[Photoshop] Halo Reach - Spartan 259 Carter

[Ragnaroc]

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tried not to over sharpen like i did with the Gaara sig so hopefully its some what better. any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism will be appreciated but if you are going to attack me or "improve" i will take it as an insult -_-

 

[Musashibo]

The text isn't really working for it. I'm not too sure wind I'm not really a big fan of tech text. The render is well cut from what I can see and well placed, I just don't understand the background/pic?. Doesn't seem too bad. B&W are kinda weird to pull off and it can work with this, though I don't really like the style. The glare for the light source is will placed, but it looks like the main attraction.

 

[Ali G MPGH]

Atm, it looks like the focal is the white dot.
But the focal must be tht halo guy, am i right?
So u must focus on the halo guy, i mean, when ppl look on your sig, they must see the halo guy first, then tht white dot.
Also, dont do B&W sigs atm, even advanced or even PRO dudes fail at B&W sigs sometimes.
Stick to colored sigs atm.

U need atm to work on flow,blending and lighting.

U should read some tuts and u will get better

GL and KIU

 

[Ragnaroc]

The text isn't really working for it. I'm not too sure wind I'm not really a big fan of tech text. The render is well cut from what I can see and well placed, I just don't understand the background/pic?. Doesn't seem too bad. B&W are kinda weird to pull off and it can work with this, though I don't really like the style. The glare for the light source is will placed, but it looks like the main attraction.

talk to Bungie about the rendering because thats who put it out, its probably because of my blending techniques that changed how it looks.

the background is suppose to look like an explosion and the text is just basic Arial

thanks though

Atm, it looks like the focal is the white dot.
But the focal must be tht halo guy, am i right?
So u must focus on the halo guy, i mean, when ppl look on your sig, they must see the halo guy first, then tht white dot.
Also, dont do B&W sigs atm, even advanced or even PRO dudes fail at B&W sigs sometimes.
Stick to colored sigs atm.

U need atm to work on flow,blending and lighting.

U should read some tuts and u will get better

GL and KIU

thanks...I just do sigs when I'm really bored or feel like it so I'm not the best and honestly I'm not sure when I'll have the free time to really get any better with school but I appreciate the comments.

as for the B&W, it looks better than in color since the background overpowers the rendering imo. I'll play around with it and see what I can do

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Heres color to compare

 

[Ali G MPGH]

colored is better IMO
If u would blend the render n work on lighting, i would give it a 6/10

Atm its 5/10