Hidden Chapter 244.5: Helping Hand
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Kakashi: Obito!
*obito closes his eyes as kakashi yells in tears*
Obito: I guess this is the end..for me...
*the rocks start to shake and cover obito*
Rin:no...NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Obito: *obito covered in rocks completly* Rin.....Kakashi...sensei.....If i could have one wish right now.......it would be to be together with everyone...longer...
*as the tinyest amount of light vanishes between the rocks and obito is in the darkness, with his heart beat slowing down*
Obito:.....*the last beat of his heart stops as obito says one last word* I wish.......
*****: *a shady figures hand comes out of the rocks and grabs obito and says* your wish has been granted!
Obito:...*they both disappear*
*Obito wakes up on the floor*
Obito:...am...I dead? *he slowely opens his eyes*
Madara: *madara in a long robe with the hood covering most of his face only showinghis mouth*...ha...no your not...I have spared your life...
Obito: how...HOW I WAS COVERED UNDER ROCKS NOBODY COULD HAVE SAVED ME!?
Madara: all i did was grant your wish...that is what you wanted was it not?
Obito:....my wish?...*flash backs to his last words*...!..oh..yeah...
Madara: *smiles* now, that i have done so...you have to grant a wish of myne!
Obito: I dont even know who your are!?
Madara: I am...MADARA UCHIHA! the founder of the Uchiha Clan!
Obito:!!! no way...!? He was defeated by Shodaime at the valley of the end! Just cause im a kid doesnt mean you can fool me that easily!!!!
Madara: hmmm presistent one you are....
Obito: *gets up and walks up to madara slowly* Than show me your mangekyo sharingan!
Madara:.....
Obito:*starts walking faster and stops right infront of madara*
WELL!?
Madara:.....I lost them
Obito: What are you talking about!? *pulls off his hood*
Obito:*shocked face* *!*
Obito:...your eyes...there covered in bandages....
Madara: During the fight at the valley of the end, I was defeated by Shodaime and lost my eyes during the battle...and like you I was weak and accepted defeat, but still i hoped...i hoped that I would get saved...and get one more chance to get revenge!
Obito:....SHUT UP YOU DONT KNOW WHAT I WENT THROUGH! *makes a fist and tries to punch madara*
Madara: *catches his fist and picks him up by his throat and throws him at the wall*....Fool! I saved your life cant you be more thankfull!
*obito goes flying into the wall and a mirror falls on the ground*
Obito: oww....that hurt...*looks at the mirror* *!*
Obito: my eye..... its...gone.....but the other one that was crushed under the rocks was saved...?
Madara: Yes see.....When I got you out of that ruggage, i saw that you still had your right eye intact and with the sharingan still working so I quickly took you here and patched you up......It was an amazement that it was still working that is one of the reasons why i picked you to grant my wish!
Obito:...is kakashi and the others all right?
Madara: Yes they made it out fyne thanks to "konoha's yellow flash"
Obito: Sensei...
Madara: So now...I will let you see your friends but you got to promise me one thing!
Obito: *anxiosly waiting*ill do anythin what is it!?
Madara: You cant speak to them....and after your done visiting them you have to come back to me straight away and grant my wish..got it?
Obito:*nodds* yes! but not speak to them...that will be impossible....for me to do...
Pain: *Comes out of the shadows* why dont you wear a mask?
Madara:hmm ye that would work i guess but you have to make sure they dont know its you....if they do...i can promise you it will get ugly....
Obito:..ok thanks...for doing this...Im sorry i did not say thank you earlyier i am truelly gratefull *smiles*
Madara:good now hurry up and go, oh and by the way to make sure you dont do anyhthing stupid my friend zetsu will be watching you and he will take you there....
Obito: Who is zetsu?
Pain: look behind you....
*Obito sees a giant shadow infront of him and turns head*
Zetsu White: I am zetsu...
*obito dazed in fear*
Zetsu Dark: Whats the matter? You look youve seen a ghost!
Obito: *slowly backs up into Konan unknowingly*
Konan: watch it punk! *pushes him to the ground*
Obito: ow....it was an accident....
Madara: *reaches out hand* konan you touch him again all break your hands, that goes for all of you!
Konan:...sorry
Obito: *grabs madaras hand and gets up* ...can i go now?
Madara: Yes Zetsu take him to konoha
Obito:*looks at zetsu*
Zetsu White: *puts hand on his shoulder and slowly they both sink into the ground*
Obito: what the hell is this?
Zetsu Dark: Dont worry you scaredy cat, we will be there in a second...if we were to go on foot it would take a week to reach there....
Obito:..ok then..take me to Rin first!
Zetsu White: got it
*they both sink into the ground*
*Scene changes to Rin putting flowers on Obitos grave*
*zetsu comes out of the ground with obito*
Zetsu Dark: shes over there near your grave....
Obito: I see her!*runs towards rin*
Rin:*tears* i miss you so much....obito
*rin turns around*
Rin:?
Obito:*puts on the mask which only shows eye hole*
hi!
Rin:*wipes tears away*um..do i know you?
Obito: my name is....uh....bito.....i mean uhh....TOBI!
Rin: I dont know a tobi?
Obito/Tobi: Oh I am one of....Obito's cousins....he always told me storys about you and kakashi as well and thats how i know your rin!
Rin:...okay..?
Obito/Tobi: So what are you doing here?
Rin:..Im just...visitng Obitos grave I miss him..i miss him so much!
Obito/Tobi:*hugs rin*
Rin: *blushes*...wha...?
Obito/Tobi: *thinks to himself only if i could do this back then*
Obito, would not have wanted you to cry like this..... he will be missed but he is not completly dead he will always be watching over you!
Rin: *holds on to tobi*......*smiles*....I know, I just wish he could be here with me right now...i never really told him how I felt....and for some reason you remind me alot of him..?
Obito/Tobi: Its probably cause were cousins....*thinks crap she better not find out its me!* I think now is a good time to tell you I guess...but he loved you alot to....and he talked about you everday!
Rin: *smiles*
Obito/Tobi: Yeah so be happy and go live your life and make him proud!
Rin: thank...thank you...for making me happy *closes her eyes and takes off tobis mask and kisses him on the cheek*
Obito/Tobi:*Blushes with excitement and happyness*I love you....
Rin: *opens her eyes* *!* What the hell is this!?
Obito/Tobi: *THINKS SHIT I FORGOT ABOU THE MASK*
Rin: OBITO???? NO WAY...IT CANT BE GET AWAY FROM ME!
Obito/Tobi: no RIN PLEASE WAIT!
Rin: get away you maniac!!!...how could you be so sick as to imitate some one dead and dear to me!
*Rin takes out a Kunai, charges at tobi*
Obito/Tobi: NO RIN PLEASE! YOU DONT UNDERSTAND!
*Zetsu appears out of the ground infront of rin and kicks rin and she goes flying into trees*
Obito/Tobi: no, you idiot! *runs to rin*
Rin:*spits out blood*uh...obito..save me...
Obito/Tobi: *picks up rin from the ground*
*kakashi comes from the forest running at tobi with chidori*
Kakashi: GET AWAY FROM HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*STABS CHIDORI RIGHT INTO TOBIS BACK*
Obito/Tobi: *tobi falls to the ground while dropping rin to the ground softly*
you idiot...its me obito...*coughs up blood*
Kakashi:what...???YOUR LYING....YOUR LYING!!!!
*Kakashi takes out small blade and trys to stab tobi*
*ZETSU KNOCKS TOBI OUT AND DEFLECTS THE BLADE WITH KUNAI*
Kakashi:...shit NOOOO*He cant stop the deflection of his blade and it goes into rin*
*Tobi gets up from the ground*
Obito/Tobi: ow....that hurt and *wakes up shock as he sees kakashi's blade in rins chest*
Zetsu: Dark:*grins* Its time to go...or else this seriosly guna get ugly!
Obito/Tobi:*sinks into the ground with tears, thinking kakashi killed rin*
Obito/Tobi:.....next...time....i...come....Im....going to kill you...i swear.......!
*they sink completly*
Kakashi: *crys*noo...how could i let this happen*starts to rain*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
*scene changes to madara*
Madara: when he gets back hold him down, and put my soul into his body!
Pain: ok...
*zetsu comes out of the ground with obito*
Obito:LET ME GO!*falls to the ground*...how could he kill her...why???
Madara:you...took off your mask did'nt you?
Obito:*makes mad face*it doesnt matter....what matters is kakashi killed her...I dont understand though why....I fainted for a second and woke up and saw kakashis blade in rins chest....
Zetsu White:*mutters*should we tell him...?
Zetsu Dark:...no....then he will really get mad...!
Madara: Well no matter, now its my turn to get my happy ending!
Obito:?oh..yeah what do i have to do?
Madara: you let me become a part of you*grins*
Pain:*holds obito down*
Obito: what the hell is going on????
Madara: dont worry this wont hurt and once i become a part of you, you will be able to be more powerfull than youve ever dreamed of!!!!
Obito: will...i get to kill kakashi!?
Madara: Yes...you will....and I will help you
Obito: then hurry up and get into me!
*madara places his hand on obitos head*
*madaras body falls to the ground tobi screams in pain*
*and his eye turns to eternal mangekyo sharingan*
obito: This power....i love it! *starts laughing maniacly*
*half of madaras face is on obitos*
Madara:...i told you....
Tobi:from now on...i will be called tobi!
The End
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it to 2:23)Kakashi: Obito!
*obito closes his eyes as kakashi yells in tears*
Obito: I guess this is the end..for me...
*the rocks start to shake and cover obito*
Rin:no...NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Obito: *obito covered in rocks completly* Rin.....Kakashi...sensei.....If i could have one wish right now.......it would be to be together with everyone...longer...
*as the tinyest amount of light vanishes between the rocks and obito is in the darkness, with his heart beat slowing down*
Obito:.....*the last beat of his heart stops as obito says one last word* I wish.......
*****: *a shady figures hand comes out of the rocks and grabs obito and says* your wish has been granted!
Obito:...*they both disappear*
*Obito wakes up on the floor*
Obito:...am...I dead? *he slowely opens his eyes*
Madara: *madara in a long robe with the hood covering most of his face only showinghis mouth*...ha...no your not...I have spared your life...
Obito: how...HOW I WAS COVERED UNDER ROCKS NOBODY COULD HAVE SAVED ME!?
Madara: all i did was grant your wish...that is what you wanted was it not?
Obito:....my wish?...*flash backs to his last words*...!..oh..yeah...
Madara: *smiles* now, that i have done so...you have to grant a wish of myne!
Obito: I dont even know who your are!?
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Madara: I am...MADARA UCHIHA! the founder of the Uchiha Clan!
Obito:!!! no way...!? He was defeated by Shodaime at the valley of the end! Just cause im a kid doesnt mean you can fool me that easily!!!!
Madara: hmmm presistent one you are....
Obito: *gets up and walks up to madara slowly* Than show me your mangekyo sharingan!
Madara:.....
Obito:*starts walking faster and stops right infront of madara*
WELL!?
Madara:.....I lost them
Obito: What are you talking about!? *pulls off his hood*
Obito:*shocked face* *!*
Obito:...your eyes...there covered in bandages....
Madara: During the fight at the valley of the end, I was defeated by Shodaime and lost my eyes during the battle...and like you I was weak and accepted defeat, but still i hoped...i hoped that I would get saved...and get one more chance to get revenge!
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Obito:....SHUT UP YOU DONT KNOW WHAT I WENT THROUGH! *makes a fist and tries to punch madara*
Madara: *catches his fist and picks him up by his throat and throws him at the wall*....Fool! I saved your life cant you be more thankfull!
*obito goes flying into the wall and a mirror falls on the ground*
Obito: oww....that hurt...*looks at the mirror* *!*
Obito: my eye..... its...gone.....but the other one that was crushed under the rocks was saved...?
Madara: Yes see.....When I got you out of that ruggage, i saw that you still had your right eye intact and with the sharingan still working so I quickly took you here and patched you up......It was an amazement that it was still working that is one of the reasons why i picked you to grant my wish!
Obito:...is kakashi and the others all right?
Madara: Yes they made it out fyne thanks to "konoha's yellow flash"
Obito: Sensei...
Madara: So now...I will let you see your friends but you got to promise me one thing!
Obito: *anxiosly waiting*ill do anythin what is it!?
Madara: You cant speak to them....and after your done visiting them you have to come back to me straight away and grant my wish..got it?
Obito:*nodds* yes! but not speak to them...that will be impossible....for me to do...
Pain: *Comes out of the shadows* why dont you wear a mask?
Madara:hmm ye that would work i guess but you have to make sure they dont know its you....if they do...i can promise you it will get ugly....
Obito:..ok thanks...for doing this...Im sorry i did not say thank you earlyier i am truelly gratefull *smiles*
Madara:good now hurry up and go, oh and by the way to make sure you dont do anyhthing stupid my friend zetsu will be watching you and he will take you there....
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only the first song)Obito: Who is zetsu?
Pain: look behind you....
*Obito sees a giant shadow infront of him and turns head*
Zetsu White: I am zetsu...
*obito dazed in fear*
Zetsu Dark: Whats the matter? You look youve seen a ghost!
Obito: *slowly backs up into Konan unknowingly*
Konan: watch it punk! *pushes him to the ground*
Obito: ow....it was an accident....
Madara: *reaches out hand* konan you touch him again all break your hands, that goes for all of you!
Konan:...sorry
Obito: *grabs madaras hand and gets up* ...can i go now?
Madara: Yes Zetsu take him to konoha
Obito:*looks at zetsu*
Zetsu White: *puts hand on his shoulder and slowly they both sink into the ground*
Obito: what the hell is this?
Zetsu Dark: Dont worry you scaredy cat, we will be there in a second...if we were to go on foot it would take a week to reach there....
Obito:..ok then..take me to Rin first!
Zetsu White: got it
*they both sink into the ground*
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to 6:03)*Scene changes to Rin putting flowers on Obitos grave*
*zetsu comes out of the ground with obito*
Zetsu Dark: shes over there near your grave....
Obito: I see her!*runs towards rin*
Rin:*tears* i miss you so much....obito
*rin turns around*
Rin:?
Obito:*puts on the mask which only shows eye hole*
hi!
Rin:*wipes tears away*um..do i know you?
Obito: my name is....uh....bito.....i mean uhh....TOBI!
Rin: I dont know a tobi?
Obito/Tobi: Oh I am one of....Obito's cousins....he always told me storys about you and kakashi as well and thats how i know your rin!
Rin:...okay..?
Obito/Tobi: So what are you doing here?
Rin:..Im just...visitng Obitos grave I miss him..i miss him so much!
Obito/Tobi:*hugs rin*
Rin: *blushes*...wha...?
Obito/Tobi: *thinks to himself only if i could do this back then*
Obito, would not have wanted you to cry like this..... he will be missed but he is not completly dead he will always be watching over you!
Rin: *holds on to tobi*......*smiles*....I know, I just wish he could be here with me right now...i never really told him how I felt....and for some reason you remind me alot of him..?
Obito/Tobi: Its probably cause were cousins....*thinks crap she better not find out its me!* I think now is a good time to tell you I guess...but he loved you alot to....and he talked about you everday!
Rin: *smiles*
Obito/Tobi: Yeah so be happy and go live your life and make him proud!
Rin: thank...thank you...for making me happy *closes her eyes and takes off tobis mask and kisses him on the cheek*
Obito/Tobi:*Blushes with excitement and happyness*I love you....
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to 2:29)Rin: *opens her eyes* *!* What the hell is this!?
Obito/Tobi: *THINKS SHIT I FORGOT ABOU THE MASK*
Rin: OBITO???? NO WAY...IT CANT BE GET AWAY FROM ME!
Obito/Tobi: no RIN PLEASE WAIT!
Rin: get away you maniac!!!...how could you be so sick as to imitate some one dead and dear to me!
*Rin takes out a Kunai, charges at tobi*
Obito/Tobi: NO RIN PLEASE! YOU DONT UNDERSTAND!
*Zetsu appears out of the ground infront of rin and kicks rin and she goes flying into trees*
Obito/Tobi: no, you idiot! *runs to rin*
Rin:*spits out blood*uh...obito..save me...
Obito/Tobi: *picks up rin from the ground*
*kakashi comes from the forest running at tobi with chidori*
Kakashi: GET AWAY FROM HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*STABS CHIDORI RIGHT INTO TOBIS BACK*
Obito/Tobi: *tobi falls to the ground while dropping rin to the ground softly*
you idiot...its me obito...*coughs up blood*
Kakashi:what...???YOUR LYING....YOUR LYING!!!!
*Kakashi takes out small blade and trys to stab tobi*
*ZETSU KNOCKS TOBI OUT AND DEFLECTS THE BLADE WITH KUNAI*
Kakashi:...shit NOOOO*He cant stop the deflection of his blade and it goes into rin*
*Tobi gets up from the ground*
Obito/Tobi: ow....that hurt and *wakes up shock as he sees kakashi's blade in rins chest*
Zetsu: Dark:*grins* Its time to go...or else this seriosly guna get ugly!
Obito/Tobi:*sinks into the ground with tears, thinking kakashi killed rin*
Obito/Tobi:.....next...time....i...come....Im....going to kill you...i swear.......!
*they sink completly*
Kakashi: *crys*noo...how could i let this happen*starts to rain*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
*scene changes to madara*
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to 4:32)Madara: when he gets back hold him down, and put my soul into his body!
Pain: ok...
*zetsu comes out of the ground with obito*
Obito:LET ME GO!*falls to the ground*...how could he kill her...why???
Madara:you...took off your mask did'nt you?
Obito:*makes mad face*it doesnt matter....what matters is kakashi killed her...I dont understand though why....I fainted for a second and woke up and saw kakashis blade in rins chest....
Zetsu White:*mutters*should we tell him...?
Zetsu Dark:...no....then he will really get mad...!
Madara: Well no matter, now its my turn to get my happy ending!
Obito:?oh..yeah what do i have to do?
Madara: you let me become a part of you*grins*
Pain:*holds obito down*
Obito: what the hell is going on????
Madara: dont worry this wont hurt and once i become a part of you, you will be able to be more powerfull than youve ever dreamed of!!!!
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Obito: will...i get to kill kakashi!?
Madara: Yes...you will....and I will help you
Obito: then hurry up and get into me!
*madara places his hand on obitos head*
*madaras body falls to the ground tobi screams in pain*
*and his eye turns to eternal mangekyo sharingan*
obito: This power....i love it! *starts laughing maniacly*
*half of madaras face is on obitos*
Madara:...i told you....
Tobi:from now on...i will be called tobi!
The End
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