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Name: Gonkas Tsuki
Nickname: HiDe
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Clan: N/A

Looks: Wears clothes looked like Gaara clothes but black , he has 2 swords. Tall, with medium black and white hair, Green eyes, he wears red gloves, black pants, black belt, black shirt.

Personality: Quiet and Fast.

Village Info
Village of Birth: Konohagakure (now a missing-nin)
Village of Alliance: N/A

Rank//Chakra Info
Ninja Class: Genin
Speciallity:
Elements: Katon
Your Ninjutsu:



(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an
illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own
element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.
Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move
with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu
causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect
lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will
quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person.
This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using
ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2
and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Backgrounf Info

History: He was 9,he was a Genin when his parents were killed by someone !He was on the academy, he was a normal kid. He has a brother, Baito. They left the academy, they left Konohagakure, searching land to land, village to village, montain to montain for their parents killer !Once, they found a robber, and they were beat up by the robber...so they decided to find a sensei to teach them jutsus so when they find their parents killer, they can kill him ! They are now 13 ... and they continue their search ...

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Theme Song and Background Music: Boulevard of Broken Dreams

Battles

Won: N/A
Lost: N/A

~Approved~
 
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it wont get approved just read this whole link :
You must be registered for see links
and then the rest of the instructions on the training ground page
 
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No only Caliburn can do that.

Plus you're going to need some editing to it when you get 50 posts.

But we'll cross that bridge when we come to it.
 
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No, get rid of those jutsu. you cant even have a specialty because you haven't trained also copy the template
 
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you get these ninjutsu and put down one element:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an
illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own
element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.
Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move
with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu
causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect
lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will
quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person.
This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using
ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2
and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
_____
 
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1.) You need to remove the sharingan, you can't have them unless you have 1500 posts.

2.) Your rank is Genin.

3.) This is your first bio meaning you haven't developed any skills, so you don't have a specialty yet.

4.) For elements you need to pick the first element you want to learn and put it there.

5.) You need to remove all of those elemental jutsu and place the ones Egdvdfz posted above.

6.) Add more the the personality and history sections. It wouldn't hurt to find a picture to use either, though I guess that could be tough given your description.

7.) Wait for approval. :)
 
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