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Welcome, Kirabi.

The Hachibi Jinchuuriki bio test will consist of a fight between you and Nero-Sama.

However..there are special rules for the fight test.
Breaking any of the rules will result in automatic failure.

They are:
|| Rei's normal Rules and Restrictions apply
|| You will be using your Kirabi bio.
|| Nero will be RP-ing as two characters, Itachi and Kakuzu, aiming to capture the Jinchuuriki. However, even while RPing as both characters, he is still allowed only three moves per turn. The bios he will be using for them are the same as a normal Kage level member using a Itachi ( with MS ) or Kakuzu bio.
|| Custom Jutsu and Custom Elements are not allowed.
|| You do not need to defeat Nero to pass - however, doing so will gain extra marks.
|| The terrain is the inside of a huge, vast hollowed out cave, with the ceiling over hundred meters ahead and the walls over fifty meters away from each contestant. You will begin at Mid-Range.

Most importantly,

Spamming here will not be tolerated. Only mods/admin/senseis can post here IF THEIR OPINION IS ASKED FOR BY THE RP MODS. Any other person spamming will be infracted.

Nero will be making the first move. Begin.
 

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Welcome, Kirabi.

The Hachibi Jinchuuriki bio test will consist of a fight between you and Nero-Sama.

However..there are special rules for the fight test.
Breaking any of the rules will result in automatic failure.

They are:
|| Rei's normal Rules and Restrictions apply
|| You will be using your Kirabi bio.
|| Nero will be RP-ing as two characters, Itachi and Kakuzu, aiming to capture the Jinchuuriki. However, even while RPing as both characters, he is still allowed only three moves per turn. The bios he will be using for them are the same as a normal Kage level member using a Itachi ( with MS ) or Kakuzu bio.
|| Custom Jutsu and Custom Elements are not allowed.
|| You do not need to defeat Nero to pass - however, doing so will gain extra marks.
|| The terrain is the inside of a huge, vast hollowed out cave, with the ceiling over hundred meters ahead and the walls over fifty meters away from each contestant. You will begin at Mid-Range.

Most importantly,

Spamming here will not be tolerated. Only mods/admin/senseis can post here IF THEIR OPINION IS ASKED FOR BY THE RP MODS. Any other person spamming will be infracted.

Nero will be making the first move. Begin.
*Itachi with 3 tomoe and kakuzu with hearts already released appear on the field from being mid range Itachi uses

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.

as the wind mask of Kakuzu's combines it with at the same time using

Fuuton: Dai Kamaitachi (Wind Style: Great Cutting Whirlwind)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A bigger version of the cutting whirlwind.

sending a whirlwind behind it making it head at you faster after using this Kakuzu jumps into the air while u cant see him but he can see you and release multiple weapons by using

(Soushuuha) - Manipulate Advancing Blades

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: This technique allows a shinobi to hover multiple kunai in the air while they approach a target. The technique allows a ninja to unleash a torrent of kunai, shuriken, or other weapons much more quickly than if each was thrown individually.

throwing many weapons from above while they are equipped with flash bombs and paper bombs.*
 

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*Itachi with 3 tomoe and kakuzu with hearts already released appear on the field from being mid range Itachi uses

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.

as the wind mask of Kakuzu's combines it with at the same time using

Fuuton: Dai Kamaitachi (Wind Style: Great Cutting Whirlwind)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A bigger version of the cutting whirlwind.

sending a whirlwind behind it making it head at you faster after using this Kakuzu jumps into the air while u cant see him but he can see you and release multiple weapons by using

(Soushuuha) - Manipulate Advancing Blades

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: This technique allows a shinobi to hover multiple kunai in the air while they approach a target. The technique allows a ninja to unleash a torrent of kunai, shuriken, or other weapons much more quickly than if each was thrown individually.

throwing many weapons from above while they are equipped with flash bombs and paper bombs.*
eh it sucks I can't use character specific customs but I guess.

As the intense pain and whirlwind come towards me I use.

(Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: �Wind Style: Rasengan� and �Water Style: Destruction Torrent� combo that makes a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. Can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos (no water source required).

creating a tornado of water that destroys your fire/wind combo and also blocks your weapons. The explosive kunai having been water down don't explode and the flash bombs go off blinding your self. I being protected by my sunglasses.

"Now you know you aren't smart, I Kirabi and the Hachibi train in the dark!"

With this I then use,

(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique causes a cave-in by destroying the equilibrium that holds the cave together. Just removing a single vital stone throws off the balance of the cave, making it unexpectedly fragile and causing a domino effect that destroys the entire cave.

causing the whole cave to cascade starting in your position Kazuku having been closer, is knocked out by a boulder within the air, The other stones begin to fall at a alarming rate and I use,

(Koka no Jutsu) - Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

Creating a vast armor the creates a small dome around me protecting me from the cave falling down upon us.
 

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eh it sucks I can't use character specific customs but I guess.

As the intense pain and whirlwind come towards me I use.

(Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: �Wind Style: Rasengan� and �Water Style: Destruction Torrent� combo that makes a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. Can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos (no water source required).

creating a tornado of water that destroys your fire/wind combo and also blocks your weapons. The explosive kunai having been water down don't explode and the flash bombs go off blinding your self. I being protected by my sunglasses.

"Now you know you aren't smart, I Kirabi and the Hachibi train in the dark!"

With this I then use,

(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique causes a cave-in by destroying the equilibrium that holds the cave together. Just removing a single vital stone throws off the balance of the cave, making it unexpectedly fragile and causing a domino effect that destroys the entire cave.

causing the whole cave to cascade starting in your position Kazuku having been closer, is knocked out by a boulder within the air, The other stones begin to fall at a alarming rate and I use,

(Koka no Jutsu) - Hardening Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

Creating a vast armor the creates a small dome around me protecting me from the cave falling down upon us.
Their wouldnt be any water left nor would it be able to block Crank Ninjutsu because its Alot of steal that is coming at a high speed if their was water but their isnt theirs only steam which makes the weapons stab you and explode obliterating the sunglasses and still blinding you it wouldnt blind me because im mid range away and the weapons would stop u from being able continue your move because it would stab and explode at the same time without you knowing their coming because of the steam*As we see the weapons going through the steam the wind mask flys up and catches kakuzu while itachi at the bottom starts preparing to use

(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

after the explosion occurs spikes come up immediately stabbing you and because of the explosion the steam evaporates while in the air we go up mid range above you and as the spikes begin to stab the wind mask uses

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

sending a huge blast of wind down on you as your being stabbed*
 

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Their wouldnt be any water left nor would it be able to block Crank Ninjutsu because its Alot of steal that is coming at a high speed if their was water but their isnt theirs only steam which makes the weapons stab you and explode obliterating the sunglasses and still blinding you it wouldnt blind me because im mid range away and the weapons would stop u from being able continue your move because it would stab and explode at the same time without you knowing their coming because of the steam*As we see the weapons going through the steam the wind mask flys up and catches kakuzu while itachi at the bottom starts preparing to use

(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

after the explosion occurs spikes come up immediately stabbing you and because of the explosion the steam evaporates while in the air we go up mid range above you and as the spikes begin to stab the wind mask uses

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

sending a huge blast of wind down on you as your being stabbed*
>_> guess your right about that.

So the explosive tags explode and send me flying whoopie..

hearing the earth break beneath me and my singed body along with my blindeness (which is kinda pointless due to the fact that we are in a cave)


(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Hidden in Stones Jutsu

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is similar to the Universal Assimilation Technique. It allows the user to move in and out of rock and earth. This jutsu can be used to avoid certain earth techniques

so as the rock skewers me i simply pass through it into the ground. also avoiding your pressure damage. which causes the Cave to shake violently and rocks to begin falling from above.

then re emerge and at the same time use.

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

Blinding Itachi's Sharingan..

And since we are all now blind I use due to the darkness of the cave.
Kazuku not being able to see because of the darkness he now doesn't know where I am. and itachi being blinded by the chakra. I condense water chakra at the top[ of the cave to create rain clouds.

(Suiton: Chakra Kenpa No Ame) - Water Style: Chakra Senseing Rain
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A down pour of rain will fall and any thing with chakra that it touches the user can sense there location and instantly know there.

So now that I know your location I then use.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.

x4

Two clones head up and around running along the walls of the cave throwing explosive kunai in Kazuku's direction while the other two clonesstand in front of me. One clone then goes.

Incomplete Form: When the incomplete form is activated, Kirabi is covered in a black shroud of chakra which takes the form of an ox with eight tails waving behind him.
The chakra shroud offers defense against all techiques below B rank.
He gains a +10 attack boost to the Ink he uses, and also a +5 boost to the Lightning element.

and runs towards Itachi at blinding speed. ramming into him. sending him into the nearest cave wall.
 

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Okay your mistakes are you think your survived after getting hit by a group(torrent means a large group possibly more than 20 in my mind) that are equiped with not only explosive tags but their sharp and since you didnt move you would get hit by the weapons and explode from a large explosion and further more you cant sense my spikes coming so you would get hit by them instantly if you survived by the weapons which you didnt. Wanted me to put all of ur flaws so hear it goes. It wouldnt rain because were in a cave and even if rain was created wouldnt the lightning clones short circuit lightning clones can not use bijuu mode because their lightning dude. And u made 4 moves total so the clones wouldnt even count and since this is a no redo match I think you failed(my opinion)
 
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>_> guess your right about that.

So the explosive tags explode and send me flying whoopie..

hearing the earth break beneath me and my singed body along with my blindeness (which is kinda pointless due to the fact that we are in a cave)


(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Hidden in Stones Jutsu

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is similar to the Universal Assimilation Technique. It allows the user to move in and out of rock and earth. This jutsu can be used to avoid certain earth techniques

so as the rock skewers me i simply pass through it into the ground. also avoiding your pressure damage. which causes the Cave to shake violently and rocks to begin falling from above.

then re emerge and at the same time use.

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

Blinding Itachi's Sharingan..

And since we are all now blind I use due to the darkness of the cave.
Kazuku not being able to see because of the darkness he now doesn't know where I am. and itachi being blinded by the chakra. I condense water chakra at the top[ of the cave to create rain clouds.

(Suiton: Chakra Kenpa No Ame) - Water Style: Chakra Senseing Rain
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A down pour of rain will fall and any thing with chakra that it touches the user can sense there location and instantly know there.

So now that I know your location I then use.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.

x4

Two clones head up and around running along the walls of the cave throwing explosive kunai in Kazuku's direction while the other two clonesstand in front of me. One clone then goes.

Incomplete Form: When the incomplete form is activated, Kirabi is covered in a black shroud of chakra which takes the form of an ox with eight tails waving behind him.
The chakra shroud offers defense against all techiques below B rank.
He gains a +10 attack boost to the Ink he uses, and also a +5 boost to the Lightning element.

and runs towards Itachi at blinding speed. ramming into him. sending him into the nearest cave wall.
Uhm..Kirabi... I think you may have messed up big time there. =/

Let's see the mistakes, now, shall we ?

|| You performed four Ninjutsu in one turn, which is a breach of the R and R.
|| When the exploding tags and/or the weapons hit you, you won't just be blown back, you would have been stabbed to death or exploded to a crisp
|| Clones cannot go Jinchuu mode - this is not an actual mistake, I'd just like to let you know it.
|| Rain couldn't have formed in a cave because you can't make clouds
|| If you had formed Rain anyhow, the Lightning Clones would have shorted out

But just take the first one.

You did four moves in one turn.

What did I say in my initial post ?

Breaking any of the rules will result in automatic failure.
They are:
|| Rei's normal Rules and Restrictions apply
And you broke it O_O

So...This thread is now officially closed for judging xd

Result will be posted shortly.
 
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