Goin' For It

[Charm17]

Yoooo found another rap songs from two guys on the base on soundcloud, didnt know we had talent on here =D what u guys think

 

[Pain is reality]

Meh 4/10
Boring monotone voice, needs more emotion, flow needs some serious work.
Decent attempt at wordplay with a boring concept.

 

[Charm17]

Meh 4/10
Boring monotone voice, needs more emotion, flow needs some serious work.
Decent attempt at wordplay with a boring concept.

yeah they could work on stuff, he's decent, surprised they're somewhat lyrical

 

[Punk Hazard]

***** just tell them it's you who do you think you're fooling smh

This is a lot better than the one you posted yesterday. Something I noticed is that you often stretch sounds to stay on beat. There's a lot less of that here. Different diction choices>stretching sounds to stay on beat.

 

[AllSixes]

***** just tell them it's you who do you think you're fooling smh

This is a lot better than the one you posted yesterday. Something I noticed is that you often stretch sounds to stay on beat. There's a lot less of that here. Different diction choices>stretching sounds to stay on beat.

Have you heard "Coma"?