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Raido quickly concentrates his Doton chakra into his leg stomping the ground,making him loose his balance and fall on his butt as the ground vibrates under him,
[Earth Tremor]
knowing it will be had for Gon to move,he concentrates his doton chakra into his hand forming a spear
[Earth Spear]
which he quickly "absorbs" giving him the attributes of earth
[Assimilate All Creation]
as he quickly throws the spear at Gon's right leg,this pins him to the ground while causing him immense pain,knowing his opponent is now stable,he quickly launches with his left foot ,kicking Gon at his right neck,as Raido lands,he grabs a kunai with his left hand while punching Gon's nose making his blood block his air pathway as i slice through his throat killing him


I concentrate my chakra into my mouth which i spit at Gon's eyes blinding him
[Hidden Needles]
after which i stomp the ground releasing my doton chakra,i make the ground shake making Gon lose his balance
[Earth Tremor]
,taking the oppotunity,i grab my sword,"absorbing" the steel giving me its characteristics
[Assimilate all Creation]
,with Gon blind,i simply run forming a left arc as i quickly kick his knee snapping it(Like trying to bend your knees the opposite way),this leaves him immobilized and laying on the ground,jumping up,i somersault slamming my right leg into his chest bending his ribs to stab his earth


-It is a good defensive jutsu as the user can absorb the elemental weakness of an attack
-It grants the user increase in strength for physical attacks


-It leaves the user open to elemental weakness of the absorbed element
-It restricts the user from using the elemental weakness of the absorbed element


Since the absorbed material is not fixed,i will use the elemental weakness of the absorbed material

-If the attack is a B rank water jutsu,if i absorb a rock,does it cancel and can i absorb water
 

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Nope! c-rank water. And you can't absorb water but tangible things


(Gyorai Shin) - Torpedo Needle
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: Removing nails from their pocket, the user will throw them into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using their chakra, the nails will travel into the ground. Then at the user's discretion, they can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of their target to nail them in place. They can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut the target to pieces.
this is simple, you will throw nails that sink and travel through the ground towards your opponent
 

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Noticing kurapika trying to get in short range with me,i quickly grab a scroll summoning a chain which binds kurapika's leg holding him in place
(Kuchiyose: Tetsurensa Housou) -Summoning: Iron Chain Wrapping
Using the advantage,i remove nails from my pouch tossing it to the ground,tip first,while controlling the underground nails,i control them to nail kurapika to the ground while most of the remaining nails launch out of the ground hitting him in several places
(Gyorai Shin) - Torpedo Needle
Knowing she is now immobilized,i simply release my doton chakra into the ground causing 2 pillars to rise and smash kurapika
[Doton: Bedrock Coffin]






I quickly stomp the ground making the ground shake as this makes changing position hard for kurapika
[Doton: Earth Tremor]
Immediately as he struggles to regain balance,i throw nails to the ground(Tip first) manipulating it,some shoot out from under him pinning him to the ground while the others shoot out causing him alotta pain
(Gyorai Shin) - Torpedo Needle
Taking the advantage ,i stomp the ground making a fire pillar erupt under him thrusting into his body burning him inside out(The pillar is suppose to push him up but since the nails are holding him down,it will pierce him)
[Katon: Fire Pillar]






It immobilizes an opppnent,damages their feet and hurts them(3 in 1)
It is a good sneak attack as the opponent doesnt see it coming






It can be detected by a skill earth user
The range is bad(For me)






Noticing the opponent is tossing nails to the ground,i touch the ground taking earthern capabilities defending against the nails
[Assimilate All Creation Technique]
 

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It is short range thus requires your opponent to be close to you, then you using world shaking might not be advisable as you might get caught in your own jutsu.
Also I've been seeing a lot of Fire Pillars lately, they are not used that way, the only one used that way is the A-rank Great Flame Pillar.

Question.
What are you using to control the Nails?
 

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(Hitei Mushou) - Flying Nail Mist Pierce
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: After forming the needed hand seal, the user will emit a flying mist of small
nails from their mouth. These small nails can
travel towards the opponent at quite a
distance.
You will make a single handseal and knead chakra into your mouth, spew the chakra out inform of tiny nails. The countless nail you spit out looks like mist but they deal some amount of damage though.
 

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Noticing Gin trying to get in short range with me,i quickly grab a scroll summoning a chain which binds Gin's leg holding him in place
(Kuchiyose: Tetsurensa Housou) -Summoning: Iron Chain Wrapping
Using the advantage,i remove nails from my pouch tossing it to the ground,tip first,while controlling the underground nails,i control them to nail Gin to the ground while most of the remaining nails launch out of the ground hitting him in several places
(Gyorai Shin) - Torpedo Needle
Knowing she is now immobilized,i simply release my chakra from my mouth summoning needles which i spit at Gin
(Hitei Mushou) - Flying Nail Mist Pierce






I quickly stomp the ground making the ground shake as this makes changing position hard for kurapika
[Doton: Earth Tremor]
Taking the advantage ,i stomp the ground making a fire pillar erupt under him burning his legs up to waist level leaving them useless and him midair
[Katon: Fire Pillar]
As His lifeless body is midair ,i concentrate my chakra into my mouth spitting the needles to rain down on him,hitting him as his back touches the ground
(Hitei Mushou) - Flying Nail Mist Pierce






It can take out many opponents
The range is good






It can be defended by a good wind user
It cant reach long range






Noticing the opponent spitting nails,i touch the ground taking earthern capabilities defending against the nails
[Assimilate All Creation Technique]
 

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Though I commend the lot of work you do and creativity, still I would like to see you combine with other elements other than the common Iron chain wrapping, world shaking and fire pillar you are using. ^^ I have not seen you use a lot of Fuuton, Raiton and even suiton.

You asked me how you can blind a byakuagn user, this is a way, spew the nails into their eyes to injure it.


Is it possible to swipe your head around while spewing it? Why?
 
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yesm its possible because what you are spewing is a stream and continous which gives you the dexterity to spread the mist into different directions. The same thing can be done to every jutsu inform of stream .
 

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(Jouro Senbon) - Sprinkling Needles
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After hurling their umbrella into the air, the user will unleash a torrent of
needles. Using their chakra they can guide
these needles towards their opponent.
This requires you carry an umbrella in your bio. You will hurl the umbrella into the air, the umbrella will start spining releasing a torrent of needles that are inside it towards your opponent. You can use your chakra to guide the needles.
 

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As i notice Neji preparing to attack me,it occured to Torune that Neji is an Hyuuga meaning close range attacks will be a disadvantage for me,immediately,I stomp the ground making several bamboo like pillars erect around,
(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Due to the pillars being actual pillars,I toss my umbrella up making it sprinkle needles at him which i control with my chakra to enter the formed cage through the spaces inbetween each pillar
(Jouro Senbon) - Sprinkling Needles
As the Needles approach Neji,I quickly perform a sequence of handseals and from my mouth release a gust of wind which pushes it even further,due to the speed of the nails,if it hits an Neji,it will drill through the body killing him in the process
(Fūton: Daitoppa) - Wind Release: Great Break Through





Concentrating my katon chakra into my mouth,I jump up spitting 3 large fireballs
[Katon: Phoenix Sage]
Unknown to Gon,Since am midair and my umbrella is with me,i dont have to throw it up again ,I summon needles from the umbrella which i hide inside the fireballs
(Jouro Senbon) - Sprinkling Needles
Before the fireballs hit Gon,I concentrate my fuuton chakra into my mouth spitting a large gust of wind which pushes the fireballs increasing both the damage of the fireballs and needles
(Fūton: Daitoppa) - Wind Release: Great Break Through





It can take out multiple opponents
It is a better version of hidden needles
Range is good





It requires an umbrella(Cant imagine my bio carrying an umbrella aroubd just because if this)
Low rank
Can easily be blocked





I will simply use wind basic manipulation to blow away the nails
 

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Be careful though not to get caught in your own jutsu as the umbrella spreads the needles. As for the first, it is actually hard to add the wind, as the needles are coming from top to bottom, so applying wind might just not be a good combination as it blows the needles away completely from the intended target.


(Kao Utsushi no Jutsu) - Face Copy Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to take on the body of their target. They must remain close to the one they want to copy for a short period of time. Their body
will then shape and contort to resemble the
target. The copy is said to be so good that
even family members of the target cannot tell they are a fake. The user will even take
on the smell of the original. Unfortunately,
the user does not copy the targets jutsu,
leaving them with only their original skills.
Practitioners of this jutsu are also skilled in
quickly taking on the mannerisms of the original person and playing up the character
traits of their target. Through a regular Henge in combination, they can copy the clothing of the opponent. Their appearance will eventually change back to their original form after several days.
change into me with this, but mind you, it can only wear off after some time and not immediately. Though I still think IMO that this falls under Med jutsu but nontheless...
 

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Raido simply focuses his chakra while standing next to priest,concentrating his chakra to his skin,he simply starts manipulating his skin to the same that of priest while making sure to change my scent to that of his,Adding a simple but effective henge jutsu,I transform my clothings into exactly priest's





Its effective as the user's true form is hidden,the scent turns





It takes long before it fades
A sensory ninja can easily detect





I have no way of detecting a person using this jutsu due to my present characters
 

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it is very useful for deception in the NW and would mostly not work in battle since you can still only use your own jutsu.


(Soushouryuu) - Twin Rising Dragons
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A summoning technique meant almost exclusively for weapon's experts. To
begin, the shinobi will remove two scrolls and
set them on the ground, after forming the
necessary hand seals, the two scroll rise into
the air and begin to swirl around a middle
vortex that is the user. They then use this space to launch themselves into the air
between the spinning scrolls. From these
scrolls the ninja can then summon a mass of
weapons, which they then begin to throw at
their opponent. If the first barrage fails, they can use wires that run from each weapon to their fingertips to pull them back into the air to strike at their opponent again.
This is somewhat complex but also useful as it has a back up plan if the first action fails.
You will place two scrolls on the floor then you will make some handseals while using you chakra to make the scrolls lift up in a spinning mannar twirling around themselves though with a space inbetween them, then you jump and be at the same level with the scrolls in mid-air, then this is when it get complex. You will begin at this point, summon concurrently several nija tools while hurling them at immense speed towards the opponent below. However the tools are conneted to you hand with strings and you can still recall them back with wrist flicks and hand gestures.
 

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Seeing the young boy Kilua,I simply create false clones that appear outta nowhere,they surround him blocking his view while performing fake handseals ,they draw his attention
[Oboro Bunshin]
Taking the advantage,i release my doton chakra into the ground beneath kilua turning it to mud and trapping him,up to chest level,this also traps his hands
(Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
As the young assassin stays trapped,Torune unrolls 2 scrolls infusing my chakra into the scroll,the scrolls simply rise around me spinning as several weapons eject out of it cutting him in pieces
[Twin Rising Dragons]


As Torune notices the boy,he quickly releases his chakra into the air forcing it into his chakra pathway placing him under an illusion where everywhere is dark
[Bringer of Darkness]
As Gin tries to find light,I unroll 2 scrolls infusing my chakra into the scroll,the scrolls simply rise around me spinning as several weapons eject out of it stabbing him and cutting him several places
[Twin Rising Dragons]
While midair I grab one of the scrolls focusing my katon chakra into it summoning a Tiger from it whuch jumps at Gin blowing him
[Fire Exploding Tiger]


-Its Range is good
-Can be used for defensive purposes as the scroll spin around me
-It has a backup move


-Since the user is inbetween 2 scrolls,the user doesnt see approaching attacks
-Leaves the user open as the user connects strings to the weapons making handseals hard


I will simply exhale a gust of wind to cancel it
[Wind Basic Technique]

 

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Actually, I expected more description in the part where you perform the given technique. You see the extensive description I gave but you gave me a short and vague one. I want you to describe every step you take to do the jutsu as I have described then also assume the opponent blocked, use the second possiblity too.
 
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