Here is a preview of Chapter 6..... The fight comes later, this only about 40%

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(Here’s the long awaited chapter, my best I think! (Preview) Enjoy and please leave comments! Note: I try to keep to the Naruto storyline even though this is a fanfic! This chapter strays from that a little! And I need not describe how Sasuke looks, because if you don’t know that by now, wow!)

The Konoha training ground looks completely wrecked. After a month of grueling training with Kakashi, there stands Hi. “Hi, you are ready”, Kakashi said. Hi now considerably stronger, leaped towards the village. Kakashi had provided the shelter he needed because Kakashi felt bad about what happened to Hi’s mother. Hi proceeded to the Hokage’s office.

“Uchiha Hikusa. Your name means “Fire grass” to represent your ties to both the Lands of Grass and Fire, but today you become a ninja for the hidden leaf. I, Tsunade, Hokage, proclaim that you are a jonin of Konoha just as your parents were before you. They would have been proud” Hi took his headband and proudly tied it around his forehead. “I would have made you an ANBU, but you refused-“

“Because I would never work under such a vile man as Danzo! He ordered the killing of my parents, and even objected to this ceremony today!”

“I understand, but you would have done well there as Kakashi did”

“Ma’am, thank you for this honor, but I have one request”

“Yes?”

“I would like to kill Uchiha Itachi”

Tsunade looked extremely surprised. “WHY?”

“Itachi murdered my mother and clan.”

‘Another Sasuke’ thought Tsunade.

“Also, he is a member of the Akatsuki. I will. I must!”

“Hmm… Fine. You will track down Itachi and CAPTURE him for details pertaining to the Akatsuki, but you will be angry. Danzo’s team knows the whereabouts of Itachi best. You must speak to him only.”

“BUT-“

“NO OBJECTIONS OR YOU WILL NOT TAKE THIS MISSION!”

“Fine” murmured Hi, exiting full of vexation.

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Later that day, Hi finally chose to meet Danzo at ANBU’S headquarters. As he walked down the gloomy halls, he shivered with disgust. There stood the old man with his cane staring at Hi. “Uchiha Hikusa, I have been waiting for your arrival.”

Finally, archenemies meet and Hi answers after gulping, “Hello sir. I am here as you no doubt already know for information about Uchiha Itachi.”

“Yes, but I will not relinquish that information to a naïve boy such as yourself! Itachi is an extremely powerful ninja! I know, he was one of my subordinates. A boy such as yourself could never-“

“I am a jonin!”

“Even Kakashi, a powerful jonin who also was one of my subordinates, could not defeat him!”

A long silence occurred. A sensei whom Hi admired as being strong couldn’t defeat him! “Then, whom should I take my revenge upon?”

“Uchiha…Sasuke.”

“He’s innocent! He hasn’t hurt the Uchiha!”

“You consider yourself a jonin of this village, Konoha! I am an elder of this village I love! While he has not hurt the Uchiha, he has hurt Konoha as a rogue ninja who resides with Orochimaru, an evil rogue ninja!”

“I’ve heard of Orochimaru…”

“Go then, and find Sasuke! Here is where he is!” Danzo handed Hi a scroll. ‘Now he can finish what Sai started’ “Oh, and if you ever need Wind training, contact me.” Danzo forged a fake miniscule grin, and Hi smiled back.

“Definitely”
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“Return soon, Sasuke..”, a pale man cried.

“Right” He strolled through the brown plains for training. It had been three days since Hi’s confrontation with Danzo. He refused to go with Kakashi as Tsunade intended and left secretly alone. Endless shuriken flew towards Sasuke. He calmly tried to dodge and deflect them, but had a difficult time doing so. He eventually perished under them. Hi jumped out.

“How easy! Itachi was supposed to be too difficult and now Sasuke is too-”
A sword aimed at Hi and Sasuke commanded, “Tell me everything you know about Itachi

I'll post the whole thing Monday and Tuesday, I'm trying to make this awesome. My favorite part isn't even here! Oh, here the rest of the series:

 
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UR awesome!!!
1. You can base your ideas on something like I do, but let it be YOUR fanfic. Let your originality and creativity shine no matter how bold and controversial it is!

2. Accept constructive criticism and reps. If the criticism is disrespectful ignore it!

3. Pack your work with figurative language and imagery. Your readers should be able to see the scenes you describe.

4. Have fun!!!
 
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