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HIDDEN DEMONS



Chapter 1 - Intro


(Once upon a time, on an mythical land named Jigoku, there was a boy, his name was Shogun, and he made great things, let me tell you his story …)


Shogun – Come on Nanoko-San, Kyodu-Kun, we are going to get late to our first mission!

Kyodu – Hold on, im tired!

Shogun – Stop being lazy and hurry up!

(Minutes later)


Shogun - Finnaly, we have arrived to Kotei’s office …

Kotei – Oh, I can see you have arrived, Welcome to my office …

Shogun – Thank you Emperor, may I ask, what is our mission?

Kotei – This is your first mission, so it isn’t going to be an hard one, you and your team are going to be sent to the forest, your objective is to capture the tail of a werewolf!

Shogun – Hmm, Sounds Hard.

Kotei – Don’t worry, it isn’t.

Nanoko – Im going to take care of the werewolf after we take his tale off … 

Kyodu – Gahh, Nanoko, always the same attitude, why can you just let the werewolf still?!

Nanoko – Oh Shut Up Kyodu …

Kotei – Well well, don’t need to start fighting, now go… you have to do your mission, Yorishi-San (secondary character, irrelevant) is going to guide you to the forest, once you get there, she will leave.

Yorishi – LETS GO!

(Arriving at the forest…)


Yorishi – Okay Kids, we have arrived, now go and finish your mission … (disappears)

Shogun – Lets go Kyodu, Nanoko, we have to leave a good impression to the Emperor!

Nanoko – Ahhh, whats that ?!?!?!
?????? – GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

Kyodu – Aw, it seems like a giant worm :/

G.Worm – GRRRRRRRR! DINNER!!!

Shogun – Oh shit, run!!

Nanoko – Wait… he might be friendly.

Shogun – Didn’t you just heard what he said ? He wants to eat us!!!

Nanoko – Oh, okay RUN!!!

(After hiding themselves into some bushes)

Kyodu – Uff, I think he is gone …

Shogun – Yeah, let’s go on with our mission!

Kyodu – Calm Down, I have to rest, we spent hours running away from that
monster!

Shogun – Shut Up, let’s go!

Kyoku – Okay Okay, don’t destroy my ears …

Nanoko -    … I think that there is a wolf right over there!

Shogun – You are right, let’s hunt him!

Shogun *Takes off sword and goes after the wolf*

Shogun – You can run, but you can’t hide! I will end up getting you!

Wolf – Ahhh …

Shogun - *Cuts off the wolf’s tail*

Kyodu – He ran away Nanoko, it seems u are not going to heal him Ah Ah Ah !

Nanoko – -.-

Shogun – Okay, lets head back to the Emperor’s office !

(Arriving at the Emperor’s office…)

Shogun – We have completed our Mission !! Mister emperor !

Kotei – Oh, good, show me the werewolf’s tail.

Shogun – Here it is…

*Hands the tail to the Emperor*

Kotei – Hmm, how strange… I think this is … yeah… this isn´t and werewolf’s tail, it is a WOLF’S tail !!! S-Sh-Shogun !!!!

Shogun - Oh crap !

Kotei – YOU FAILED THE MISSION !!! GET OUT OF MY OFFICE !!!

Shogun - ;(

Kyodu - ;(

Nanoko - ;(







Chapter 2 – Baemisui’s test


(Another Beautiful day in the Land of Jigoku …)

Nanoko – KYODUUUU !!!
Kyodu – What ?!
Nanoko – STOP TOUCHING MY UNDERWEAR !!!
Kyodu – I didn’t touched any underwear …
Nanoko – STOP LYING!
Shogun – Stop fighting you two. We have to go to school!
Kyodu – Gahh … I hate school …
Nanoko – Oh now I know the reason for your dumbness …
Kyodu – Grrr !!!
Shogun – Lets go.

(In the meanwhile, in some other land named AkumaTochi …)
Rashumon – Master, Master Baemisui, I think it is almost ready !
Baemisui – Good, soon we will unleash our HiddenDemons !!! MUAHAHAHAH !!!
Rashumon – Master, we will be the strongest people on Earth !
Baemisui – Eh, finnaly I shall kill the Emperor and rule the World !!!
Rashumon – Weeeee !
(Back to Jigoku, after school …)

Shogun – Ah, school went great today …
Kyodu – (Nerd)
Kyodu – Shogun, wanna go to the forest search for some fireflies ?
Shogun – Hmm, sure ! Wanna come to Nanoko ?
Nanoko – Yes, but only if you promise not to kill them !
Shogun – Of course …

(Arriving at the forest …)

Shogun – Okay, we have arrived, let’s start searching !
Nanoko – Oh there is one over there !
Shogun – Wow Nanoko, you have a great vis …
Kyodu – Less flirting, more catching fireflies !


Shogun – Wow, they sure are hard to catch !
Nanoko – Yeah, im getting tired…
Kyodu – Tired already, come on.
Kyodu – Ha, got one !

(1 hour later …)

Shogun – I still haven’t got any !
Kyodu – Ah ah, I already got 14 !
Nanoko - (OO) w-wow, the ground is moving !!
Shogun – Oh no, I hope it isn’t that giant worm again !
Nanoko – No, this seems different, I think this is an earthquake!!!
Kyodu – Oh Sh*t …

(Some time later, they woke up …)

Nanoko – Where are we ?
Shogun – I don’t know, what is this place ?
Kyodu – Shut up, I think we are not alone.
Shogun – You must be seeing thi …
?????? – GRRRRR !
Shogun – Whoa, what was that ?
Kyodu – I don’t know, but It seems to be coming from over there !
Shogun – Let’s see what’s going on !
Nanoko – I’m not going there !
Kyodu – I will stay here with her.
Shogun – Gahh, I’m sure that it isn’t something to be afraid… okay, I will go alone …
Nanoko – Oh wait, then I will go with you.
Shogun – Are you sure ?
Nanoko – Yeah yeah.
Kyodu – Hey, what about me ? Are you going to leave me here alone ?
Shogun – I’m sure you will be safe …
Kyodu – What if some weird monster appears ?
Shogun – It wont.
Kyodu – But what if i…
Shogun – It wont !!!
Kyodu – Okay, just go …
(Shogun and Nanoko followed the screams …)

Shogun – I think it is coming from that place !
Nanoko – W-Wh-What is that ?!?!?!
Shogun – I think it is a kid, I will go check it closer.
Nanoko – Okay, be careful.


Shogun – Hey kid, are you alright ?
Kid – GRRRR !

(The kid starts transforming into something weird…)
Shogun – Whoa, what are you ?!
Nanoko – Shogun, run !!!
Shogun – Ahh, he got me !
Kid – GRRRRRrrrrrr r…

(The kid transforms back …)

Nanoko – Shogun, are you okay ?
Shogun – Yeah, help me get out of here…

(Shogun, Nanoko and Kyodu returned to the village.)

Kyodu – Uff, im glad we found a way back into the village.
Shogun – Turns out it was just a hole under the forest.
Nanoko – Yeah, but I still can’t explain what that kid was, and he disappeared right after that !
Shogun – Yeah, but it’s gone now, don’t worry about it anymore.
Kyodu – You two were probably having visions ahahah …

(In AkumaTochi …)

Rashumon – Master, I was watching the kid’s reaction to the HiddenDemons …
Baemisui – And ?...
Rashumon – It didn’t worked, the effect disappeared 5 minutes later and the kid dyed.
Baemisui – Damn it !...




Chapter 3 - The Fighters from Sora



Narrator – The day has just started in Jigoku, but it is not an ordinary day, it is raining and it is very windy, when that happens, people will have bad luck the whole day. (Jigoku’s Superstition)

Shogun – It is so cold out there, I don’t want to leave our home. Why today ?!
Nanoko – ‘’Why today ?!’’ – what happens today ?
Shogun – Don’t you remember ?
Nanoko – Hmm no.
Shogun – The Emperor gave us another task.
Kyodu – It’s not a task, it’s a mission…
Shogun – Task; mission, call it whatever you want.
Kyodu - …Anyway I’m not going to do another mission, I’m too tired.
Shogun – You have to, if we continue to skip or to fail mission, we will end up being the village’s joke.
Kyodu – Hmph.
Shogun – I Consider that a yes… Now get dressed and let’s go.

Narrator – After getting ready, they went to see the Emperor.

Shogun – Mister Emperor, we have arrived!
Kotei (Emperor) – Oh yes, I see you are here for you next mission.
Kyodu – See…I told you it was mission.
Shogun – …
Nanoko – What do we have to do Mister Emperor?
Kotei – As you can see, it is a bad day out there…
Shogun – Yes.
Kotei – In days like these, do you know what happens?
Shogun – No.
Kotei – They say that in days like these there is too much bad luck in the air, do you know why?
Shogun – No.
Kotei – Once there was a witch, her name was Shi-to, she died in a rainy and stormy day like this. She cursed people and gave them bad luck for years, and one day, the people planned revenge together and destroyed her house. When they were about to kill her she cursed all of the village, she said: ‘’Every time it starts raining and the wind is very strong, you will have bad luck, when that happens, I will reincarnate … ‘’. She was killed right after her speech and it started raining.

Narrator – Shogun was trembling and his long black hair was spiked, he believed in that and was afraid that the witch appeared in front of him…

Shogun – Oh my god, I’m so scared.
Kyodu – Chicken !
Nanoko – Well you still haven’t told us our mission.
Kotei – Ok ok, I have heard that some punks were burning the trees in the forest, I want you to stop them.
Shogun – Hmm ok. (I just hope not to see the scary witch)
Kyodu – Sounds simple.
Kotei – Go now, you already know the way to the forest.
Nanoko – Okay.
Kotei – Oh just one more thing, don’t fail the mission like you did with the last one.
Shogun - …
Narrator – And so they went to the forest.

Shogun – Hmph what is this smell?!
Nanoko – Oh no, it’s the trees, they are dying, it smells burned!
Kyodu – Calm down Nanoko, they are just trees.
Nanoko – To you maybe, but for me they are more then th…
Kyodu – Yeah yeah stop talking, we have a mission to do.
Nanoko – Stupid.
Shogun – Stop fighting, we cannot afford to fail this mission.

Narrator – They spent some time searching for the punks, but they ended up finding them.

Shogun – Hey, there they are!
Nanoko – Yeah.
Kyodu – Let’s kick their ass!
Punk 1 – Hey, look at those tree, I think they are threatening us!
Punk 2 – Yeah!
Punk 1 – But… they are just little kids haha!

Narrator – Shogun and Kyodu take off their long and sharp swords, while Nanoko tries to stop the fire and the suffering to those old and ancient trees.

Punk 1 – Look out, they have swords!
Punk 2 – Oh Sh*t…
Punk 1 – Run!!

Shogun – Ah, this was easy, they probably won’t return.
Kyodu – It’s better, because if they do…
Shogun – Wait, there is another one there!
Kyodu – No, it is just an old woman.

Narrator – Shogun and Kyodu get closer to ask her is everything is okay.

Kyodu – Hey granny, is everything okay?
????? – It will be, now that I satisfy my thirst to kill!
Shogun – Wahh?
????? – Oh it seems you have never heard about me before, well let me introduce myself, I’m Shi-To.
Shogun – Hmm Shi-To, Shi-To, I think I remember that name from somewhere.
Kyodu – S-Sh-Shogun, it’s the w-wi-witch!!!
Shogun – Oh ye… What ?! the WITCH!
Shi-To – Oh, so you know me.
Kyodu – Yes, the Emperor told us that you cursed people a long time ago and that in days like this you reincarnate.
Shi-To – Yes, that is true, so he didn’t told you that I killed people.
Kyodu – N-No!
Shi-To – Well, I didn’t only cursed them, since they killed me, every time I reincarnate I kill people.
Kyodu – Shogun, run!!...Shogun? Shogun?

Narrator – Shogun was totally petrified with fear, he couldn’t move or talk.
Narrator – Kyodu grabs Shogun and they start running.

Shi-To – Oh you think you will run away from me just like that?!

Narrator – The witch opens her hand and they are pulled back to her.

Shi-To – Now die!
Shi-To – Hmm what was that noise?

Narrator – 3 people appear …

Shi-To – Who are you?
????? – I’m Naraku.
????? – I’m Ryuujin.
????? – I’m Izaoy.


Naraku – We are fighters from Sora. (village)
Shi-To – Stay right there, let me kill these 2 and I will kill right after.
Ryuujin – Don’t touch them you scumbag!
Shi-To – GRR AFTERALL YOU ARE GOING TO BE FIRST!

Narrator – Shi-To runs to them, with a sort of knife with poison.

Naraku – Izaoy!
Izaoy – Yeah I will handle that. Dobei Tochi!

Narrator – Izaoy Creates a mud wall and Shi-To crashes into it.

Shi-To – I can’t move, what have you done to me?!
Izaoy – It’s just one of my little techniques…
Naraku – Inazuma Seikaku!

Narrator – Naraku shoots a thunder from his eyes to Shi-To’s forehead.

Shi-To – Gahhhhhh.
Ryuujin – Well done, she is dead.
Naraku – Let’s head back to the village…
Ryuujin – Yes.

Kyodu – Wait, who are you?

Narrator – The 3 fighters from Sora disappeared…
Narrator – Shogun, Kyodu and Nanoko returned to Jigoku and kept the witch and the tree fighters a secret.

Shogun – I can’t believe I got petrified of fear, I’m so embarrassed …
Nanoko – Don’t be, everybody has their own fears.
Shogun – Yeah I guess you are right.
Kyodu – Ok, we arrived at the Emperor’s office, at least we finished our mission.
Shogun – Yeah… Mister Kotei, we have completed our mission, those punks will not return!
Kotei – Oh I’m so glad that turned out ok.
Shogun – ‘’(…)turned out ok.’’ ?
Kotei – Oh yes, one of our villagers found 1 man dead in the forest. I was afraid that something might happened to you too.
Shogun – Well but it didn’t.
Kotei – Yes, well, you can go home and rest now.
Shogun – Yes sir!

Narrator – In the meanwhile in AkumaTochi…

Rashumon – Master, the new recipe for HiddenDemons is almost ready!
Baemisui – Yes, that is good news! MUAHAHAHAHA!!!



Chapter 4 - Road to Mujin




Narrator – After Shogun and Kyodu being saved by three mysterious fighters, Shogun started doing some research about Fighters…

Shogun – (Hmm, now that those two went to lunch I have got some time to do my research…)

Shogun – (Whoa, it seems fighters can only do those special abilities because they have some sort of energy that flows from their body! It is called … Shitsu)

Shogun – (Their powers are divided in elements, there is Water (Mizu), Fire (Kazu), Rock (Izu), Mud (Dozu), thunder (Inazu), wind (hanzu) and leaf (shizu))

Shogun – (Ah, what is this……..there is a way to become a Fighter!!! There are some caves near Mujin (inhabited land), the rocks in those caves contain some sort of liquid that gives you Shitsu! I want to become a fighter!)
Narrator – Shogun touches his long brown hair while his eyes are amazed with what he sees.

Narrator – Shogun starts his quest and adventures himself into Mujin, but it is a long way to go… in the meanwhile, in AkumaTochi…

Rashumon – Master Master, I’m sorry for the intrusion, I don’t want to mess with what you are thinking, I just came here to say that the new test subject for the HiddenDemons was released…
Baemisui – Great!!Soon we will find the perfect recipe to unleash our HiddenDemons and rule the world!!!

Narrator – While Baemisui and his loyal companion test the HiddenDemons on a new subject, Shogun gets ready to go on his adventure.

Shogun – (Finally I shall have more power and everyone in Jigoku will fear and respect me!)
Nanoko – We are back from lunch!
Shogun – Oh hi…
Kyodu – Hmm what are you doing? Why are you packing?
Shogun – Hmm no reason, I’m, I’m… going to visit and old friend…
Nanoko – Sounds interesting, can we go with you?
Shogun – NO… I mean, no, he has a heart disease and he just wants to see me for the last time.
Nanoko – Ow, poor guy, well good luck.
Kyodu – Are you sure you are telling us everything? You sound so nervous.
Shogun – Yeah…

Narrator – Shogun was very nervous, he was afraid his friends found out where he was going.

Shogun – Well I finished packing, I have to go now, see you in 2 or 3 days!
Nanoko – Bye, good luck!
Kyodu – Bye, bye.

Narrator – And so Shogun starts his adventure…

Shogun – Hmm, according to this map, I am close to the road which will take me straight to Mujin! Ah… what is this?

Narrator – Shogun trembles when he sees that in that road, there is a place called ‘’Mounts of Death’’. As you can see, Shogun is a very frightened person.

Shogun – Well, I’m just going to follow the road and when I arrive at the Mounts of Death I will make a short diversion and problem solved.

Narrator – Some hours later…

Shogun – Uff, according to the map I’m almost arriving, but it is getting late so I will stop here and stay for the night…

Narrator – Shogun falls asleep, but in the middle of the night…

Shogun – ….. a-a …what is this noise? It seems to be coming from over there……..oh I’m so scared…

Narrator – Tears come from Shogun’s eyes as he gets closer to the noise.

Shogun – Oh Sh*t, I hope it is just a squirrel or a Kanihebi (mix between crab and snake).
?????? – Hmm, who is there? Who are you?
Shogun – (Uff, it is just a kid…) I’m a boy from Jigoku… and you?
?????? – Hi, I’m from Sora, I’m from Kureiji!
Shogun – Oh, okay so bye…
Sora – Bye………..gahhhhh!
Shogun – What?
Sora – I’m feeling a strong pain…gahh!
Shogun – Calm down, I will help you.

Narrator – Suddenly Sora changes form and emanates great power from his body.

Shogun – What’s happening to you?!
Sora – GRRRR!
Shogun – Ahhh!

Narrator – Sora grabs Shogun with his big hand and puts him unconscious, some hours later…

Shogun – ah, where am I?
?????? – Shh, Shut up, don’t wake him up!
Shogun – W-Who are you?
?????? – It doesn’t matters who I am, but a guy called Sora brought me here!
Shogun – Yes he brought me here too!
?????? – Well, try to find a way out.
Shogun – Okay, you too…

Narrator – Some time later…

?????? – Look! There is a hole in the wall over there!
Shogun – Yeah, let’s escape.

Narrator – Shogun and the Stranger start running to the hole, but suddenly Sora appears in front of them.

Sora – GRRRRR!
Shogun – Oh no, I am too young to die!
?????? – Quit complaining, run!!!

Narrator – So they ran and kept running, but they ended up trapped in a corner.

Shogun – Oh no, he trapped us!
?????? – Well, we are going to die..... my name is Yatsu.
Sora – GRRRRR!

Narrator – All of a sudden, Sora fall into the ground, spitting blood.

Shogun – Ah, what happened?
Kyodu – You owe me one!
Shogun – What? Kyodu? What are you doing here?
Kyodu – I found some papers with some research of yours, it seemed cool, so I went after you.
Shogun – Well Thanks… wait… where is Yatsu?
Kyodu – Yatsu, there is no one here except us. You are just imagining…
Shogun – No! He was right here, I don’t know what happened.
Kyodu – Well maybe he ran away.
Shogun – Yeah, you are probably right…
Kyodu – It’s almost morning, want to go back to the road? We are almost there.
Shogun – Well okay, let’s go…

Narrator – After that whole episode…… in AkumaTochi…

Rashumon – Master, I have news about or test subject!
Baemisui – And???...
Rashumon – The results were inconclusive, it was all going well but some punks showed up and stabbed him.
Baemisui – Damn it, it didn’t worked!
Rashumon – How do you know that?
Baemisui – If it worked, the subject wouldn’t die just with a stab.
Rashumon – Oh, you are so smart master.
Baemisui – Yes I know……. What are you still doing here, we have to start creating another recipe!
Rashumon – Yes master!

Narrator – Back to Shogun and Kyodu, they have arrived at Mujin…

Shogun – Finally, we have arrived!
Kyodu – Yeah, but we have to search for the caves…
Shogun – Let’s start!









Chapter 5 – Becoming a Fighter!




-Well, now that we have arrived, we have to find the caves - said Kyodu while he pulled his blue shorts a little up and removed his katana.
- Yes, you go and search over there and I will search here – said Shogun.

Suddenly, some big stones started falling from the old mountains that surrounded the abandoned village named Mujin.

- What is happening?! – Thought Shogun.
- Are we going to die? – Said Kyodu, trembling while his eyes and body couldn’t move.
- Kyodu, run!! – Said Shogun, while he rushed to save Kyodu who didn’t noticed that a rock was almost crushing him.

- Ah thanks!... – Said Kyodu, embarrassed because he didn’t wanted to be ‘saved’, especially by Shogun.

Shogun and Kyodu try to escape the rocks while running inside an abandoned house.

- Uff, we’re safe! – Said Shogun, after they entered the old and abandoned house.
- Yes, as long as the rocks don’t crush the house. – Thought Kyoru.
- Let’s wait 5 minutes, after that we will check if the rocks started falling – Said Shogun, after sitting in a rusty chair. – Ouch – Yelled Shogun – I sited on top of a nail!
- Ahahah – Kyoru laughs.

For a short moment Shogun and Kyoru heard a loud noise and after that it all became quit and peaceful like it was before the stones started falling.

- I think it stopped – Said Kyoru, uncertain with what he said.
- Yes, I will go check – Said Shogun.
- I will go with you.

They went outside and the rocks stopped falling, after that they saw the caves.

- Hey, there they are! – Said Shogun.
- Yeah, but they are blocked – Said Kyodu while he scratched his head thinking on a solution to remove the rocks that were blocking the way into the caves.

After a long time thinking, Shogun found a solution to that.

- I got it! – Said Shogun, very happy.
- What? – Asked Kyoru.
- Let me explain, when we were in the house, I saw some explosives… - Said Shogun.
- And…? – Asked Kyoru, he didn’t understood what Shogun said.
- And we can use them to blow the entrance of the cave! – Yelled Shogun, angry for Kyoru’s question.

Shogun went back into the house, and brought explosives and a light, he was very nervous because he never used explosives before.

- Well here it is, let me just place the explosives near the entrance and light it – Said Shogun.

Shogun lighted the explosives and got back.

BOOOOOOOOM!!!!
- Ahh , my ears – said Kyodu.

They were getting happier while they were entering the cave…

- Uff, it’s hot in here – Said Shogun, while he remove his black sweatshirt and showed his thin and white body.
- Look, there it is, those shining green rocks! – Yelled Kyodu, amazed.
They get closer to the rocks, and they start feeling powerless, the rocks were emanating some great power, suddenly, Kyodu falls into the ground, *cough* *cough*.
Kyodu! Are you alright? – Asks Shogun trying to get near the rocks.
Yes, go on… - Said Kyoru, his voice was weak and his eyes were almost closed, is he going to die?

Finally, Shogun reaches the stones, he opens his eyes while he bleeds from his nose and mouth. Despite all of that, he was very happy and surprised. He joins hands and makes some sort of shell with them. He puts his hands on the liquid and brings them up to his mouth. While drinking it, he kneeled down and ended up passing out.

In the meantime, Baemisui discovered who the kids that killed his subject Sora were and sent three men after them.

Sometime later, Shogun wakes up, and feels ‘good as new’, he tests his abilities with his Katana, slashing a rock easily, things that a normal human like he was before couldn’t do. He notices that Kyodu is still on the ground and in a ‘Quickstep’ mode he grabbed Kyodu and took him away from those rocks.
Finally, Kyodu wakes up.

What happened? – Said Kyodu, recovering his breath.
You passed out because of the rocks.
What about you – Asked Kyodu.
I succeeded; I became a fighter – Said Shogun, very proud of himself not only for becoming a fighter, but also for surviving to the rocks powers.

Shogun… hmm … can you help me to become a fighter too? – Asked Kyodu, embarrassed.
Aha, of course, we are friends… best friends. – Replied Shogun.
Hmm… thanks – Said Kyodu.

Again in a ‘Quickstep’ mode, Shogun took Kyodu near the rocks, where the second drank the weird green liquid and passed out. After that Shogun took him on his shoulders and returned to Jigoku.
Sometime later, the three men sent by Baemisui arrived at Mujin and found some blood on the ground. They weren’t aware of what happened there, but afraid of being executed by Baemisui for not finding them, they started following the footsteps trying to find them…


Chapter 6 - The First Elements!



Narrator - In the Depths of AkumaTochi, Baemisui starts testing the new recipe for the HiddenDemons...

Baemisui - Rashumon! Bring our best man!
Rashumon - Hmm, master, do you really want them to test it?! What if they die?!
Baemisui - Doesn't matters, bring them.
Rashumon - Okay Master.

Narrator - Some minutes later...

Rashumon - Master, here they are, Shite Takashi and Iruson Oribera.

Narrator - The lights go off as the two men walk in, they have such and extraordinary power! Shite Takashi is tall and shy, he is very silent and doesn't likes injustice. He wears black clothes, a black scarf and black spiked wrist bands, he also wears two swords and a mask to hide his eyes, people say he is very powerfull and that if he uncovers his eyes he can destroy a man just with his look. Iruson Oribera was born blind, but he recovered his vision while he trained. He has dark hair and dark clothes, his weapon is a pair of sharp fangs and claws, replacing all his hand fingers. If you hurt him, he will have a revenge. Shite is stronger then Iruson.

Baemisui - Great!
Shite - Why have you brought us here? I was doing something.
Baemisui - You are going to be the tests to the new recipe for the HiddenDemons!
Iruson - That sounds dangerous!
Baemisui - Well... it isn't.
Shite - Yeah Yeah, just do it!

Narrator - Rashumon grabs his syringe and injects a red liquid into their veins... Suddenly, there is a big explosion! The whole building collapses! They built amazing auras with their power and blow it up!

Baemisui - Ahh, what a power!!
Shite - Gahhh! I feel so...so... good!
Iruson - Muahahahahaha!
Baemisui - I need you two to do a simple task...
Shite - Oh geez, what?
Baemisui - Like I said, it is simple, destroy Jigoku!
Shite - Really? That is like... S-Rank Mission, that is so easy!
Iruson - Let's go Shite...

Narrator - Suddenly, both of them disappear.

Baemisui - Finnaly! I have created the HIDDEN DEMONS! AHAHAHAHAHAH!

Narrator - In the meantime, in Jigoku.

Shogun - Guys! Lets go to the Emperor's office, he said he had something to tell us!
Kyodu - Yeah yeah, lets go, i'm in a good mood.
Nanoko - Wow, you two seem so... strong, it is hard to breath when I get closer to you.
Shogun - Maybe you are alergic to something we are dressing... (wow, now that I am a fighter, people seem so weak!)... well lets go.

Narrator - Arriving at the Office...

Shogun - We have arrived, emperor!
Kotei - Ah good, I wanted to introduce you to someone.
Shogun - Who is it?
Kotei - Before you meet him, let me warn you, he is very strong. He is a FIGHTER!
Shogun - Hmm..
Kyodu - Hmm..
Nanoko - What is a fighter?
Shogun - --'
Kotei - Well I dont know how to become one, but fighters are very strong and can use Shitsu.
Nanoko - What is Shitsu?
Kyodu - --'
Kotei - Shitsu is energy that can help you do Chikara.
Nanoko - What is Chikara?
Shogun - Yeah... what is Chikara?
Kotei - Well, Chikara are attacks and powers that spend you Shitsu, they can control elements, like fire or wind!
Nanoko - Wow!
Kotei - Yeah, anyway, he will be your new team mate!
Shogun - (I wonder if he is too powerfull...)
Kotei - Bereburu Oribera, you can come in!

Narrator - Bereburu, has you may have already noticed, Bereburu is Iruson's brother. Bereburu has spiked light blue hair, wears white shorts and orange shirt, and has a ring in his left hand, the ring contains his last resort, and the people who have seen were Iruson and some others that are dead.

Bereburu - Hmm, so these are my team mates?
Kotei - Yes
Bereburu - Hmm, they seem weak.
Shogun - :O WTF!

Narrator - Shogun clenches his fists, with and angry look.

Shogun - Look who is talkin...
Bereburu - Shhh, shut up, you tell me later.
Shogun - --' what?!
Bereburu - We have a mission right?
Kotei - Oh yes, i almost forgot, it isnt a mission, it is more like a training. Bereburu, you will have to train Shogun and Kyodu. Teach them how to use their fighter powers!
Bereburu - They are fighters?
Kotei - Yes.
Shogun - How do you know that we are Fighters?!?!?!?!?!?!
Kotei - Didn't you ever wondered that i have to have skills to be Emperor!
Nanoko - You are fighters?!?!
Shogun - ...
Kotei - Nanoko, you can go home.
Nanoko - What? Can I at least watch them training?
Kotei - Well okay, but dont get to close.

Narrator - And so they go to the training grounds in the forest of Jigoku...

Bereburu - Okay. First you need to find what are your elements!
Kyodu - Do we get to choose?
Bereburu - No, they will eventualy come to you.
Kyodu - Hmm...
Bereburu - Now, each one can have up to 4 elements, probably you will only start with one, but eventually you will get stronger and reach two, and maybe you will stay there.
Kyodu - How many do you have?
Bereburu - Three, those who reach four are very strong Fighters, they are called Warlords!
Shogun - Whoa!
Bereburu - Okay, now Kyodu, fight me with all you have, soon one of your attacks will come with some elemental power!
Shogun - What about me?
Bereburu - You sit there and wait for your turn.

Narrator - Kyodu runs at Bereburu with a normal fist, and Bereburu grabs his hand.

Bereburu - Is that all you have? You are so weak!
Kyodu - Grrrr!! I'm gonna kick you!
Bereburu - Doesn't seems like it, your missing all of you punches and kicks, little loser!
Kyodu - Ahhhhh!

Narrator - Kyodu is getting mad, his fists become stronger and more precise, so as his kicks...

Kyodu - hmph hmph...
Bereburu - Giving up already? (i think it is almost there)
Kyodu - Here it goes, one more punch!

Narrator - Suddenly his fist turns into Rock and he punches Bereburu.

Kyodu - Wow, what is my element?
Bereburu - Your element name is Izu.
Kyodu - And what is is?
Bereburu - Rock.
Kyodu - Is that good?
Bereburu - Yes, Izu is one of the most equilibrated elements of all, it has a good defense, but also a strong attack!
Kyodu - Great!
Bereburu - Ok, now step back, it is Shogun's turn.
Kyodu - Okay!
Bereburu - Come at me with all your strengh Shogun!
Shogun - Grr!

Narrator - Shogun runs towards Bereburu, and jumps, throwing his Katana in his direction.

Bereburu - Ah, you think that will hit me?
Shogun - (has i expected, he ran in my direction)

Narrator - Shogun's sword disappears and appears in Shogun's hand, while Shogun is falling on top of Bereburu.

Bereburu - Eh! Izu: Ishikabe!

Narrator - A Stone wall forms in front of Bereburu, protecting him from Shogun's sword.

Shogun - Dammit, i forgot about the elements!
Bereburu - Mizu: Funsui Hanpatsu

Narrator - A fountain appears under Shogun, pulling him inside and drowning him.

Shogun - Gahhhhh!

Narrator - Suddenly, a whirlwind surrounds Shogun, blowing the water away and impeding him from drowning.

Shogun - And my ability is wind, right?
Bereburu - Yes, wind or Shizu.
Shogun - Is it good?
Bereburu - Wind can blow enemies away, and protect the user from fire and water. It's weakness is Mud and Thunder. Wind is basically a protection, but it also cuts the enemies skin!
Shogun - Good!
Bereburu - Ok, it seems the training is over. Tomorrow i will teach some wind and rock Chikaras.
Shogun - Ok, thanks!
Kyodu - Yeah!

Narrator - All of them return to the village, but something unexpected happened while they were training. Jigoku was destroyed by Shite and Iruson.

Shogun - What happened?!
Nanoko - Gahhh, we have to help the villagers!
Shogun - Kyodu and Nanoko, help them, me and Bereburu will find the emperor!
Kyodu - Ok!

Narrator - Some time later...

Shogun - Look, there's the Emperor!

Shogun - What happened?
Kotei - Cough Cough... ahh, come closer Bereburu, while i am still alive.

Narrator - Bereburu comes closer and Kotei whispers to him...

Kotei - One of the men that did this to us left a message for you, he said: ''Can you really defeat me, little brother?''

Narrator - Bereburu falls, trembles all over his body and tears come from his eyes, he knew his brother was evil, but he never thought he would do something like that.

Shogun - What happened, what is it?
Bereburu - SHUT UP!!

Narrator - Bereburu disappears. Now in AkumaTochi...

Shite - We have returned Baemisui. Now i expect you to give me some Kin!

Narrator - Kin is the money.

Baemisui - Yeah yeah, here's 10.000 kin.
Shite - It's ok.
Iruson - I dont need kin... (soon i hope my brother comes to me, i wanna see his skills)
Baemisui - Well ok.
Shite - Oh i forgot, im going to develop some skills with my new HiddenDemons power, i already mastered 4 elements, lets see if i can reach 5 or 6! Maybe i will even reach the Dark Power!
Baemisui - Don't be silly, the only one who reached the Dark Power was Fumetsu Tsuki.
Shite - My Master, what makes you think that i wont reach it! Ah never mind ... im leaving...

Narrator - Fumetsu Tsuki, the fighter that was able to master all of the elements.
Narrator - While Shite and Iruson rest ...

Bereburu - Hey Shogun and Kyodu, in the next months we will train constantly everyday.
Shogun - Why?
Bereburu - When we finish our training, we will go on a quest!!! (Im gonna kill my brother!)



Chapter 7 - The Training Begins!



Narrator - A dark time has started in Jigoku, since Shite and Iruson's attack... the villagers started rebuilding Jigoku, but it will never be the same, now that the Emperor died. Bereburu brought a friend to help training Shogun, because Bereburu doesn't knows much about wind ability. The Advisers are trying to find a new Man that is willing to bring Jigoku up from the ashes and become the new Emperor of Jigoku...

Bereburu - Guys, let me introduce you to one of my friends, she will help Shogun and teach him some Chikara's.
Shogun - Oh, who is she?
Bereburu - Anessa, come in!
Anessa - : Hi, my name is Anessa Gaido, I am from Basunyo.

Narrator - Anessa Gaido is a Fighter, she has 2 elements, Wind (Hanzu) and Leaf (Shizu). She is small, has medium brown hair, wears pink training pants and light blue training sweatshirt. She wears black gloves, that control her Shitsu and make her make more powerfull attacks. Her weapons are a Sai and a Shield. Basunyo is a small town near Jigoku.

Shogun - I'm Shogun.
Kyodu - I'm Kyodu. Nice to meet you.
Bereburu - Ok, now let's go to the training fields!
Anessa - Ok!

Narrator - Arriving at the training fields...

Bereburu - Shogun, you go with Anessa and train over there. I will stay here and train Kyodu.
Shogun - Ok, let's go Anessa.
Anessa - yes.

Bereburu - Ok, first I will teach you (kyodu) some Izu (rock) techniques.
Kyodu - Listening...
Bereburu - Ok, to make special techniques, you need sets of seals. There is Tsu, Fu, San, Yotsu, Goko, Roku, Nana, Hachi, Kori and Ju.
Kyodu - What are they for?
Bereburu - To perform a special technique you need a unique set of seals, for example, if you say Fu-Goku-Nana-Ju, you make one Rock Technique!
Kyodu - Wow, let me try: Fu-Goku-Nana-Ju!........... nothing happened?
Bereburu - You need to let me finish. After saying those words, join your hands, and you will make it.
Kyodu - Fu-Goku-Nana-Ju! *joins hands*

Narrator - A rock starts falling from the sky.

Bereburu - Watch out, you almost got me!!!
Kyodu - Oh... sorry.
Bereburu - When you performed that technique you spent Shitsu...
Kyodu - Oh, im starting to understand.
Bereburu - Also, as you may have already noticed, when you made those seals, there was a voice in your head that said you the name of that Chikara.
Kyodu - Yes, someone said ''Izu: Rock Collapse!''
Bereburu - Ok. Im going to give you a book with lots of Izu Chikaras... study it and you will learn how to do more Chikaras!
Kyodu - Hmm, sounds boring...... but..... i have to do it right?!
Bereburu - Yeah, you have 30 minutes, starting now.
Kyodu - What?!
Bereburu - Start learning, the time is passing...
Kyodu - :x :x :x ok im starting!!!


Anessa - Shogun, now that i have already told you about the Chikaras and the seals, let me borrow you this book with lots of Hanzu Chikaras. You will need to study them hard to become stronger!
Shogun - With pleasure!
Anessa - Im going to ask Bereburu how much time do you have, i will be right back.

Narrator - After talking to Bereburu...

Anessa - Alright, you have 22 minutes...
Shogun - Ok! (gotta learn it gotta learn it, fast fast fast!!!)

Narrator - While Shogun and Kyodu are training, Baemisui celebrates the successfull result on the HiddenDemons, and tests it on herself...

Baemisui - Gaahh, i feel so powerfull!!!........ uh..... what are you doing here Iruson?!
Iruson - Hmm, i see you are already a ''HiddenDemon''...... anyway, i am here to ask you something.
Baemisui - What is it?
Iruson - I know you have a magic ball that watches everything...
Baemisui - And???...
Iruson - Can you borrow me that?
Baemisui - For???...
Iruson - I just want to know if my brother is training to defeat me...
Baemisui - Well... ... ... ok...
Iruson - Where is it?
Baemisui - Right over there... you go get it.
Iruson - Ok...

Narrator - Iruson sees the magic ball, and while walking in its direction, he falls in a trap.

Iruson - Ahhhhhh.
Baemisui - Ah ah ah... By the way, yes!
Iruson - Yes what?
Baemisui - Your brother is training to defeat you!
Iruson - That doesn't matters now! Get me out of here!!!
Baemisui - No! Now that i have ultimate power, i dont need you or Shite! Im going to rule the world!

Narrator - Suddenly, the lights go off...

Baemisui - What happened? RASHUMON!!! COME HERE!!!
Iruson - Eh eh eh.
Baemisui - Grr... who's there?!
Shite - Well, i dont need you too.

Narrator - The lights go back on.

Baemisui - Shite! Im going to kill you for that!
Shite - Ah you? You are going to kill me? Your seeing it all wrong!
Baemisui - Gahh. Dozu: Doro Shimasu!

Narrator - Baemisui creats a Mud Spear and throws it towards Shite.

Shite - Eh, you think that will hurt me?! Inazu: Raijin!

Narrator - A thunder falls on top of Baemisui.

Baemisui - Ahhh, dammit.
Shite - What? You are still alive?
Baemisui - You are going to need a lot more to kill me!








Chapter 8 - Shite's Power



Narrator - While Shogun and Kyodu are trained by Bereburu and Anessa, Shite fights Baemisui in a life or death match, all because of the reckless atitudes of Baemisui, who thought that was the strongest in the world since she became a HiddenDemon. This match is going to prove if she is right... or wrong.

Baemisui - Eh eh eh. I recognize your power, but mine is greater! Kazu: Yukai Tokero!
Shite - You think that melting the walls and the ground is going to kill me?
Baemisui - No... i just want to open the area to perform my ultimate technique!
Shite - Hmph ... (i cant let her do that!!!)
Baemisui - Kazu: Hero Ittai!

Narrator - The area around both of them becomes on Fire, and meteors start falling from the sky. The ground is getting warm and will end up destroyed.

Shite - Gahh, i have to kill you right away... Izu: Tetsu no Ken!
Baemisui - Uh.
Shite - Now my whole body became protected by rocks!
Baemisui - That wont stop me!

Narrator - Baemisui runs towards Shite and while running...

Baemisui - Kazu: Todoku Doragon!

Narrator - Baemisui spits fire to Shite.

Shite - Is that all you've got? Mizu: Baria Doku! (with this water barrier his spit wont hurt me!)
Baemisui - Grrr, I'm getting mad!

Narrator - Shite grabs his Two swords and puts them on Fire.

Shite - Kazu: Kasai no Suraiso!

Narrator - Shite runs in Baemisui's direction and Slices him with his fire blades.

Baemisui - Gahhh! That hurts Ya know!
Shite - This will be your end! Inazu: Sora Kara Ochi!

Narrator - Suddenly, its like the sky was falling, thunders landed near Baemisui and they ended up getting him.

Baemisui - (this is my last resort.) Cough Cough... Kazu: Bakuhatsu!
Shite - What's happening?! I feel like... im... gonna... implode! Dammit you bastard!
Baemisui - Eh, even if i die, you go with me!
Shite - Not a chance. I dont know if this will work, but i can only survive with it! Mizu: Bakuhatsu!
Baemisui - Using the same technique as mine, but in Mizu?! What a mind... (he truly is strong and smart!)
Shite - Gahh!

Narrator - Shite, using his technique, stoped the implosion that was going to happen in him, using the same attack in himself, but with water.

Shite - Eh eh, it worked.
Baemisui - Alright, you won... sigh...
Shite - (there it goes...)

Narrator - Shite throws one of his swords and cuts Baemisui's head off.

Shite - Cough Cough, i feel like my organs are burning...
Iruson - Yeah! Way to go Shite!... now get me outta here.

Narrator - Baemisui died, but Rashumon was there, and somehow he absorved some of the power that was coming from the battle.

Rashumon - Those bastards, i will avenge Baemisui. Im gonna be a HiddenDemon!

Narrator - In the meantime, in the training fields deep in the old forest of the destroyed village of Jigoku...

Bereburu - Alright! Time's up!
Kyodu - Great, now i know how to do some Izu Techniques!
Bereburu - Yeah, now its time to put what you've learn in action!
Kyodu - Ok. Let's fight!
Bereburu - Hey hey wait a minute. Youre not fighting against me.
Kyodu - What? Then who's my opponent?
Bereburu - Ive brought some friends not so strong as me to help you training, you will have to beat them!
Kyodu - Ok, who are them?
Bereburu - Your opponent is Tento Matinzo.
Shogun - And mine?
Bereburu - Karurosu Senshi.

Narrator - Tento Matinzo is a Fighter from Sentoki (village). He has green hair, spiked on top and with a ponytail. He wears blue large jeans with spikes on his knees and a red shirt where is written Matinzo. He is specialized in Mizu (water) but he also uses Shizu (leaf). Karurosu Senshi is Tento Matinzo's half-brother, he is known for defeating and whole team of fighters sent by the Emperor of Sunahama (village). He wears dark blue shorts, with a sword and no shirt or upper wear. His hair is dark blue and in the tips its light blue. His elements are Hanzu (wind) and Izu (rock). Karurosu has very strong fists.

Bereburu - Tento! Karurosu! Stop hiding and come over here!
Karurosu - Yeah yeah, stop yelling at us...
Tento - Sigh.
Bereburu - Ok, Tento, you go fight Kyodu over there.
Bereburu - And Karu...
Karurosu - Yeah i know, i will fight Shogun.
Bereburu - Alright, you know what to do, now start!

Karurosu - I wont give you a chance!

Narrator - Karurosu throws a Sai towards Shogun, as a distraction, while...

Karurosu - Izu: Tamaishi Boulder!
Shogun - What?! (shit, the sai was a distraction, i have to hurry and protect myself from that giant rock that is falling!)
Shogun - Shizu: Henza!

Narrator - Shogun creates a strong wind that launches the rock towards Karurosu.

Karurosu - Nice move, but will you dodge this?! Izu: Iwa Nobori! (now the rocks will come from the ground eheh)
Shogun - What the hell?!

Narrator - A huge rock crashes with Shogun.

Shogun - Gahh, dammit.
Karurosu - Will you resist my final move?
Shogun - Try me!
Karurosu - Grr! Izu: Ichi Tachiojo!
Shogun - Oh crap, im not gonna be able to dodge all of those spiked rocks coming in my direction!
Karurosu - Get ready to lose...
Shogun - Shizu: Suraiso Ni!

Narrator - Shogun keeps slicing the rocks in half, impeding them from hiting him.

Shogun - Eh eh! It seems i resisted!
Karurosu - That wasnt my final move!
Shogun - What?!
Karurosu - Izu: Seikei Tsume!
Shogun - Wow! (amazing, he formed claws made of rocks!)
Karurosu - Hmph... here i go!

Narrator - Karurosu jumps in Shogun's direction, ready to pierce him with his claws.

Shogun - Oh no!!!...




Chapter 9 - Shogun's new Techniques!


Karurosu jumps in Shogun's direction, ready to pierce him with his claws.

Oh no!!! - said Shogun.
Die!!! - Yelled Karurosu while falling in Shogun's direction.
(Wait, I will try the technique that was on that book, it was written that it was very hard to perform, but its my only chance!) - Thought Shogun, desperate because he is very injured to move.
Shizu: Kyorioku!
...
Gahhhhh!! - Screamed Karurosu, while getting shot by powerfull wind concentrations.
It...It...It worked! - Said Shogun, astonished with what he did... seconds later, he passed out.

Some time later, Shogun wakes up.

What happened? - Asked Shogun.
Hey youre awake.
Bereburu? - Asked Shogun.
Yes... you performed an wonderful Chikara and you passed out because it spent you too much Shitsu. - Explained Bereburu.
Yes, you screwed me up pretty bad - Said Karurosu.
Whoa, you-your arm!! - Yelled Shogun.
Oh dont worry, just a small detail. (Gahh, what a pain!) - Said Karurosu.
Oh my God, im so sorry, i didnt mean to crush your arm like that! Please forgive me! - Begged Shogun, on his knees.
Like i said, dont worry, its just a small detail... forget about it.
Yes, i asked Anessa to treat him and she was able to put his arm on ice, tomorrow she will sew his arm back. - Replyed Bereburu.
Oh, thank God. - Said Shogun, relieved. - Where's Kyodu?
He is still fighting with Tento.

While Shogun and Karurosu were resting, with Bereburu supervisioning them, Tento and Kyodu were fighting with all they had...

Cough Cough... Dammit! - Said Kyodu.
Tired already?! Why do I always get to fight the weak ones... Shogun won his battle! - Provoked Tento.
What?! Shogun won?! - Said Kyodu, furious.
Yes! (aha its working, now he is going to give it all to win too!) - Thought Tento.
Grrr! Izu: Kinzokyu Handoru! - Performed Kyodu.
Ohh nice, you made your arms and legs strong like metal. But that wont change a thing, i will crush you!

Kyodu runs at Tento prepared for punching him...

Eh eh... Mizu: Suraido Ni! - Yelled Tento while Joining his hands.

Suddenly, the ground turns into water, making Kyodu slip.

Oh no - Said Kyodu.
Eh eh, now you are coming straight at me - Said Tento, while performing another Chikara - Mizu: Kejiu Etto!
With this new technique, i have imprisioned all of your muscles and bones, and you cannot move!
Dammit! (i gotta release myself!!!) - Yelled Kyodu.
Eh eh, now for the grand finale... Shizu: Yoduko! - Said Tento.
Gahh, what have you done to me?!
Aha, i poisoned you, you are starting to fade and i will win the match! - Screamed Tento, with his sharp voice, while falling on his knees, because he spent all of his Shitsu.
Grr, im gonna kill you!
And tell me how do you intend to do that?!... even if you got out of that, the objective of this fight is not killing others... - Said Tento.
Then what is it? - Yelled Kyodu, angry for being poisoned.
Well... to make you stronger... duh. - Replyed Tento.

Kyodu passed out... Bereburu was disapointed, because Kyodu didnt even injured Tento.
Some time later, Kyodu woke up.

Aha, finnaly awake... Loser! - Said Shogun, joking.
Gahh, i will show you who's the loser! - Replyed Kyodu.
Stop fighting you two, im very happy that you suceeded Shogun, but Kyodu needs more training, or he wont reach your level, never! - Said Bereburu.

Kyodu thought about those words for the rest of the day, he was also disapointed for not being able to do any kind of damage to Tento... in the meantime, the village of AkumaTochi was in chaos, with Baemisui dead, the one they considered the strongest, the villagers have started to rob and kill.

Ah those insignificant ants are destroying the whole village!!! - Yelled Shite.
Calm down Shite, it doesnt matters anymore, lets go an create our own village, our own Empire! - Said Iruson.
Hmm, what a nice idea, but first, i want to go talk to my sister. - Said Shite.
What?! Wasnt your sister living on Densetsu?! - Said Iruson, frightened.
What about it?
Do you really want to go all the way to Densetsu, that lies on the other side of the world?! - Answered Iruson.
Stop annoying me, I will go. - Said Shite, annoyed.
Anyway why do you want to see her? - Asked Iruson.
First, im going to ask her to join our team, and second... i want to learn everything she has to teach me!
Ahahahahah, do you think she will teach you something... she already has everything she wants, and she wont spend her time teaching you her ultimate tricks. - Said Iruson.
Shut up, I'm gonna get my things, do you want to come or not? - Asked Shite, impacient for an answer.
Alright Alright, i will go, calm down...

Densetsu, the legendary city, it is where the most powerfull and skilled fighters live, not everyone can visit that city, because of the power that comes from it, even strong fighters cant get close, or they get weak, and die. The Emperor of that city is said to be immortal and no one has seen his face yet, his name is Hakai Totaru.





Chapter 10 - A New Element, Mizu.



While Shite and Iruson were packing their things, Iruson remembered a very important thing he had to do...

Iruson - (Hmm, i think i am forgeting something... but what?!...........ah! i remember, i have to wait here until my brother comes and fights me!)
Shite - What are you thinking?
Iruson - Hmm, what?
Shite - You are so serious, what are you thinking?
Iruson - Oh.. i just remembered...
Shite - What?
Iruson - I am going to wait here because i know my brother will come to fight me.
Shite - ...
Iruson - Ok?
Shite - Yeah yeah... i will go alone... anyway my sister wouldnt teach you a thing.
Iruson - Well.... ok!... see you later then.
Shite - Yeah! (probably i wont see him again...)... im going now, bye!
Iruson - Yeah bye.

And so Shite went on his adventure to reach Densetsu, the legendary city... and in the meantime, Bereburu and Anessa were still training Shogun and Kyodu...

Bereburu - Ok, now for your next part of the training, you will fight each other!
Shogun - Really?
Bereburu - Yeah, why?
Kyodu - Doesnt matters why, im gonna kick his ass!
Shogun - Grr! You wont even touch me!
Kyodu - Well lets see about that!
Shogun - Yeah, now im pumped up!
Kyodu - Eh eh...
Bereburu - Ok, so stop talking and start fighting now!...

Shogun - Hanzu: Suimin Fuku!

Suddenly, Kyodu hears a song that no one else can hear...

Shogun - Eh eh, youre going to sleep now.
Kyodu - No way!

Kyodu pinched himself in his arm to stay awaked.

Kyodu - Ahahahaha, that was an easy to escape technique!
Shogun - Damn you! Hanzu: Ryuu Tonda!
Kyodu - Whoa! Youve grown wings!!!
Shogun - Yes, and now... Hanzu: Jiki-Fu!
Kyodu - Gahh, Im being pulled by your stupid wind!
Shogun - Eh eh.

Shogun grabs his sword...

Kyodu - What?! Youre gonna kill me?!
Shogun - Of course not, just injure you so you are no longer able to fight me!
Kyodu - Grr! Im not gonna lose! Izu: Dajji Isho!

The rocks started rising from the ground, surrounding Shogun.

Kyodu - Il crush you!

Kyodu closes his hand, and the rocks start heading towards Shogun.

Shogun - Oh no! Hanzu: Wind Blast!
Kyodu - Grr, you sent all my rocks away!

Kyodu runs towards Shogun, with his fist made of rocks...

Kyodu - You will not avoid this!
Shogun - Han...

Kyodu punched Shogun in his stomach...

Shogun - Gahhhhh...
Kyodu - And now that you are on your knees... Izu: Kurashite!

Kyodu rises his hand, his giant hand due to his last Chikara.

Kyodu - Il crush you!
Shogun - Oh no!...

...

Suddenly...

Kyodu - Gahhh!...
Shogun - W-wh-what happened?!

Shogun rises and feels better, he was surrounded by water.

Kyodu - Gahh... What?
Bereburu - Great... Shogun, you discovered a new Element, Mizu!
Shogun - Whoa, awesome!
Bereburu - Yes, but your fight is not over yet!
Shogun - Oh right... Hanzu: Tsukikaso Wa!

Shogun cuts Kyodu, damaging him seriously.

Kyodu - Gahhh...... ... .. .
Shogun - I Won!!!
Bereburu - Yeah, congratulations, but you still have a long way to go... (wow, this kid has an amazing skill... i have never seen anyone who could learn two elements in a week!)

But it wasnt only Shogun and Kyodu training, Iruson was also training, he wanted to learn new elements, now that he has the HiddenDemons...

Iruson - Cough Cough... i think its enough for today... i... i will become a Warlord like Shite!...... what.... who's there?
????? - ...
Iruson - I know someone is there... show yourself!
????? - I am a fighter from Okane... I command you to tell me where is Shite Takashi!
Iruson - You... you command me?! Aha...
????? - Stop laughing! I, Supamonsuta, will take the information out of you, by force!
Iruson - Try me!
Supamonsuta - Sakuuji: Chitose Itame!
Iruson - (What?! He...He knows secret elements?!... Sakuuji?!... Illusion?!...)

Suddenly, Iruson enters an Illusion.

Iruson - ahh, i cant move!
Supamonsuta - Tell me where he is... now!!!
Iruson - Never!

Supamonsuta starts punching and kicking Iruson...

Iruson - Gahh... i cant stand this anymore!
Supamonsuta - Then tell me where he his!!!
Iruson - N-No!
Supamonsuta - Kazu: Gokei Kazai!

Iruson starts burning...

Iruson - That wont damage my skin!
Supamonsuta - I know, us fighters have strong skins... but it will damage you!
Iruson - (So this is the power of the secret elements!) I guess i have no choice, but to tell you.
Supamonsuta - Where is he?
Iruson - He is headed for Densetsu!
Supamonsuta - Densetsu? The Legendary City?
Iruson - Yes.

Suddenly, Supamonsuta disappears, so has the fire and the ilusion created by him.

Iruson - Dammit, i have to warn Shite!...

In the meantime, Shite is in his way to Densetsu...

Shite - There is still a long way to go... i will rest here for an hour or so...
Supamonsuta - Hello Shite!
Shite - uh... who's there?... Supa-Supamonsutaaa!
Supamonsuta - Yes, it seems you have not forgotten about me! You owe me 65.000 Kin!!!
Shite - Oh... about that...
Supamonsuta - Give it to me or i will kill you!
Shite - (Dammit!) Well... I dont have it right now...
Supamonsuta - Then... Suffer the consequences!

Supamonsuta Kyodaina is tall, large and strong. He is bald and has a big nose. Big eyebrows and big beard and mustache. He doesnt wears any upper wear. He has a tatoo on his left shoulder and on his chest. Wears Dark yellow large pants and brown shoes. He helds a huge sword on his back. His elements are Sakuuji, Kazu, Henkan and Shizu.

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here's the last chapter:

Chapter 11 – Supamonsuta’s Henkan



In His way to Densetsu, Shite is confronted by Supamonsuta, who threatens him if he doesn’t pay what he owes, 65.000 kin. Shite didn’t had that money, and so Supamonsuta says he will kill him…

Supamonsuta – Kazu: Hatsubako!
Shite – Eh eh… Mizu: Baria Doku II!

As Supamonsuta creates a huge explosion, Shite makes and water barrier to protect himself, but an normal water barrier wasn’t enough to protect him of all of Supamonsuta’s power, so Shite made an water barrier in level 2, which spends more Shitsu, but has also better protection.

Supamonsuta – Don’t think you are safe just because of that, Kazu: Aohonoo!
Shite – What is that Chikara, I have never seen something like that before.

Kazu: Aohonoo, was a technique unknown to Shite, the technique consists in creating one of the most powerful kind of flames, the blue ones. Blue flames follow their target, always.

Shite – Damn it. (what a powerful Chikara! How can I avoid it?)
Supamonsuta – You can keep running, but you will get tired and they will get you.
Shite – I can escape them all day!
Supamonsuta - … In that case, I will just kill you now… Sakuuji: Chitose Itame!
Shite – Oh no!

Shite – Gah!!! (I-I can’t move…)

Sakuuji: Chitose Itame is a very useful Chikara, it impedes people from moving and there is needed a very powerful person to stop it.

Supamonsuta – Aha… It is the end!... Kazu: Nenshoo Kishan!
Shite – Gahhhh! Why am I having a déjà vu… my organs… it is like… they are… burning again!
Supamonsuta – That’s right, it is a very painful Chikara, in 5minutes you will be unconscious, in 10 minutes, you will be dead!
Shite – Damn you! (I can’t die yet!)
Supamonsuta – Aha. Looooser!
Shite – Grrrr!!!

Suddenly, a powerful aura surrounds Shite, and it occurs a big explosion.

Shite – So… this is the power of the HD! (HD = HiddenDemons.)
Supamonsuta – What happened?! What is the HD?
Shite – Aha, I won’t tell anything to the likes of you! (If he knew about that… he would be super powerful!)
Supamonsuta – Doesn’t matters, I don’t know-how you got out of my illusion, but you are going to die now!... Kazu: Hi No Yari!
Shite – (Let’s test this thing…)

Shite approaches Supamonsuta’s fire lance and slices it with his sword.

Supamonsuta – What?!
Shite – Eh eh… who’s the loser now?
Supamonsuta – Grrr!

Supamonsuta runs towards Shite, and punches him.

Shite – That doesn’t hurts at all!

Shite punches back, sending Supamonsuta towards a tree.

Supamonsuta – Cough Cough… Damn you. Now I will be serious!
Shite – Try me!
Supamonsuta – Henkan: Gorira!

Supamonsuta turns into a Giant Gorilla.

Shite – What?! Yo-You possess Henkan Chikaras?!
Supamonsuta – Eh eh… Grrrr!!!

Supamonsuta rises his hand, and punches Shite with all of his strength .

Shite – Gahh!! My… bones!
Supamonsuta – Are broken?! I know!
Shite – Grrr!
Supamonsuta – Aha… Kazu: Ryu Nensei!

Kazu: Ryu Nensei is a fire technique. It’s user spits fire from his mouth.

Shite – Oh no… M-Mi-Mizu: Sairen Nensei!

Shite closes is hands, in pain. His technique consists on spiting water from the user’s mouth.

Supamonsuta – Henkan: Ika Gorira!
Shite – (He returned to his normal form…)
Supamonsuta – You dare to call me loser now?... loser.
Shite – Shut up!
Supamonsuta – Aha, look at you, laying in there, in the dirty ground… Aha!
Shite – Hmph…
Supamonsuta – It’s time to end this. Kazu…
Shite – (My last chance…) Inazu: Hakai Denki!

Supamonsuta –Gahhhhhhhh! What, what have you done to me?!
Shite – Eh… this was a technique I created… using my Shitsu, I was able to control my swords without touching them.
Supamonsuta – How?
Shite – As I said, using my Shitsu… and as you can see, they have cut both of you arms!
Supamonsuta – I will kick you to death!
Shite – You may try to do that, but then you would bleed too much and die!
Supamonsuta – Grr. (damn!)
Shite – If you want to live, I advise you to go back to AkumaTochi and ask someone to help you… luckily, someone will…
Supamonsuta – I will… but I will return, and kill you!
Shite – Eh eh. (Aha, I fooled him, he will never get to AkumaTochi alive, and even if he does, Iruson will kill him!)

Supamonsuta was on his way to AkumaTochi…

Shite – Damn it… now how will I get up and leave?!

Shite crawled for hours and found a house…

Shite – Hey, is someone there?

No one answers…

Shite – I guess I’m gonna break in, if I can…

After breaking in, Shite lies in a bed.

Shite – I will stay here until my bones are good again…

While Shite rested, Shogun and Kyodu were training…

Bereburu – Kyodu! You are very weak compared to Shogun!
Kyodu – Yeah yeah, I know… so?
Bereburu – So!!!... you will have a more intense training!
Kyodu – Hmmm…
Bereburu – It’s not an option. You will train with me, every day, every hour, every minute, without stopping!
Kyodu – No way, I have a life you know?!
Bereburu – Shut up!
Kyodu – Why are we training anyway?
Bereburu - … I-I-I thought you two wanted to get stronger.
Kyodu – We do, but why are you training us, what do you want from us?
Bereburu – Well… I… need your help…
Kyodu – Help in what?
Bereburu – I need you two to help me to defeat my brother.
Kyodu – Who is your brother?
Bereburu – My brother is… one of the guys… who destroyed Jigoku…
Kyodu – What?!
Shogun – What?! Then I will train harder and help you kill him! To avenge our dear Emperor!
Kyodu – Oh… I guess you are right Shogun… okay let’s train…
Bereburu – That’s what I want to hear!
Shogun – And what should I do now?
Bereburu – Oh yeah, I forgot, you will have to study Mizu techniques.
Shogun – Cool!
Bereburu – Mizu is one of the most complex elements, study it hard. First, you need to get familiarized with water, go to that waterfall in Jigoku’s headquarters and try to understand water.
Shogun - ??? I will try…
Bereburu – Ok, after that, come back here and I will tell you the next thing you have to do.
Shogun – Sure…

Bereburu – Ok, now that Shogun’s gone to the waterfalls, you and I will train hard!
Kyodu –Y-Yeah…
Bereburu – See that wooden training puppet?
Kyodu – Yes…
Bereburu – Well I want you to destroy it with your Izu techniques.
Kyodu – Pff, that’s easy… Izu: Kakoku Sa!

Kyodu turns his hand into rocks and punches the wooden puppet.

Kyodu – Done…
Bereburu – Really… look closer…
Kyodu – What? He reappeared!
Bereburu – Well destroy it.

Kyodu – Cough Cough… I keep destroying it but it reappears!
Bereburu – Aha… keep trying.
Kyodu – Damn it!

Kyodu spent the entire day trying to destroy the wooden puppet…

Bereburu – Ok, you can stop now…
Kyodu – Cough Cough… Uff, finally… What was this training for?
Bereburu – To improve your reflexes, you are becoming stronger and faster.
Kyodu – Oh… I get it… that’s good.
Bereburu – Stop resting. Now try do punch me!
Kyodu – What?
Bereburu – Can’t you hear me? Punch me!
Kyodu – Oh with pleasure…

Bereburu – Missed… Missed… Missed… Missed…
Kyodu – Grr!
Bereburu – Aha, tir…

Kyodu managed to punch Bereburu.

Bereburu – Ah, finally, see?
Kyodu – What?
Bereburu – Your reflexes are better, you are becoming faster!
Kyodu – Yeah, I’m good…
Bereburu – Don’t brag about it, I didn’t told you to stop did I?
Kyodu – Gahh… I’m so tired…
Bereburu – Don’t complain, keep trying to punch me!
Kyodu – When does it end?
Bereburu – Well, when Shogun gets back.
Kyodu – What? Shogun’s like a snail!
Bereburu – Forget about him, now try to punch me.

Hours later…

Shogun – Bereburu, I’m back!
Bereburu – Ah good. You can stop now Kyodu...
Kyodu – Thank god.
Bereburu – Well, tell me, what have you learned about Mizu?
Shogun – Hmm… well… Mizu is fighting using water. To evolve Mizu it is needed a lot of training, so that the own user doesn’t drowns in his own water. Mizu is very strong against Kazu, which I think it is Fire. Not also Mizu kills and injures the enemy, but it can save your life… that’s all I’ve learned…
Bereburu – Well, that’s pretty much it!
Shogun – Nice, so what should I do now?
Bereburu – Ok, here is this book with some Mizu Chikaras, for newbies. You have 1 day to learn what you can.
Shogun – Sounds fair.
Bereburu – Ok, now go to your house and study!
Shogun – Yes Sir!
Kyodu – (Aha, yes sir…)
Bereburu – Kyodu!
Kyodu – What?
Bereburu – Let’s continue our training!
Kyodu – What?! No no no, please… I’m too tired!
Bereburu – Stop complaining, now come on, try to punch me.
Kyodu – Yeah yeah… (sigh)

Some hours later…

Bereburu – Ok, you can stop now Kyodu.
Kyodu – Ahh, finally.
Bereburu – My arms are pretty hurt, you have become very fast and I can’t keep dodging.
Kyodu – Wow, really?
Bereburu – Yeah… we are done for today…
Kyodu – Really?! Sweet! Bye!
Bereburu – Bye… (Even if he doesn’t discover more elements, at least he will master Izu…)

In the meantime, Shite woke up…

Shite – Ahh, I feel much better now! It’s time to continue my way to Densetsu… (hmm, I wonder if Supamonsuta is still alive…)

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+rep, im not reading all that but it must have taken you some time to write it all out.
thanks, yeah it took a while... i have the presentable and corrected version on word, i didnt wanted to do it twice so here its a bit confusing...
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and thnx Hayate Gekko! :)
 
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I read up to some Chapter's, but it's a bit confusing because all of the Chapter's are in one thread. I was wondering, why you posted all in one thrend? And +Reps for fininshing.

Can't +Rep right now.
 

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I read up to some Chapter's, but it's a bit confusing because all of the Chapter's are in one thread. I was wondering, why you posted all in one thrend? And +Reps for fininshing.

Can't +Rep right now.
i posted them all in one, but i have been posting them chapter by chapter... they are in the fanfics section.
anyway thanks! :):):):)

ps: i wont stop in book 1 eheh xd
 

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Bereburu Update: Red Mohawk Hair; Brown eyes; Abs, Big black belt; White open jacket; Black and White band in his left leg; Iron gloves painted of Black; Blue Shorts with White extension in the end; Black Shoes.

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ps: Sorry for the picture's size, my computer cam can only make it like this :/
 

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Kyodu's new description along with my sketch of him.
Kyodu: Baggy pants with a nice 'cool' belt; snickers with fire drawed on them; black iron gloves; White band around right arm. Blue eyes; Spiked light yellow and dark yellow two layers hair; Abs; Tattoo on left part of chest and arm.

I drawed two Kyodu's, there is the option 1 and the option 2. Whats your favorite?

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Option 1

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Option 2
 
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