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english is not my first language, therefore i have a a little bit of a problem with grammar. Anyway here is an unfinished poem by yours truly, before i finish it i need to hear some unfake opinions if possible.
May the winds of love, unveil the stars and push the clouds
And this ocean of truth i harber ridd your heart of doubts
What is true,is impossible to lie,and to doubt the undoubtable love is a paradox begun
For how can the night not love the moon?, and the day live, if absent the sun?
Unknown is the truth of hearts, If Unspoken, shall it fade in time
The world of truth that lies within, if Intuited, so wondrously sublime
Beneath these shades of lies, where lies, an Untold Love, Indescribeable in words!
Yet as words can go, behold my truth, behold my love, unpierce my heart of hidden swords!
Your heart, oh fountain of love, you are my reason for breath
Your touch, oh tangible love, in your embrace i fear no death
Those lips, oh heaven made flesh, eternity lies in your kiss
Those eyes, oh mirrors of dreams, they are my windows to bliss
May the winds of love, unveil the stars and push the clouds
And this ocean of truth i harber ridd your heart of doubts
What is true,is impossible to lie,and to doubt the undoubtable love is a paradox begun
For how can the night not love the moon?, and the day live, if absent the sun?
Unknown is the truth of hearts, If Unspoken, shall it fade in time
The world of truth that lies within, if Intuited, so wondrously sublime
Beneath these shades of lies, where lies, an Untold Love, Indescribeable in words!
Yet as words can go, behold my truth, behold my love, unpierce my heart of hidden swords!
Your heart, oh fountain of love, you are my reason for breath
Your touch, oh tangible love, in your embrace i fear no death
Those lips, oh heaven made flesh, eternity lies in your kiss
Those eyes, oh mirrors of dreams, they are my windows to bliss
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