[Other] Hopelessness

[Ryu Kishi]

Words of joy have left my
Lips, a smile of sorrow, is
All thats left.

Darkness shrouds the light
Of hope, forever lost, gone
Up in smoke.

Raindrops fall from
Godless skys, its is not rain;
But the tears i've cried.

I am a demon, i am a
ghost, I am the darkness
Of this hopeless world.

Lost in the shadows of the
Night, i am dead, and
Still i am alive.​

 

[fiend]

Beautiful poem. The sorrow and despondency you create with your words is amazing.<3
That 3rd para was very good and the final stanza was just astounding.<3
Nice.

 

[Ryóma]

This is pretty good.

 

[SilverfoxUchiha]

Powerful words.

Always remember this... 'Even when there is no hope there is still hope...'

 

[Kuroba Kurohime]

I found it cute<3
Good job

 

[Waindo]

Awesome job old man! I love how your poems contain so much emotion in verses so short and overall the entirety of the poem is so simple yet envokes a storm of emotions.

You're growing into a beastly lyricist at a fast rate.

 

[Luciform]

Beautiful one, babe :yayy:

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Good poem man !

 

[Ryu Kishi]

thanks minna