Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XI: Hidden

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HELVETES GJENFØDELSE
[Infernal Rebirth]

Act XI

Hidden

Attila: (Screams) NO!!!

Octavian: (Malicious tone) Impossible..

Narrator: An enraged Attila uncontrollably leaked out unusual dark in color orange aura. The next second, he faces the giant with his released blooded weapon soaked in the aura as he then began to rapidly strike numerous times at its body.

Octavian: (In thought) He has suddenly spiked in power..

Octavian: (In thought) Well I might as well take this opportunity and support him..

Attila: (Screams) STAY OUT OF THIS!!!

Octavian: .....As you wish

Narrator: There is suddenly a shocked expression upon the Lythimpir’s visage as the blood on the ground began to rise and collided; creating an orb. Neculai’s smashed remains then turned into ash as the orb grew bigger and an arm reached out of it.

Octavian: (Malicious tone) ...Wha-

Narrator: A bloodied figure falls out of the orb. The blood from the orb-like casing then pours into the fallen naked body as it is absorbed.

[Setting Change: Abrud Town Outskirts - Center Area]

Narrator: Both hybrid and mutated vampires release the full percentage of their aura. Tiberiu’s three appendages extend one black, one red and the last one now colored white. Venera undergoes her complete hybrid transformation.

Tiberiu: (In thought) What is this power I sense?

Tiberiu: (In thought) Venera...this is the result of your fused blood..

Narrator: The hybrid Dhampiresa’s hair grows out past her thighs, hands and fingers stretch five inches as her finger nails grow over three inches becoming claw-like, ankles elongate as her feet stretch out and toenails grow over five inches appearing claw-like as well, two slits join the single irises creating a reversed T glowing orchid in color. Strength and stamina are heightened.

Venera: (In thought) This power is unlike anything I’ve ever felt...thus the full extent of my new form..and it appears Tiberiu has released his full power as well..

Lindworm: (Telepathy) We must be mindful when dealing with this one..as she is no mere Dhampiresa...

Guivre: (Telepathy) I like my opponent..

Lindworm: (Telepathy) Fool! This is no ordinary creature and the Wyvern is blocking off the other one..in other words we must take this one out-

Narrator: Having the lust for battle, the Guivre quickly engages with the Dhampiresa hybrid. However, she gains the upper hand easily this time as she leaps onto its back piercing its solid wings with her aura drenched claws.

Lindworm: (In thought) This is the result of it’s underestimation...it is time to combine our power...

[Setting change: Abrud Town Outskirts - North Area]

Octavian: (Shouts) NECULAI!!!

Narrator: He moves closer to the body and confirms that it was Neculai. The vampire looks onto his comrade in disbelief.

Neculai: I’m alive..

Octavian: (Malicious tone) You are somehow-

Octavian: (Malicious tone) Attila its-

Narrator: His eyes widen to see the elder vampire reducing the golem into nothing more than dust, dirt and solid mud pieces scattered all over the ground.

Octavian: (Malicious tone) How?

Neculai: Attila?

Narrator: When the dust clears, Attila cannot be seen present. He then appears before the Lythimpir with his arm engulfed in aura as he quickly swings at him. Though it is barely deflected by Octavian’s wrist wing.

Octavian: (Shouts) Get ahold of yourself!

Narrator: They both begin to struggle as the bestial hybrid clutches both vampire’s hands. An opening is discovered as Octavian maneuvers his ankle wing striking the rampaging vampire’s legs. As Attila begins to lose balance, Octavian focuses all of his strength into his fist and punches him.

Octavian: (Malicious tone) You left me no other option..

Neculai: I’m sorry..I couldn’t move my body-

Octavian: (Malicious tone) Is that a side effect?

Neculai: No...I was in shock at the sight of Attila-

Neculai: I’m also at full power again..

Octavian: (Malicious tone) I see...

Octavian: (Malicious tone) Could it be the result of Tiberiu’s infused aura?-

Neculai: If so...I’m damn grateful but I don’t understand what happened to Attila..

Octavian: (In thought) Has he become some sort of hybrid vampire as a result and...what about Attila?

Narrator: Something began to creep closer and closer though kept itself out of plain view.
Octavian: (In thought) They both have been exposed to it..one gains a massive power-up and the other lives once again...

Octavian: (Malicious tone) I think the reason lies within our leader!

Neculai: Wow...this is some crazy thing

Octavian: (Whisper) Silence...I think we may have company..

[Setting Change: Abrud Town Outskirts - Center Area]

Wyvern: (In thought) I have never witnessed such a strange transformation such as this one and...

Wyvern: (In thought) I do not know how much longer I can keep him occupied..

Tiberiu: (Shouts) DIE!!!

Narrator: Engulfed by his aura, Tiberiu quickly launches forward but is evaded by the winged beast.

Wyvern: (In thought) He is attempting to take me out in one attack..he is this powerful!

Narrator: The Lindworm begins to enwrap itself with its serpentine-like body into a ball and launched itself in a rapid revolving motion towards Venera. She dodges it even while still having the Guivre’s wings pinned due to her full powered hybrid form.

Lindworm: (In thought) Incredible!

Lindowrm: (In thought) How about a different approach...

Narrator: Perplexed by the Dhampiresa hybrid; it then plunges into the ground in order to aid it’s incapacitated partner.

Guivre: (Telepathy) DAMN YOU! DO NOT INTERFERE!!!

Lindworm: (Telepathy) With an opponent such as her we must act quickly!

Venera: (In thought) This one is losing focus...chance!

[Setting change: Abrud Town Outskirts - North Area]

Neculai: (Shouts) Watch out!

Narrator: A fissure is caused as the figure smashes its mace-like wooded weapon onto the landscape.

Octavian: (In thought) I nearly escaped..

Octavian: (Malicious tone) What do you want with us?

Figure: (Shouts) I WAS DRAWN TO THIS AREA BY THE SENSE OF POWER FELT BEING DISPLAYED!

Octavian: (Shouts) Take Attila and dissappear!

Neculai: (Shouts) I want to he-

Octavian: (Shouts) We cannot risk his life-

Narrator: An opening is taken advantage of as the figure slams its weapon into a slightly off guarded Octavian.

Neculai: (Shouts) Octavian!

Figure: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Narrator: At the sight of his allies fallen, a power is abruptly awoken. Dark brown in color aura begins to emit from his body as he lets out a scream and charges towards the enemy.

Figure: (Shouts) FINALLY! SOMETHING I CAN SINK MY FANGS-

Figure: Ugh!

Narrator: Not only has the reckless vampire’s speed increased but his blooded weapon changes from blood to aura just like his comrade Attila. The figure is knocked down as its head collides with the ground.

Octavian: Uh..

Narrator: His eyes enlarge to witness the wild vampire’s feat.

Octavian: (In thought) Neculai you too have powered up immensely..such as Attila-

Octavian: (In thought) ...It seems like when their under emotional pressure..their powers awaken..

Figure: *Coughs blood* I haven’t had a fight like this in ages...I’m in the mood now..Hahaha

Narrator: A frenzied Neculai quickly runs around the colossal as it began to stand up.

Figure: (Shouts) I CAN BE FAST-

Narrator: Numerous gapping holes are the result of the vampire’s weapons having the appearance of slender projectiles due to the rate of speed in which they are launched. Which are launched, caught and then released again in an accelerated manner. This is enabled due to his speed and surrounding of the figure.

Octavian: (In thought) Incredible! I cannot assist him even if I wanted to..

Figure: WHA-

Figure: UAAHH...

Narrator: Rain of blood begins to shower the area.

Octavian: (In thought) There is no way it is still alive..

Narrator: Neculai then aims his weapons at his own comrade.

Act XI End

What is the reasoning behind the two vampire’s supposed betrayal?


[ Monster Encyclopedia ]

The text in bold is relevant to this Act:

Origin: Vampires originate in central and eastern Europe.

[Insight: Pureblood Vampire]

Description: Is the result of one born from a genuine vampire mother and father. Pure blooded vampires are rare and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity.

Appearance: Is one who has vampire ethnicity and is born into or owns great power and money. An aristocrat of sorts.

[Insight: Turned Vampire]

Description: Is the result of a human bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chooses to turn their victim thus is cursed and transforms sometime within the hour.

Appearance: Will usually be a human who cannot fend for themselves. A tramp or an unfortunate victim in the wrong place.

† In Attila/Neculai’s case, after having their leader’s aura infused into themselves later on in an emotional state invokes them to awaken heightened abilities as a result to the absorbed aura surpassing a turned vampire thus making them unique. They both in the beginning lose control as the power-up overwhelms their willpower. However, once the initial awakening stage has occurred and passed will they be able to begin controlling their new powers.

[Insight: Mutated Vampire]

Description: This occurrence is unique and the result of Tiberiu’s soul not being able to normally pass on as due others who are turned.

In Tiberiu's case, he was bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chose not to turn their victim thus at that time somehow a mutation occurred rather than death. The soul was imprisoned from continuing onto the afterlife and subdued into an enforced transformation. His form is unique as he died never turning into a vampire and was then forcefully given life again. He was re-birthed with vampire-like qualities. A mutated vampire has not been ranked due to this being the first of its kind.

Appearance: In the requirement for more power; Tiberiu undergoes a slight mutation in terms of his body becoming enveloped by a sphere of his own aura and a limb-like appendage that grew on his upper back; blood red in color. The next occurrence results in a second blood red colored limb to have risen and the initial limb has changed into a black color though his aura seems to take a longer time to retract. The following time a third blood red colored limb rises while the previous limbs; the initial turning black and second retaining the blood red color and it has also taken an even longer time for his aura to retract. Tiberiu’s fourth invoke for more power enforces his three appendages to extend; the initial limb black, the second blood red and the final limb which changed into a white color. When the required power had been met it then withdraws.

[Insight: Lycanthrope]

Description: Is one who is bitten by another Lycanthrope during a full moon and thus cursed. After the next full moon and their official transformation, they can then transform at will on any given time of day.

Appearance: It usually has a height of around 6'5 to 7‘0 weighing of about two hundred-fifty to three hundred pounds. A bulky body, silvery fur, long thick claws, large jaw, massive fangs, powerful mid to long length tail and huge hind legs in appearance. It's origin is Europe.

[Insight: Hybrid Lycanthrope]

Description: Is a Lycanthrope who consumes blood of a differing ethnic creature. In Octavian’s case; he drinks the blood of a mutated vampire thus his form is unique.

Appearance: This pre-hybrid form invokes the Lycanthrope’s fur to malt, skin to turn a white color and the body becomes covered in opened cuts which is then stained red with the exposure to their blood.

[Insight: Lythimpir]

Description: Is a self named term Octavian gives himself and is unique to him as he transcended from that of a Lycanthrope by means of drinking the blood of a mutated vampire. It’s power differs by the vampire who offered his/her blood. This hybrid form is unique.

Appearance: His hybrid form is completed as his hair takes on a raven color and grows out above his lower back, bat-like ears replace the lycanthrope ears, the lycanthrope snout retracts creating a more humanoid visage, irises slit in two colored silver and raven which overlap each other resembling an x. He gains vampire fangs. His body from head to toe becomes silver colored and is elongated. The waist down is covered in raven colored fur. Bat-like wings; raven in color protrude one from the right arm and left leg located on the right side of his wrist and from the back of his ankle that spread with a wingspan of about six feet. His tail thinned out and grew several feet in length. His healing capabilities, strength and stamina have heightened.

[Insight: Mahr]

Description: Is a female goblin which rides on people's chests while they sleep inducing nightmares while their weight causes the victim to have difficulty breathing. It’s origin is Germany.

Appearance: Is a female spirit or goblin with a hideous visage. The goblin’s body is yellow-greenish in color, stout and when crawling on its victim which are usually female; will be in a sitting position on the chest area.

[Insight: Dhampiresa]

Description: Is a type of vampire hybrid who is birthed from a vampire father and human mother. Thus is half vampire half human and the male counterpart is named Dhampir. They will usually be carrying weapons and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity. It's origin is Balkan.

Appearance: Her weapons are a crossbow with arrows made of silver and wooden stakes as well as a long pointed end sword made of silver; forged into a close appearance to that of a crucifix thus far have been revealed.

[Insight: Hybrid Dhampiresa]

Description: In Venera’s case, a Dhampiresa who consumed blood of a differing ethnic creature; a Lythimpir thus making this form unique.

Appearance: Venera’s pre-hybrid form causes her irises to gain two extra slits on the bottom perpendicular to each other appearing as an upside down T; glowing orchid color. Her hybrid form completes as her hair grows out past her thighs, hands and fingers stretch five inches as her finger nails grow over three inches becoming claw-like, ankles elongate as her feet stretch out and toenails grow over five inches appearing claw-like as well, two slits join the single irises creating a reversed T glowing orchid in color. Strength and stamina are heightened.

[Insight: Zombie]

Description: Is a corpse reanimated by a sorcerer through a spell. It’s origin is Haiti.

Appearance: The corpse is no one in particular as the sorcerer simply will cast their spell over any grave sight. However, the sorcerer is sure to use a fresh corpse as it will be much more sustainable for the commands than a decomposed body. Although, the corpse will become greatly disfigured through the spell’s process.

[Insight: Bokor]

Description: Is a sorcerer who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures. It’s origin is Haiti.

[Insight: Ghoul]

Description: Is a desert dwelling jinn possessing the ability to change its form into any animal or human. Their true form is that of a spirit. It’s origin is Arabia.

Appearance: Golden colored mist appearing in the form of a footless demon. Every Ghoul’s true form varies.

[Insight: Wyvern]

Description: Is a legendary two winged, two legged, single tailed creature. It’s origin is Great Britain.

Appearance: It’s body is ruby red in color, completely covered in spikes, having no arms and a barbed tail.

[Insight: Lindworm]

† Description: Is a legendary wingless creature with a long body, bipedal and single tail with a venomous bite. It’s origin is Germany.

† Appearance: It’s body has a emerald green color, lengthy serpentine body and has parts of its body intertwined.

[Insight: Guivre]

† Description: Is a legendary creature with a long body and horned head who spreads plagues through its breath. It’s origin is France.

† Appearance: It’s body has a sapphire blue color, long serpentine body, the single tail splits in two at the end and has five horns on the head; it’s forehead containing largest two.

[Insight: Golem]

Description: Is a mythical construct created to serve its creator; either a greatly empowered sorcerer or wizard. It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud; resembling a humanoid. This construct has no mind, soul and cannot speak. It’s origin is Jewish.

Appearance: It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud thus the body will have a brownish color of sorts; resembling a humanoid. It has no mind, soul and cannot speak.

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EXCELLENT! I'm loving all the action and the development! It's a little confusing at points, but thats probably just me xd Can't wait til the next exciting installation! :D
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XI: Hidden

Dont wanna read it.. Are u from Norway?
Okay that is a bold confession and no I am not even though the title is Norwegian it doesn’t necessarily have to mean that the writer is from there as well.

Wow! awesome sig!
Thanks I don’t know if the first compliment it towards my Fanfiction and if is thank you and thanks for the comment on my sig-I happen to like not only the character but the blue hues used ^.^

Sigh, the need to facepalm is strong in this one.
lol XD

EXCELLENT! I'm loving all the action and the development! It's a little confusing at points, but thats probably just me xd Can't wait til the next exciting installation! :D
Thanks and if you are ever confused simply ask me on what and I will do my best to clarify it ;)
 

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Another great chapter and it's great for me to finally be able to get around some for FFs and personal time. xd
Coming to this chapter, it was awesome. No matter how much I control my envy, it's useless when I see your descriptive writing in perfect English. Well, the Encyclopedia really proved extremely useful this time to compare the vampires' type as Neculai and Attila slowly gained the same power as Tiberiu whose battle was pretty intense also.
I really liked the Octavian's character and even if he was here to admire Neculai and Attila new acts of heroism, I understand that both needed to step up their game for story purposes.
The end was a bit confusing for me but I'll surely get it when I'll read the next chapter.
Intense one as new things were perfectly introduced in the midst of the 2 battles and it was so swift that it made up for a very very good read.
Keep it up. Too bad that I'm late and I can't Thank Your post.
 

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Another great chapter and it's great for me to finally be able to get around some for FFs and personal time. xd
Coming to this chapter, it was awesome. No matter how much I control my envy, it's useless when I see your descriptive writing in perfect English. Well, the Encyclopedia really proved extremely useful this time to compare the vampires' type as Neculai and Attila slowly gained the same power as Tiberiu whose battle was pretty intense also.
I really liked the Octavian's character and even if he was here to admire Neculai and Attila new acts of heroism, I understand that both needed to step up their game for story purposes.
The end was a bit confusing for me but I'll surely get it when I'll read the next chapter.
Intense one as new things were perfectly introduced in the midst of the 2 battles and it was so swift that it made up for a very very good read.
Keep it up. Too bad that I'm late and I can't Thank Your post.
Well, I want to first just thank you for taking the time to catch up to my most recent acts. I know how busy it can be for someone writing a fanfic among other daily life occurrences ;) I must say that I can be just as envious as you seeing as in my opinion your writing seems better than mine. I know-I truly had to work my ass with that encyclopedia to get it to where it is now and again I thank so much for advising me about it initially ;p I always love to view what your feedback/insight would be as it is always inspirational and reminds me of things that I could have forgotten or maybe overlooked, etc. That is okay as I’ve felt the same exact way with all of your chapters. Though I have attempted to give you the (thank you reps) another way but due to having to spread around it isn’t very easy lol If you’re still confused about the ending then I would be happy to clarify it?
 

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Well, I want to first just thank you for taking the time to catch up to my most recent acts. I know how busy it can be for someone writing a fanfic among other daily life occurrences ;) I must say that I can be just as envious as you seeing as in my opinion your writing seems better than mine. I know-I truly had to work my ass with that encyclopedia to get it to where it is now and again I thank so much for advising me about it initially ;p I always love to view what your feedback/insight would be as it is always inspirational and reminds me of things that I could have forgotten or maybe overlooked, etc. That is okay as I’ve felt the same exact way with all of your chapters. Though I have attempted to give you the (thank you reps) another way but due to having to spread around it isn’t very easy lol If you’re still confused about the ending then I would be happy to clarify it?
No problem. I hope to relax a bit whatsoever in those 2 weeks I've got though it's full schedule though with FFs, some outings/cinemas, 4 days at my cousin's wedding ect...but I do hope to write atleast 2 chapters of mine on those 2 weeks for my readers and I do hope to read some especially from you and Mikey eventually. Well, our unwanted envy is so reciprocal and automatic that we better stop arguing about it xD The encyclopedia was definitely a great idea, it really helped a lot. Well, the ending is pretty much okay now? Perhaps, you took me a bit too much by surprise with Neculai's sudden change and poor Octavian :p
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XI: Hidden

This is one intense chapter!

I could imagine Venera's transformation! So are the rest, too but the one with Venera kind of sticked on as I see her a pretty damsel turning into a destructive monster.xdhehehe...You can seem to imagine creatures so fast and can even put them out into details.

What's intensifying for me here though is what's happening in Abrud Town Outskirts - North Area. Atilla turning into a uncontrably powerful beast and that figure that just appeared right before them!

Still excellent!
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XI: Hidden

This is one intense chapter!

I could imagine Venera's transformation! So are the rest, too but the one with Venera kind of sticked on as I see her a pretty damsel turning into a destructive monster.xdhehehe...You can seem to imagine creatures so fast and can even put them out into details.

What's intensifying for me here though is what's happening in Abrud Town Outskirts - North Area. Atilla turning into a uncontrably powerful beast and that figure that just appeared right before them!

Still excellent!
(Sorry for the late reply -_-) Yes, I felt change her form into something in between feminine and mutant-like lol Well at first I could say that my imagination did not run loose in the detailing department however due to feedback, etc. I decided to delve deeper and be much more descriptive and creative ^.^ Thanks and the story will have a lot of changes as it progresses ;)
 

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(Sorry for the late reply -_-) Yes, I felt change her form into something in between feminine and mutant-like lol Well at first I could say that my imagination did not run loose in the detailing department however due to feedback, etc. I decided to delve deeper and be much more descriptive and creative ^.^ Thanks and the story will have a lot of changes as it progresses ;)
Still I bow down to writing down your imagination! It takes a lot of effort and time for me to write something that I visualize. If only I can draw - I would usually say - but alas! I can't even draw.xd

I'm going off for the next chapter. I was refreshing my memory when I noticed your reply post.:)
 

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Still I bow down to writing down your imagination! It takes a lot of effort and time for me to write something that I visualize. If only I can draw - I would usually say - but alas! I can't even draw.xd

I'm going off for the next chapter. I was refreshing my memory when I noticed your reply post.:)
Thank you but I have to say that even though you admit it takes you time your works are just as imaginative! ;) Yes you can draw! I’m the one who cannot lol XD I can’t wait for your feedback on the next act and I’m sorry that you had to inconvenience yourself by having to go back an act to prepare -_-
 

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Man, the level of description embedded in this chapter was amazing, really made things come alive for me, y'know? Can't wait to see whether Neculai actually attacks one of his own allies (though I'm somewhat hoping he doesn't, aha).
 

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Man, the level of description embedded in this chapter was amazing, really made things come alive for me, y'know? Can't wait to see whether Neculai actually attacks one of his own allies (though I'm somewhat hoping he doesn't, aha).
I'm glad to know that I'am able to give accurate descriptions ^.^ And thank you ;)
 
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