Hatred

[Rohan]

The old ugly beggar saw the fire of anger,

In his quest to obtain his desires,

Took the oil of Hatred and threw it in the flames,

The Fire flickered, became ablaze and consumed everybody,

Turning them all into ash,

The winds of Love finally calmed down the Fire,

And blew away the ashes of the Forsaken.

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Did you like the Poem ? What are your Thoughts ?

P.S. : I will give + Rep to the ones who can figure out the true meaning of the poem.

 

[Made in Heaven]

With poem is about nardo

 

[chintu234]

Sasuke's story??

 

[SIR UZMAKIMADARA]

True meanings of this poem is that naruto will defeat the real cause of fire ,madara U_U

 

[BLAZE]

The old ugly beggar saw the fire of anger,

In his quest to obtain his desires,

Took the oil of Hatred and threw it in the flames,

The Fire flickered, became ablaze and consumed everybody,

Turning them all into ash,

The winds of Love finally calmed down the Fire,

And blew away the ashes of the Forsaken.

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Did you like the Poem ? What are your Thoughts ?

P.S. : I will give + Rep to the ones who can figure out the true meaning of the poem.

it's bsically hogoromo's story his choice,indra's decision,current shinobi system. Also nardo is basically changing the world through love

 

[YokoKurama]

It was interesting.
I'm so not taking a guess, lol!

 

[Byron123]

Wow I really liked it, simple and yet meaningful at the same time. If I were to guess I would say that it depicts madara and how in his quest for power spread the hate to Obito and thus to the whole shinobi world, causing a world war. Maybe it's not Madara, in an case, I think that after that it depicts how love made an edo "pure" again or at least remembered his old identity, and when you say the air blew the ashes you might refer to the edo tensei that turns into ashes once he gets peace of mind. It could go as well to hanzo.

In any case, rep for that, it was beautiful and funny at how a manga can inspire someone to write a poem based on naruto's terminology XD

 

[Rohan]

Wow I really liked it, simple and yet meaningful at the same time. If I were to guess I would say that it depicts madara and how in his quest for power spread the hate to Obito and thus to the whole shinobi world, causing a world war. Maybe it's not Madara, in an case, I think that after that it depicts how love made an edo "pure" again or at least remembered his old identity, and when you say the air blew the ashes you might refer to the edo tensei that turns into ashes once he gets peace of mind. It could go as well to hanzo.

In any case, rep for that, it was beautiful and funny at how a manga can inspire someone to write a poem based on naruto's terminology XD

I can't believe that you gave a completely new meaning to my poem. XD

The poem is not related to Naruto but on real life.

The meaning that you gave is very close to the true meaning of the poem, so + Repped.

 

[Excālibur1]

Nice one and my guess about the real meaning.

Umm, it is about a person who is financially ill and has no more hope in the world. So he takes out the oil of hatred which means the one which will kill him. Then he sets himself ablaze using fire after some time, he turns into ash. Even though he is dead, his spirit lives in the heart of his loved ones which actually calms the dead person to go on with the flow.

 

[Rohan]

Nice one and my guess about the real meaning.

Umm, it is about a person who is financially ill and has no more hope in the world. So he takes out the oil of hatred which means the one which will kill him. Then he sets himself ablaze using fire after some time, he turns into ash. Even though he is dead, his spirit lives in the heart of his loved ones which actually calms the dead person to go on with the flow.

Not the true meaning but it's good that you created a nice meaning yourself., + Repped.

 

[itachi uchiha fiance]

interesting.........

 

[Excālibur1]

Not the true meaning but it's good that you created a nice meaning yourself., + Repped.

Thanks ^^ .

 

[The7thHokage]

Is it about a greedy man, who let his quest for money and riches burn everything he loves ?

Its still a bit ambiguous to me, but its a good poem, nice job ^_^

 

[Rohan]

interesting.........

Is it about a greedy man, who let his quest for money and riches burn everything he loves ?

Its still a bit ambiguous to me, but its a good poem, nice job ^_^

How can a beggar be rich ? XD

By the Way, glad that you all liked it.

 

[Byron123]

I can't believe that you gave a completely new meaning to my poem. XD

The poem is not related to Naruto but on real life.

The meaning that you gave is very close to the true meaning of the poem, so + Repped.

Haha thanks, still I can't believe that Naruto didn't inspire you at all, I don't know, the old man, the spread ofhatred, the lust for power, the wind that blows away the ashes once you get the love you need XD In any case check some of my own poems:

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I have another one but I can't find it... Do you know if you can have a specific amount of threads and whetehr or not if the former is true, you have your oldest removed to make space for the new?

 

[Everztar]

does it have to do with that humanity must be erased from earth in order for earth to start over and grow again?

 

[UzumakiRam]

It's amazing i think the meaning is: the beggar lost everything in he has and grew hatred in his heart and spread it all over the world with fire, but the power of love stopped it with the wind of it's love power, yeah?

 

[Rohan]

does it have to do with that humanity must be erased from earth in order for earth to start over and grow again?

No, not really.

It's amazing i think the meaning is: the beggar lost everything in he has and grew hatred in his heart and spread it all over the world with fire, but the power of love stopped it with the wind of it's love power, yeah?

You were 90 % correct, good sir, + Repped.

 

[UzumakiRam]

No, not really.



You were 90 % correct, good sir, + Repped.

Thank u! U r the best i saw in the whole thing that is like about naruto base! No the best in the whole internet, wait how do we use repp

 

[Colonel Armstrong]

ill remember this thread