Vex upon his travels, happened to venture upon a strange land. The people of this land were brutally oppressed, to the point that they were planning a revolt. Vex was revolted at the state of the people, and pledged his help. He led the attack on the tyrannical ruler of the people. He broke down the doors to his castle and defeated him in single mortal combat (he also said a lot of really good, and witty banter). He toppled the throne, and the entire castle came down due to their struggle. When the tyrant was finally defeated, the people were so grateful that they taught him a new fighting style. However, it wasn't very developed. It was lacking in the cosmetics department. So Vex developed the style, making it much more flashy and eye pleasing. The people were so grateful that they erected a statue in his honor, but sadly it wasn't able to capture the full effects of his good looks. Vex then travelled the world further developing the style, and teaching it to his students.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The style is extremely simple. The user will use a variety of elbow and knee attacks, coupled with powerful punches and kicks. Almost all techniques use the entire body movement, rotating the hip with each kick, punch, elbow and block. The user is usually extremely physically strong, using their muscular strength to dominate the opponent. The style is very low and wide. So much so in fact that, some people mistake the regular stance as being completely open.
The Stance:
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However, there is one thing that sets this style apart from normal taijutsu. The use of fire chakra to make a body part or even the whole body "hot" but not actually on fire. The user would for example throw a punch, he would then quickly channel fire chakra into his fist as it moves. It would make the user's fist "hot", yet it would not be on fire. The enemy would then take damage from the actual force of the punch, and from the "heat" that augmented said punch. This can be used with elbow strikes, kicks, and knee attacks. This can also be applied to a sword. The user would swing a sword, and right before impact channel fire chakra into the edges of the blade. The blade's metal would conduct the heat from fire chakra, which makes the sword "hot".
What it looks like:
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Example Techniques:
Ti Sok Club Type:Offense Rank:B Range:Short Chakra:20 Damage:40 Description: The user grabs his opponent by the head before delivering a powerful knee strike to their face while bringing the opponents head down. The user augments the knee with fire chakra, causing it to become hot. The force of the collision could cause a weaker opponent to become completely knocked out.
Yan Erawan Type:Offense Rank:A Range:Short Chakra:30 Damage:60 Description:The user first places himself in an unguarded stance and waits for his opponent to attack. When the opponent strikes, he slams his knee into the chest of his opponent, where the heart is. The user concentrates his fire chakra into his knee, heating up his knee. Combined with the force of his strike and the power behind his opponent's speed, the attack is powerful enough to kill a normal person.
Dee Sork Toron Type:Offense Rank:C Range:Short Chakra:15 Damage:30 Description:A technique where the user attacks the opponent with a swift elbow strike aimed at the opponent's head in a downward manner. The elbow is supplemented by the user's fire chakra heating his elbow and making it hot. This has enough force to fracture small bones.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
Users of this style have faster and stronger attacks than a normal strong fist master
Unfortunately, they have a harder time keeping up with fast movements and their reflexes are lessened slightly
To use this style someone must be at least Sannin rank and at least started taijutsu, kenjutsu, and fire style
Can only be taught by Vex
Alright, so the concept behind the style is quite simple. By using the burning and heating aspects of fire chakra, in addition to strong movements using the lower body to increase momentum the user is able to deliver devestating blows. The style comes from a strong form of RL martial arts called muay thai, which is a form of boxing. Using knees and elbows, and hip movement to make more powerful blows. The heating aspect can also be applied to certain weapons such as kunai, swords, shuriken, etc; through the use of a technique. By coating them in fire chakra, the weapons are hot enough to easily melt through other metal tools. Now the beauty of Devil's Fist is that let's say your opponent blocks a strike. It would still cause burns on the opponent. Aaand the heating of the limbs isn't visible so it would not be apparent that your limbs were heated. They would simply look normal
These are the current 3 jutsu, pretty straight forwards. Tell me if you have any questions.
Type: Offense Rank: C Range: Short Chakra: 15 Damage: 30 Description: A simple jutsu, where one channels fire chakra into his leg. The user's leg is extremely hot, allowing him to cause heat damage on impact. The heat damage itself, is not very great. It is the equivalent of recieving mild burns, it may blister and cause a lot of pain, but it does not do great damage. The kick itself does damage, because of the user rotating his hip at the time of the kick, making it strong. This technique is not really meant to attack any upper body parts. It is much more suited to be aimed at the lower legs, or near the thighs. This is to make it difficult for the opponent to walk, and to make it easier for the user to land more powerful blows in the future.
-Restrictions-
Can only be used thrice
Can only be taught by Vex
Devil's Fist: Vulcan's Folly (Mao Genkotsu: Gukuo no Vulcan)
Type: Offense Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 (-5 chakra per turn) Damage: 80 Description: With this jutsu, the user is able to use arguably the most powerful jutsu in Devil's Fist. The jutsu allows the user, to channel fire chakra into a sword or other bladed weapon. The sword is then 'hot' being able to add heat damage, in addition to regular damage inflicted from a bladed wound. The heat makes the weapon literally hot enough to melt through other bladed weapons, and to immediately cauterize wounds that the sword cuts. It also causes massive burns, from the heat of the fire chakra. The blade never actually becomes on fire, just simply hot.
-Restrictions-
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used once a battle
Lasts for 3 turns
Devil's Fist: The Yawn of Apachai(Mao Genkotsu: Akubi no Apachai)
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user grabs his opponent by the head before delivering a powerful knee strike to their face while bringing the opponents head down. The user augments the knee with fire chakra, causing it to become hot. The force of the collision could cause a weaker opponent to become completely knocked out. In addition, the opponent will suffer burning damage from the fire chakra. The attack is hot enough to cause mild burns that will cause pain if not treated.
That's definitely one cool CFS Though I'm usually more of a water user, I can really see how this could help one out if battle.
Couple of questions though;
I assume that dojutsu still can see the concentrated chakra in the limbs? Though for 'normal' shinobi it's not possible.
With Vulcan's Folly what exactly is the added damage? The 80 damage points that's normal for a S-Rank technique, and say I'd use it in combination with a kenjutsu technique, as they require no chakra, and I'd use an S-Rank, technically I could then inflict an 160 points damage right?
sorry it took a bit, it took me a while to get my internet fixed>_>
So, onto the Whip Arts then, you're the 5th one to learn it, and everytime I teach it differently>.<
Hoippu Geijutsu | Whip Arts
Type: Gentaijutsu
Background: While travelling trough the ninja world, -Severus Snape- came across a lot of different fighting styles, but one of them made the biggest impact on him, a Sannin from the leaf who used his hair as a whip. This inspired him to start fighting using a self-made whip. In the beginning this didn’t help him in his battles, it even caused him almost to die. Starting to combine his whip attacks with genjutsu, he realised that this was an really effective fighting style and started to use it.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This type of genjutsu uses the whip the user carries with him to disturb the enemy’s chakra flow, by inserting a bit of the users chakra trough a whip into the opponents chakra flow. This disruption of the flow of chakra makes the enemy perceives illusions, which puts enemy under a genjutsu. The damage done by the Whip Arts is Physical (if hit by the whip) but can also be Mental (the genjutsu the enemy is put under).
Whip Arts techniques are usually fast but gracefully, relying on the short ‘whipping’ movements of the whip to hurt the enemy (If they did too much physical damage, the enemy they would automatically be released from the genjutsu) and then disturbing the enemy’s chakra flow to put them under a Genjutsu. The speed of the movements can be compared with the speed of an attacking snake, short but powerful.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must be of at least Sannin Rank to learn
- Must have mastered Genjutsu
-The user biography must carry a (Custom) whip
-This style can only be taught by a Hoippu geijutsu Master.
The thoughts behind the Style is pretty simple, induce a genjutsu upon your opponent without him actually knowing it. Normal genjutsu technique's work in such a fashion that the external environment will somehow change, giving clue's that it can't actually happen. My CFS is based around inducing an illusion upon your opponent that will be so subtle that it is difficult to notice and recognise it. Mainly it is done my physical contact trough your whip, which you have to state in your bio you carry. Because of the combination of physical contact and the illusion that follows it is as I said difficult for your opponent to tell he is under a genjutsu, when he's not a Uchiha or Hyuuga. For example the first technique, why would your opponent think that the pain is caused by an illusion? It's possible that a muscle is hit in the wrong way that causes the pain, or perhaps poison causes the effect.
(Hoippu Geijutsu: Akuma no ikari) | Whip Arts: Devils Rage
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will move the whip around his body while channelling his chakra trough the whip. As the whip hits the opponent, a small amount of chakra of the users chakra will disrupt the opponent’s chakra flow, putting him under a subtle genjutsu B-Rank jutsu where he will feel a burning pain coming from the muscle's that are near the hit point. This pain will increase over the next 2 turns, if not broken out from the Genjutsu, until the opponent has the feeling that pain is too much, and can't use the hit limb any more, until broken out of the genjutsu.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
Type: Attack/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique is the ultimate defence of a Whip Art Master. The user will spin his whip,while focusing chakra in it, rapidly around his body, creating an impenetrable dome around him. While moving creating the dome, the sound will trigger a genjutsu upon the opponent. The genjutsu itself if simple, instead of seeing the user moving around his whip constantly, the opponent will only see the whip being moved around once before the user seemed to rest the whip again by his side, while standing in the same position. In reality, the user will continue the move the whip around while moving forwards, and as the user comes within hitting distance from the opponent, he will flick the whip forwards and catch the opponent around the neck, effectively strangling or killing them, depending on the kind of whip the user carries.
Note: Can only be user twice per battle
Note: Can deflect any B-Rank or lower Elemental technique's, but the technique is broken
Note: Can deflect any A-Rank or lower Taijutsu and Kenjutsu technique's (except EIG technique's)
Note: The genjutsu breaks the moment the whip stops moving.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user cracks his whip towards the opponent and hit him diagonally over the chest (or any other body part that comes in its way). Upon the physical contact, a small amount of the users chakra will go trough the whip, into the opponents body, placing him under a B-Ranked genjutsu. A turn after being hit by the whip, the opponent will start to feel a slight tingling where he is hit, and this tingling feeling will spread over the next two turns until his uppe/lover body is completly numb, depending on where being hit. This numb feeling will continue until the opponent dispels the genjutsu he is placed in.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
Any questions about the technique's or style in general?
sorry it took a bit, it took me a while to get my internet fixed>_>
So, onto the Whip Arts then, you're the 5th one to learn it, and everytime I teach it differently>.<
Hoippu Geijutsu | Whip Arts
Type: Gentaijutsu
Background: While travelling trough the ninja world, -Severus Snape- came across a lot of different fighting styles, but one of them made the biggest impact on him, a Sannin from the leaf who used his hair as a whip. This inspired him to start fighting using a self-made whip. In the beginning this didn’t help him in his battles, it even caused him almost to die. Starting to combine his whip attacks with genjutsu, he realised that this was an really effective fighting style and started to use it.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This type of genjutsu uses the whip the user carries with him to disturb the enemy’s chakra flow, by inserting a bit of the users chakra trough a whip into the opponents chakra flow. This disruption of the flow of chakra makes the enemy perceives illusions, which puts enemy under a genjutsu. The damage done by the Whip Arts is Physical (if hit by the whip) but can also be Mental (the genjutsu the enemy is put under).
Whip Arts techniques are usually fast but gracefully, relying on the short ‘whipping’ movements of the whip to hurt the enemy (If they did too much physical damage, the enemy they would automatically be released from the genjutsu) and then disturbing the enemy’s chakra flow to put them under a Genjutsu. The speed of the movements can be compared with the speed of an attacking snake, short but powerful.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must be of at least Sannin Rank to learn
- Must have mastered Genjutsu
-The user biography must carry a (Custom) whip
-This style can only be taught by a Hoippu geijutsu Master.
The thoughts behind the Style is pretty simple, induce a genjutsu upon your opponent without him actually knowing it. Normal genjutsu technique's work in such a fashion that the external environment will somehow change, giving clue's that it can't actually happen. My CFS is based around inducing an illusion upon your opponent that will be so subtle that it is difficult to notice and recognise it. Mainly it is done my physical contact trough your whip, which you have to state in your bio you carry. Because of the combination of physical contact and the illusion that follows it is as I said difficult for your opponent to tell he is under a genjutsu, when he's not a Uchiha or Hyuuga. For example the first technique, why would your opponent think that the pain is caused by an illusion? It's possible that a muscle is hit in the wrong way that causes the pain, or perhaps poison causes the effect.
(Hoippu Geijutsu: Akuma no ikari) | Whip Arts: Devils Rage
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will move the whip around his body while channelling his chakra trough the whip. As the whip hits the opponent, a small amount of chakra of the users chakra will disrupt the opponent’s chakra flow, putting him under a subtle genjutsu B-Rank jutsu where he will feel a burning pain coming from the muscle's that are near the hit point. This pain will increase over the next 2 turns, if not broken out from the Genjutsu, until the opponent has the feeling that pain is too much, and can't use the hit limb any more, until broken out of the genjutsu.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
Type: Attack/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique is the ultimate defence of a Whip Art Master. The user will spin his whip,while focusing chakra in it, rapidly around his body, creating an impenetrable dome around him. While moving creating the dome, the sound will trigger a genjutsu upon the opponent. The genjutsu itself if simple, instead of seeing the user moving around his whip constantly, the opponent will only see the whip being moved around once before the user seemed to rest the whip again by his side, while standing in the same position. In reality, the user will continue the move the whip around while moving forwards, and as the user comes within hitting distance from the opponent, he will flick the whip forwards and catch the opponent around the neck, effectively strangling or killing them, depending on the kind of whip the user carries.
Note: Can only be user twice per battle
Note: Can deflect any B-Rank or lower Elemental technique's, but the technique is broken
Note: Can deflect any A-Rank or lower Taijutsu and Kenjutsu technique's (except EIG technique's)
Note: The genjutsu breaks the moment the whip stops moving.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user cracks his whip towards the opponent and hit him diagonally over the chest (or any other body part that comes in its way). Upon the physical contact, a small amount of the users chakra will go trough the whip, into the opponents body, placing him under a B-Ranked genjutsu. A turn after being hit by the whip, the opponent will start to feel a slight tingling where he is hit, and this tingling feeling will spread over the next two turns until his uppe/lover body is completly numb, depending on where being hit. This numb feeling will continue until the opponent dispels the genjutsu he is placed in.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
Any questions about the technique's or style in general?
A question however. All of the techniques have damage, and as you're aware some genjutsu cause damage because of stress on the mind. My question is whether the damage is coming from the genjutsu or contact from the whip?
The actual damage is coming from the physical blow, the illusions are more designed to weaken the opponent, like not being able to move an arm orso, as I don't see that the illusions are in anyway that stressful for the human mind.
Devil's Fist: The Great Wall (Mao Genkotsu: Za Taishita Hei)
Type: Defense Rank: A Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: One of the only defensive jutsu for Devil's Fist. The user waits for an opponent to strike at his torso or anywhere above that. When the opponent strikes, the user will grab onto the attacking limb and pull it towards him while also twisting his body out of the way. This increases the momentum of the opponent, and uses it against him. He then lifts his knee, and concentrates fire chakra into it. He then slams this knee into the chest of his opponent, where the heart is. Combined with the force of his strike and the power behind his opponent's speed, the attack is powerful enough to seriously injure an opponent.
-Restrictions-
Can only be used twice per battle and only against taijutsu or taijutsu custom style moves up to the same rank
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used by students of Devil's Fist
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Devil's Fist: The Red Storm of Set (Mao Genkotsu: Niiro Arashi no Set)
Type: Defense Rank: B Range: Short Chakra: 20 Damage: 40 Description: The user will concentrate fire chakra into any part of his body, and when the opponent attacks the user, the limb that they used to attack will be burned. This is because of the user using Devil's Fist in order to heat his skin up to an insane tempreature for the duration of the opponent's attack. If the opponent was to grab the opponent, the effect would be even greater due to prolonged contact with the user's skin. This jutsu may cause severe burns upon the opponent's body located on the point of contact with the user's fire enhanced limbs. However, if the opponent were to attack the user with a metal weapon, the weapon would not be melted, although the heat from the user's body would transfer onto metal, and then onto the user. This is because metal is a very good conductor of heat, and it would burn the opponent, most likely causing him to drop the weapon.
Restrictions:
Can only be used 3x per battle
Can only be taught by Vex
Can only be used by those taught in Devil's Fist.
Waiting as a clone moves towards me, assuming the basic fighting position while fosusing my fire chakra in my hands, underarms and legs. As the clone strike's I take his wrist between my hand and pul him further towards me, while boving my body out of the incoming attack's direction, twisting it's arm. Lifting my left knee forcefully I hit it right on his heart, cousing it to disappear in a cloud of smoke, since it's just a weak shadow clone.
Seeing anthor incoming attack, I focus my chakra trougout my whole body, heating it up quite severly. Once the clone makes physical contact, he poofs away due to the extreme heat he comes in contact with U_U
NO questions I think, simple, clear and cool technique's
Waiting as a clone moves towards me, assuming the basic fighting position while fosusing my fire chakra in my hands, underarms and legs. As the clone strike's I take his wrist between my hand and pul him further towards me, while boving my body out of the incoming attack's direction, twisting it's arm. Lifting my left knee forcefully I hit it right on his heart, cousing it to disappear in a cloud of smoke, since it's just a weak shadow clone.
Seeing anthor incoming attack, I focus my chakra trougout my whole body, heating it up quite severly. Once the clone makes physical contact, he poofs away due to the extreme heat he comes in contact with U_U
NO questions I think, simple, clear and cool technique's