god of suffering: chronicle of Zenkutsu (Part 1 Chapter 8-9)

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Chapter 8: Why Nagato?

What is this? It looks like Yahiko, but Yahiko is dead. What are these piercings? Are those...Rinnegan? How does Yahiko have Nagato's eyes?

The mysterious man brought me back to our home. Nagato was crouching down in his room. I ran from the man and into his arms.

"Nagato... what is going on here?"

"That dream taught me something incredible."

"Nagato, is that Yahiko?" I asked quietly. Nagato knodded.

"I learned an ability that allows me to take control the bodies of the deceased. The vision told me that Yahiko was one of the bodies I could control,"

"So you..." I tried to say as I pulled away, "Nagato...you...I'm going to be ill." I ran to the bathroom, locked myself in and cried. I heard a knock at the door.

"Konan, I know it doesnt seem right as of now. But if the Sage wanted me to use Yahiko, he must of had a reason." I stayed quiet. "Please Konan, say something. I know you must hate me right now but, please forgive me." Still I remained quiet. How could I look at him. What he has done isn't right. But Nagato needs as much support as possible. I have to protect him, even if from himself. I came out of the bathroom and held him. What else could I do?

Chapter 9: The Six Paths of Pain

It was a few months ago when Nagato first started using Yahiko. It was also a few months ago when I discovered that I was pregnant. At first I was scared that the child would be a result of the rain ninja, but fortunatly the child is Nagato's. Nagato sends out Yahiko, who he calls Tendo, to find other bodies. It started with a man who seemed to be from the Fuma clan. After the animal path arived, Nagato began collecting animals for the animal path to use and alter to be more battle practical. I was slightly alarmed that Nagato had changed the animal path's hair, but the stress might be bad for the baby so I have avoided getting worked up about the subject. I was most disturbed by Nagato using our old dog Chibi, as a summon, but I have given up on trying to fight him.

Over the next few weeks more and more bodies came to us to become paths, until all six were ready. While Nagato worked, I was sewing a new Akatsuki robe. I made it with red clouds to represent the blood that rains over our lands. It seemed appropriate.

While Nagato was working on the Asura path, I approached him.

"What do you plan to do with these?"

"To get revenge on Hanzo."

"What? Can't we just stop with the fighting and worry about the baby?"

"Yahiko must be avenged."

"Yahiko should be allowed to rest."

"Konan... let me do what I must." The mechanical man in front of him began generating mechanical parts that surrounded Nagato. I stepped back and watched as a mechanical walker fully enveloped him.

"Nagato, what is that?"

"The six paths take a lot of energy from me. I am going to need this walker to move." I sighed and walked away.

"This will not end well."
 

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"At first I was scared that the child would be a result of the rain ninja"
- did something happen to konan that made her think her child could be someone else's other than nagato? -- did i miss that part? in chapter 7, "As a kunoichi, I expected them to take advantage of me." is this the part were we assumed that she was raped?

sorry. anyways, the story was awesome!
 
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