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“I make it a policy not to second-guess my instincts. Life's more fun that way."

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Basic Information
Name: Train Heartnet
Nickname: Black Cat, Number 13
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Clan: Uchiha

Looks:
Train wears a black trench coat that he uses to conceal to large katana that he wears on his back. He wears a black dress shirt underneath the coat and black pants. He has spiky brown hair, and is average height and seems like he has an average build. Underneath though he is packed with muscle from years of training to become an assassin.

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Personality:
Train has a very cool and nonchalant attitude. He displays almost no emotion when on the job and is prepared to kill without remorse. He is very detached and could kill someone without feeling anything due to his training to become an assassin. After meeting a girl named Saya, he became more carefree but when she died he went back to being detached and nonchalant. Some think that he is like this because he is now to scared of starting a relationship because of fear that they might die and he'll lose another loved one.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: None (yet)

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Jounin by posts
Specialty:
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(needs training)
Elements:
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- needs training
Your ninjutsu: Basic E rank

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Background Info.


History:
Train was born in Konoha to the uchiha clan. He showed promise from a young age and gained the attention of several outside villages. When he was 5 years old, rogue ninja broke into his house hold killed his entire family and kidnapped him. They took him into a cave where they trained him for years to be an assassin, they taught him to always be on his guard and to never form bonds with anyone else. When he was 12 years old, he was wandering around the forest outside he met a girl named Saya. They slowly started to talk and later even became friends. Saya had done what everyone else had failed to do. She had made him feel.
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Eventually the rogue ninja started to notice something had changed in young Train. They were curious so they followed him out of the cave one day and they saw him meet Saya. They immediately made plans to eliminate her, the following day when he went outside to meet Saya he found her dead.
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Train immediately guessed what had happened and he went back into the cave and in a fit of rage slaughtered every single rogue ninja. When he finally came back to his senses he was back to being detached and emotionless. As he was about to leave he heard a strange sound, it was one of the rogue ninja laughing! The rogue ninja seemed to be alive but on the brink of death, when Train walks up to him and demands to know what is so funny the rogue ninja keeps laughing and says something train will never forget. "Your training is complete" the rogue ninja then died. Train then left the cave and became a professional assassin where he offers his services to the man with the highest price...

Other

After training with the Rogue ninja train gained many new skills. His skill in all manner of weaponry grew, he now uses a katana he has hidden in his trench coat. Thanks to his detached personality, he has no mercy on his enemies and is able to kill without a seconds hesitation. For being in the uchiha clan Train has the sharingan although he has not activated it yet.

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Theme Song and Background Music:

Background Music


Theme Song


Battles

Won:None
Lost:None

Well I hope you enjoyed, this is my first bio. If you read it all than thank you in advance U_U

Note: 1T sharingan needs activation.

Message to Cali: When I get my bio stronger, one of my goals is to defeat your god bio O_O

~Approved~ I doubt it for the simple reason I never fight
 
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Removing everything in specialty as you currently have none.

Next to elements, put down Katon.

Theory is that you can put Katon as specialty as you are a Uchiha. Though i'd just remove it since you havn't had any trainng.
 

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Well i like it and i see you have had constructive critism and well i like the story, though i like long stories but its alright for a first bio. and i cant actually point out anything
 
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