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As Raido notices he was been spied on,he quickly drops a smoke bomb grabbing 10 kunais and explosive tags from his pouch ,concentrating chakra in both objects,i conceal it inside the, 10kunais
(Fuda Kakusu no Jutsu) Tag Hidding Technique
Secretly atraching strings,1 finger for each kunai,this allows me control it
(Sōshuriken no Jutsu) - Manipulated Shuriken Techique
Jumping up,i start spinning releasing the kunais,due to the strings,the kunais revolve round me cutting any near opponent.
After cutting the opponents near,i release the string making it hit other opponents as it explodes on impact
(Soryu no Mai) - Rising Dragon Dance


Taking out my kunais , I concentrate my Fuuton chakra into my hand, flowing it into the kunai, giving it a kind of "cover " which increases the shuriken's speed and damage
(Fūton: Kaiten Shuriken) - Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken
After which i jump up throwing the barrage of kunais at the opponent
(Soryu no Mai) - Rising Dragon Dance
Concentrating my Katon chakra into my mouth i spew it on the kunais setting it ablaze further increasing its speed and damage
( Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Due to the speed of all kunais,The opponent will have a hard time evading


I think it is useful because it would the effective against multiple opponents and when combined with other jutsus like i did,it will make a great combo


I consider this technique when used alone as a waste of chakra as it can be done normally and since they are kunais, they can be simply deflected like normal kunais
 

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I jump up and spin very fast in mid-air while releasing several ninja tools at you, they come towards you as a bunch, an array of ferrocious blades coming as a wave an can't be deflected with just a kunai.

Defend!
 

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I form a ball of wind in my hand from my fuuton chakra,shooting the ball in the direction at the weapons,the ball catches the weapons,returning both jutsus at you
[FUUTON: GALE PALM]
 

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If the kunais/tools/weapons are coming towards you in a wide dispersed manner, I will advise you use a very wide version of wind to repel the whole weapons.

(Sōgu: Shikyū Geki) - Manipulated Tools: Deadly Spheres Strike
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Desciption: The user pulls out a scroll and rotates it around himself. Many spiked
metal balls burst forth from the scroll to
strike any nearby opponents or discourage
them from using close ranged attacks.
Pull out a preprepared scroll while you twirl it around yourself, then channel your chakra into it so that many irons balls and lumps are summoned from within the scroll and lunges towards the target, however it is short ranged.
 

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Seeing Kilua approaching, Torune was impressed with the boy's speed,but he had to train more,he quickly releases his chakra into the air forcing it into Kilua's head forcing him under a genjutsu where a tree binds him as i seem to bind him
[(Magen: Jubaku Satsu) - Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death]
While Kilua is tackling the genjutsu,i quickly jump up with an open scroll while twirling making giant metallic balls, rain on Kilua crushing his legs forcing him to the ground
[(Sōgu: Shikyū Geki) - Manipulated Tools: Deadly Spheres Strike]
As i land,i use the gained momentum from gravity stomping the ground making spikes protude out of the ground hitting kilua through his cool silver hair
[ (Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes ]




As Gon tries to engage Raido in taijutsu,He quickly releases his chakra into the air forcing it into Gon's head forcing him under a genjutsu where snakes bind him as i appear to disappear from his sight
[ (Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction ]
Due to the effect on his young mind,he will be standing still while experiencing mental damage,I open a scroll while jump up dropping metal balls on Gon ,crushing him
[ (Sōgu: Shikyū Geki) - Manipulated Tools: Deadly Spheres Strike ]
Just to be sure he's dead due to the boy's strong life force,while midair I concentrate my katon chakra into the scroll releasing a dragon which explodes on contact with Gon,Ending his life




-It is a better version of (Soryu no Mai) - Rising Dragon Dance and it is a useful jutsu against skilled taijutsu users(e.g Lee) as it forces you back
-Range is not nice, it leaves the user open to attacks midair as i assume user won't see approaching jutsus
-I will use Fuuton:Rotating Shuriken to "Cover " 10 kunais tossing at opponent,this pierces the balls making them fall



If i increase the weight of my kunai [S RANK EARTH-WEIGHT DECREASING] and add a sort of wind cover[C RANK WIND ROTATING SHURIKEN] and my opponent does rinnegan push[S RANK],Does it cancel the kunai??
 
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yea. It will cancel out the kunais. You did well though you don't have to be in mid-air, you can just spin while you are standing on the ground.


(Sōgu: Fūjin Heki) - Manipulated Tools:
Floating Blades Wall
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user unrolls in the floor under the enemy two small scrolls and summons many different weapons from them, taking the enemy into the air. Then they wraps the leg of the enemy with a chain and crushes him back down to the ground.
Throw a scroll beneath you enemy and as they unroll, many weapons ejects out of them and lift them into the air.
 

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Torune noticing Gon was in short range with him quickly commands his bug to form 2 pillars striking Gon lifting him up into the air
[ (Kikaichu kasui no Jutsu) - Destruction Bug Stream technique ]
While Gon is midair,Torune quickly dashes forward(Now under Gon) and quickly prepares makibishi(Spikes) in his position
[ (Kage Makibishi no Jutsu) - Shadow Makibishi Technique Hide]
Quickly opening a scroll under Gon,he summons weapons to launch out of the scroll harming Gon after which a chain comes out grappling Gon's feet and slamming his head into the makibishi
[ (Sōgu: Fūjin Heki) - Manipulated Tools:Floating Blades WallHide]




Concentrating my katon chakra,i release it through my mouth to create a stream of fire across the ground forcing the Kilua into the air
[ (Katon: Hokori Tenka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dust Ignition Technique]
Quickly opening a scroll under Gon,he summons weapons to launch out of the scroll harming Gon after which a chain comes out grappling Gon's feet and slamming his head into the ground
[ (Sōgu: Fūjin Heki) - Manipulated Tools:Floating Blades Wall Hide]
As he hits the ground i quickly manipulate 2 chunks of earth with my earth chakra to smash his head
[ (Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Release: Bedrock Coffin]


-It is an awesome jutsu which gets an opponent midair
-It is easily evadable as the scroll can be dodged
-I will use wind basic technique to make sure the scroll doesn't open
 

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Nice one, however gimme more than one advantage and disadvantages. Also make your "how to defend" very detailed telling me the specific jutsu you will use it and how actually it would defend against it.

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(Sōgu: Dai Tekkai) - Manipulated Tools: Giant Iron Lump
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description:The user takes out a big scroll and waves it in a circle. It turns into a giant
chain hammer with a huge metal ball at the end that they then crushes the enemy with.
After this move, the chain hammer turns back into a scroll.
you will wave a scroll which turns into a gaint ball connect through a chain which you hold. You can use it to attack your enemy of destroy defenses and also through your will, it will revert back into a scroll.
 
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Reminds me of wrecking ball- miley


Grabbing a scroll,I notice Gon bringing out his weapon,immediately,I immediately turn the scroll into a big metallic lump
[Sōgu: Dai Tekkai) - Manipulated Tools: Giant Iron Lump]
As the ball appears,i quickly add my fuuton chakra already gathered in my hand into the ball,increasing its speed and damage
[Fuuton: Rotating Shuriken]
Immediately gathering my Katon chakra in my mouth,I spit it on the ball making it even more lethal ,i spin the ball slamming it into Gon,splitting his skull(Wouldn't say half) into a million pieces
( Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson




I flow my doton chakra into my right leg,stomping the ground making the ground shake making Gon loose balance
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Simultaneously I flow my katon chakra into my left leg,stomping the ground making pillars of fire come out of the ground burning Gon's legs(and arms if possible)
( Katon: Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame Pillar Technique
Knowing the little boy can't move ,i bring forth a scroll opening it,it transforms into a metallic lump which i slam into Gon,wrecking his skull
[Sōgu: Dai Tekkai) - Manipulated Tools: Giant Iron Lump]




-It forces an opponent back as they won't want to be hit by the ball
It increases the user's physical fighting range as the lump is like an extension of an arm




-Due to it being a metal,a lightning/fire jutsu will be conducted right back to the user
Besides,if the user misses a swing,it leaves them really open




I will use ( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball ,due to the fireball being solid,it will destroy the lump while conducting heat back to the opponent's hand burning the hand




Is this better??
 

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Nice one there.


(Sōgu: Shu Senjin) - Manipulated Tools: One Thousand Blades Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique is very similar to Twin Rising Dragons, but in this version the
user only summons countless kunai from the
scrolls, which are connected by strings at
thier hands. They then throws all the kunai at
the same time on the opponent.
You will summon many kunais from a scroll but they don't leave you immediately as they are connect to you with strings, then by mere hand gestures/flicks, you send them ravaging towards your enemy.
 

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Concentrating my katon chakra into my right leg,i stomp the ground erecting a fire pillar from under Gon which lifts Gon into the air burning his legs
( Katon: Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame Pillar Technique
While Gon is midair,i grab two scrolls ,unrolling one under Gon summoning countless weapons out cutting him leaving him almost dead
(Sōgu: Fūjin Heki) - Manipulated Tools:Floating Blades Wall
I quickly grab the 2nd scroll from which i summon kunais from the scroll with each kunai been attached to my hand by chakra strings,i start spinning cutting Gon midair killing him as his dead body falls to the ground
(Sōgu: Shu Senjin) - Manipulated Tools: One Thousand Blades Attack






Concentrating my katon chakra into my mouth,i stomp the ground making an underground tunnel which leads directly under Gon,spitting a fireball into it,the fireball carrying some earth junks turns into pseudo lava which erupts under Gon which lifts Gon into the air burning his body leaving his body numb
(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
As Gon is midair,i quickly form an earthern spear in my hand from my already gathered earth chakra,throwing it with a blunt force,this blocks his air pasage leaving him almost lifeless(This part is to restrict Gon from changing his position midaair)
(Doton: Gansetsukon) - Earth Release: Rock Section Cane
I then summon kunais from the scroll with each kunai been attached to my hand by chakra strings,jumping,i start spinning cutting Gon midair slicing through his body, killing him
(Sōgu: Shu Senjin) - Manipulated Tools: One Thousand Blades Attack






It saves the user the cost of doing 2 different moves as its already combined
It forces an opponent back as they will try to dodge the weapons




The range is short making it not useful for me as am a mid range fighter
The user cant weave handseals




I will probably use ( Katon: Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame Pillar Technique erecting pillars in front of me as this will burn the kunais
 

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Okay, you should ask questions as I know not everything would be quite clear.

(Kuchiyose: Tetsurensa Housou) -
Summoning: Iron Chain Wrapping
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
description: The user summons a long chain from a scroll and wraps the enemy with it.
When the enemy is trapped, they use another
scroll to launch a rain of weapons at the
enemy.
Pretty simple, using two scrolls, the first brings out a chain to bind your enemy while the second unleashes kunais on him.
 

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Getting tired of this chain stuff,the jutsus are just too similar


Concentrating my katon chakra into my right leg,i stomp the ground erecting a fire pillar from under Gon which lifts Gon into the air burning his legs
( Katon: Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame Pillar Technique
While Gon is midair,i grab two scrolls ,unrolling one under Gon summoning countless weapons out cutting him leaving him almost dead
(Sōgu: Fūjin Heki) - Manipulated Tools:Floating Blades Wall
I quickly grab 2 other scrolls summoning a chain from one which binds Gon's leg,slamming him into the pillar,letting the pillar pierce his stomach leaving him almost dead after which i summon countless kunais from the 2nd scroll which first go up then raining down on him due to gravity
(Kuchiyose: Tetsurensa Housou) -Summoning: Iron Chain Wrapping






Dropping a smoke bomb,I quickly lay makibishi spikes making sure not to hurt myself
[ (Kage Makibishi no Jutsu) - Shadow Makibishi Technique Hide]
Concentrating my katon chakra into a scroll of mine,i summon a tiger made of flames which jumps at Gon exploding on impact launching him into the air
( Katon: Fire Tiger)
With Gon midair,i jump over the makibishi while summoning a chain from the scroll which binds Gon's leg slamming him into the spikes after which i grab a second scroll summon countless kunais which rain on him,killing him
(Kuchiyose: Tetsurensa Housou) -Summoning: Iron Chain Wrapping






It saves the user the cost of doing 2 different moves as its already combined
It forces an opponent back as they will try to dodge the chain




The range is short making it not useful for me as am a mid range fighter
The user cant weave handseals while holding the scrolls and chain
I consider this only useful when opponent is midair as no opponent will be on the ground and watch a chain bind his leg




I will probably use ( Katon: Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame Pillar Technique erecting pillars in front of me as this will burn the chain as well as the kunais
 

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Okay, When you have a summon, I can then teach you combination summoning.


(Shinra Banshō Dōka No Jutsu) - Assimilate All Creation Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can take on the properties of any earthen material they touch and harden any part of there body. This jutsu also lets the user turn into fine grains of rock that can be used to do another jutsu. The issue with using this technique is that the user will gain all the weaknesses of the material they mimic, even if they are granted their strengths.
with this jutsu, you can touch anything and take on its properties as long as its earthen in nature. Metals are also earthen so you can touch the blade of your sword and become steel for some time. Be careful tough, you gain the weakness too, meaning, you are prone to lightning
 
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