HiddenDemons - T1 E2 - Baemisui's Test.

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HIDDEN DEMONS


Season 1
Chapter 2 – Baemisui’s test


Characters – Shogun; Nanoko; Kyodu; Kotei; Rashumon (male) ; Baemisui (female).

(Another Beautiful day in the Land of Jigoku …)

Nanoko – KYODUUUU !!!
Kyodu – What ?!
Nanoko – STOP TOUCHING MY UNDERWEAR !!!
Kyodu – I didn’t touched any underwear … ;)
Nanoko – STOP LYING!
Shogun – Stop fighting you two. We have to go to school!
Kyodu – Gahh … I hate school …
Nanoko – Oh now I know the reason for your dumbness …
Kyodu – Grrr !!!
Shogun – Lets go.

(In the meanwhile, in some other land named AkumaTochi …)
Rashumon – Master, Master Baemisui, I think it is almost ready !
Baemisui – Good, soon we will unleash our HiddenDemons !!! MUAHAHAHAH !!!
Rashumon – Master, we will be the strongest people on Earth !
Baemisui – Eh, finnaly I shall kill the Emperor and rule the World !!!
Rashumon – Weeeee !
(Back to Jigoku, after school …)

Shogun – Ah, school went great today …
Kyodu – (Nerd)
Kyodu – Shogun, wanna go to the forest search for some fireflies ?
Shogun – Hmm, sure ! Wanna come to Nanoko ?
Nanoko – Yes, but only if you promise not to kill them !
Shogun – Of course …

(Arriving at the forest …)

Shogun – Okay, we have arrived, let’s start searching !
Nanoko – Oh there is one over there !
Shogun – Wow Nanoko, you have a great vis …
Kyodu – Less flirting, more catching fireflies !


Shogun – Wow, they sure are hard to catch !
Nanoko – Yeah, im getting tired…
Kyodu – Tired already, come on.
Kyodu – Ha, got one !

(1 hour later …)

Shogun – I still haven’t got any !
Kyodu – Ah ah, I already got 14 !
Nanoko - (OO) w-wow, the ground is moving !!
Shogun – Oh no, I hope it isn’t that giant worm again !
Nanoko – No, this seems different, I think this is an earthquake!!!
Kyodu – Oh Sh*t …

(Some time later, they woke up …)

Nanoko – Where are we ?
Shogun – I don’t know, what is this place ?
Kyodu – Shut up, I think we are not alone.
Shogun – You must be seeing thi …
?????? – GRRRRR !
Shogun – Whoa, what was that ?
Kyodu – I don’t know, but It seems to be coming from over there !
Shogun – Let’s see what’s going on !
Nanoko – I’m not going there !
Kyodu – I will stay here with her.
Shogun – Gahh, I’m sure that it isn’t something to be afraid… okay, I will go alone …
Nanoko – Oh wait, then I will go with you.
Shogun – Are you sure ?
Nanoko – Yeah yeah.
Kyodu – Hey, what about me ? Are you going to leave me here alone ?
Shogun – I’m sure you will be safe …
Kyodu – What if some weird monster appears ?
Shogun – It wont.
Kyodu – But what if i…
Shogun – It wont !!!
Kyodu – Okay, just go …
(Shogun and Nanoko followed the screams …)

Shogun – I think it is coming from that place !
Nanoko – W-Wh-What is that ?!?!?!
Shogun – I think it is a kid, I will go check it closer.
Nanoko – Okay, be careful.


Shogun – Hey kid, are you alright ?
Kid – GRRRR !

(The kid starts transforming into something weird…)
Shogun – Whoa, what are you ?!
Nanoko – Shogun, run !!!
Shogun – Ahh, he got me !
Kid – GRRRRRrrrrrr r…

(The kid transforms back …)

Nanoko – Shogun, are you okay ?
Shogun – Yeah, help me get out of here…

(Shogun, Nanoko and Kyodu returned to the village.)

Kyodu – Uff, im glad we found a way back into the village.
Shogun – Turns out it was just a hole under the forest.
Nanoko – Yeah, but I still can’t explain what that kid was, and he disappeared right after that !
Shogun – Yeah, but it’s gone now, don’t worry about it anymore.
Kyodu – You two were probably having visions ahahah …

(In AkumaTochi …)

Rashumon – Master, I was watching the kid’s reaction to the HiddenDemons …
Baemisui – And ?...
Rashumon – It didn’t worked, the effect disappeared 5 minutes later and the kid dyed.
Baemisui – Damn it !...


THE END



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It did have a setting, but not enough detail to support the dialogue. Overall, it was alright. Not good enough to want me to read more, but this is my first time reading a Chapter of yours. +reps. and Good Luck on many more.
 
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