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Old man wonders through the desert on the brink of evening as the sands below cooled and the night creatures came to sight. He notices a figure in front of him, a lady.. no, a shinobi. Smiling to himself, he activates his sharingan as he approaches Mid-Range. The 2tomoe pattern but revealing, he gathers chakra on his body before stomping his feet in the ground to create fractures ripping through it towards the shinobi, sending her flying backwards on contact. Immediately, he jumps above the ground, gathering katon chakra before firing three giant bullets of fire towards his knocked back opponent to create an eruption of flames.

( Doujutsu: Sharingan ) Eye Technique: Copy Wheel Eye
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C - A Rank B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15 - 30 ( -5 per turn for 1T and 2T, 10 per turn to keep active for 3T ) 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.
Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill
Note: C rank usage is for 1T Sharingan, B rank usage is reserved for 2T Sharingan. A Rank usage is reserved for 3T Sharingan.
Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.

(Doton: Gizagiza no Iwajin) - Earth Release: Jagged Rock Formation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and stomps the ground. By doing so, he causes small fractures to rip through the ground, which will then force fragments of earth and rock to rise up from the ground like protruding rock formations to then deal blunt force damage to the opponent and can raise them up into the air.

(Katon: Gōenka) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.
 

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Official or Nah?
Indicate your CP :p



I barely made it half way through this damn desert, wondering what brought me this way in the first place, oh yes a wizard named GAD told me of a fine charming sand user who has some important role to play in the war to come...

"one step at a time, konan"

I urge myself to move ahead when a sudden shake from underneath make me fall to ground, I look up to see a foreigner, those eyes got my attention, naturally I would look away from shining things in this kind of situation but I needed to be alert at what he does next.
Still on the floor, I watch you jump and send forth fireballs my way, poor me. I respond by changing my form into pieces of paper then travel at a fast rate to a new location to my right side (your left) while still keeping the mid range between us.

"that's one hell of a hello, mister"

I take on the attacking role. I pull out "red cookie" and allow it connect to my spinal cord, immediately red cookie extend outward and strike you in mid air then extend further and tie you up with it's body before crashing you into the desert floor...
Note: my invasion and attack with cookie happen swiftly.

(Kami Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Paper Substitution Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: A supplementary technique of paper ninjutsu used usually for escape. By utilizing their skills in manipulating paper sheets user would be capable of dispersing into a spinning column of paper sheets in which they would distract their target as to make escape.

(Aka no kukkī) Red Cookie
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: AKA "Hisnabek" is a spear like weapon that was used by one of the old gods, C'Thun. By appearance it is identical to a spear but rather than a pointed edge blade at the head, it is replaced with a large flat rectangle blade and it's body to tail(handle) is made of purely earth, it has a normal spear range. Left alone Hisnabek is nothing more than an earthen staff until infused with natural chakra, it turns dense and hard as a steel making it able to withstand up-to B-rank elemental and S-rank non elemental attacks. On the body of Hisnabek is engraved with ninjutsu seals. This seals allow "Hisnabek" to possess a unique ability that allow it react on its own to chakra, it does this by connecting it's tail or body to its user vertebra column(like obito and madara did with the ten tails). When connected to its user chakra, Hisnabek can perform the following feat;
* The body(handle) can increase in length up-to long range and retract back, it can become as flexible as a whip allowing it to move irregularly and to bind the enemy. Also it is able to travel underneath the ground. It's extension and retraction speed depend on the range reached. For short range is 1 second and for long range is 5 seconds.
* From its body produce many small earth spikes to strike or defend against an attack and further shoot them out as projectiles. The earth spikes are C-rank and can only extend from the body up-to short range and shoot out up-to long range.
* It earthen body(handle) can merge with the clothing of the user acting both as a bulletproof and support medium that is like an armour; acting as a bulletproof it defend against attack up-to B-rank and as a support provide damage boost for the user's physical attack (B-rank). It cover the user from neck to the arm and feet. In this form the blade section of Hisnabek is at the back of the user's body but can be moved about along the user's body as long as the earthen section of the Hisbanek is there. The blade can extend out from the armour up-to short range to strike the enemy. Also the user's speed is not affected at a noticeable level.
* The user equip with the Hisbanek is able to perform up-to C rank earth release by waving or extending the weapon that is without hand seals.
Restrictions:
* Require mastery of Earth Release to use.
* Each of the Hisnabek ability (aside the revive ability) count as a move and require a turn cool down before it can be used again.
* The armour ability of the Hisnabek can only be used twice per battle and each usage last for 3 turns. It will cost user -10 chakra point to maintain usage.
 
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Unofficial, will count CP next move.

Alright. A few things

1. When you accept being hit by the Jagged Rock Formation, it means you're flown backwards by force and can't just say you "fell on the floor".
2. You take 30 damage from the first technique.
3. "Require mastery of Earth Release to use." is mentioned on your CW. You can't use it when you're a S-Jounin since you can't 'Master' anything at this rank. You need S-Class to be able to do so.
4. Also even if your technique is "fast", it doesn't occur instantaneously. Time-frame rules still need to be followed.

Anyway, I'm going to continue.
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Zeno observantly watches the shinobi ahead on him as he fires his first wave of fiery bullets. His Sharingan, however, in the next instant catches a glimpse of a mass of chakra migrating to his left. Still in mid air and tracking his target with the superb kinetic vision granted by the sharingan, he predicts the location where his opponent lands while gathering chakra. The instant Konan lands on her new location, she is yet again greeted with a barrage of 3 fire bullets aimed at her.

I'll see if you're even worthy of death by my hands.

(Katon: Gōenka) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.
 

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Removing the CW move. Kick off from reassembling my paper parts Aiit.




As I reach my new position I see your fireballs already flying at me, this strike me as odd, the man clearly is no low life, he is able to predict my move but... It's too early to conclude.
While your fireballs fly at me, I mold the earth under my feet to produce an earth pillar at a 60 degree that push me into mid air and over a mid distance toward my right side (your left) while still within the mid range from you.
While I travel through the air, I form three paper shuriken on my left hand and shoot two of them at you Immediately then as I land to the ground I shoot the last shuriken at you, the last shuriken travel up to close range of your position then explode...

"that's a neat trick"

(Doton no Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth.

(Kami Shuriken Jutsu) - Paper Shuriken Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: One of the more basic paper ninjutsu techniques whereas the user would upon infusing chakra into paper sheets mold them as to form up to three shurikens which they can use as to attack their target.




CP: 700 - 30 = 670
 

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Observing the escape mechanism once again and descending to the ground below, Zeno notices the incoming chakra infused paper shurikens as he replies with half a dozen shurikens of his own that inhibit fire infused chakra on them. Not only do they destroy the paper shurikens, they approached the shinobi weakened by a rank. By this time Zeno is already landed on the ground as he puts his opponent in a genjutsu, creating an illusion that causes snakes to appear on the body of the kunoichi and restrict her movements, successfully landing the shurikens as a result.

Show me your tricks

(Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.

( Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire ) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind
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Just as I get to my new position, a snake appear and rope itself around me to restrict my movement, as expected, I attempt to escape by normal means but no avail then I recollect the sudden appearance of the snakes, taking not of the terrain, I should have seen the snake once it got close enough, I thought to myself, giving me time to escape or respond and if it dig its way here, there was no hole near the sandy ground I stood, with this I come to a decision the snake is not real, I also become aware of the six or less shuriken flying at me.
I respond by first biting my tongue hard to bleed causing me intense pain which indirectly undo the illusion of a snake on me then controlling paper around me to produce a big oval shaped object able to defend against the rain of the shurikens but defending is not my plan. I shoot the paper projectile at you, the projectile will first clash and cancel out your shuriken shower and continue toward you at a weaker force...

"I will show you some tricks, don't blink okay"

While the ball move to hit you, another set of my paper quickly move along the ground to your position and at my command which is almost as instant as the papers get to you, from the papers, numerous spikes made of paper shoot out from around and under you to peirce your body, legs and hands. (Note the projectile is first to hit you before the paper spikes) Unable to avoid this, the damage will be fatal thus ending the fight.


( Kami Sōshin no Jutsu ) - Paper Send Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Taking advantage of their ability to manipulate paper sheets user would create a oval shaped projectile which they would shot towards their target with some speed as well as force pushing them backwards.

(Kami Kiba) - Paper Fangs
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Taking per advantage their ability to manipulate paper, user of the technique would create several spikes made out of paper as to appear from the ground beneath their target as to stab them

CP: 670 - 40 = 630​
 
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