Gin-sempai fires me up!

[Shikago]

Ight, senpai. Ill see what I can do.
Gathering more chakra inside of himself in perpreation, Shikago wonders what four seals he should use for the jutsu. When he is able to finally settle on four, he jumps into action, and starts performing the seals.
hare, dragon, snake, tiger
Holding the tiger seal, he releases chakra from his mouth. Instead of flames this time, a black, smog-like smoke rushes out his mouth. When it travels about 7-10 meters, it settles and hangs in the air. Still holding the tiger seal, he tries clicking his teeth. Instantly, inside the center of the smoke, a spark ignites, causing haze to explode.
Senpai? When you talk about details, what exactly are you talking about? For reference.

 

[Better]

When it comes to detail, I'm mainly expecting nothing like "i make hand seals and i spit a fire dragon" what i want is what you do before you made your hand seals, while you are making it, what are doing to get to release the fire, how do you shape it into a dragon or anything, and lastly where does it go and what happens when it's release. Details, not just "oh i did this, and this happened" You've been doing an excellent job tho, so far xd

( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

I want you to focus your fire, form a hand seal and release the fire while shaping it into several large dragons and send them into the sky. If you do this right, the clouds will become darker and the conditions in order for someone to use Kirin will happen.

 

[Shikago]

Thanks. Ill try to keep it up.
Pulling in more chakra into his stomach, Shikago already knows what seal he would be using for this jutsu. Inhaling, he forms the tiger seal, which he came to the conclusion earlier that that seal aids him with the activation of katon. Holding the seal, he tilts his head back and looks towards the sky. Releasing his chakra, exhaling four times, four large fireballs shoot from his mouth. Using his chakra, he shapes the fire into dragons heads like before, although bigger this time. They contintue to rise in the sky, breaking through the clouds but causing the clouds to gather towards the tare. Panting, Shikago falls back and sits on the ground as the clouds start to darken above.
Man. That took more outta me than I thought. Whats next, senpai?

 

[Better]

*looks up into the sky*

Nice! Would you like to rest Shikago-San? Here's some dates, do you also want Caano? eat up!

 

[Shikago]

Dates? Caano? No thanks sempai. I just needed to catch my breath, thats all. But I am ready now. Please, continue.

 

[Better]

Alright, if you say so. Don't push yourself.

Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with

I want you to take out a bunch of shuriken and throw it at my clone, at the same time, i want you to infuse fire into them and increase the power of your wepons by alot, after hitting my clone, the flames will spread and my clone will go poof.

 

[Shikago]

Ok, got it sempai.
Taking a minute to prepare, Shikago charges his hands with chakra. Once his hands are overflowing with chakra, he uses nature manipulation to increase the temperature of his chakra. Now reaching for some shuriken, he takes four into each hand. When he touches them, he passes on his now fire chakra onto the weapons, setting them on fire. Drawing the weapons back, Shikago launches all eight flaming shuriken at Gin-sempai's clone. When the weapons strike, they lodge into to clone's body, but simultaneously, the flames spreads at an alarming rate, covering the clone in mere seconds, causing it to dissipate.
Ok?

 

[Better]

Nice!

( Katon: Onidōrō ) - Fire Release: Demon Lantern
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra releasing several fire ghosts that are like heads with horns and yellow eyes that then attack the target/s in a swarm.

I want you to perform the tiger hand seal, then manipulate your fire chakra and release it into a bunch of fire ghost with horns and yellow eyes then have them all attack at once at my clone.

(creates clone)

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( Katon: Honoo no Hashira Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame Pillar Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra into their chest and then they will release from their mouth a quick burst of flame towards their opponents feet which then errupts into a large pillar of flame reaching 3 meters tall and inflicting damage to the target.

After that on my second clone, i want you to manipulate your chakra from your chest and release very quickly at my clones feet. Send the flame their and once it reachs its feet, it will then erupt into a large pillar of flame, burning the clone and causing it to disperse.

 

[Shikago]

If you dont mind, sempai, could you also give me a third jutsu? After these, I'm calling it a night.

 

[Better]

we only have a few more to go lol You're only Jounin so I can only train you up A rank. If you were Sannin i would've been doing 3 jutsu at a time

 

[Shikago]

Ok. No problem sempai.

Shikago stands still as he collects his chakra, storing and heating it in his chest. Taking aim on the clone some meters ahead off him, he forms the tiger hand seal and releases his chakra, causing multiple fireballs to spew from his mouth. Using his chakra and shape manipulation, he forms the fires into the shape of skulls with seemingly glowwing yellow eyes, as they continue to fly towards the clone. When they near their target, they dont directly hit. Instead, the flamming skulls swarm and orbit the clone, ultimatly exploding when one makes contact, causing the rest to explode as well.
While shaping the fire balls, Shikago was again gathering more of his chakra in his chest, trying to complete both of his tasks at once. As the skulls get closer to their target, and he feels that he has enough chakra for the jutsu, he turns his head and targets Gin-sempai's other clone about five meters to the right. Taking a sharp intake of air, he releasing the chakra from his lungs in a quick, short burst, causing a ball of fire similar to the Great Flame Flower jutsu to shoot from his mouth aimed at the clone's legs. When it hits, the fireball explodes into a mass of flames that reaches meters into the sky.

 

[Better]

can you separate the two moves your perform? much easier to read xd

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Good Good

( Katon: Kaen Senpū ) - Fire Release: Flame Whirlwind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required four handseals Monkey → Bird → Dog → Ram, fire erupts around the user's body and then launches towards the target in a spiraling-manner. The target is then incinerated as the flames erupt upwards.

Alright, form the hand seals and then make fire erupt around your body and into your hands, then lauch it towards my clone in a spiraling giant ball.

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( Katon: Benijigumo ) - Fire Release: Crimson Earth Spider
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing five handseals Tiger → Horse → Rat → Dog → Tiger , the user spews out fire that both surrounds the enemy and then transforms into a spider that attacks the enemy. This technique effectively traps and attacks an opponent at the same time, and can be used to force them into another attack.

Perform the hand seals and then spit out fire that surrounds my clone and then have that fire transform into a spider using shape and nature manipulation. Then after shaping it, have it attack my clone.

(Creates Clones)

 

[Shikago]

As Shikago studies another new pattern of hand seals, he starts to build his chakra back up. Letting it flow throughout his body, he turns it into Katon chakra, increasing the tempeture of the air surrounding his body. Performing the seals, he releases the chakra from his body, setting the area around his body ablaze. Drawing on the fire to his hands, Shikago takes a single step forward, thrusting his hands towards Gin-sempai clone. Following the movement of his hands, the flames rushes forward, spiraling as it gathers into a ball of fire. When it hits, the clone is instantly engulfed in flames, causing it to be dispersed.
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Drawing in chakra into his lungs, Shikago goes over the new pattern of seals. Once ready, he performs the hand seals and releases his chakra from his mouth, causing a flame to burst out, which he directs towards the other clone. While in flight, still holding the tiger seal active, he manipulates the fire, shaping it into a spider. Hitting the clone, the fire-spider wraps around it, attacking the clone causing burn damage, resulting with the clones dispersion.

Ok, sempai?

 

[Better]

Good just like that

( Katon: Hi no Iki ) - Fire Release: Fire Breath
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user breathes a powerful stream of fire from their mouth at their target.

simple, focus and release a powerful fire stream from your mouth towards that bush.

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Katon: Hinotama no Mai ) - Fire Release: Fireball Dance
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword and then finish up with jumping into the air above the target and releasing a powerful fireball down upon them.
Note: Requires a Sword.

Here catch my shinso *throws his sword*

Now take my clone and slash him real good, then jump into the air swing the sword and send a fire ball at the clone finishing him off.

(creates clone)
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( Katon: Yūgana Honoo ) - Fire Release: Graceful Flame
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their fire chakra releasing a flamethrower that shoots at the opponent and then lifts them into the air in a column of intense heat. Sasori can replicate this technique through the usage of his fire launcher.

I want you focus your fire chakra in your stomach like always and release it through your mouth like a flamethrower that fire at my clone and lifts them into the air in a column of flames.

(creates clone)

 

[Shikago]

Shikago starts to gather his chakra in his chest. Molding it, he starts to super-heat the chakra, increasing it's temperature. Sure of himself that he has enough chakra, he exhales the chakra from his mouth, releasing a stream of fire. Still fueling the fire, Shikago manipulates the flames, stretching it forward towards a nearby bush. When the flames touch the bush, it goes up in flames immediately.
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*catches sword, but throws it back*
Thanks, sempai, but I have my own blade.*pulls out his wakizashi*

Taking aim on the clone, Shikago draws chakra to his chest and legs, and takes off. Holding his sword in his right hand, he runs about two meters from the clone. Quickly feinting as if he were going to his left, he fakes the clone, allowing Shikago to bring up sword, stabbing the clone in the stomach.
Without hesitating, he yanks his wakizashi from the clone, spinning in place towards his left. As he spins around, Shikago places his left hand on the blade as well. As he faces the clone, he makes a upwards slash with the sword from the clone's lower left side to it's right shoulder.
Still moving fluidly, he continues the earlier spin, stopping with his back towards the clone Squatting down, he calls on the chakra stored in his legs, and jumps to about five/seven meters, and performs back flip. Once in the air directly above the clone, Shikago, who had been heating the chakra collected in his chest the entire time, releases it. When the chakra comes in contact with the air, it ignites into a fire ball that falls onto the clone below, dispersing it.
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Gathering his chakra in his stomach, Shikago begins to increse it's temperature, turning it to katon chakra. Once he believes it is hot enough, he performs the tiger seal to help him grasp the chakra, and releases it from his mouth. Once expelled, the chakra turns into a stream of fire, which Shikago directs towards another clone. When the flame comes in contact with the clone, Shikago manipulates the chakra, causing the fire to flow up into the sky, burning and lifting the clone a couple of meters before dispersing it.

 

[Better]

Cool, Well that's all i can teach you until you get to a higher rank. Make sure to make a bunch of battle threads in the Battle Arena and use what you learned here. It's okay to always train but you don't want to end up like those who get training so fast, yet they don't know how to use their knowledge in battle.

VM me when you rank up. We will continue then.

 

[Better]

sike you can learn A rank <_<

Katon: Gamayu Endan) - Fire Release: Toad Oil Flame Bomb
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu is used in conjunction with Toad Oil Bullet to launch a streaming fireball toward the opponent after performing the following hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger. This jutsu can cover a huge area with fire.

Form the hand seals, Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger and release a streaming fireball at the trees over there.

 

[Shikago]

Studying another seal pattern, Shikago begins to collect chakra in his chest. Memorizing the pattern, he performs the seals, and inhales, turning the chakra in his chest into katon. Facing the trees, he exhales, breathing out a flaming, trailing fireball. It sails over to the trees until it comes in contact with the trees, spreading fire over a large area, setting the trees on fire.

*faces Gin-sempai*Cool?

 

[Better]

Alright, but don't start slacking off on me now

Gin creates sixteen pillars bind around his own clone

(Katon: Shageki Bisuketto) – Fire Release: Firing Biscuit technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Dragon → Boar the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.
Note: Can only be used in the collaboration of Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind and Earth Release: Mud Fall

I want you to manipulate fire and inside that oven over there i want you to create powerful flames inside of it and burn up my clone.

(creates clone)

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(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.

This will take a lot of Chakra, I want you to form the Rat → Dog → Tiger and fire a small fireball and then all of sudden erupts into this giant fire storm, causing wide spread destruction, aim it at the forest and see how much you can destroy.

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[Shikago]

My bad, sempai. I'll keep trying harder.

Concentrating, Shikago looks at the clone trapped by the electric prison, wondering to himself how he will be able to perform this jutsu. Thinking it over for a couple of seconds, he comes up with something that might work. Smiling now, he starts gathering his chakra again, familiarizing himself with the new pattern. As soon as he has the seals memorized, he performs them, increasing his katon control. Using the heat caused by the lightning due to the frantic movement of chakra as a medium, he ignites the inside of the 'oven' on fire, setting the clone on fire with nowhere to run, which ultimately 'poofs' away.
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Shikago stills himself, going over the seal's pattern in his head while collecting an enormous amount of chakra in his lungs, using katon to increase its temperature. Once he commits the pattern to his memory and the chakra gets blazing hot, he performs the seals. Inhaling, mixing air with his chakra, and exhaling, he shoots out a fireball about the size of his head, targeting the tree-line some meters ahead. When the fireball is about five meters away, the ball explodes into a giant mass of fire 10 meters wide, which continues to fly forward into the trees, setting them ablaze.