-Han- shocks me

[-Naruto-]

Awesome avatarxd
*I begin by preforming the handsigns for lightning blade and then immidiatly send a large amount of raiton chakra in between my two hands. Then when i can see the sparks i grab the raiton chakra with both hands and split it into two lightning blades. Finally i start to chagre directly at you and then slam one of the lightning blades, the one in my left hand, into your clone. After the lightning blade hits him i begin to lift him off of the ground with the lightning blade i begin to zig zag him around with lightning blade in mid air. Finally when the lightning blade gives out i let him go and rise above him. Then i slam him down with my other lightning blade which make him poof away.*

 

[Anduril]

Thanks xd
Right for the next jutsu u will use your raiton chakra to create a flash of very bright light from behind u.....that will put anyone who watches this light into a genjutsu...​

 

[-Naruto-]

Sorry for taking so long to reply.
*I start out by sending a huge amount of raiton chakra above and behind me. Then i start adding more and more chakra until there are little flickers of lightning in the air behind and above me. Then i quickly flash my raiton chakra which blinds your clone. Then i kick your clone in the face (sorry i don't know any genjutsuxd).

 

[Anduril]

Sorry for taking so long to reply.
*I start out by sending a huge amount of raiton chakra above and behind me. Then i start adding more and more chakra until there are little flickers of lightning in the air behind and above me. Then i quickly flash my raiton chakra which blinds your clone. Then i kick your clone in the face (sorry i don't know any genjutsuxd).

Right genjutsu is a farce reality something that is not happening but your opponent sees it happening ... u will learn more from your genjutsu teacher....
and tell me exactly what u make your opponent see and what u do in reality....​

 

[-Naruto-]

*As the flash goes off i make my opponent see me running away. Due to the instinct of the battle this is not far from something that could happen, but in reality i am charging at him and i am ready to kill him.*

 

[Anduril]

Be more descriptive the next time u use this jutsu.....since u need to explain a genjutsu really clearly what exactly happens since it will be important to maintain the timeframe..
This is your new jutsu

Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: after performing the following handseals the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.

 

[-Naruto-]

Thanks that will be helpful when i learn genjutsu.xd

 

[Anduril]

Now moving on to your last jutsu
i want u to first form a chidori​

 

[-Naruto-]

*I start off by preforming the handsigns in order to preform chidori and then start to gather a large amount of raiton chakra in my right hand. Then i add more and more raiton chakra until finally i can see the raiton chakra in my hand and can hear the chirping.*

What now Sempai (Was about to put thrust forward and kills your clone and remembered i just needed to make the chidorixd)

 

[Anduril]

Right now cause powerful bolts of electricity to pop out of that chidori
in a circular area around u​

 

[-Naruto-]

*Then i start to pour more chakra into the chidori and shape them into average sized powerful lightning bolts which spring out from the chidori.Then when the bolts are formed i send them to certain spots around me so that it kind of looks like the top of a sphere, made of lines, which caves in as it reaches the middle.*
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[Anduril]

Excellent work shinobi ....
this is your new jutsu

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

and this completes your training all though u will be tested by lili before u are done....
If u have any question ask me after u are done with the test provided by lili ​

 

[-Naruto-]

Okay, thanks for training me.xd
+rep

 

[Lili-Chwan]

The basic drill, what elements do you have, and how would you used them with Lightning.

 

[-Naruto-]

I have suiton, doton, raiton, and fuuton. I would use doton with raiton in the four pillar jutsu and to break through prisons that i put my enemy in (since they would be surprised and have nearly no time to defend). I would use suiton with water to zap wet enemies or use collaboration jutsu like wave of inspiration. I could use raiton with fuuton in jutsu such as the thunder dragon tornado although raiton is hard to use with fuuton, and even though i do not have katon I could use the fireball jutsu and then chidori sharp spear to make a surprise attack. I could also use the dragon flame bomb and then use kirin.

 

[Anduril]

I have suiton, doton, raiton, and fuuton. I would use doton with raiton in the four pillar jutsu and to break through prisons that i put my enemy in (since they would be surprised and have nearly no time to defend). I would use suiton with water to zap wet enemies or use collaboration jutsu like wave of inspiration. I could use raiton with fuuton in jutsu such as the thunder dragon tornado although wind is hard to use with fuuton, and even though i do not have katon I could use the fireball jutsu and then chidori sharp spear to make a surprise attack. I could also use the dragon flame bomb and then use kirin.

Please at least read once what u type .... smh U_U

 

[-Naruto-]

Thanks

 

[Lili-Chwan]

I have suiton, doton, raiton, and fuuton. I would use doton with raiton in the four pillar jutsu and to break through prisons that i put my enemy in (since they would be surprised and have nearly no time to defend). I would use suiton with water to zap wet enemies or use collaboration jutsu like wave of inspiration. I could use raiton with fuuton in jutsu such as the thunder dragon tornado although raiton is hard to use with fuuton, and even though i do not have katon I could use the fireball jutsu and then chidori sharp spear to make a surprise attack. I could also use the dragon flame bomb and then use kirin.

Hum... When writing extensive explanations, try to separate different topics. It makes your intentions much clear and easier to be understood.

One thing I'd like to point out is that it isn't clear you need to have Doton to use the Four Pillar Bind jutsu. But if you're talking about using Earth Release to trap your opponent, and then use the speed and elemental advantage of Lighning to finish it off, then nice answer

Basic answer for the Water part, not much creativity.

Extremely basic answer with the Wind part, relying only on one jutsu to combine both elements.

And good answer for Fire, though it could always be better.

Overall, I don't think you have much mastery with Lightning. And it mostly because of your lack of description. Maybe because of your lack of English Mastery. Try to work on descriptions better.
-Han-, that was for you. You need to send your students some creative challenges, in order to judge how descriptive your students are, and how much creativity can they show.

 

[Anduril]

Hum... When writing extensive explanations, try to separate different topics. It makes your intentions much clear and easier to be understood.

One thing I'd like to point out is that it isn't clear you need to have Doton to use the Four Pillar Bind jutsu. But if you're talking about using Earth Release to trap your opponent, and then use the speed and elemental advantage of Lighning to finish it off, then nice answer

Basic answer for the Water part, not much creativity.

Extremely basic answer with the Wind part, relying only on one jutsu to combine both elements.

And good answer for Fire, though it could always be better.

Overall, I don't think you have much mastery with Lightning. And it mostly because of your lack of description. Maybe because of your lack of English Mastery. Try to work on descriptions better.
-Han-, that was for you. You need to send your students some creative challenges, in order to judge how descriptive your students are, and how much creativity can they show.

I know but i only taught him one A and S rank lightning....
i never had him for full course so he i never got the chance to test the guy....
and give him the basics about lightning
sorry

 

[-Naruto-]

Hum... When writing extensive explanations, try to separate different topics. It makes your intentions much clear and easier to be understood.

One thing I'd like to point out is that it isn't clear you need to have Doton to use the Four Pillar Bind jutsu. But if you're talking about using Earth Release to trap your opponent, and then use the speed and elemental advantage of Lighning to finish it off, then nice answer

Basic answer for the Water part, not much creativity.

Extremely basic answer with the Wind part, relying only on one jutsu to combine both elements.

And good answer for Fire, though it could always be better.

Overall, I don't think you have much mastery with Lightning. And it mostly because of your lack of description. Maybe because of your lack of English Mastery. Try to work on descriptions better.
-Han-, that was for you. You need to send your students some creative challenges, in order to judge how descriptive your students are, and how much creativity can they show.

-Han- was a very good teacher but my first teacher was dry and boring.xd

also i can post another description and be more creative and clean if you want.