Gin-sempai fires me up!

[Shikago]

Ha, I think I got it, sempai! Well, I'll first use the fire wall jutsu, mainly as a shield, but also as cover. Hiding behind the wall, I'll use raiton, utilizing both their intangible properties to attack trough the other.
I would also try to use it in conjunction with the flammable haze jutsu. Setting the haze, I'd throw the lighter to cause the explosion, but would also try to somehow manipulate the explosion.
Do you like my answer, or would you like me to give it one more shot? I haven't actually the example giving.

 

[Better]

Excellent! Now you see the combos i'm talking about. Also, remember you can add wind to your fire to create a bigger and stronger fire, but your combo is more intelligent and I like it better xd

Moving on,


( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.

I want you focus your fire chakra in your mouth while forming the Tiger Hand seal, then release a stream of fire, then use shape manipulation and turn them into rings of fire and send them at my clone.

*creates clone*

Looks like this:

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[Shikago]

Thanks, sempai. I'll try.

Again gathering his chakra, Shikago performs the tiger hand seal. Holding the seal active, he releases his chakra and fire erupts from his mouth, heading towards Gin-sempai's clone. Using his chakra to manipulate the flame, Shikago runs the fire on the ground, passing up the clone to make a circle around him. Once the circle of flames is completed, Shikago agains manipulates the fire to make the flames bigger, effectively trapping it.

Sempai, this could be used with the wall of fire jutsu, couldn't it?

 

[Better]

It can if you want

moving on,

( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

I want you to take my clone, and use shuriken skills and pin him against that tree over there. When using your shuriken remember to put a wire on there, like Sasuke did against Orochimaru in the chuunnin exams. And then after having him caught, i want you to form the following hand seals, Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger and breath out a fireball then shape it into a dragon. Allow the dragon to flow through the cords and incinerate my clone in flames.

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[Shikago]

Alright, sempai. I'll see what I can do.
Shikago starts out by practicing the new set of seals. Once he has them memorized, he reaches for his tools and pulls out a couple of shuriken and some ninja wire. Attaching the wire to his weapons, he places the end of the wire in his mouth to hold it. Collecting his chakra, he throws the shuriken, two to left of the clone, and two to the right. As they pass his body, being connected by the wire, gets caught up and ties around him, and traps him.
With the clone trapped, tied down in wire, Shikago performs the seals and releases his chakra, exhaling a small flame to flare from his nose. With the wire still in his mouth, it catches fire, and he manipulates it into the shape of a dragon. Still manipulating the fire, he directs it towards the clone. When it reaches the clone, it erupts into fiery mass of flames.

Sempai, is it possible for me to try at more advanced jutsu, or do I have to go through the ranks in order? I sure I'm capable of pulling off B and A-rank techniques.

 

[Better]

Alright, sempai. I'll see what I can do.
Shikago starts out by practicing the new set of seals. Once he has them memorized, he reaches for his tools and pulls out a couple of shuriken and some ninja wire. Attaching the wire to his weapons, he places the end of the wire in his mouth to hold it. Collecting his chakra, he throws the shuriken, two to left of the clone, and two to the right. As they pass his body, being connected by the wire, gets caught up and ties around him, and traps him.
With the clone trapped, tied down in wire, Shikago performs the seals and releases his chakra, exhaling a small flame to flare from his nose. With the wire still in his mouth, it catches fire, and he manipulates it into the shape of a dragon. Still manipulating the fire, he directs it towards the clone. When it reaches the clone, it erupts into fiery mass of flames.

Sempai, is it possible for me to try at more advanced jutsu, or do I have to go through the ranks in order? I sure I'm capable of pulling off B and A-rank techniques.

You must learn how to walk, before you can run U_U

Good

( Katon: Karyūdan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user exhales a flame breath from their mouth after making one handseal. This technique can be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the projectiles fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.

Simple, i want you to focus gather and release your fire from your mouth after making one hand seal, the Tiger handseal most likely. Make sure to use shape manipulation to manipulate the fire into the shape of a dragon!

 

[Shikago]

Ok, sempai.
Shikago turns and starts gathering his chakra. Once he feels he has enough, he performs the tiger hand seal and releases his chakra, causing a flame to burst from his mouth. Controlling the chakra, he shapes the fire into a dragon's head, and it continues to fly into the nearby trees.
What's next, sempai?

 

[Better]

Don't slack off on the detail :T_T:

Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

Form the needed handseals and memorize them, and release a volley of fireballs. You can control these fireballs after you release them . You can also hide shuriken inside the flame.

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[Shikago]

Sorry, sempai. I'll try harder.
As Shikago starts going over and memorizing the new seals pattern, he begins to gather his chakra in his stomach again. As soon as he beileve he has enough chakra, he perform the hand seals. Almost instantly,he reaches for two shuriken and charges them with chakra as he touches them as he releases his chakra. This causes four small fireballs to erupt from his mouth, while he, trying to make use of the jutsu's full effect, throws the chakra-charged shuriken into two of the fireballs. Using his chakra, he controlls both the fireballs and shuriken, and sends them flying with three in an erractic flight, with two spiraling the other, and one zig-zagging, into a large rock off to the side of the training field.
Was that well enough, sempai?

 

[Better]

excellent

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

I want you to focus your chakra and release a flame of fire towards my clone, and then have it wrap around my clone and burn it.

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( Katon: Rakka Sanran Kasai ) - Fire Release: Falling Fire Scatter
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user whilst in mid air will release from their mouth a series of small fire shots that rain down upon the target.

I want you to jump into the air and then focus your fire and shoot fire shots down on my clone and make it disperse.

*creates clone*

 

[Shikago]

Will do, sempai.
Shikago starts off by collecting enough chakra in his stomach to perform both techniques. When he believes he has gathered enough, he inhales some air, exhaling a flame. Using his chakra to manipulate its shape, he stretches the flame into a rope of fire, directing it towards Gin-sempai's clone, and wraps the fire around the clone, subduing it.
Not done yet.
Using his chakra to enhance his abilities, Shikago jumps into the air over the clone. Once in perfect position, he again releases his chakra from his mouth, causing a flame to erupt. And again using shape manipulation, he uses his chakra to turn the fireball into a mass of raining burning embers, which assaults the clone until disperses, while he safely lands back on the ground.
How was that, Gin-sempai?

 

[Better]

Will do, sempai.
Shikago starts off by collecting enough chakra in his stomach to perform both techniques. When he believes he has gathered enough, he inhales some air, exhaling a flame. Using his chakra to manipulate its shape, he stretches the flame into a rope of fire, directing it towards Gin-sempai's clone, and wraps the fire around the clone, subduing it.
Not done yet.
Using his chakra to enhance his abilities, Shikago jumps into the air over the clone. Once in perfect position, he again releases his chakra from his mouth, causing a flame to erupt. And again using shape manipulation, he uses his chakra to turn the fireball into a mass of raining burning embers, which assaults the clone until disperses, while he safely lands back on the ground.
How was that, Gin-sempai?

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Alright i'm skipping this jutsu because it's the same thing as everything else. Any question on it, let me know

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.


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B rank

( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

I want you to focus your fire charka like you've never done it before. And then i want you to form the hand seals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneed your chakra into flames and release them looking really like dragons. You split it into three parts 1 from the left another from the right and the last from the front of my clone. Have fun

*creates Clones*

 

[Shikago]

Got it!

Like before, as Shikago starts practicing the new pattern of hand seals, he starts collecting his chakra, though this time a larger amount. Once he thinks he has the pattern memorized and feels as if his stomach is on fire, he performs the seals. Slightly turning his head to the left and right, he releases a third of the fire chakra on both sides, before turning back forward and releasing the rest. Using his chakra to manipulate the flames, Shikago shapes the flames into dragons, and directs one head-on towards Gin-sempai's clone, while the other two flank it from its sides, destroying it in a giant explosion.

Sempai? Is there a katon shadow jutsu you could teach me? I've yet to learn any shadow clone techs.

 

[Better]

nope, only Water, Lightning and Earth clones exist in elemental training

( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

simple focus your fire chakra and shoot small fire shots from your palms at my clone, think it of it like Ki blasts from dbz just not as powerful lol

 

[Shikago]

Ok.
Closing his eyes, Shikago starts off by holding his hands out to his sides, gathering his chakra. Instead of collecting his chakra inside his stomach this time, charges his hands. Using the chakra in his hands, he heats the air surrounding them, which ultimately ends-up catching fire.
Opening his eyes, he quickly holds his hands out in front of him towards the clone, making his thumbs and index fingers touch the other. Almost instantly, about seven red small spheres, which could almost be confused as flying apples, shot from his hands with a slight arch targeting Gin-sempai's clone. When the spheres hit, only four strikes the clone, with two failing short, hitting the ground just ahead of it, and last shooting past the clone's shoulder. Either or, each hit causes the spheres to explode with a diameter of about a foot, which results in the clone's destruction.
How was that, sempai?

 

[Better]

Ok.
Closing his eyes, Shikago starts off by holding his hands out to his sides, gathering his chakra. Instead of collecting his chakra inside his stomach this time, charges his hands. Using the chakra in his hands, he heats the air surrounding them, which ultimately ends-up catching fire.
Opening his eyes, he quickly holds his hands out in front of him towards the clone, making his thumbs and index fingers touch the other. Almost instantly, about seven red small spheres, which could almost be confused as flying apples, shot from his hands with a slight arch targeting Gin-sempai's clone. When the spheres hit, only four strikes the clone, with two failing short, hitting the ground just ahead of it, and last shooting past the clone's shoulder. Either or, each hit causes the spheres to explode with a diameter of about a foot, which results in the clone's destruction.
How was that, sempai?

good job U_U

( Katon: Hiendan ) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.

remember Great Fireball technique, the one sasuke was doing and that we did in C ranks.. This time focus longer and make it larger O_O

 

[Shikago]

Ok. This should be easy.
Shikago starts gathering a large amount chakra once more. Using and performing the same hand seals as the Fireball jutsu, he takes a deep breath, makes a circle with his fingers on his hand, blows chakra through the hole, causing a flame to ignite. Instead of collecting into a giant ball, the flames lashes wildly, burning anything in its range of a couple of meters.
Is this ok? If so, then what's next?

 

[Better]

good, but don't slack off on meh :/ detail!

( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.

I want you to jump into the air, and focus your fire chakra and release three giant bullets down at the forest over there. It should erupt into giant flames.

 

[Shikago]

Shikago nods his head, and walks towards the forest edge, stopping at a long, long range. Crouching down, he begins to gather his chakra in his stomach, but also his legs this time. Using the chakra stored in his legs, he jumps, using it to enhance his jumping ability, allowing him to reach the height of about 15-20 meters.
At the peak of height of his jump, he takes a sharp intake of breath, and gives three, short, bursts of air. With each one, it causes a flaming orb about the size of a marble to shoot from his mouth. With each meter it progresses in travel, it grows in radius by half. When the hit the tree-line, they explode on impact into massive wild flames. As the fire begins to grow, Shikago turns back around and looks towards Gin-senpai.

Umm, what gonna happen with all that?

 

[Better]

let it BUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRN

meh, Gin slams his hand onto the ground dropping water onto the forest and stopping the fire

( Katon: Haisekishō ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

I want you to focus your fire chakra and then form 4 hand seals and release a super heated ash at my clone and wait for it to surround my clone, then click your teeth and have it ignite creating a giant explosion. aka Asuma tech

O_O