[Romance] Girl , i will remember you

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Kishi Uzumaki

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Time is passing by slowly ,
memories comes out from far away horizon ,
as i try to contain them inside poorly ,
it's those times we used to spend together ,
that i miss so much ,
but i know you will never come back to me ,
you went away , only leaving burnt
-memories that can only hurt my heart .

I always knew i had imperfections ,
but i thought those imperfections ,
were the things that made me ,
more perfect for you and you for me ,
maybe i was just too naive ,
to think so easily but you went away ,
only leaving hurt in my heart ,
but it's hard to forget the memories....

warmth and love you gave me long ago ,
i still feel it here inside my heart ,
you filled me with it , touching depths of my heart ,
even though it will pass by as a memory ,
it will always be with me ,
till the death , that will come searching for me ,
girl , i will remember you ,
as one who gave me love than i ever asked for

 
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I was distraught about our current situation,
I discovered that distance would only aggravate it,
So I challenged myself to be there for you,
Though at times I found myself reliving the horror of our fights,
Though at some point I almost gave up on this game called life,
I realize that the closer I looked at you,
the closer I became human again,
it was easy for me to become angry,
but that anger was replaced by your.....
Love
 
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