[CFS] [Graceful Fist] - Alexander Akimichi

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Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will gather a large amount of fuuton chakra towards both of their hands create a semi-transparent aura around their hand. The same process is done towards the users knees as well. The user will then dash towards the opponent and attempts to deliver a jumping knee thrust but the moment the opponent begins to react towards the knee thrust, because of the users clarity and reactive ability will then snap that same knee back basically faking the knee thrust and instead delivering a sharp finger slash in a horizontal manner while still in the air, towards the wound of the opponents neck, cutting that area completely which will generate serious pain towards the neck while at the same time the opponent will be unable to move their head around while blood spilling heavily from the area cut . The user will then land on the ground and once again deliver a finger slash but towards the solar plexus cutting it in half, finishing the opponent off.
Notes:
- Can only be used three times per-match.
- Must wait two turns before using this technique again.
- Must be a practitioner of Yūgana Ken | Graceful Fist
 

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Out of Character: It fascinates me that most of the techniques are described as basically, finisher moves. :p

I begin by channeling wind chakra throughout my hands, creating a translucent aura around them. At the same exact time, I coat my knees in wind chakra as well. I then dash towards the magically created clone in front of me. As I near striking distance, I utilize my left foot and step forward, transferring all of my weight and momentum to that feet. As I do so, I then spring myself upwards, successfully jumping forward as I rise my right knee near my chest area, aiming to strike the clone in the face. As the clone's attention is most likely drawn to the rising knee nearing his face, I suddenly trace back my steps and bring my knee back down while at the same exact time, swinging my left arm from left to right, joining together my index and pointer fingers. The swing is performed in order to deliver a horizontal slash across the clone's neck pressure point, causing bleeding to occur. Landing back down on the ground and maintaining the fluidity of my moves, I swing my right hand from right to left, perform yet another horizontal slash in the same fashion, however aimed to slash through the clone's solar plexus, finishing him off completely.

An advantage that I see with this technique is that it deals two very deadly blows/slashes, one to the neck wound and the other to the abdominal one. The technique has the potential strength to completely incapacitate a fighting and removing the ability to continue fighting. One of the downsides to this technique is, the target in question may metagame the knee feint and use a full body technique in order to defend from the entire assault. This brings me to my next point, the second they defend against the knee feint, we have a high probability of being unable to continue with the deadly aspects of the technique. Aside from that, no real questions.
 

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That's a good thing right? xD


Type: Offense
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A deceptive move for the fighting style. The user will gather fuuton chakra towards each of their hands. The user will use one of their hands, by opening their palm, and having their fingers face towards the eye of the opponent, the user will attempt to deliver a straight eye jab. The hand though, progresses at a normal pace, similar to regular ninjas. The main purpose is not to necessarily strike the eyes of the opponent but to force their attention towards the fingers. As the opponent focused towards the hand coming at their eyes, basically after the first hand jabs the opponent in their eye's at a normal pace track-able by normal ninjas, the user will right after hitting the opponent with the eye jab use their other hand to deliver a much quicker (matching the basic speed of the fighting style) and aggressive hit aiming towards the opponents chest, delivering a slash which is quite deep and a large amount of blood will begin to spill, inflicting serious pain. The opponent will be severely harmed if they take a full hit from this attack. It becomes extremely difficult for the opponent to notice the slash due to the distraction and pain from the finger jab which makes it a formidable technique, and difficult to deduce.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice in battle
- Must be a practitioner of Yūgana Ken | Graceful Fist
- Must wait one turn before use again
 

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Out of Character: Yeah, in a way... xD :shy:

As the new clone is created in front of me, I immediately position myself near striking distance whilst channeling wind chakra throughout my hands. I then open my left palm as I straighten out my fingers closely together. In that same motion, I thrust my left hand forward in order to pierce the clone's right eye socket. I pick the right eye socket in order to draw the clone's full attention as well as cloud his vision with his left eye as I cross over in order to strike his right one. Immediately after delivering the eye jab, I swipe my right hand upwards in a diagonal fashion from right to left, aiming to slash through the clone's chest. The finger's positioning would be the same as the previously released eye jab, utilizing the concentrated wind chakra in order to slice deep through the chest.

This technique is very dangerous if the second strike lands on the opponent, causing for heavy bleeding in the chest area. The one downside I see in this technique is that the user is restricted to waiting after the eye jab lands in order to perform the slash. In reality, the eye jab would always be countered first, leaving the second slash nearly unusable in most situations.
 

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Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A efficient and fast pace combo attack, the user will take a basic stance and channel fuuton chakra towards each of their hands increasing its cutting proficiency and accuracy. The user will first start off with aiming towards the wound of the opponents hand, severing it, and in quick succession the user will use their other hand to severe the wound of the other hand of the opponent. After severing that wound, the user will lift both their hands and slice the wound of the lower arm, this for each arm, done one after the other, similar to how the user severed the wounds of the opponents hand. Then with the same exact pattern but this time lifting their hands higher, they will severe the wounds of the upper arm located slightly under the shoulder, slicing the wounds one after the other. Due to the accuracy of each slice delivered, the user will be sure to slice only the wounds, basically leaving deep cuts (three on each arm) that will begin to spill blood slowly (though not something that will kill them). Due to having all the wounds of the opponents arms severed they will be completely rendered useless (the opponents arms). This means using hand seals or wielding weapons with the use of their hands would be impossible.
Notes:
- Must be a practitioner of Yūgana Ken | Graceful Fist
- Can only be used three times per-match
- Must wait one turn before using this technique again
 

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HOLY EARTH GODS! This is a pretty outstanding technique Sensei!

After reading the information of the scroll I couldn't help but be completely stunned by it's nature. After carefully studying the methods of usage, I begin to channel wind chakra throughout my hands in order to increase their cutting capabilities by highly concentrating the chakra in a thin layer. Once that's done, I thrust myself towards the clone standing before me, in a very fluid and swift manner, I swipe my left hand having my fingers stretched out and closely linked together. The swipe is performed from right to left at a 45 degree angle, aiming to slice the clone's hand wound, located roughly in the wrist area. Immediately afterwards, I perform the same exact motion with my right hand, however swiping it outwards from left to right at the same angle, slicing the clone's other hand wound. After severing both wounds, I rise both of my hands while maintaining their posture and perform an inward angled slice, coming down from left to right, aiming to slice the clone's lower arm wound, located roughly in the joint between the elbow. I then proceed to do the same exact downwards slash with my right hand, severing the clone's other lower arm wound. As both hands meet roughly together by the center of the clone's abdominal area after being swiped downwards, I immediately rise them up higher above the clone's chest level. As I do so, I thrust my left hand performing a horizontal karate chop, slicing the clone's right shoulder wound. After that motion, I finalize my combination by mimicking the same motion with my right hand, severing the clone's right shoulder wound. This in turn would leave the clone's arms flapping to his side being rendered useless.

I completely love the usage of this technique. It only requires but one of the actual slashing steps to successfully land in order for you to come out victorious in some advantageous way. Even if not all six slashes land, only having one land will surely disable the user's ability to perform hand seals with said hand. This is due to the fact that the user's hand wound would be severed which is in the wrist area, removing the ability to freely rotate the wrist to make complex movements. From then on, if the rest of the strikes connect, its just a step process. The second wave of slashes would remove the ability of being able to use the lower arms to block physical blows while the third and final wave of slashes completely renders their ability to use the arms all together. The only downside I can think of is that the slashes aren't simultaneous, which means you have to wait for one to land in order for the next to be done. This means this technique needs to be set up in order to be fully complete. Although a downside, it is also a positive note. Only using one hand to strike first means you have the other hand free to defend should the opponent decide to counter-attack.
 

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Glad you like it. :)


Type: Defence/Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This is one of the basic counters of the fighting style. When an opponent is attempting a kick towards the user in any directions or area of the users body, the user due to their flexible motion is able to move around to position himself properly to ready is counter. The moment an opponent attempts to kick the user, the user will gather fuuton chakra towards one of their hands and sharpen the chakra around their hand to increase its cutting efficiency. They will then use the hand that gathered the fuuton chakra, to block the attack. Not only does the opponent block the attack but since the style revolves around always countering an opponents movement, the user will immediately severe a wound of the opponents foot located around the ankle. For example if they are trying a round house kick to the users head, the user will block the kick while severing the wound located on the foot (around the ankle) by raising their hand to level with the wound, since that was the area attempting to make contact with the opponents head. The block and cut is basically done at the same time when contact is made, thus allowing this jutsu to keep true with one of the rules of the fighting style. This counter only works towards the lower body of the opponent, specifically their legs (Spinning kick, straight kick, etc). The severing of the wound will inflict an annoying, pinch type pain. Not only will this slow down the opponents movement but also it will begin to spill blood (though it will not necessarily kill them).
Notes:
- Must be a practitioner of Yūgana Ken | Graceful Fist
- Can only be used four times
 

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Out of Character: I noticed we are both learning the Reaper Style! Seems like we have similar fighting styles! =P

As the clone begins to perform a roundhouse kick with their right leg, I ready myself and spread my legs shoulder width apart for better support. In the same exact motion, I raise my left hand with open palmed directly upwards in order to meet the kick. Moments before making physical contact, I tweak my palm inwards whilst channeling sharp wind chakra in order to catch the clone's ankle. Upon physical contact, I release the sharp wind chakra, severing the ankle wound, thus causing sharp pain in the process.

The good thing about this technique is that it allows you to freely adjust your body in order to defend against kick related techniques as well as block and counter attack the strike by severing the ankle wound which most likely cause the opponent to lose balance as they attempt to stand on said foot. This would decrease their running speed although not sure how much exactly. It would certainly make motions with said foot to be much slower or delayed.
 

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OOC: Indeed we do! ^_^


Type: Offense-Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A corresponding combo similar to the other combos displayed by the fighting style. The user will take a basic stance and channel fuuton chakra towards each of their hands increasing its cutting proficiency and accuracy. The user will squat low or try to position his body in a way where he is level with the opponents legs. The user will thrusts both their hands towards the muscle of the opponents thigh, this muscle is located right on the hip flexor of the opponent and severe the muscle. After severing these muscles, the opponent will begin to shake starting from their feet and feel slight pain. In quick succession the user will lower their hands and thrusts both hands at the same time once again towards another muscle located on the thigh, that is located right in front of the quadriceps. After this the opponent will be unable to stay on both feet, they will likely fall over due to the fact they will not be able to stand properly because of the severed muscles on their legs. The opponent of course would not be able to even move around with their legs whatsoever, the blood spilling will not kill the opponent neither though but it will inflict sharp, pinch like pain.
Notes:
- Must be a practitioner of Yūgana Ken | Graceful Fist
- Can only be used three times per-match
- Must wait one turn before using this technique again and no Graceful Fist jutsu the next turn
 

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Noticing the clone extend their foot towards me in order to potentially kick me, I respond by getting into a low stance with my feet paralleled with my shoulders. As I do so, I thrust both of my hands forward while channeling them with wind chakra and manipulating the chakra very thin and sharp. In a fluid and swift manner, I begin to deliver Neji-type Gentlefist strikes with my hands, slicing through the opponent's left wound, starting from the thigh and moving downwards, completely immobilizing the leg.

This is pretty much the brother/sister technique of the Relinquishing Sword Technique. It allows the user a very freely descriptive manner to strike either one or both legs in order to incapacitate them by severing the leg wounds. The only downside I see is that it does not have the strength necessary to completely remove the ability to walk or stand with only one strike. The user has to have enough time in order to sever all leg wounds. That being said, it still has great potential of being complete if the first strike works. One of the positive notes is that the technique is very open ended, not heavily restricting the user on how exactly he has to move his body, not entirely anyways. Another is the end result of the technique, potentially leaving the target unable to walk or stand.
 

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OOC: And, now the last technique we have approved currently!


Type: Defensive, Supplementary, Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This is one of the basic counters of the fighting style. When an opponent is attempting a kick towards the user in any directions or area of the users body, the user due to their flexible motion is able to move around to position himself properly to ready is counter. The user will gather fuuton chakra towards one of their hands and sharpen the chakra around their hand to increase its cutting efficiency. The moment an opponent attempts to use a upper body attack, they will use the hand that gathered the fuuton chakra, to block the attack. Now only does the opponent block the attack but since the style revolves around always countering an opponents movement, the user will immediately severe a muscle of the opponents hand located around the wrist. An example is, if the opponent is attempting a hook punch, the user will simply raise their hands to block the hand that the opponent is using to punch the opponent, but as they block they will keep their palm open and slice the muscle as they block the punch. The block and cut is basically done at the same time when contact is made, thus allowing this jutsu to keep true with one of the rules of the fighting style. This counter only works with upper body attacks (Punches, palm thrusts, etc)
Note:
- Must be a practitioner of Yūgana Ken | Graceful Fist
- Can only be used four times per-match
 

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So close to finishing!

Noticing Castiel's clone creating a chidori nagashi on his hand and thrusting it forward, I inactively ready myself and utilize my enhance flexes to the fullest. Keeping a close eye on the chidori's path, I am able to calculate that it will be a strike to the upper side of my body, most likely on the chest area. As the strike nears my close range, I tile my body to the side, allowing me to face the chidori on it's side whilst simultaneously rising my right hand. As I rise my hand, I channel wind chakra throughout it, giving it cutting capabilities. Upon doing so, I open my hand and grab a hold of the clone's wrist whilst releasing the cutting-edge chakra at the same time. This in turn would allow me to sever the clone's wrist wound as well as effectively fend of the chidori, most likely causing the clone to lose concentration and deactivate it.

The plus about this technique is that you are given a lot of freedom in terms of body movements regarding upper body strikes. It allows the user to defend against a great number of techniques. That being said, it is also a downside that one can only defend against lower body strikes.
 
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