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System001

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Its a bit empty and simple, text position looks wrong, your trying to make the text feel the empty space on the left but im telling you know it aint working try experimenting with some c4d's fractals or brush effects on the left side also maybe its just me but i dont see much flow. and maybe some lighting would be handy too, it looks like youve got your dark shading on the bottom right to me, so wheres the lightsource?
 

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Nothing wrong, just the text. But its simple, and nothing interesting. So I will suggest you search for more tutorials and learn new styles from over there. Also, you might want to download PSD and play with it how the sig was done.
 

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The render is LQ, move him to the left more and try and blend it in so that it looks like he's actually there and put the text near him. There's no sense of flow or lightning as far as I can see.
 
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