awesome job
just some info on the hidden mist.
the hidden mist can block the power of teh sharingan and only mist ninja (bios) can c through them. If u make the mist really really thick. then u will have to depend of the silient killing tech to find your opponent.
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(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank

Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description:After performing the needed hand seals the user expels a sticky liquid from his gullet.
This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters.
*does hand seals*
in hale and concentrate your chakra in the gut and mold it create a sticky liquid.
then exhale, spitting out the liquid