Hokages and the Shinigami Realm

[Guardian of the Rain]

Note: This takes place as far as the manga is.
Shinigami Realm- A timeless dimension within the Death God itself. All souls taken by the Shinigami exist in this realm. This dimension is white and blank. All souls appear the way their physical vessels were when their souls left the Human Realm. Also, chakra exist in this world. There is no gravity in this dimension so holding one's self down by concentrating chakra to their feet is necessary.
The story begins....
Hashirama, Tobirama, Hiruzen and Minato, the four former Hokages, are sitting on wooden chairs that Hashirama created and having a discussion over a wooden table that was also created by Hashirama.
Minato looks up at a floating, wooden cage containing a giant orb of orange chakra.
Minato: Lord First, I couldn't thank you enough for suppressing the kyuubi's chakra. I would've been driven mad if the sinister chakra roamed freely.
Hashirama: Young Minato, the pleasure is mine. You have spread on the Will of Fire to the next generation, so it's the least I can do.
Hiruzen: Yes, I couldn't have wished for a better successor.
Tobirama: I also couldn't have dreamed of someone better to choose to keep the Will of Fire burning brightly.
Hashirama: Same goes for you, my dear younger brother.
All four Hokages smile at each other
Hashirama: Plus, through my Mokuton, I can sense that the kyuubi's chakra is becoming less sinister, thus becoming less of a nuisance to control. Minato, do you think it has anything to do with your boy, Naruto?
Minato: Most certainly. The last time I've seen him, he was an amazing 16 year old shinobi. With his......mother's Uzumaki blood, his father's dreams and our.....master Jiraiya's teachings, he is sure to one day master the Demon Fox. After seeing what a fine shinobi he has become at such a young age, I think it's safe to say that he will soon surpass us all.
Hiruzen: Indeed.
Tobirama: Very reassuring.
Hashirama: So it seems the Uzumaki clan can finally rest in peace and substain their good name.
Minato: Definitely.
TO BE CONTINUED.........
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[Guardian of the Rain]

Tell me if you guys liked it, if so then I will continue the story on NB. This is my story and mine only so please don't copyright. If you liked it, give people the link to read it. I promise there wiill be much more epicness, you have no idea!xd

 

[Ciberr]

Off topic: You post A LOT . Nothing wrong with that , Just something i noticed .

 

[Punk Hazard]

reminds of this



lol nice

 

[Kettei]

I loved it +rep

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

Off topic: You post A LOT . Nothing wrong with that , Just something i noticed .

Yeah kinda. I simply want to give NB members good discussions, is there something wrong with that? And people who use twitter and facebook post 10,000 times a day so like 3-5 post on NB a day isnt that bad imo. also, how was my story?

reminds of this


lol random thanks
lol nice

 

[Ciberr]

Yeah kinda. I simply want to give NB members good discussions, is there something wrong with that? And people who use twitter and facebook post 10,000 times a day so like 3-5 post on NB a day isnt that bad imo. also, how was my story?

I liked it . It was good .

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

I loved it +rep

thanks a bunch!xd much more to come, it will be an amazing story, i swear!

 

[Kettei]

thanks a bunch!xd much more to come, it will be an amazing story, i swear!

I'll be checking back every second:scorps:

 

[Rike Senju]

Nice job + rep

 

[Wolfang714]

Interesting.

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

Interesting.

Thanks man, that's a great compliment imo. My goal is to always be creative so saying my story is interesting great thing for mexd

Nice job + rep

Thanks a lot, I really aprreciate it

I'll be checking back every second:scorps:

Thanks, you've made my day. Writing is my passion and it's great to get good feedbackxd

 

[killakader1]

Yeah kinda. I simply want to give NB members good discussions, is there something wrong with that? And people who use twitter and facebook post 10,000 times a day so like 3-5 post on NB a day isnt that bad imo. also, how was my story?

He just said "nothing wrong with that" story was cool, but if ichigo exist in this world and a battle breaks out between them they are all fckd

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

He just said "nothing wrong with that" story was cool, but if ichigo exist in this world and a battle breaks out between them they are all fckd

Lol, I so didn't see him say that. And thanks. Haha Hashirama would solo Ichigo

 

[Green Hood]

3 / 10 stars.

Sorry :shrug:

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

3 / 10 stars.

Sorry :shrug:

geez, it's just the beginning

 

[Ultimatevirus]

cool story

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

cool story

thanks dude, hope you enjoy the rest

 

[MetalDuck]

I dunno... The idea is SO awesome, but part one seems like it's going to wind up in a giant, gay, Kage orgy. Make them a little bit more manlier. The giggling and staring at eachother just doesn't seem like ANY of them.

Unless, of course, a giant homosexual orgy is where you want to go with this. If that is the case, than this entire thing is EPIC. I will read Part 2 next, and hope.

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

I dunno... The idea is SO awesome, but part one seems like it's going to wind up in a giant, gay, Kage orgy. Make them a little bit more manlier. The giggling and staring at eachother just doesn't seem like ANY of them.

Unless, of course, a giant homosexual orgy is where you want to go with this. If that is the case, than this entire thing is EPIC. I will read Part 2 next, and hope.

LOL, they only smiled at each other. They've become buds, they're just enjoying themselves in part 1. But the peace will end in the coming parts