Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XIV: Torture

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HELVETES GJENFØDELSE
[Infernal Rebirth]

Act XIV

Torture

[Setting Change: Castle room; Tiberiu’s location]

Narrator: A reckless Tiberiu moved in after his target but was unable to touch him.

Lulian: *Snicker*..You will never be able to reach me as brash as you are!

Narrator: Black aura surged out of Lulian’s body as a beam aimed and pierced through Tiberiu’s shoulder colliding with the floor.

Lulian: Now that I have you pinned maybe we can speak a little while longer and you can calm down..

Narrator: The pinned mutated vampire struggled to cut loose but was to no avail.

Lulian: Take a look around-

Lulian: Doesn’t it seem familiar?

Narrator: The pureblood leader uses his aura manipulating it into a mist-like substance that floats towards Tibeiru as it wraps around his neck and finishes by resting its formed claw-like hand under his chin. Tiberiu’s head is then forced to turn from left to right and his eyes finally view the entire room.

Tiberiu: *Gasp*

[Setting Change: Castle room; Octavian’s location]

Figure III: (Joyful tone) Yes! You are finally waking up!

Octavian: Uhhh...

Octavian: Where am-

Narrator: His eyes widen at the sight of what seemed to be a concealed petite child due to its stature. Eyes then continued wandering about the area as a royalty furnished room is revealed.

Octavian: Are you a-

Figure III: Child?

Figure III: Well..come and find out..

Octavian: (In thought) It doesn’t sound like one..

Figure III: What’s wrong?

Figure III: I waited and waited until your wounds were all healed and I could’ve ended you at any moment you know..hehehe

Figure III: The best part is that it didn’t take as long as I thought..

Octavian: (In thought) Having such an opponent..I must be cautious!

Narrator: He quickly transformed and violently flapped his wrist wing towards the enemy who then vanished.

Octavian: (In thought) Just as I thought!

[Setting Change: Castle room; Rahmah’s location]

Rahmah: (Shout) Damn him and all his slaves!

Figure VI: (Shout) HOW DARE YOU!!!

Rahmah: (In thought) He must have had this planned from the beginning and kept it from me for I am not one of them!

Rahmah: (In thought) All I have to do is overcome this and find the leader who must be around here somewhere..

Figure VI: (Shout) YOU WILL BE SORRY!!!

Rahmah: (Shout) I think the one who will be sorry is you...PUREBLOOD!!!

Narrator: Her long wavy hair started to fluctuate as her body became encircled with sand, minerals and mud and she then launched herself at the enemy.

[Setting Change: Castle room; Neculai’s location]

Pureblood Follower II: My blood has been tingling ever since master told us about you all and you’re naked..a bonus!

Neculai: (In thought) A trap by the leader’s target..

Narrator: Blooded weapons are soon formed as his aura takes over.

Pureblood Follower II: Yes...that is what was to be expected...something rarely seen-

Pureblood Follower II: Another observation is that you are drenched in his blood...

Neculai: (In thought) His? She must mean my leader..

Pureblood Follower II: But that will not bother me for-

Narrator: The hooded foe suddenly disappears and returns beside the vampire as she quickly whispers in his ear.

Pureblood Follower II: (Whispering) You’re handsome..

Narrator: His eyebrows arch in dismay.

Neculai: (In thought) What?

Narrator: He backs away pointing his aura staffs towards the enemy’s direction. The pureblood then removes the hood revealing straight long black-brownish hair.

Neculai: (In thought) Damn it!...she’s beautiful

[Setting Change: Castle room; Attila’s location]

Narrator: Auburn colored hair began to flutter as the elder vampire released his aura.

Attila: (In thought) I believe that I am not the only one here and thus I will force my way out!

Pureblood Follower I: Wonderful..you decided to engage me in battle?

Narrator: Growing keener to his heightened powers, his weapon is composed in aura rather than the need of blood initially.

Pureblood Follower I: Yes we were all told of those powers in particular-

Attila: (In thought) They even have intel over us..

Narrator: By quickly focusing his strength into his arm, he then thrusts the aura chakram at the foe.

[Setting Change: Castle room; Venera’s location]

Pureblood Follower IV: You’ve even arrived ripe for the picking with your revealing assets *snicker*

Narrator: She then quickly attempted to re-cover her exposed bodily areas with the torn hanging pieces of clothing that remained as her face became flushed.

Pureblood Follower V : Do not let your temptations get the better of you as I will have to be forced to-

Pureblood Follower IV: Enough! I do not need anyone giving me orders but MASTER!

Pureblood Follower V : You see..it was our master whom gave me that very message I was conveying before you rudely inter-

Pureblood Follower IV: Fine! I will abide by his wishes..

Venera: (In thought) I’ve lost an arm and I have two male opponents...this fight does not seem in my favor..

Pureblood Follower IV: Whatever troubles you my dear?

Narrator: She spits in its direction as he quickly avoids it.

Venera: (In thought) Just as I thought..these two give off such a power-

Venera: (In thought) Purebloods...this must be henchmen of Tiberiu’s target...huh..I referred to him by his name...why-

Venera: (In thought) I must return to them...I cannot give up!

Pureblood Follower IV: Shall we?

Venera: Aren’t we uneven?

Pureblood Follower V : Yes...and the reason is because you are perhaps the strongest of your leader’s underlings and thus we cannot risk you surviving..

Venera: (In thought) No use..I have to-

Narrator: She falls onto the ground as one of the hooded pureblood quickly moves before her; kicking her face.

Pureblood Follower IV: Forgive my but since I am not allowed to seduce you there alas is no more use for you..

Pureblood Follower V : I see you’ve come back to your senses-

Pureblood Follower IV: Shut up!

Pureblood Follower V : Let us continue?

Pureblood Follower IV: Whatever..

Venera: (In thought) I didn’t even sense him coming...have I not recovered fully enough?.

Narrator: Her chin is then grasped gently but she quickly backs away into one of the purebloods as he abruptly disappears from behind her.

Venera: (In thought) Their tactic is to confuse me..I have to wait for the right opportunity to stake them..

Narrator: An immense amount of deep purple aura began to erupt from within her which deflected the two who attempted to reach her.

Pureblood Follower V : Its here...the Dhampiresa has returned!

Pureblood Follower IV: We’ve all made sure to steer clear after hearing about you so long ago...but how things have changed as now you’ve been brought to us much to my delight *snicker*

Narrator: Her body then began to float and convulse. Hair turns completely red-violet, veins protrude as well as amethyst colored slash wounds mark her entire body, the sclera becomes black in color as the irises and pupils turn indigo and her clothes become tethered revealing parts of her legs, arms and private parts. This occurred as a result of her weakened body not being able to stabilize the blood changes and thus her own blood began to attack the Lythimpir blood which invoked her DNA to alter her body. The bizarre alteration finally comes to an end as her body becomes upright and remains afloat.

Pureblood Follower V : Wait!..Her aura is erratic!

*Shatter sound*

Narrator: Suddenly the aura surrounding Venera shatters and she begins to move towards the end of the room with a blank expression upon her face.

Pureblood Follower V : (Shouts) Stop her!

Narrator: At the moment the purebloods attacked her; they were reflected back as her fragmented aura rejected any sort of touch. The room appeared to have had a barrier of its own as she could not simply break through. Although, the impact of her aura against the magical sealing began to eventually crack it.

Pureblood Follower V : We cannot permit her escape!

Act XIV End

What has become of the proud half-vampire?


[ Monster Encyclopedia ]

The text in bold is relevant to this Act:

Origin: Vampires originate in central and eastern Europe.

[Insight: Pureblood Vampire]

Description: Is the result of one born from a genuine vampire mother and father. Pure blooded vampires are rare and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity.

Appearance: Is one who has vampire ethnicity and is born into or owns great power and money. An aristocrat of sorts.

[Insight: Turned Vampire]

Description: Is the result of a human bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chooses to turn their victim thus is cursed and transforms sometime within the hour.

Appearance: Will usually be a human who cannot fend for themselves. A tramp or an unfortunate victim in the wrong place.

In Attila/Neculai’s case, after having their leader’s aura infused into themselves later on in an emotional state invokes them to awaken heightened abilities as a result to the absorbed aura surpassing a turned vampire thus making them unique. They both in the beginning lose control as the power-up overwhelms their willpower. However, once the initial awakening stage has occurred and passed will they be able to begin controlling their new powers.

[Insight: Mutated Vampire]

Description: This occurrence is unique and the result of Tiberiu’s soul not being able to normally pass on as due others who are turned.

In Tiberiu's case, he was bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chose not to turn their victim thus at that time somehow a mutation occurred rather than death. The soul was imprisoned from continuing onto the afterlife and subdued into an enforced transformation. His form is unique as he died never turning into a vampire and was then forcefully given life again. He was re-birthed with vampire-like qualities. A mutated vampire has not been ranked due to this being the first of its kind.

Appearance: In the requirement for more power; Tiberiu undergoes a slight mutation in terms of his body becoming enveloped by a sphere of his own aura and a limb-like appendage that grew on his upper back; blood red in color. The next occurrence results in a second blood red colored limb to have risen and the initial limb has changed into a black color though his aura seems to take a longer time to retract. The following time a third blood red colored limb rises while the previous limbs; the initial turning black and second retaining the blood red color and it has also taken an even longer time for his aura to retract. Tiberiu’s fourth invoke for more power enforces his three appendages to extend; the initial limb black, the second blood red and the final limb which changed into a white color. When the required power had been met it then withdraws.

[Insight: Lycanthrope]

Description: Is one who is bitten by another Lycanthrope during a full moon and thus cursed. After the next full moon and their official transformation, they can then transform at will on any given time of day.

Appearance: It usually has a height of around 6'5 to 7‘0 weighing of about two hundred-fifty to three hundred pounds. A bulky body, silvery fur, long thick claws, large jaw, massive fangs, powerful mid to long length tail and huge hind legs in appearance. It's origin is Europe.

[Insight: Hybrid Lycanthrope]

Description: Is a Lycanthrope who consumes blood of a differing ethnic creature. In Octavian’s case; he drinks the blood of a mutated vampire thus his form is unique.

Appearance: This pre-hybrid form invokes the Lycanthrope’s fur to malt, skin to turn a white color and the body becomes covered in opened cuts which is then stained red with the exposure to their blood.

[Insight: Lythimpir]

Description: Is a self named term Octavian gives himself and is unique to him as he transcended from that of a Lycanthrope by means of drinking the blood of a mutated vampire. It’s power differs by the vampire who offered his/her blood. This hybrid form is unique.

Appearance: His hybrid form is completed as his hair takes on a raven color and grows out above his lower back, bat-like ears replace the lycanthrope ears, the lycanthrope snout retracts creating a more humanoid visage, irises slit in two colored silver and raven which overlap each other resembling an x. He gains vampire fangs. His body from head to toe becomes silver colored and is elongated. The waist down is covered in raven colored fur. Bat-like wings; raven in color protrude one from the right arm and left leg located on the right side of his wrist and from the back of his ankle that spread with a wingspan of about six feet. His tail thinned out and grew several feet in length. His healing capabilities, strength and stamina have heightened.

[Insight: Mahr]

Description: Is a female goblin which rides on people's chests while they sleep inducing nightmares while their weight causes the victim to have difficulty breathing. It’s origin is Germany.

Appearance: Is a female spirit or goblin with a hideous visage. The goblin’s body is yellow-greenish in color, stout and when crawling on its victim which are usually female; will be in a sitting position on the chest area.

[Insight: Dhampiresa]

Description: Is a type of vampire hybrid who is birthed from a vampire father and human mother. Thus is half vampire half human and the male counterpart is named Dhampir. They will usually be carrying weapons and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity. It's origin is Balkan.

Appearance: Her weapons are a crossbow with arrows made of silver and wooden stakes as well as a long pointed end sword made of silver; forged into a close appearance to that of a crucifix thus far have been revealed.

[Insight: Hybrid Dhampiresa]

Description: In Venera’s case, a Dhampiresa who consumed blood of a differing ethnic creature; a Lythimpir thus making this form unique.

Appearance: Venera’s pre-hybrid form causes her irises to gain two extra slits on the bottom perpendicular to each other appearing as an upside down T; glowing orchid color. Her hybrid form completes as her hair grows out past her thighs, hands and fingers stretch five inches as her finger nails grow over three inches becoming claw-like, ankles elongate as her feet stretch out and toenails grow over five inches appearing claw-like as well, two slits join the single irises creating a reversed T glowing orchid in color. Strength and stamina are heightened.

[Insight: Berserk DNA Hybrid Dhampiresa]

† Description: This occurred as a result of her weakened body not being able to stabilize the blood changes and thus her own blood combats the Lythimpir blood which invokes her DNA to alter her body. This form is unique to the Dhampir solely.

† Appearance: Her body then begins to float and convulses. Hair turning completely red-violet, veins protruding as well as amethyst colored slash wounds mark her entire body, the sclera becomes black in color as the irises and pupils turn indigo and her clothes become tethered. The altering seems to have affected her persona and abilities.


[Insight: Zombie]

Description: Is a corpse reanimated by a sorcerer through a spell. It’s origin is Haiti.

Appearance: The corpse is no one in particular as the sorcerer simply will cast their spell over any grave sight. However, the sorcerer is sure to use a fresh corpse as it will be much more sustainable for the commands than a decomposed body. Although, the corpse will become greatly disfigured through the spell’s process.

[Insight: Bokor]

Description: Is a sorcerer who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures. It’s origin is Haiti.

[Insight: Ghoul]

Description: Is a desert dwelling jinn possessing the ability to change its form into any animal or human. Their true form is that of a spirit. It’s origin is Arabia.

Appearance: Golden colored mist appearing in the form of a footless demon. Every Ghoul’s true form varies.

[Insight: Wyvern]

Description: Is a legendary two winged, two legged, single tailed creature. It’s origin is Great Britain.

Appearance: It’s body is ruby red in color, completely covered in spikes, having no arms and a barbed tail.

[Insight: Lindworm]

† Description: Is a legendary wingless creature with a long body, bipedal and single tail with a venomous bite. It’s origin is Germany.

† Appearance: It’s body has a emerald green color, lengthy serpentine body and has parts of its body intertwined.

[Insight: Guivre]

† Description: Is a legendary creature with a long body and horned head who spreads plagues through its breath. It’s origin is France.

† Appearance: It’s body has a sapphire blue color, long serpentine body, the single tail splits in two at the end and has five horns on the head; it’s forehead containing largest two.

[Insight: Golem]

Description: Is a mythical construct created to serve its creator; either a greatly empowered sorcerer or wizard. It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud; resembling a humanoid. This construct has no mind, soul and cannot speak. It’s origin is Jewish.

Appearance: It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud thus the body will have a brownish color of sorts; resembling a humanoid. It has no mind, soul and cannot speak.

[Insight: Căpcăun]

Description: This is a type of ogre having the head of a dog and body of a man. It is muscular and usually carries a club of sorts. Although, sometimes it can have two heads.

Appearance: A cruel and bloodthirsty creature this is. They can range from giant to dwarf size and are strong. Their bodies’ colors vary but are usually in the brownish area. The head resembles that of a dog and the body are humanoid appearing like a muscular man.

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I've read it and I'll post a review later on cause I've got some work.
Thanks and I expect no less ;) *joking* I really do highly appreciate your feedbacks very much-can’t wait till then ^.^

nice work.cool story
Thanks for your comment and hope you’ll continue to follow my story ;)
 

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Woah, more purebloods that are under Lulian's command. Seems like the fight resumes, eh :) I wonder what will become of Venera now that she is changing. Yet another one of the chapters I'd expect from you :p
 

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Woah, more purebloods that are under Lulian's command. Seems like the fight resumes, eh :) I wonder what will become of Venera now that she is changing. Yet another one of the chapters I'd expect from you :p
Yes, Lulian has a flock of followers at his every demand ^.^ I know right-there are a number of outcomes for the Dhampiressa :) Thanks again ;)

omg awesome dude
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Great chapter! I couldn't reply yesterday due to complications with my comp so I am today! I love all the action and the usual stuff I say xD And the way Venera is portrayed, it reminds me of Cloud of Darkness from Final Fantasy 3 xD No joke! Keep on writing! :D
 

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Great chapter! I couldn't reply yesterday due to complications with my comp so I am today! I love all the action and the usual stuff I say xD And the way Venera is portrayed, it reminds me of Cloud of Darkness from Final Fantasy 3 xD No joke! Keep on writing! :D
Thanks! ^.^ Believe me, I understand your situation ;) I love it when the readers comment about my characters! XD I actually only know about Final Fantasy through Kingdom Hearts which had several FF characters and I actually grew to like Squall even though I myself have never played a FF game lol My younger brother got into it and he showed me who Cloud of Darkness was lol I thought that character looked like a transsexual (no offense to you/anyone else who likes her) but I did like her movements and I could get a feel of what you meant by linking Venera to her.
 
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Thanks and I expect no less ;) *joking* I really do highly appreciate your feedbacks very much-can’t wait till then ^.^


Well, very quality-chapter again though this one was a lil' bit short (or is it only me). I re-read again to refresh my memories.

The way things are turning out, is not like how I was expecting it to be, since you are showing, through multiple scene changes, the different aspects of Tiberiu's whole group's abilities against new pawns of Lulian. Not that it displease me but I was initially expecting that Octavians, Venera ect... were going to be sidelined against the complex plot of Tiberiu and Lulian.
It was a risky challenge to sideline (once more) the confrontation between the main antagonist and protagonist to focus on the "side-characters". It could have deviate the reader's attention as the expectation wasn't really for the side-characters but you pulled it off brilliantly. It got me hooked and moreover, you depicted very interesting new thingss from the different characters. I wonder if some of them or all of them are going to confront the Bokor...

Oh yeah, this got me a little bit confused.

- Pureblood Follower V : Its here...the Dhampiresa has returned!

What do you really mean by Dhampiresa?

---

Also, I almost misunderstood some parts of the scene changes this time :p

After this part:

Narrator: The pureblood leader manipulates his aura to wrap around Tiberiu’s face forcing his head to turn from left to right and his eyes finally connect with the room.

Tiberiu: *Gasp*

[Setting Change: Castle room; Octavian’s location]


After this part, I though Lulian was showing to Tiberiu (by some mental powers) all the "tortures" that his friends were going through but I guess, it was just a normal scene change and that Tiberiu is just "lifeless" for now.
I think, doing a proof reading was better experience for this chapter and I'm glad I did it.

Nice slight plot deviation - risky but grasping nonetheless :) So again, keep it up.​
 

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Well, very quality-chapter again though this one was a lil' bit short (or is it only me). I re-read again to refresh my memories.

The way things are turning out, is not like how I was expecting it to be, since you are showing, through multiple scene changes, the different aspects of Tiberiu's whole group's abilities against new pawns of Lulian. Not that it displease me but I was initially expecting that Octavians, Venera ect... were going to be sidelined against the complex plot of Tiberiu and Lulian.
It was a risky challenge to sideline (once more) the confrontation between the main antagonist and protagonist to focus on the "side-characters". It could have deviate the reader's attention as the expectation wasn't really for the side-characters but you pulled it off brilliantly. It got me hooked and moreover, you depicted very interesting new thingss from the different characters. I wonder if some of them or all of them are going to confront the Bokor...

Oh yeah, this got me a little bit confused.

- Pureblood Follower V : Its here...the Dhampiresa has returned!

What do you really mean by Dhampiresa?

---

Also, I almost misunderstood some parts of the scene changes this time :p

After this part:

Narrator: The pureblood leader manipulates his aura to wrap around Tiberiu’s face forcing his head to turn from left to right and his eyes finally connect with the room.

Tiberiu: *Gasp*

[Setting Change: Castle room; Octavian’s location]


After this part, I though Lulian was showing to Tiberiu (by some mental powers) all the "tortures" that his friends were going through but I guess, it was just a normal scene change and that Tiberiu is just "lifeless" for now.
I think, doing a proof reading was better experience for this chapter and I'm glad I did it.

Nice slight plot deviation - risky but grasping nonetheless :) So again, keep it up.
Thanks, yes I knew you of all people would be heavily affected as the plot entered different paths then what you had predicted ^.^ Although, I am glad that it dd not displease as that would have been the biggest disappointment for me.

Okay, about the Dhampiresa statement. I had made an error in labeling Venera as a Dhampir when that is given to a boy and Dhampiresa to a female so thank you for that and I will have to literally edit the past acts plus this one as well.

The second part you had trouble with I will attempt to explain. What I meant was that Lulian used his aura to force Tiberiu’s head to turn from side to side and view the room they were in but I will edit that as well seeing as my wording seemed funky lol

Thanks again for your through insight and for helping me with any errors I needed to attend to lol
 

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As I mentioned in the previous chapter, Tiberiu's gotta shape up, and I hope he does soon. (Y) On the other hand, it sounds as if Venera has undergone another transformation - wonder what this one has in store ... Can't wait for the next chapter.
 

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As I mentioned in the previous chapter, Tiberiu's gotta shape up, and I hope he does soon. (Y) On the other hand, it sounds as if Venera has undergone another transformation - wonder what this one has in store ... Can't wait for the next chapter.
I believe I've stated this earlier but in case I haven't, Tiberiu is not your typical main protagonist lol I love to step out of the normal for my characters ^.^ I really enjoyed having my characters undergo transformation but then came the struggle to not make them too powerful lol
 
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