[Predictions] [Hyperion]Prediction: Naruto Chapter 565

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First Prediction on NB.
ENJOY!

*I won't be doing any raps for Bee

**PART I**
Ch. 565 - Jinchuriki Battle Royale

(Tobi is standing behind the Edo Jinchuriki)

Tobi in thought: The Paths should be getting used to their eyes by now. They should be more than enough to capture Naruto and Bee.

Hachibi to Bee: Something's not right Bee
Bee: Whats wrong
Hachibi: I cant say...

Bee is in Cloak Form now. Naruto calls his clones from the various battlefields.

Naruto in thought: I'm sorry guys, but you're going to have to hold on without me for now

Tobi in thought: Come Now, Hachibi and Kyuubi

Bee readies all 7 of his swords, infused with Lightning. Naruto makes 3 new Clones charging up with Rasenshuriken.

Fu, Yugito & Yagura charge at Naruto & his clones. Roshi & Han charge at Bee.

Utakata: WATER RELEASE: Water Barrier

A Water Barrier appears in/around the Jinchuriki surrounding the area.
Similar to the barrier to Kushina's Barrier, only its Water.

Naruto takes a glance at the Barrier
Naruto in thought: They hope to keep us in here
Naruto: BEE Out of the WAY

Naruto throws 1 Rasenshuriken at Roshi & Han, another at Fu, Yugito & Yagura, another at Utakata blasting them into eachother.

Explosions appear where Naruto threw his Rasenshuriken.

Naruto looks at the Barrier and its still intact.

Naruto in thought: Whats going on? That should've taken care of them
Bee: Naruto, what's going on? That should've been more than enough
Hachibi: I knew it Bee, LOOK

Naruto and Bee stare at where Naruto blasted the other Jinchuriki and see a swirl vacuuming in the smoke of the explosion.

Naruto is in shock and so is Bee, both left speechless.
Hachibi: That damned Bastard
Kyuubi: ...

The Edo Jinchuriki are regenerating their lost limbs are entering Cloak Form and the Sharingan in each eye is Swirling to a stop using Tobi's Dimensional Void to the ward off the Rasenshuriken.

Tobi: Haha It seems you've underestimated me 8 tails and 9 tails Jinchuriki

Kyuubi: So it is you, how can you...
**Part II**

Naruto and Bee are stunned

Naruto: What the hell was that?
Kyuubi: You fool, you can't win against the Sharingan & The Rinnegan. Especially this foe...
Naruto: Why not? I have you with me
Kyuubi: Pfft. I lend you my chakra, doesn't mean I lend you my knowledge

Back out on the battlefield

Tobi: Do you still want to see whats under the Mask or what?
Naruto: Why do they have a Rinnegan and your Sharingan Power?
Tobi: Because they are the new 6 Paths
Naruto: What? The new Paths?
Tobi: Less talk, more fight... Come Now 8 tails & 9 tails.

Naruto hesitates.

Bee: Yo, what's wrong?
Naruto: Its nothing, they're coming now.
Kyuubi: DON'T BE A FOOL.
Naruto to Kyuubi: Shut up, I can handle this...

Bee transforms into full Jink mode. Naruto goes extreme, producing 5 Mini Rasenshuriken on each finger including each clone. Bee gives a smile.

Tobi: How about we pick this thing up.
Naruto: BEE, what are they doing now?
Bee: Can't be... They shouldn't be able to do that

The Edo Jinks are charging up what appears to be TBB. Hachibi charges up its TBB. Naruto throws his Mini Rasenshuriken at the Edo Jinchuriki's TBB at the same time as Bee. It creates a massive explosion strong enough to send the two parties flying in opposite directions. The Water Barrier bursts.

*Scene Change*
Kakashi's group see the explosion and a sudden Earth Quake rattles the ground

Kakashi in thought: I guess that's where Naruto might be

*Scene Change*
HQ is shaking.

Shikaku: Ao, status report
Ao: It seems the Jinchuriki have encountered the other Madara and... NO WAY, Yondaime Mizukage Sama!
Inoichi: Shikaku, the previous Jinchuriki are with the other Madara fighting Naruto & Bee. This is bad.
Shikaku in thought: If that's the case then there is a possibility that they could both get captured... There's...
Ao interrupting: NO WAIT! It appears that they each have a Rinnegan, we need to get help to the living Jinchuriki right away.
Shikaku: We need to get forces to the Jinchuriki right away
Mabui: That's impossible, all our forces are out in the field
Shikaku in thought: She's right, we can't send any more people out there right now. Our best hope is to have them hold it till we get more help. The Kage are busy with the Real Madara. Is there anything else we can do?
Ao interrupting again: HOLD IT! There are 2 Madara right, why can I sense chakra similar to Madara? It doesn't make sense.
Shikaku: WHAT?!? A 3rd Madara?
Inoichi: So he's appeared...

*Scene Change*
Muu is still on the run. Madara in his Susano'o. The Kage Surrounding him.
An Earthquake shakes their battleground. The Kage & Madara all look and see a massive explosion.

The Kage in thought: What was that?
Madara in thought: Hmmm I sense 8 Jinchuriki and another Uchiha. I need to wrap things up here and head over there.

Madara makes Hand Seals

*Scene Change*

Naruto is in KM on one knee. Bee is back to Cloak Form. Both look to be exhausted.
A massive Crater is shown. The Edo Jinchuriki are regenerating. Tobi is still unscathed.

Tobi: That was fun, how long can you last?

(Subconscious Mode)
Kyuubi is shown. Hachibi is also shown.
Hachibi to Bee: Something doesn't feel right
Kyuubi to Naruto: Naruto, we need to talk now and I'm not asking you.
Naruto to Kyuubi: Why now? Let me finish this first
Bee to Hachibi: What do you mean?

Naruto: Bee, we need to form a plan
Bee: Yeah...
Hachibi & Kyuubi: NO!
Naruto: What? How can you guys talk to both of us
Bee: What's wrong?
Hachibi: I don't know how to say this but...
Kyuubi interrupts: There is something you 2 need to know about our Origins
Naruto: Your Origins?
Hachibi to Kyuubi: So you noticed as well?
Kyuubi: Yes, and it involves that Masked Man...

Naruto & Bee are shocked.

*Scene Change*

Sasuke's EMS is shown in a Silhouette.
Itachi's MS is shown in another panel.
Another Sharingan appears as well.

What are the Hachibi & Kyuubi talking about? How is the fake Madara involved with the Biju's origins? What is Sasuke & Itachi doing? What's going on?

/extended Chapter end
It's a bit much, Feedback appreciated.
Don't forget to rate on the Poll

EDIT: I added Part 2, its really long.
Something to keep the kids thinking over the weekend.
 
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Could be more talking and Jin's powers shown more throughout the Chapters. The Battle between Madara and Kage would maybe been shown or Itachi arriving to face Kabuto to put an end to his Edo Tensei Technique. It's really short, but awesome try though. Rate 4
 
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thats awesome dude i just hope naruto and bee have a little more up their sleeve if theyre going up against 7 jinchuriki with tobi's sharangan powers, their undead regeneration powers and their cloaked forms cuz i wanna see whos under the mask!
 
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Add part 2 man, this was good. I like the whole "they have his sharingan ability" thing. And the Kyuubi recognizing him.
thats awesome dude i just hope naruto and bee have a little more up their sleeve if theyre going up against 7 jinchuriki with tobi's sharangan powers, their undead regeneration powers and their cloaked forms cuz i wanna see whos under the mask!
I have something for that.
Its just going to take some time putting it in with this prediction.
 

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I totally want the Hachibi and the Kyuubi to communicate with each other. That'd be awesome!

That and Madara/Kakashi to go to the battlefield, not think about going to it. ^^
 
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