[Photoshop] Haku

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asa mentioned, the size is pretty bad considering what you have i n it. it should be more like a 300x200, or something vertical. the canvas has a lot to do with how the tag looks.

colors are very boring. whatever you did to it messed it up. try some selective color layers, and brighter gradients.


I dont like whats going on on the left and right sides. looks pretty crappy, and takes away from the sig. if you had just the focal, and the white area, it would look a lot better.

kill the text. it is taking away from the focal. I recoment that you never put text until you get better.

lighting here is a mess. i see some on the top, bottom, and even the sides. decide on the light source before you make the tag.

Overall, i think that ive seen better from you. There is no color scheme, and it makes it hard to look at. to tell you the trugh, it looks like a swamp. kind of ugly colors that way. the sharpening looks good, however the blurring is not so good. I would try to focus more on the focal, and the white part around it.
 

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asa mentioned, the size is pretty bad considering what you have i n it. it should be more like a 300x200, or something vertical. the canvas has a lot to do with how the tag looks.

colors are very boring. whatever you did to it messed it up. try some selective color layers, and brighter gradients.


I dont like whats going on on the left and right sides. looks pretty crappy, and takes away from the sig. if you had just the focal, and the white area, it would look a lot better.

kill the text. it is taking away from the focal. I recoment that you never put text until you get better.

lighting here is a mess. i see some on the top, bottom, and even the sides. decide on the light source before you make the tag.

Overall, i think that ive seen better from you. There is no color scheme, and it makes it hard to look at. to tell you the trugh, it looks like a swamp. kind of ugly colors that way. the sharpening looks good, however the blurring is not so good. I would try to focus more on the focal, and the white part around it.
Ty.
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U say it is all shit, then why a better gfxer (requiem-k.deviantart.com) said, that this is my best, he liked the lighting,he loved the text nd all.

I think u just have a weird taste, so yh, cuz ive never seen some positive comments from u

Anyway, ty.
 

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The sig looks fine, but I do wish it was a bit bigger but I can live with the size. The text is in the way, I would move it over to one of the sides.
 
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