ending the battle.
When I said "Do you have it?" I meant, "Have you learned it?". My question is now answered.
As the kunai come towards me, I weave handseals to use,
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
My blade slices through all three kunai (you say "all three directly at you", so I assume they're all in a straight line), multiple blades branching off of it to deflect the halves away from me. Then, as clouds engulf me, I use
(Fuuton: Joushou Ryuu) – Wind Release: Rising Dragon
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user makes a giant hurricane using the blade of wind that then draws in the enemies into the hurricane, violently slashing them.
The hurricane comes into existance behind me, as to drag away the clouds immediatly around me, while leaving your sight impared (I read the jutsu's description; it says nothing about Kumo nin being able to see through it. It also says, "covers the battle field", and "Kumo nin can breath in it," thus my assumption that you are also in the clouds). As the clouds around me are drawn away (easier than I am), I release the jutsu so I'm not dragged in myself. As the rain falls (it's raining on "us"? so you're affected, too?), I use,
(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Hidden in Stones Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is similar to the Universal Assimilation Technique. It allows the user to move in and out of rock and earth. This jutsu can be used to avoid certain earth techniques.
(One small drop, leaving only a small volt in my system, let's me know that it's about to get real bad, real fast.) As I'm underground, I move across the long-range so I'm behind you (as I'm underground, not being shocked, I'm recovering from any shock I may have recieved from the rain). Then, I emerge from the ground, stabbing a kunai in your back as I do so.

"Kumo nin aren't even worth it. I don't need to waste my brothers gift on you."
Thinking: "I'd better get to a lower altitude pretty soon; I'll be fine for a while, but I'm not sure for how long..."
 

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When I said "Do you have it?" I meant, "Have you learned it?". My question is now answered.
As the kunai come towards me, I weave handseals to use,
(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
My blade slices through all three kunai (you say "all three directly at you", so I assume they're all in a straight line), multiple blades branching off of it to deflect the halves away from me. Then, as clouds engulf me, I use
(Fuuton: Joushou Ryuu) – Wind Release: Rising Dragon
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user makes a giant hurricane using the blade of wind that then draws in the enemies into the hurricane, violently slashing them.
The hurricane comes into existance behind me, as to drag away the clouds immediatly around me, while leaving your sight impared (I read the jutsu's description; it says nothing about Kumo nin being able to see through it. It also says, "covers the battle field", and "Kumo nin can breath in it," thus my assumption that you are also in the clouds). As the clouds around me are drawn away (easier than I am), I release the jutsu so I'm not dragged in myself. As the rain falls (it's raining on "us"? so you're affected, too?), I use,
(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Hidden in Stones Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is similar to the Universal Assimilation Technique. It allows the user to move in and out of rock and earth. This jutsu can be used to avoid certain earth techniques.
(One small drop, leaving only a small volt in my system, let's me know that it's about to get real bad, real fast.) As I'm underground, I move across the long-range so I'm behind you (as I'm underground, not being shocked, I'm recovering from any shock I may have recieved from the rain). Then, I emerge from the ground, stabbing a kunai in your back as I do so.

"Kumo nin aren't even worth it. I don't need to waste my brothers gift on you."
Thinking: "I'd better get to a lower altitude pretty soon; I'll be fine for a while, but I'm not sure for how long..."

As Darui clouds(Yes I can see in them, because we live in that altitude, which is always covered in clouds, so we naturally get used to it) are pulled in, he immediately knows that something is wrong, so as the rains starts to pour(Doesn't effect me, because it's my chakra), and he sees some kind of vacuum sorta thing sucking all of his clouds, he immediately stops the dragon storm and he sends a giant fire balls at you. Due to the Rising Dragon sucking everything in, the fire ball would get there faster and even stronger, because of the oxygen, which it is stealing from the wind. The Darui creates a chidori in his hand. As everything clears up, and if you somehow defended the fire ball, Darui makes 3 lightning clones, so that they are lined up back to back to back to back of one another, each with a chidori in hand, because they are exact clones of darui and what he had in his hand.(This shouldn't count as more than 3 moves, because of the "clone" clause, everything is copied, even another technique. If this does and senseis say they do, I'll correct the mistake).

Clone Formation:


C2
C1 C3
Darui




Sasuke

(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
 
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As Darui clouds(Yes I can see in them, because we live in that altitude, which is always covered in clouds, so we naturally get used to it) are pulled in, he immediately knows that something is wrong, so as the rains starts to pour(Doesn't effect me, because it's my chakra), and he sees some kind of vacuum sorta thing sucking all of his clouds, he immediately stops the dragon storm and he sends a giant fire balls at you. Due to the Rising Dragon sucking everything in, the fire ball would get there faster and even stronger, because of the oxygen, which it is stealing from the wind. The Darui creates a chidori in his hand. As everything clears up, and if you somehow defended the fire ball, Darui makes 3 lightning clones, so that they are lined up back to back to back to back of one another, each with a chidori in hand, because they are exact clones of darui and what he had in his hand.(This shouldn't count as more than 3 moves, because of the "clone" clause, everything is copied, even another technique. If this does and senseis say they do, I'll correct the mistake).

Clone Formation:


C2
C1 C3
Darui




Sasuke

(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Well, seeing as I went underground just as the rain began, and you sent the fireball at me after it's pouring (to use your words), there's something wrong. I also said that I stopped the hurricane so I wouldn't be sucked in myself, before it began to rain, and you used the fireball instead of dragon storm, meaning after it was already raining. I'll work with this, but one of us is off a bit...

As I feel the heat of the fireball streaking towards me, I speed up my useage of
(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Hidden in Stones Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is similar to the Universal Assimilation Technique. It allows the user to move in and out of rock and earth. This jutsu can be used to avoid certain earth techniques.
in order to go underground; away from the shocking rain and siering inferno. As I'm underground, I go to where I remember you to be, and I emerge from the ground behind you, weaving the hanseals for
Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
as I emerge. With my ankles still in the ground, I exhale the great wind, pushing you into your clones, and destroying your clones in the process (not only is wind greater than lightning, but shadow clones are easy to destroy), fulling comming up afterwards. As you turn around to find your attacker, you're caught under my genjutsu.
Genjutsu: Kokohin (Illusion Technique: False surrounding)
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10(+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user controls creates a false surrounding which can change the way an object or small area looks(if used double then its a layer of false surroundings not easy noticed by the enemy).
My eyes appear to be in Mangekyo Sharingan form, staring you down.

"You've pushed this on yourself, kid. You've been too much of a pest!"
 

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When you use Hidden In the Stones, in order to use another jutsu, you have to come all the way out, or the earth would crush you(your feet in this case), but I'll let it slide.

As the clones are created with chirdoris in their hand and are back-to-back-to-back-to-back, with darui, C2 spots you automatically, and yells. As your pressure damage comes, C2 step up and charges straight at it, while C1 grabs Darui and throws him to the left(<- the clone's left), while inserting chakra inside him, releasing him from the Genjutsu you put on them as the pressure damage destroys C2, then C1, and C3 disappears, going underground. He then comes up directly in front of you, punching you in the stomach, as he rises. While this is happening, Darui is up and he sends a Tornado down right onto you, while your defending from C3's attack. Then Darui sends 3 fire dragons to your vacinity, one aimed at the floor in front of you, one directly at you, and one at the tornado, causing it to combine with it, and burn you severely.

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

Fuuton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto (Wind Style: Severing Pressure)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the envoronment stormy. These clouds will create These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.


(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
 

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you got Storm Release? I'll go; Sasuke bio (second half of my sig).

p.s. I may be gone for a while; going to a friends (contrary to popular belief, I do, in fact, have a life. xd)
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