I dont like my career in nb because i got one element

[pop123]

Then i lost alots of times then i finally won my first battle i just looking for training thats all my two bios neji and garra sucks ass

 

[shadedcrow]

() ohhh kay?

 

[Serpent]

Then go ask a sensei to train you because this is not the way to do it U_U

 

[Daruny]

I'm still a gennin and willing to become someone powerful one day. Though I'm taking it slowly, and learning from other's experience. ^__^

*pats back* Don't let yourself down so fast.

 

[Scary Yamato]

Then I lost alots of times, then I finally won my first battle. I just looking for training, that's all. My two bios, Neji and Gaara, sucks ass.

Punctuation helps. When you speak correctly the senseis will take you your requests for training more seriously.

If you don't like your situation, then change it. Ask for training in other elements, but ask in a respectful manner. You still seem to have a hard time explaining your moves in a battle. Work on your English. That will help you more than you realize.

 

[Mr Chuck Norris]

Then i lost alots of times then i finally won my first battle i just looking for training thats all my two bios neji and garra sucks ass

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[dragginboy]

alots is not a word. you need to fix your grammar, puncuation is ".,' dont be so quick to criticize if you can't do it properly yourself please. thanks

 

[Daruny]

WELCOME dragginboy!!! ^__^

But I agree with Scary Yamato.

 

[Heister]

This thread is sooo useful

 

[Scary Yamato]

Alots is not a word. You need to fix your grammar,.
Puncuation is ".,' don't be so quick to criticize if you can't do it properly yourself please. Thanks

I originally intended to only include the punctiation, so sense could be made from his message. I went through and corrected the capitolization and other grammatical errors just because I was there. It wasn't meant to be malicous, I'm just trying to help they guy out. I'm actually one of the few sensei's trying help pop with his training.

If you are going to give me a hard time about grammar and punctuation, then you should live by your own words and make sure you can do it yourself.

 

[pop123]

I will fix my grammer

 

[Scary Yamato]

I will fix my grammer

It's not that big a deal. To be honest your grammer is not awful, you just need to take a little more time and write out your thoughts completely, so people will know what you are doing and why you are doing it. I only want you to be able to explain your moves when you are in a battle.

Example: "I throw an explosive tag wrapped kunai."
this sentence really doesnt tell the opponent what is going on.

A better option is "I throw and explosive tag wrapped kunai at your feet, that explodes upon impact with the ground, blowing you into tiny pieces.

 

[pop123]

I get in now take my time

 

[Daruny]

Just take it easy pop.

The good news is that the more you read, the better you get. So, if you hang long in forums, you will get better eventually.

 

[Vincent]

*reps yamato*

Seriously, if all the senseis were as patient as yamato is, the site would be a different place.

Though Pop, you have to understand that circumstances are often going to mean senseis are not available to train every student on the site, and are therefore going to pick the ones who are more, polite and respectful, and those that can use language that is easy to understand

approaching them with a simple polite vm asking for training is all that is needed, and spamming their vms is probably not going to get you trained, nor is harrassing them if they refuse.

hope this helps ^_^

 

[pop123]

I know

 

[Anduril]

ya yamato is a cool sensie .......
hey pop read some novels in english if u like reading it helps improve your english

 

[Scary Yamato]

*reps yamato*

Seriously, if all the senseis were as patient as yamato is, the site would be a different place.

Though Pop, you have to understand that circumstances are often going to mean senseis are not available to train every student on the site, and are therefore going to pick the ones who are more, polite and respectful, and those that can use language that is easy to understand

approaching them with a simple polite vm asking for training is all that is needed, and spamming their vms is probably not going to get you trained, nor is harrassing them if they refuse.

hope this helps ^_^

Thanks man. I'm actually not very patient.

ya yamato is a cool sensie .......
hey pop read some novels in english if u like reading it helps improve your english

Pop and I are working on it. Right now I'm trying to get him accustomed to writing out his moves, and maybe do some very basic taijutsu. Stull like punching, kicking and blocking just to shw the basics of detailed attacking.

 

[Wesobi]

Pop and I are working on it. Right now I'm trying to get him accustomed to writing out his moves, and maybe do some very basic taijutsu. Stull like punching, kicking and blocking just to shw the basics of detailed attacking.

This is actually a really nice gesture, as well as an excellent way to help somebody learn their way through the English language. You have no other choice than to fully explain yourself when using Taijutsu, so you could see this as the best way to fight and learn English in a progressive way.

You indeed do deserve rep, Scary Yamato-sama.

 

[Scary Yamato]

This is actually a really nice gesture, as well as an excellent way to help somebody learn their way through the English language. You have no other choice than to fully explain yourself when using Taijutsu, so you could see this as the best way to fight and learn English in a progressive way.

You indeed do deserve rep, Scary Yamato-sama.

thats the plan ^_^ Freeform taijutsu (In my opinion) is the best way to learn how to properly battle.