God of Suffering: Chronicle of Zenkutsu Part 2 Chapter 7

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(Hello ALL!! I have been thinking a lot and I have decided that I want to bring Zenkutsu to a close soon. It is my first Fanfiction, and some of my first loyal fans came about when they read it. I find it sad to say, but I feel that like Naruto eyes, this series has become limited with it's options. I have decided that it will end on Chapter 15, making an well rounded 25 chapters. Naturally, I have new ideas. I keep hearing about a sequal or continuation of Naruto's eyes, I am amazed that you guys love that one so much. I didn't want to continue it much further because I believed it ended on fair terms. But If you guys keep pushing it, I might consider it :p . Another option is the return of the blood sucking Kyuuketsuki. I said from the beginning that "fall of the original sannin" was a prequal work for future fanfic. So he will make a dastardly return. And with my new found love of Bleach, there is a possibility that they are also options. Thank you all for following me and thinking my work is good. You guys are the reason I write :) For new fans and regulars, you may find a regularly updated list of my fanfictions by following the link in my signiture )


Chapter 7: Iron will. Determination to out do my predacesor.

I delved deep into the cold, damp cave. Since the loss of my mother, I have made up my mind. Tobi will die at my hands. I asked my slug sage teachers to dirrect me toward the other great sages. They were unsurprised to hear my desicion. In fact they encouraged me. They believe I am the reincarnated Rikudo Sennin, and they want me to reach my fullest potential. They told me that senjutsu is almost the same between the three great schools of slug, snake and toad. However, certain techniques and abilities are only available for these unique styles.

I entered the dwelling of the snake sage. I was unsurprised by the sheer size of the serpant. I had summoned slugs of equal size before. The snake looked at me with interest.

"You are the student of Kitsuyame. I have heard of you. She speaks as though you were my master himself," the snake hissed.

"Perhaps, I already learned the senjutsu way of the slug. I wish to learn the way of the snake. However, I have little time. I have already mastered the basics of senjutsu. I wish to learn the techniques and abilities that make your style unique," I replied.

"That can be arranged. I see just from the look of you that you resemble my master. And I see the staff and necklace you carry. Very well. I will let you train."

It was a few days later that I emerged from my training. I now sported a tatoo on the back of each palm. I tapped the one that had the kanji for slug. I felt the senjutsu chakra flow through me. I looked in a nearby pool of water. My eyes were almost all black accept for a white pupil, and by the sides of my eyes were two green dots. I tapped my second tatoo, the one inscribed with the kanji for snake. Once again my chakra flowed. I looked at myself one more. The round white pupils of my black eyes suddenly extended, turning into a long thin slit that ran from the top of my eye to the bottom, resembling a snakes eye. Purple marks appeared going from the bottom of my eye to the bottom of my cheek. They resembled snake fangs. I sighed and re-sealed my senjutsu chakra, my eyes returned to their base amber color...the color of my mom's eyes. I looked away from the reflection.

"So, child. What do you plan to do now?" the snake asked me.

"I am going to Mt. Myoboku, to train with the toad sage."

"very well. But first. I want to give you some advice. Find the man named Orochimaru. He posseses a weapon that belonged to my master. I think you should have it."

I knodded and walked out of the cave as I moved towards the entrence to my next destination.
 
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