Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

[Kuroi Honoo]

HELVETES GJENFØDELSE
[Infernal Rebirth]

Act VIII

Change

Hooded Figure: (In thought) I was not ordered to kill you though this is becoming very difficult..he dared to keep his target’s potential from me...

Narrator: Blood is coughed out by the hybrid vampire as the off guarded attack as well as the form taken of his resented target began to stir up his mentality.

Tiberiu: (Inner voice) YoU mUsT lIvE tO eRaDiCAtE tHe OnE wHo HAs cAUsEd YoU uNIMagInaBLe PaIN...

Narrator: His mind snapped him back to reality and the realization that the one before him was nothing but an illusion. He then tightly clutches the foe’s solid hand and pulls it with such a force that it is ripped off.

Hooded Figure: (In thought) This is impossible with the situation I’ve presented him..

Narrator: Quickly backing away, the lacerated hand begins to turn into dust and drifts towards the enemy’s wound as it reforms into its hand.

Tiberiu: (In thought) This is a ghoul?

[Insight: Ghoul]

† Description: Is a desert dwelling jinn possessing the ability to change its form into any animal or human. Their true form is that of a spirit.

† Origin: Arabia.

Tiberiu: (In thought) What lengths he would take...

Tiberiu: What does he have over you?

Ghoul: ...

[Setting Change: Mid Hill]

Narrator: Once Neculai destroyed the zombies, he rushed off for help.

Neculai: Octavian! what happ-

Dhampiresa: I’m responsible...I almost died but Octavian fed me and I almost drained him of all his blood...

Dhampiresa: I was able to stop myself beforehand and I closed the Zombies' source...

Neculai: Attila was bitten!

Dhampiresa: How long ago was he bitten?

Neculai: ...Not sure maybe twenty minutes or so

Dhampiresa: That does not leave much time..

Neculai: Master has a powerful healing capability and he may be the only one to save him but-

Dhampiresa: Get Attila and I’ll cover your leader while he attempts to heal him..

Narrator: She said as she did not completely yet trust in her new found team. The frantic vampire then returned to the unconscious Attila; placing him over his shoulders.

Dhampiresa: Will you be oka-

Octavian: (Malicious tone) *Panting* ..Go..*pant*

Dhampiresa: (In thought) He is better off being out of harms way..

Narrator: He soon returns with Attila and the three move uphill.

[Setting Change: Uphill]

Ghoul: You see..I’m not obliged to answer..

Tiberiu: Your kind would not willingly go along with anyone if there was not an overwhelming reason..

Ghoul: I will not betra-

Tiberiu: Join me instead..align yourself with us who plan to end your leader...

Narrator: It stood silent contemplating the offer. They are soon joined by the mutated vampire’s group as the woman gets in front of her master.

Tiberiu: What is the mea-

Dhampiresa: One of your underlings has been infected with the zombie’s virus..I’m here to cover you while you help him before he is to become one..

Tiberiu: While I attempt this you are to keep an eye on the Ghoul and you are not to hurt it..is that clear?

Dhampiresa: Yes..

Dhampiresa: (In thought) A Ghoul..what a powerful foe and yet I cannot attack it...

Narrator: He then leaves her side to aid his apprentice.

Neculai: You have reversed others conditions including myself...is there anything you can do for him?

Tiberiu: I will try..

Narrator: Gravel began to rattle about on the mountainous ground as Tiberiu unleashed his bluish-black aura which quickly enveloped his body.

Ghoul: (In thought) What a feeling..that aura is about as powerful as...

Dhampiresa: (In thought) So this is how it begins..

Ghoul: (In thought) What do I do?..

Narrator: Suddenly the figure disappears but the woman quickly tracks it down as it appears before the vampire. It’s neck is then grasped by the Dhampiresa.

Dhampiresa: I will let you know that this only occurred as you took me by surprise..

Ghoul: Remember you cannot hurt-

Neculai: (Shouts) SHUT UP!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO ATTILA IS YOUR FUALT!

Narrator: Just as he was about to lunge himself at the enemy, the Dhampiresa interrupts releasing the Ghoul’s neck.

Dhampiresa: Our leader has asked not to attack it!

Neculai: (Shouts) Why not!-

Ghoul: I have been asked by your leader to join him..

Neculai: It cannot be...

Neculai: Because of you-

Ghoul: Question your leader when he is done then

Dhampiresa: (In thought) What the hell is happening in that cage of aura?

Narrator: As a result of the infectious virus, Attila’s body was almost entirely overtaken. Although, a small part of him still remained and thus the prodigious healing capabilities in Tiberiu’s aura began to combat the infection.

Dhampiresa: (In thought) He continues to baffle me..in such a short time he is able to reverse it

Narrator: A third blood red colored limb arose joining the two previous limbs; the initial one black and the second which retained its blood red color. Several moments later his aura finally begins to retract.

Dhampiresa: (In thought) ...This is the third appendage..what does it all mean?..

Dhampiresa: (Shouts) Hey!

Narrator: Weakened from infusing his aura, he lapses onto the woman’s body as she catches him.

Tiberiu: *Panting*

Neculai: (Shouts) LOOK! His body is fighting the infection...thank you master..

Ghoul: (In thought) I was facing someone with such abilities...

Tiberiu: *Pant*..What..*pant*....about it? *pant* serve under someone...*pant* ..who threatens or someone *pant* who will grant *pant* ....your freedom and revenge?

Ghoul: Under the circumstances..I would be naive to decline...

Tiberiu: We will all have revenge..

Ghoul: ...

Tiberiu: *Pant*..The twilight hours are upon us!

Tiberiu: *Pant* Gather everyone and let us head for cover in the outskirts of this town until I am to be rested completely *pant*

Dhampiresa: You heard him..

Neculai: I have Attila

Tiberiu: And Octavian?..*pant*

Dhampiresa: You!

Ghoul: Yes?

Dhampiresa: You are to assist the last member who is located downhill

Ghoul: Am I not only to follow orders from-

Tiberiu: Do as she says!..*pant*

Ghoul: All right..

Narrator: As ordered the group begin to head towards the forest.

Tiberiu: What happened...*pant*..to Octavian? *pant*

Dhampiresa: I was able to cancel out the zombie source which was a spell portal-

Tiberiu: (In thought) Spell...

Dhampiresa: However..I was losing power and when I reached out to Octavian...he seemed out of control..

Tibeiru: (In thought) ..I thought he was in control of that form..

Dhampiresa: I barley lost consciousness if not for Octavian who somehow got ahold of himself and he offered his blood

Dhampiresa: Which I accepted then I lost control...something that has never happened before-

Dhampiresa: And he nearly died but I too was able to regain myself...we left him resting in that area..

Tiberiu: You’ve not only..*pant*..powered up but have exceeded that of a hybrid...

Dhampiresa: I suppose I will be of even more use to you now, no?

Tiberiu: That is correct..*pant*

Dhampiresa: ...Do you know what has been happening to yo-

Tiberiu: I’ve already known...and wish not to talk about it any further..

Dhampiresa: ...

Tiberiu: (In thought) They have finally begun to retract but this has been the longest interval...and it consumes more energy every time..*pant*

Tiberiu: (Inner voice) wILL yoU NOt CONtINue To stRivE?.....

[Setting Change: Lair]

Lulian: I would like them to continue trailing that illusion spell you’ve been casting...although what is not going accordingly is how clever he and his group are..

Lulian: That Dhampiresa shows out of nowhere and derails him from the trail I had him unknowingly follow to recruiting her services...

Lulian: Not only have they defeated your powerful portal spell but you’re saying that she has betrayed me as well?

Bokor: Those are the images I see within my black fire magic..

[Insight: Bokor]

† Description: Is one who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures.

† Origin: Haiti.

Bokor: What is your command...my lord?

Act VIII End

What lies beyond Lulian’s next move?

Edit: The title has been slightly altered and is now called Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth]. The reasoning behind this due to my inexperience in Norwegian language

Re-Edit: I have added to all of my Fanfic Acts; the creature's origins.


[ † Monster Encyclopedia † ]

Spoiler

The text in bold is relevant to this Act:

† Origin: Vampires originate in central and eastern Europe.

[Insight: Pureblood Vampire]

† Description: Is the result of one born from a genuine vampire mother and father. Pure blooded vampires are rare and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity.

† Appearance: Is one who has vampire ethnicity and is born into or owns great power and money. An aristocrat of sorts.

[Insight: Turned Vampire]

† Description: Is the result of a human bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chooses to turn their victim thus is cursed and transforms sometime within the hour.

† Appearance: Will usually be a human who cannot fend for themselves. A tramp or an unfortunate victim in the wrong place.

[Insight: Mutated Vampire]

† Description: This occurrence is unique and the result of Tiberiu’s soul not being able to normally pass on as due others who are turned.

† In Tiberiu's case, he was bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chose not to turn their victim thus at that time somehow a mutation occurred rather than death. The soul was imprisoned from continuing onto the afterlife and subdued into an enforced transformation. His form is unique as he died never turning into a vampire and was then forcefully given life again. He was re-birthed with vampire-like qualities. A mutated vampire has not been ranked due to this being the first of its kind.

† Appearance: In the requirement for more power; Tiberiu undergoes a slight mutation in terms of his body becoming enveloped by a sphere of his own aura and a limb-like appendage that grew on his upper back; blood red in color. The next occurrence results in a second blood red colored limb to have risen and the initial limb has changed into a black color though his aura seems to take a longer time to retract. When the required power had been met it then retracts. The following time a third blood red colored limb rises while the previous limbs; the initial turning black and second retaining the blood red color and it has also taken an even longer time for his aura to retract. When the required power had been met it then withdraws.

[Insight: Lycanthrope]

† Description: Is one who is bitten by another Lycanthrope during a full moon and thus cursed. After the next full moon and their official transformation, they can then transform at will on any given time of day.

† Appearance: It usually has a height of around 6'5 to 7‘0 weighing of about two hundred-fifty to three hundred pounds. A bulky body, silvery fur, long thick claws, large jaw, massive fangs, powerful mid to long length tail and huge hind legs in appearance. It's origin is Europe.

[Insight: Hybrid Lycanthrope]

† Description: Is a Lycanthrope who consumes blood of a differing ethnic creature. In Octavian’s case; he drinks the blood of a mutated vampire thus his form is unique.

† Appearance: This pre-hybrid form invokes the Lycanthrope’s fur to malt, skin to turn a white color and the body becomes covered in opened cuts which is then stained red with the exposure to their blood.

[Insight: Lythimpir]

† Description: Is a self named term Octavian gives himself and is unique to him as he transcended from that of a Lycanthrope by means of drinking the blood of a mutated vampire. It’s power differs by the vampire who offered his/her blood. This hybrid form is unique.

† Appearance: His hybrid form is completed as his hair takes on a raven color and grows out above his lower back, bat-like ears replace the lycanthrope ears, the lycanthrope snout retracts creating a more humanoid visage, irises slit in two colored silver and raven which overlap each other resembling an x. He gains vampire fangs. His body from head to toe becomes silver colored and is elongated. The waist down is covered in raven colored fur. Bat-like wings; raven in color protrude one from the right arm and left leg located on the right side of his wrist and from the back of his ankle that spread with a wingspan of about six feet. His tail thinned out and grew several feet in length. His healing capabilities, strength and stamina have heightened.

[Insight: Mahr]

† Description: Is a female goblin which rides on people's chests while they sleep inducing nightmares while their weight causes the victim to have difficulty breathing. It’s origin is Germany.

† Appearance: Is a female spirit or goblin with a hideous visage. The goblin’s body is yellow-greenish in color, stout and when crawling on its victim which are usually female; will be in a sitting position on the chest area.

[Insight: Dhampiresa]

† Description: Is a type of vampire hybrid who is birthed from a vampire father and human mother. Thus is half vampire half human and the male counterpart is named Dhampir. They will usually be carrying weapons and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity. It's origin is Balkan.

† Appearance: Her weapons are a crossbow with arrows made of silver and wooden stakes as well as a long pointed end sword made of silver; forged into a close appearance to that of a crucifix thus far have been revealed.

[Insight: Hybrid Dhampiresa]

† Description: In Venera’s case, a Dhampiresa who consumed blood of a differing ethnic creature; a Lythimpir thus making this form unique.

† Appearance: Venera’s pre-hybrid form causes her irises to gain two extra slits on the bottom perpendicular to each other appearing as an upside down T; glowing orchid color.

[Insight: Zombie]

† Description: Is a corpse reanimated by a sorcerer through a spell. It’s origin is Haiti.

† Appearance: The corpse is no one in particular as the sorcerer simply will cast their spell over any grave sight. However, the sorcerer is sure to use a fresh corpse as it will be much more sustainable for the commands than a decomposed body. Although, the corpse will become greatly disfigured through the spell’s process.

[Insight:Bokor]

† Description: Is a sorcerer who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures. It’s origin is Haiti.

[Insight: Ghoul]

† Description: Is a desert dwelling jinn possessing the ability to change its form into any animal or human. Their true form is that of a spirit. It’s origin is Arabia.

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[danivass]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

Ah so now the ghoul also joined Tiberiu? He's forming quite the team to battle Lulian, but I guess he'll need it I like how you shed light on what Lulian is doing, too

 

[Wesobi]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

hmm... I've probably overlooked it, but I wonder what ails Tiberiu?

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

Ah so now the ghoul also joined Tiberiu? He's forming quite the team to battle Lulian, but I guess he'll need it I like how you shed light on what Lulian is doing, too

Yes it has and it will become even more interesting next Act just wait and see Correct-only the best to battle that vulgar pure blood XD This Act set the path for what is to come indeed ^.^

hmm... I've probably overlooked it, but I wonder what ails Tiberiu?

Then I will tell you lol It was due to infusing his aura within Attila which somehow was able to revert the Zombie virus effect


-Thanks to the both of you for tuning in ​

 

[Wesobi]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

Then I will tell you lol It was due to infusing his aura within Attila which somehow was able to revert the Zombie virus effect /COLOR]​

Yes yes, I got that but I meant the part where he says that the intervals are taking longer... What is the ailment that causes these intervals? xd

 

[MangekyoUser]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

you got some writing skills xd

 

[Hakachi]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

Niiiicccccceeeeee!!! I look very much forward to the next chapter! Great work, and keep goin strong!

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

Whew! That was definitely a good read with act 5 - 8 here. All the same great writing and presentation of the characters and the creatures. Now, we have more to look forward to - Lulian!oO

 

[Escorpiius]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

Okay, let me try to give a proper review now that I've read all in a row (excuse me for parts that I'll miss )

Well, the highlight of your story is obviously your excellent writing and language.
I loved how the mood of this vampire tale takes place, mixing swiftly around the revenge plot.

The way you depict your characters and the different forms deserves enormous credits to you from me. A suggestion, I'll make though, is to place a spoiler tag in your next chapter or (in a post) about all the different forms and their ablities/appearance in your story cause they shows great imagination (and obviously research). To present them as convieniently as you did as I said is no easy task. Also, this will help me and the readers to better learn and compare about all the different forms of creatures.

Very interesting battle writing also especially for the battle in VII against the zombies. Captivating!

Parts that I like mostly:

- Octovian's drinking blood; then turning into a new form was all very cautiously done and extremely well-depicted. It raise attention and curiousity of readers as story advances which is fabulous. It can tend to get weird at times (same for the Tiberiu's aura part) but your excellent writing covers this drawback.
- Another part is the intoduction of "Mara" in one of your chapter taking form of an illusionary Lavina made me wonder if I missed a chapter at the beginning. That's what I like very much in your writing (apart the excellent language obviously). It is the way, you keep sustaining curiosity. Brilliant stuff and style which keeps heightening throughout your chapters.
- Tiberiu's team reminds me of Team Taka from Naruto. No relation, of course, but Tiberiu is cool, dark and obessessed with revenge, Octovian is powerful and calm-minded, Attila is obedient and Neculai very impulsive. The comparison stops here eventually. His team is also very powerful throughout with the Dhampir and Ghoul.
- Lulian's cold "vampirious" attitude, at the start, is brilliant. How he acts in the dark of the story is even better. Tiberiu is very interesting even if I prefer Lulian and Octovian more compared to him. Just like this...
- Oh yes, the murder of Tiberiu's brother was sadistically excellent.

Awesome job overall, frankly, it will be a waste if you stop writing...Keep up the good job, my friend.

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

you got some writing skills xd

Thanks as I don't exactly feel that way myself but I appreciate the compliment indeed XD

Niiiicccccceeeeee!!! I look very much forward to the next chapter! Great work, and keep goin strong!

Pleased to know ^.^ Thanks!!!

Whew! That was definitely a good read with act 5 - 8 here. All the same great writing and presentation of the characters and the creatures. Now, we have more to look forward to - Lulian!oO

Thanks for the wondrous compliments and for continuing to follow my Fanfic up until now and the rest hopefully!!! I edited the Ghoul/Bokor's origin ^.^

Okay, let me try to give a proper review now that I've read all in a row (excuse me for parts that I'll miss )

Well, the highlight of your story is obviously your excellent writing and language.
I loved how the mood of this vampire tale takes place, mixing swiftly around the revenge plot.

The way you depict your characters and the different forms deserves enormous credits to you from me. A suggestion, I'll make though, is to place a spoiler tag in your next chapter or (in a post) about all the different forms and their ablities/appearance in your story cause they shows great imagination (and obviously research). To present them as convieniently as you did as I said is no easy task. Also, this will help me and the readers to better learn and compare about all the different forms of creatures.

Very interesting battle writing also especially for the battle in VII against the zombies. Captivating!

Parts that I like mostly:

- Octovian's drinking blood; then turning into a new form was all very cautiously done and extremely well-depicted. It raise attention and curiousity of readers as story advances which is fabulous. It can tend to get weird at times (same for the Tiberiu's aura part) but your excellent writing covers this drawback.
- Another part is the intoduction of "Mara" in one of your chapter taking form of an illusionary Lavina made me wonder if I missed a chapter at the beginning. That's what I like very much in your writing (apart the excellent language obviously). It is the way, you keep sustaining curiosity. Brilliant stuff and style which keeps heightening throughout your chapters.
- Tiberiu's team reminds me of Team Taka from Naruto. No relation, of course, but Tiberiu is cool, dark and obessessed with revenge, Octovian is powerful and calm-minded, Attila is obedient and Neculai very impulsive. The comparison stops here eventually. His team is also very powerful throughout with the Dhampir and Ghoul.
- Lulian's cold "vampirious" attitude, at the start, is brilliant. How he acts in the dark of the story is even better. Tiberiu is very interesting even if I prefer Lulian and Octovian more compared to him. Just like this...
- Oh yes, the murder of Tiberiu's brother was sadistically excellent.

Awesome job overall, frankly, it will be a waste if you stop writing...Keep up the good job, my friend.

Thank you so very much for your exceptional compliments Your suggestion has been noted and I will work on that. I have enjoyed depicting the hybrids’ forms ^.^ I appreciate you liking the Mara/Lavinia part lol I know-Sasuke is my favorite character I believe of all time and I kind of wanted to incorporate a little of that into my story. However, I somewhat tried to break away from my Main character/his team seeming like Sasuke/Team Taka but I suppose the similarities were inevitable. I like the team’s comparisons that you’ve listed I also like what you stated about Lulian-it is very pleasing to hear how my readers feel about the characters of my story The murdering of Tiberiu’s brother kind of came up abruptly as I began to write. It wasn’t brainstromed but rather came about somehow and I’m glad it was taken in successfully. Oh-I wanted to let you know that Octavian's name is spelled with an a instead of the o that you swap the a for lol Thank you again! Well the main reason for me discontinuing my writing is the lack of ratings. Had I had more like you, Mikey, Nikkou, Wes, etc. I may have reconsidered but that is the matter of truth and I feel that my work is simply not appreciated enough so I might as well not bother. I do thank you for the encouragement however I highly doubt I will pick up writing after this.​

 

[Escorpiius]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

Thank you so very much for your exceptional compliments Your suggestion has been noted and I will work on that. I have enjoyed depicting the hybrids’ forms ^.^ I appreciate you liking the Mara/Lavinia part lol I know-Sasuke is my favorite character I believe of all time and I kind of wanted to incorporate a little of that into my story. However, I somewhat tried to break away from my Main character/his team seeming like Sasuke/Team Taka but I suppose the similarities were inevitable. I like the team’s comparisons that you’ve listed I also like what you stated about Lulian-it is very pleasing to hear how my readers feel about the characters of my story The murdering of Tiberiu’s brother kind of came up abruptly as I began to write. It wasn’t brainstromed but rather came about somehow and I’m glad it was taken in successfully. Oh-I wanted to let you know that Octavian's name is spelled with an a instead of the o that you swap the a for lol Thank you again! Well the main reason for me discontinuing my writing is the lack of ratings. Had I had more like you, Mikey, Nikkou, Wes, etc. I may have reconsidered but that is the matter of truth and I feel that my work is simply not appreciated enough so I might as well not bother. I do thank you for the encouragement however I highly doubt I will pick up writing after this.​

Hehe, you deserved it.
Well, I don't really like Sasuke but I don't mind you making some "infusion" of him in your story. I think, even if I don't really like Sasuke, it's pretty fun to depict him while writing. Let's say for the few chapters that I incorporated Sasuke in my chapters, I found that it's pretty easy and fascinating to write about him. He's like 'easy to write' xd
Well, it may be abrupt but it mixed correctly with the moment and added more drama to Tiberiu's infuriating mood.
Sorry about the mispell about Octavian' though. I really didn't noticed the "a" and went by mind-sound. I'll keep note of it as from now.
As for your motivation of writing, I cannot really force you but I'll try my maximum to keep you writing. Those ratings doesn't really reflect your good work but if it can counsel you, then I just increased back your ratings. See the good comments and you'll know how much people are liking your job. Don't feel despair and prove yourself up by mustering courage and keeping those awesome chapters up.

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VIII: Change

Hehe, you deserved it.
Well, I don't really like Sasuke but I don't mind you making some "infusion" of him in your story. I think, even if I don't really like Sasuke, it's pretty fun to depict him while writing. Let's say for the few chapters that I incorporated Sasuke in my chapters, I found that it's pretty easy and fascinating to write about him. He's like 'easy to write' xd
Well, it may be abrupt but it mixed correctly with the moment and added more drama to Tiberiu's infuriating mood.
Sorry about the mispell about Octavian' though. I really didn't noticed the "a" and went by mind-sound. I'll keep note of it as from now.
As for your motivation of writing, I cannot really force you but I'll try my maximum to keep you writing. Those ratings doesn't really reflect your good work but if it can counsel you, then I just increased back your ratings. See the good comments and you'll know how much people are liking your job. Don't feel despair and prove yourself up by mustering courage and keeping those awesome chapters up.

Oh, well I cannot remember if I told you but I had the same feelings like you (maybe even worse) about Naruto. However, when I saw how much he strived to help his “best friend” the one he considers like a blood brother; it began to soften me and I don’t harbor those feelings for his character anymore because in my honest opinion I think he will save Sasuke. Please, their is no need to apologize for the misspell as I simply thought you would like to be corrected with his name but I have misspelled plenty of times XD What can I say, you remind me very much of Mikey in terms of encouragement/support ^.^ I thank you for our cheerful words and who knows maybe in time they will help me to continue writing ​

 

[Sasuk3Uchiha]

Looks like Tiberiu has quite the line-up, in terms of allies, but they're all looking pretty battle-worn and weakened ... I hope they'll be able to hold out for the next few chapters.

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Looks like Tiberiu has quite the line-up, in terms of allies, but they're all looking pretty battle-worn and weakened ... I hope they'll be able to hold out for the next few chapters.

Yes-one would say, not the typical main protagonist xd Just wait until the next coming chapters! lol I wonder about your reaction then

 

[Sasuk3Uchiha]

Definitely Not, And It's Awesome That You Portrayed Characters That Aren't The Usual Ones In TV Shows That Fight And Always Win Without Getting Injured Or Tired - These Characters Actually Have Intense Struggles, Which Makes The FF That Much More Entertaining To Read.