I agree to all the deaths you chose.
I also think that Obito should've died earlier. The amount of his ass pulled revivals during the final two arcs felt annoying to me.
Killer Bee should've died when Madara extracted Gyuki from him, too. His survival always seemed like a horribly underestimated (by the manga's fanbase) ass pull to me.
I would also kill a few more fodder characters during the war, because for such a destructive war as Kishimoto tried to make it look, for nearly every character that had been mentioned in the manga to miraculously survive, it seems too unbelievable and juvenile to me.
