Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XII: Torment

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HELVETES GJENFØDELSE
[Infernal Rebirth]

Act XII

Torment

[Setting Change: Lulian’s Lair]

Bokor: Master..I see your prey’s group has thus far defeated my Golem and afterwards a Capacaun approached the victors whom was attracted by their fighting..

[Insight: Căpcăun]

Description: This is a type of ogre having the head of a dog and body of a man. It is muscular and usually carries a club of sorts. Although, sometimes it can have two heads.

Origin: Romania.

Lulian: (Raised tone) And!

Bokor: ...It too was defeated..

Lulian: To think a creature unrelated to us too is eliminated..

Lulian: (In thought) He has truly constructed a very successful and honorable team...
Bokor: However..the three dragons still live and may be able to accomplish-

Lulian: I will allow this to continue..

[Setting change: Abrud Town Outskirts - North Area]

Octavian: Ah!

Narrator: Unable to evade completely in time, the bestial hybrid was struck in the upper right shoulder and the lower left leg.

Octavian: (In thought) He somehow match my speed-

Octavian: (In thought) Then figured out my weak points but how..

Narrator: As a result of his crippling wounds; Octavian roughly lands onto the ground.

Octavian: (In thought) I cannot allow him the chance..

Narrator: Weapons are retrieved as the untamable vampire races in Octavian’s direction.

[Setting Change: Abrud Town Outskirts - Center Area]

Narrator: While Venera proceeded to fatally wound the winged beast; its partner then erupts from the ground with a wide open mouth baring venom soaked fangs.

Lindworm: (In thought) Damn you wretch!

Narrator: Shifting herself with the winged beast; the Lindworm ends up swallowing three fourths of the Guivre’s serpentine tail instead which damages its jaws and caused it to choke. Although, the venom had no apparent effect due to all of the dragons’ induced superlative adamant skin.

Wyvern: (In thought) His aura is progressively surpassing mine!

Narrator: Clashed with interlaced hands, the two intensely struggle in the sky.

Wyvern: (Shout) Succumb to your own defeat!

Tiberiu: (Shouts) Never!

Wyvern: (In thought) That insane aura is overwhelming!

Narrator: Tiberiu then maneuvers their bodies in a reversed position as he forcefully thrusts downwards.

Wyvern: (In thought) He is attempting to slam me into the land!

[Setting change: Abrud Town Outskirts - North Area]

Narrator: First blow impales Octavian’s unwounded arm and the second strike is stopped as he quickly moved his leg catching the weapon with his foot.

Octavian: (Screams) Gaaa!

Octavian: *Pant* (Malicious tone) Your weapons are disarmed-

Narrator: His abdominal is suddenly penetrated by the savage vampire’s arm which slices out through his back. The arm is then jerked throughout the open wound.

Octavian: (Screams) AHHHHH!!!

*Thumping sound*

Narrator: A rapid flash above the bestial hybrid is all that can be seen before he passes out and reverts back to his human self as a result.

Attila: I’m sorry it took me awhile to return the favor..

Narrator: The elder vampire had bashed his weapon over the irrational vampire’s head leaving him unconscious.

Attila: ..What is happening to us both...Neculai?

Attila: (In thought) We have gained aura..a trait shared with high ranking vampires and yet-

Attila: (In thought) Young master!!!

Attila: (In thought) We have surpassed common vampires...

[Setting Change: Abrud Town Outskirts - Center Area]

Tiberiu: (Inner voice) stOp YouRSelF!

Narrator: Hearing his inner self speak changes the deadly attack by cutting the impact force in half. Crashing onto the ground they soon stop as the vampire regains himself.

Tiberiu: (Shout) Who sent you here?!

Wyvern: ...

Tiberiu: (Shout) Why were you all sent here?!

Tiberiu: You will be liberated...I give you my word..

Tiberiu: ..I not only spared but recruited the Ghoul..did I not!

Wyvern: (In thought) It is true...

Wyvern: Fine!-

Narrator: Suddenly the dragon’s head begins to quickly invert as a tiny warp hole can briefly be seen before the head is completely sucked in.

Tiberiu: (In thought) I knew it was you!-

Tiberiu: (In thought) He must have implanted some sort of magic seal which would activate to silence his whereabouts...Shit!

[Setting Change: Lulian’s Lair]

Bokor: I have sealed away its betrayal..

Lulian: My attempts have finally withered away thus far although..things will be taking an interesting turn...

[Setting Change: Abrud Town Outskirts - Center Area]

Narrator: The Guivre’s tail is propelled out of its jaws with a burst of black flames shot through the mouth. Simultaneously; the Lindworm then spins its body smacking the hybrid Dhampiresa some feet away. An Icy stream of magic shoots out of the Lindworm’s mouth partially freezing her body in order to slow her down as the Guivre then releases its plagued breath. The frozen particles decreases Venera’s speed whereas her right arm is unfortunately caught as it quickly began to decay.

Venera: (In thought) What?!

Venera: (In thought) They took advantage of me when I was flung into the sky..*pant*

Venera: (In thought) Damn..I was too overconfident and this careless..if I don’t stop this from spreading-

Narrator: A clean slice through her wrist is followed however, the decaying astonishingly progressed. An intense orchid colored aura ring is then formed around her left hand as she directed it to the infected right arm.

Venera: (In thought) Its working somehow..

Guivre: (Telepathy) That was uncalled for..

Lindworm: (Telepathy) Hmm..it is time to finish her..

Narrator: Combining their breaths; crystallization spreads throughout the plagued particles forming a beam which is aimed at the hybrid Dhampiresa.

Venera: Shit..*pant*

Narrator: An explosion occurs as dust then surrounds Venera’s area.

Lindworm: It cannot be..

Narrator: A barrier of hardened sand can be seen surrounding the hybrid Dhampiresa as the dust gradually cleared.

Lindworm: Who?

Rahmah: I apologize for my delay..

Rahmah: (In thought) There is no use concealing my identity any longer as I’m sure he already knows of my betrayal...

Narrator: An unhooded Rahmah stays afloat near the hybrid Dhampiresa.

Venera: *Pant* I did not need your-

Rahmah: Save it!

Narrator: Focused sand creates a miniaturized pyramid-like shape as it then launches beams of a clay and sand mixture onto the two dragons.

Lindworm: Not another one!

Guivre: Now we can have fun! Hahaahha

Venera: (In thought) No use in declining her assistance..*pant*

Venera: (In thought) Besides my aura fought off that eating disease although...I lost most of my arm in the process..

Venera: (In thought) I think this would not have been possible if not for Octavian’s extraordinarily regenerative abilities..

Venera: Release this barrier! *pant*

Rahmah: Right!

Narrator: Reluctantly the hybrid Dhampiresa decides to integrate her aura with the Ghoul’s beams.

Rahmah: (In thought) So even this transformation of hers was not enough for these creatures-

Rahmah: (In thought) I could have supported you sooner but I wasn’t sure if this group would be able to handle his servants as he calls them-

Rahmah: (In thought) I’m not the type to risk my life for anyone so you lost an arm for it..oh well the leader will never know of this..

Narrator: It seemed as though their blended attack was in vain for it reflected off of the winged beast’s bodies.

Rahmah: (In thought) I see..well I simply was testing this attack however...

Guivre: (Telepathy) Ha! It still does not effect us

Lindworm: (Telepathy) Let’s end these two!

Narrator: With the intent to finish the female creatures off, the dragons switch to black fire magic. The flames released mingle and increase in power as it is directed at the two.

Rahmah: (In thought) You played into my hand!

Narrator: Once her bided time came to an end she then guided the beams towards the dragon’s attack producing a collision.

Rahmah: (In thought) This is it!

Act XII End

What does the guised desert beauty have in store?


[ Monster Encyclopedia ]

The text in bold is relevant to this Act:

Origin: Vampires originate in central and eastern Europe.

[Insight: Pureblood Vampire]

Description: Is the result of one born from a genuine vampire mother and father. Pure blooded vampires are rare and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity.

Appearance: Is one who has vampire ethnicity and is born into or owns great power and money. An aristocrat of sorts.

[Insight: Turned Vampire]

Description: Is the result of a human bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chooses to turn their victim thus is cursed and transforms sometime within the hour.

Appearance: Will usually be a human who cannot fend for themselves. A tramp or an unfortunate victim in the wrong place.

In Attila/Neculai’s case, after having their leader’s aura infused into themselves later on in an emotional state invokes them to awaken heightened abilities as a result to the absorbed aura surpassing a turned vampire thus making them unique. They both in the beginning lose control as the power-up overwhelms their willpower. However, once the initial awakening stage has occurred and passed will they be able to begin controlling their new powers.

[Insight: Mutated Vampire]

Description: This occurrence is unique and the result of Tiberiu’s soul not being able to normally pass on as due others who are turned.

In Tiberiu's case, he was bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chose not to turn their victim thus at that time somehow a mutation occurred rather than death. The soul was imprisoned from continuing onto the afterlife and subdued into an enforced transformation. His form is unique as he died never turning into a vampire and was then forcefully given life again. He was re-birthed with vampire-like qualities. A mutated vampire has not been ranked due to this being the first of its kind.

Appearance: In the requirement for more power; Tiberiu undergoes a slight mutation in terms of his body becoming enveloped by a sphere of his own aura and a limb-like appendage that grew on his upper back; blood red in color. The next occurrence results in a second blood red colored limb to have risen and the initial limb has changed into a black color though his aura seems to take a longer time to retract. The following time a third blood red colored limb rises while the previous limbs; the initial turning black and second retaining the blood red color and it has also taken an even longer time for his aura to retract. Tiberiu’s fourth invoke for more power enforces his three appendages to extend; the initial limb black, the second blood red and the final limb which changed into a white color. When the required power had been met it then withdraws.

[Insight: Lycanthrope]

Description: Is one who is bitten by another Lycanthrope during a full moon and thus cursed. After the next full moon and their official transformation, they can then transform at will on any given time of day.

Appearance: It usually has a height of around 6'5 to 7‘0 weighing of about two hundred-fifty to three hundred pounds. A bulky body, silvery fur, long thick claws, large jaw, massive fangs, powerful mid to long length tail and huge hind legs in appearance. It's origin is Europe.

[Insight: Hybrid Lycanthrope]

Description: Is a Lycanthrope who consumes blood of a differing ethnic creature. In Octavian’s case; he drinks the blood of a mutated vampire thus his form is unique.

Appearance: This pre-hybrid form invokes the Lycanthrope’s fur to malt, skin to turn a white color and the body becomes covered in opened cuts which is then stained red with the exposure to their blood.

[Insight: Lythimpir]

Description: Is a self named term Octavian gives himself and is unique to him as he transcended from that of a Lycanthrope by means of drinking the blood of a mutated vampire. It’s power differs by the vampire who offered his/her blood. This hybrid form is unique.

Appearance: His hybrid form is completed as his hair takes on a raven color and grows out above his lower back, bat-like ears replace the lycanthrope ears, the lycanthrope snout retracts creating a more humanoid visage, irises slit in two colored silver and raven which overlap each other resembling an x. He gains vampire fangs. His body from head to toe becomes silver colored and is elongated. The waist down is covered in raven colored fur. Bat-like wings; raven in color protrude one from the right arm and left leg located on the right side of his wrist and from the back of his ankle that spread with a wingspan of about six feet. His tail thinned out and grew several feet in length. His healing capabilities, strength and stamina have heightened.

[Insight: Mahr]

Description: Is a female goblin which rides on people's chests while they sleep inducing nightmares while their weight causes the victim to have difficulty breathing. It’s origin is Germany.

Appearance: Is a female spirit or goblin with a hideous visage. The goblin’s body is yellow-greenish in color, stout and when crawling on its victim which are usually female; will be in a sitting position on the chest area.

[Insight: Dhampiresa]

Description: Is a type of vampire hybrid who is birthed from a vampire father and human mother. Thus is half vampire half human and the male counterpart is named Dhampir. They will usually be carrying weapons and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity. It's origin is Balkan.

Appearance: Her weapons are a crossbow with arrows made of silver and wooden stakes as well as a long pointed end sword made of silver; forged into a close appearance to that of a crucifix thus far have been revealed.

[Insight: Hybrid Dhampiresa]

Description: In Venera’s case, a Dhampiresa who consumed blood of a differing ethnic creature; a Lythimpir thus making this form unique.

Appearance: Venera’s pre-hybrid form causes her irises to gain two extra slits on the bottom perpendicular to each other appearing as an upside down T; glowing orchid color. Her hybrid form completes as her hair grows out past her thighs, hands and fingers stretch five inches as her finger nails grow over three inches becoming claw-like, ankles elongate as her feet stretch out and toenails grow over five inches appearing claw-like as well, two slits join the single irises creating a reversed T glowing orchid in color. Strength and stamina are heightened.

[Insight: Zombie]

Description: Is a corpse reanimated by a sorcerer through a spell. It’s origin is Haiti.

Appearance: The corpse is no one in particular as the sorcerer simply will cast their spell over any grave sight. However, the sorcerer is sure to use a fresh corpse as it will be much more sustainable for the commands than a decomposed body. Although, the corpse will become greatly disfigured through the spell’s process.

[Insight: Bokor]

Description: Is a sorcerer who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures. It’s origin is Haiti.

[Insight: Ghoul]

Description: Is a desert dwelling jinn possessing the ability to change its form into any animal or human. Their true form is that of a spirit. It’s origin is Arabia.

Appearance: Golden colored mist appearing in the form of a footless demon. Every Ghoul’s true form varies.

[Insight: Wyvern]

Description: Is a legendary two winged, two legged, single tailed creature. It’s origin is Great Britain.

Appearance: It’s body is ruby red in color, completely covered in spikes, having no arms and a barbed tail.

[Insight: Lindworm]

† Description: Is a legendary wingless creature with a long body, bipedal and single tail with a venomous bite. It’s origin is Germany.

† Appearance: It’s body has a emerald green color, lengthy serpentine body and has parts of its body intertwined.

[Insight: Guivre]

† Description: Is a legendary creature with a long body and horned head who spreads plagues through its breath. It’s origin is France.

† Appearance: It’s body has a sapphire blue color, long serpentine body, the single tail splits in two at the end and has five horns on the head; it’s forehead containing largest two.

[Insight: Golem]

Description: Is a mythical construct created to serve its creator; either a greatly empowered sorcerer or wizard. It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud; resembling a humanoid. This construct has no mind, soul and cannot speak. It’s origin is Jewish.

Appearance: It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud thus the body will have a brownish color of sorts; resembling a humanoid. It has no mind, soul and cannot speak.

[Insight: Căpcăun]

† Description: This is a type of ogre having the head of a dog and body of a man. It is muscular and usually carries a club of sorts. Although, sometimes it can have two heads.

† Appearance: A cruel and bloodthirsty creature this is. They can range from giant to dwarf size and are strong. Their bodies’ colors vary but are usually in the brownish area. The head resembles that of a dog and the body are humanoid appearing like a muscular man.

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XII: Torment

I know I'm far behind my friend, but I'll promise I'll catch up very soon as I'm going to have some time for FF reading this weekend. Stay tuned and look for an edited or new post;)
 

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It's true you took quite a break but I'll admit that I couldn't have read it had it been released 1 day sooner xD I see the battle is at its end now :) You also developed Rahmah's personality by showing her reservations about joining an undecided fight thus causing the loss of most of Venera's arm. All good things must come to an end though and I guess the end of your fanfic is going to be near. Just make it epic :p (jk, I know you will :D)
 

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This is intense! :T_T: I like the character developement in this chapter :).
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XII: Torment

I know I'm far behind my friend, but I'll promise I'll catch up very soon as I'm going to have some time for FF reading this weekend. Stay tuned and look for an edited or new post;)
Glad to see that my fanfic has not bee forgotten by you ;) lol Will indeed keep an eye out!

It's true you took quite a break but I'll admit that I couldn't have read it had it been released 1 day sooner xD I see the battle is at its end now :) You also developed Rahmah's personality by showing her reservations about joining an undecided fight thus causing the loss of most of Venera's arm. All good things must come to an end though and I guess the end of your fanfic is going to be near. Just make it epic :p (jk, I know you will :D)
That is funny indeed. Yes-this mini dragon arc is definitely nearing its end lol I am pleased to hear that I did a good job shaping the Ghoul’s persona ^.^ Correct- I am planning the finale of the fanfic within several more acts and I hope that I can end it epically lol Thanks!

This is intense! :T_T: I like the character developement in this chapter :).
Thanks and I suppose their was some persona discoveries lol Glad to hear these fights are intense! Nothing makes me more happy than to know that I’m not failing in that department lol -Thanks
 

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Nooooo, Ocatavian. Hope he won't die... T_T
Anyways, there are some new points that are being presented. Apart Tiberiu being 'insanely overwhelming', Lulian really has an army of creatures it seems, at his disposal. I wonder what did he manage and his schemes after he disappeared.
So will Attilla and Neculai have more of a negative role now? Just as Tiberiu's team was getting super-strong, a twisted change of side, now that will be sick. He'll be pretty much in compromising situation (with his 2 turned vampire leaving his side perhaps, Octavian's injured or perhaps dead and Venera who's still not able to culminate with her battle).
Nice addition of Rahmah in her battle btw. Hopefully, the Dhampir-Ghoul combo will be deadly.
Nice chapter overall and though more of Lulian's allied forces were learn, his own powers and plans are mostly still shrouded with mystery. Really like to see more of him. I love how despite having Lulian still acting from the shadows still having the upper hand despite strong power display from Tiberiu in 3 chapters. Sadistically nail-biting chapters can be expected, thanks to that. 5/5 (though I'm still sad that Ocatavian is in such a perilous state...)
 

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Nooooo, Ocatavian. Hope he won't die... T_T
Anyways, there are some new points that are being presented. Apart Tiberiu being 'insanely overwhelming', Lulian really has an army of creatures it seems, at his disposal. I wonder what did he manage and his schemes after he disappeared.
So will Attilla and Neculai have more of a negative role now? Just as Tiberiu's team was getting super-strong, a twisted change of side, now that will be sick. He'll be pretty much in compromising situation (with his 2 turned vampire leaving his side perhaps, Octavian's injured or perhaps dead and Venera who's still not able to culminate with her battle).
Nice addition of Rahmah in her battle btw. Hopefully, the Dhampir-Ghoul combo will be deadly.
Nice chapter overall and though more of Lulian's allied forces were learn, his own powers and plans are mostly still shrouded with mystery. Really like to see more of him. I love how despite having Lulian still acting from the shadows still having the upper hand despite strong power display from Tiberiu in 3 chapters. Sadistically nail-biting chapters can be expected, thanks to that. 5/5 (though I'm still sad that Ocatavian is in such a perilous state...)
See, that is what I love-how keen you are to the new happenings within each release ^.^ You read and understood everything I attempted for all of the readers to at the very least acknowledge ;) So it seems that Octavian is more and more of a favored character. It is nice to see that my characters can be liked as much. Lulian’s character I thought would be best played from a distance. However, things will be taking an interesting turn soon enough. Your theories again were very fascinating and I wonder if the path I’ve chosen for each character in the next act will be accepted or disappointing o_O Well, I again thank you for continuing to follow my story and the rating! ;)
 

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See, that is what I love-how keen you are to the new happenings within each release ^.^ You read and understood everything I attempted for all of the readers to at the very least acknowledge ;) So it seems that Octavian is more and more of a favored character. It is nice to see that my characters can be liked as much. Lulian’s character I thought would be best played from a distance. However, things will be taking an interesting turn soon enough. Your theories again were very fascinating and I wonder if the path I’ve chosen for each character in the next act will be accepted or disappointing o_O Well, I again thank you for continuing to follow my story and the rating! ;)
Well, that's the challenge for the reader I believe - to visualize possible outcomes for better thrilling moments. Continuous parrot reading has never been my forte nor my hobby. I find it boring and complex at times. I prefer a fully-devoted, proper reading - fast or slow reading doesn't matter for me as long as I can visualize it and appreciate it and that's most certainly the case for you.
Well, I don't if he's an favored character but I do appreciate him.
I never thought a villain could be kept at such a distance for such a long time along with him, making moves and can't really say that they are small/petty moves.
Well, they are theories from what I understood mostly, now if I'm wrong, you're free to go in your chosen direction and I'll take the surprise hook willingly.
Well, I got such a nice plot (again with brilliant language), so I'll definitely read it till the end even if I might need to keep some for stacked reading later on when I'll get busy again.
 

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Excellent chapter! (Yes I finally read it! xD) As always, it was action-packed and filled with suspense and sudden plot twists that keep it interesting! Keep on going at full speed until the epic conclusion! :D
 

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Well, that's the challenge for the reader I believe - to visualize possible outcomes for better thrilling moments. Continuous parrot reading has never been my forte nor my hobby. I find it boring and complex at times. I prefer a fully-devoted, proper reading - fast or slow reading doesn't matter for me as long as I can visualize it and appreciate it and that's most certainly the case for you.
Well, I don't if he's an favored character but I do appreciate him.
I never thought a villain could be kept at such a distance for such a long time along with him, making moves and can't really say that they are small/petty moves.
Well, they are theories from what I understood mostly, now if I'm wrong, you're free to go in your chosen direction and I'll take the surprise hook willingly.
Well, I got such a nice plot (again with brilliant language), so I'll definitely read it till the end even if I might need to keep some for stacked reading later on when I'll get busy again.
I really can’t say much to this as I agree with it completely and thanks again ;)

Excellent chapter! (Yes I finally read it! xD) As always, it was action-packed and filled with suspense and sudden plot twists that keep it interesting! Keep on going at full speed until the epic conclusion! :D
Yes you did and thanks lol I cannot wait for you to catch up to act 13 as that is when things begin to heat up ^.^ The conclusion is definitely closing in at a nice pace for sure ;)
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XII: Torment

You should see my facial expression as I imagined Octavian's demise. I kind of gulped in that scenario, and gasped for breath feeling Ocatavian's pain. There seem to be no hint of the betrayal yet, despite my expectation of an explanation to it in this chapter. I am however, not taking it as pure betrayal. Must be something similar to what happened to Kakashi's betrayal in my FanFic.:p Similar in a sense that Kakashi did not really betray the team.

Whatever that is, it just added up to the list of interesting things that I am looking forward to in this story. Besides, I don't think you would just drop them off into the dark side after all that they've been through with Tiberiu. Or maybe not, eh? It would be hard for Tiberiu to come face to face with his comrades as enemies - an opportunity to build up a dramatic and even more intense battle. Hehehe - what are you planning?:p

Your creatures just keep coming up! I wonder if you ever run out of them and when.xd How can you imagine such things? Or do you just read a lot of monsters, creatures, and the like?

Hmm..one thing I'm finding a little hard to cope up is the constant changing of every scenario.:( Its tearing me apart T_T xd..But then, reading Irfan's review who seem to cope up pretty easily, I must say it is just me.Wheeee!:( My brains are getting dull.:shy: Or maybe because I take a lot of delay going in to the next chapter so I keep mixing up things?:?*sigh*

Nevertheless, the story seem to be developing pretty well.

Oh and P.S. I've actually been wondering how a malicious tone sound like.:eek:
 

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You should see my facial expression as I imagined Octavian's demise. I kind of gulped in that scenario, and gasped for breath feeling Ocatavian's pain. There seem to be no hint of the betrayal yet, despite my expectation of an explanation to it in this chapter. I am however, not taking it as pure betrayal. Must be something similar to what happened to Kakashi's betrayal in my FanFic.:p Similar in a sense that Kakashi did not really betray the team.

Whatever that is, it just added up to the list of interesting things that I am looking forward to in this story. Besides, I don't think you would just drop them off into the dark side after all that they've been through with Tiberiu. Or maybe not, eh? It would be hard for Tiberiu to come face to face with his comrades as enemies - an opportunity to build up a dramatic and even more intense battle. Hehehe - what are you planning?:p

Your creatures just keep coming up! I wonder if you ever run out of them and when.xd How can you imagine such things? Or do you just read a lot of monsters, creatures, and the like?

Hmm..one thing I'm finding a little hard to cope up is the constant changing of every scenario.:( Its tearing me apart T_T xd..But then, reading Irfan's review who seem to cope up pretty easily, I must say it is just me.Wheeee!:( My brains are getting dull.:shy: Or maybe because I take a lot of delay going in to the next chapter so I keep mixing up things?:?*sigh*

Nevertheless, the story seem to be developing pretty well.

Oh and P.S. I've actually been wondering how a malicious tone sound like.:eek:
That is what I love-hearing about the readers reactions and yours was epic XD I could say whether it is similar to Kakashi’s situation as you mentioned but I won’t lol I like that scenario with Tiberiu having to face off against his comrades who became the enemy sort of speak however you will have to stay tuned for the reasonings behind it all ^.^ Thank you, I suppose this whole fanfiction could have been inspired by my love for horror films thus I made sure to research mainly horror folkloric tales. Oh well the setting changes especially with Tiberiu and co. are just them in the same location just in different directions. Don’t even worry about it as that could be easily overlooked ;) Thank you again and what I mean by malicious tone is that Octavian when in his transformed self his voice sounds vicious even though for instance when conversing with comrades he may sound that way but is actually calm and himself. Its just when in that form his voice automatically changes.
 

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Oh Man ... Octavian's Taking A Lot Of Damage Right Now, I'm Actually Worried. And Dang It! I Was Hoping Tiberiu Would've Been Able To Add The Wyvern To His Team, But It Was Sealed Away. (N) Once Again, Another Mind Blowing Chapter, My Friend.
 

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Oh Man ... Octavian's Taking A Lot Of Damage Right Now, I'm Actually Worried. And Dang It! I Was Hoping Tiberiu Would've Been Able To Add The Wyvern To His Team, But It Was Sealed Away. (N) Once Again, Another Mind Blowing Chapter, My Friend.
Yes, you were not the only one to voice out your concern over Octavian's well-being lol Believe it or not I think that may have come to my mind at some point but decided to kill off the dragon instead xd No, thank you ;)
 
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